现象文 及好表达

书面表达1节俭之美2校服之美3分享之美(夹叙夹议)Para1:现象Para2:理由/影响Para3:看法/措施

Accordingtoasurvey,inrecentyearsmonthlyexpensesofamiddleschoolstudenthavebeenonthesharprise.Manystudentshavenoconceptofthriftintheirmind.Theytakeitforgrantedthattheyspendmoneyfromtheirparents.Thisphenomenonismainlycausedbythefollowingfactors(因素).

Firstofall,nowadaysmostofthestudentsaretheonlychildrenoftheirfamilies.Theyaretheappleintheirfamily’seyesandnaturallygetmorecareandpocketmoney.Inaddition,

withtheimprovementoflivingstandards,parentscanaffordhigherexpensesoftheirchildren.Moreover,somestudentsliketopursue(追求)fashion.

Frommyopinionofview,amiddleschoolstudent,asapureconsumer,shouldlearntobethrifty.Weshouldlimitourexpensesandnotbuywhateverwewantregardlessoftheirprice.Thehabitofthriftcanhelpusformrightvaluesandisfavorabletoourfuturedevelopment.Thisremarkableincreasehasarousedwidepublicconcern.So“generous”arestudentsthattheyspendmuchmoneyonmeaninglessthingsrandomly.Thereasonsarenotfartoseek.

Initially,withthedevelopmentofeconomy,anincreasingnumberofgoodsappealtostudents,rangingfrombeautifuldressestoafashionshoe.Additionally,

buriedinwork,parentsgivemoremoneyinsteadoftimetoattendtothem.Disappointingly,

lackoftraditionalvirtuesineducationcontributestothisphenomenon.Frommyperspective,

certainmeasuresshouldbetakentochangetheadverse(不利的)situation.

Timepermitting,educationontraditionalvirtuesshouldbeatoppriority.Sparenoeffortsto

advocatethriftandwewillgetoveralldevelopment.（措施）赏析1：节俭之美

Iholdtheviewthat

undernocircumstances

shouldwestudentsabandonthetraditionvirtue—thrift.Itstandsforaspiritofstruggleandremindsusoftoughdaysaswell.Onlybypossessingthriftcanwebuildupourcharacteranddevelopmentallyandemotionally.Toconclude,itisthriftthat

steelsourmindandstrengthenourdeterminetosucceed.赏析1：节俭之美（最后一段：个人观点）

Thephenomenonthatastudentequippedwithalatestiphonetakesacasualattitudetomoneycanbefrequentlyseen.

Frommyperspective,

thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,thoseparentsareburiedinworkandit’simpossibleforthemto

consumetimefreelywithkids.Consequently,moneyisareplacementofthepresenceofparents.Secondly,theopinion”themoreexpensive,thebetter”enjoysagreatpopularityamongstudents.段落赏析改编：手机现象---校服之美Isubscribetothesuggestionthatstudentswearuniforms.Thereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,itisobviousthatunifieduniformscreateamoreharmoniousatmosphere,thusmakingourcampuscharming.Moreimportantly,whendressedinuniforms,studentscanbeconsciousofbeingpartsofourschool.Consequently,thespiritofteamworkandthepassionfortheschoolcanbedeveloped.Takingallthepositivefactorsintoconsideration,

Ican’t

emphasizetheimportanceofuniformstoomuch.赏析2：校服之美（段落）……

Firstandforemost,students’wearinguniformmakestheschoolasawhole.Dressedinuniforms,weundoubtedlyattaindesiredeffectsofpromotingoursharedvaluesandthesenseofresponsibilitythatwearetotake.Moreimportantly,uniformsserveas

anidentityreminder,whichmakesstudentsrealizethatwearesupposedto

putourheartsintostudy.赏析2：校服之美（段落）Usefulstructure/topicsentences:Para1:phenomenon

1.Thephenomenonthat…canbefrequentlyseen.

2.Thisremarkableincreasehasarousedwidepublicconcern.

3.Itiscommontoseethat….(比如thenumberof…isonthesharprise)whichhasarousedwidepublicattention/concern.Para2:reasons/influence

1.Thereasonswhy…/for+n.areasfollows./Herearethereasonswhy…asfollows.

2.Thisphenomenonismainlycausedbythefollowingfactors(因素).

3.Thereasonsarenotfartoseek.

Initially,….Additionally/Inaddition,….Moreover,…./Tobeginwith/Firstofall,…Moreimportantly,…Para3:opinion/suggestions

1.Iholdtheviewthat

undernocircumstances

shouldwestudents….

2.Isubscribetothesuggestionthat….

3.Frommyopinionofview,…(不再用Ithink开头)

4.Frommyperspective,

certainmeasuresshouldbetakentochangetheadverse(不利的)situation.

总结句：

1.Toconclude,itis……that……

2.Takingallthepositivefactorsintoconsideration,

Ican’t

emphasize(强调)theimportanceof…..toomuch./Ithinkwearesupposedtoattachgreatimportanceto….推荐信的结尾

1.Hopefully,mysuggestion/proposalwillmeetyourapproval.

2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.美化校园beautifythecampus有…组成whichconsistsof/consistingof…有许多的好处….possessawiderangeofbenefits想当然地认为……takeitforgrantedthat…随着生活水平/经济的提高/发展withtheimprovementoflivingstandards/economy,…不管,不顾regardlessof/inspiteof(虽然,尽管,不管)有利于我们的全面发展befavorable/beneficialtoouroveralldevelopment从……到……不等,rangingfrom…to…致力于/忙于Buriedin/Occupiedin/Engagedin/Devotedtodoingsth,sb…..导致…,leadingto/contributingto/whichleadsto…不遗余力地做……sparenoeffortsto

doUsefulexpressionsandsentences:……允许的话，做……应该是一件优先考虑的事情。…permitting,

sth/doingsth

shouldbeatoppriority.达到预期的……效果attainthedesiredeffectofdoingsth创造一种更加和谐的气氛，在此可以增强自信和自尊

…..createamoreharmoniousatmospherewhereourself-esteemandself-confidencecanbepromoted激发爱校的激情…arouseourpassion/enthusiasmforourbelovedschool.象征着symbolize….;serveas(充当)asymbol产生责任感Thesenseofresponsibilitywillnaturalbeproduced.全神贯注地学习putourheartsinto

study显而易见Itisobviousthat…因此使得……

,thusmaking…/consequently,itcanmake…/sothat…./asaresult,….意识到realizethat…/beconsciousof+n./developtheawarenessofdoingsth提供过一个机会…和平台

1.bepresentedwithachancetodo…aswellasaplatformtodosth…

2.bepresentedwithaplatformwherewecan….增加友谊strengthenourfriendship增强团队意识improve/developthespiritofteamwork人们广泛认为

1.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat….

2.Theopinionthat…..enjoysagreatpopularityamongpeople.我们决不能……undernocircumstances

shouldwedosth只有通过……我们才能坚定意志，心理健康。Onlyby

doingsth

canwe

buildupourcharacteranddevelopmentallyandemotionally.

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