四级作文-问题观点

WRITING内容、情感不重要条理、语言是王道结构合理、衔接流畅语法正确、句式多变用词精当、观点鲜明Revisioncet4xz@163.com123abc258907295主题句层次性多样性准确性对策现象问题类文章写法分段：一，引言——3二，论述——5

三，结论——3/4各段框架：一：背景——普遍观点/现象——自己观点/重要性二：主题句——分论点句1，2，3/总结三：总结上文——自己观点/措施1，2——展望第一句基本写法

第一段Withtherapiddevelopment/advanceofthesociety/theeconomy/themedia/ourera/themodernscienceandtechnology,Withtheprogressof/Againstthebackgroundofmodernization/globalization,youmayfrequently

hearoftheterm/seethephenomenonof主题/that句子.第一句进阶写法1（Whenmyeyescaughtthistopic/picture,Iwasabsorbedinmeditation.)The

currentdays/months/years/nowadays/recently/modernsociety/recentworld/thesedayshas

witnessedthe

phenomenon/development/explosion/issue/tendency/problemof主题/that句子.第一句进阶写法2Inthisdayandage,nothinghas

arousedmoreattentioncharacterized/influenced/determined/shapedourdailylife/discussionmoredrastically/sharplythan主题does/thephenomenonthat.Itisnohardforeveryindividualtoobservethat…第二句前半句基本写法prevalent/wide-spreadbelief/commonsense/acknowledgement第二句前半句进阶写法Thereisa(n)nodenyingthat…主题

isplayinganincreasinglysignificantroleinourdailylife.主题hasbecomeanindispensablepartofpeople’sdailylife主题

hasundergoneamarked/radicaldeteriorationachievedareal/substantialbreakthrough第二句后半句写法第三句我认为：FromwhereIstand

asformeasIperceiveasfarasmyknowledgeisconcernedfrommypersonalperspective第三句基本写法我认为，itisamatter/amatterofvitalsignificance

itisamatterwhichdeservesmore/extraattentionIt’ssuperficiallyplausible/acceptable/unimportantMostindividualswouldmaintainitasatrivialphenomenonbutwhensubjectedtocarefulanalysis/consideration,我认为，itturnsoutthat第三句进阶写法

itsadvantages/meritswillfar/eventually/definitelyoutweighthedisadvantages/drawbacks.harm/erode/benefit/enhance…proveharmful/beneficialto…inthelongrunItwill第一句基本写法Several/many/anumberof/manya(单数)factors/reasons/causes,Ibelieve,canbeeasilyfoundtoaccountforthisphenomenon/mypoint.

第二段第一句进阶写法Thereareavarietyofunderlyingreasons/causes/considerationsingeneralaccountingfor/leadingto/contributingtotheissue.第二、三、四句：主要从以下六个万能方面展开论述，如果需要，可以杂糅。个人——团体——社会经济/物质/科技——精神/健康/环保——教育/文化/安全个人——团体——社会1.首先，asforindividuals,thosewho...(foreg)arethemosttypicalexamples/caseswhosesuccess/failurecanbeattributedtohis

specialtalent/skill/ability/deficiency/incompetenceinsth/qualityof….2.其次，intermsoffamily/company/enterprise,schools/troops/cooperation/culture,nothingcanbeachievedif…3.再次，fromasocialaspect,thesurvivalandgrowthofagroup/community/countryismainlydependentupon...经济/物质/科技——精神/心理/环保——教育/文化/安全1.首先，manyaperson/alargemajorityofpeople,especiallythe...,beeconomically/materially/physically/technologically/academicallyharmed/benefitedfrom主题2.其次，intermsof/concerning/regarding/withrespecttomentality/psychology/emotions,onewillinevitablybe

blessedwith/sufferfrom(thesenseof)情感ifhe...3.再次，whenitcomestothepointofeducation/knowledge/culture/information/safety,there'snodoubtthat...keywordsmentallysatisfied,belongingnesssafety/security,financialsecurityself-esteem,respectandrecognitionfromthepublic,ecologyself-actualization,happiness,convenienceemptiness,loneliness,solitudeDepressionselfconceit,self-centered,ignoranceextremeemotionalswing,pressure,tensionThreaten,atrisk,exposedtodanger第五句Beyond

controversy/anydoubt,theinfluenceofallthereasonsabovehassthtodowiththeprevalenceoftheissue/phenomenonAllthereasonsabovehavecontributedtothe…Dueto/inconsequenceofallthereasonsabove,the主题

isnowonderprevalent/hasnowonderarousedheateddiscussion.Sbisrightinsayingthat…sbmakes/madesenseinsayingthat…Asthesayinggoes,Inaword,justasthegreatthinker/myfriend/motheronceputit/stated…第三段第一句第一部分基本写法Ascanbeconcludedfromthediscussionabove,…Whatcanbeconcludedfromthepreviousdiscussionisthat…Tosumup/Toendmyarguments…第一句第一部分进阶写法Accordingtothepreviousdiscussion/takingallthefactorsintoconsideration/throughwhatwasmentionedabove/illustratedbythediscussionabove,wemaysafely/naturally/reasonablycometotheconclusionthat…Thepreviousdiscussionmaysafelyleadtotheconclusionthat…第一句第二部分主题ispromising/significant/ablessing/acurse/worthofsthinmorewaysthanone/inlongterms.

第二句(无建议)基本写法我认为，combinedefforts/painstakingyetrewardingeffortsshouldbemadeby...tosolvetheproblem.第二句(无建议)进阶写法我认为，imperfect/trivialasitmaybe,whatweshoulddoistotakeadvantageofitsmeritswhileavoiditsdrawbacks/killthecaseatbirth.我认为，thestudy/discussion/analysisof…canhelpustowardagreaterawarenessoftheworldinwhichwelive.第二句(有建议)基本写法1.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatcombinedefforts/painstakingyetrewardingeffortsshouldbemadebyAandBtosolvetheproblem.2.我认为，AoughttodosthwhileBis/aresupposedtodosth.第二句(有建议)写法21.我认为，inregardtotheproblems,measuresshouldbetakenbyA,tominimizeitspotentialharms,forexample,Aisresponsiblefordoingsth.2.AsforB,startingfrom…maybethefirststeptowardsareasonableattitude/thesolut