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托福写作11月大语英英文＝词法＋句词词名动形连句句简单句，并列句，复杂十大语法错1例1：Building local更正：Building localTheprevalenceoftheInternethasgivenrisetothespreadofonlinerumors,whichconsiderablyunderminesocialsecurityandstability.更正：TheprevalenceoftheInternethasgivenrisetothespreadofonlinerumorswhichconsiderablyunderminessocialsecurityandstability.例2：Aschoolwhichhasfamousprofessorsareworthyforstudentstoworthyforstudentstochoose. beneficialforchildren’sfuture. nghouseworkhassomeadvantagesthatbeneficialforchildren’s更正：Therearemanygraduatescompetingforaposition.Thereismanyagraduatecompetingforaposition.注：therebe句型中be动词的单复数要根据be动词后面的名2例5：Therearesomanypeoplecompetefora更正1：Therearesomanypeoplecompetingfora更正2：Therearesomanypeoplewhocompetefor例6：Inonethelessbelievethatmyjobandmysociallifearebothplayanessentialroleinmydailyhappiness.更正1：Inonethelessbelievethatmyjobandmysociallifearebothplayinganessentialroleinmydailylifebothplayanessentialroleinmydailyhappiness. 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听完注意花15s顺一遍大意再打文TPO41Burningcoalinpowerplantsproducesawasteproductcalledcoalash,amaterialthatcontainssmallamountsofpotentiallyharmfulchemicals.EnvironmentalistsintheUnitedStatesareconcernedaboutthedamagesuchharmfulchemicalsmaybengtotheenvironmentandsuggestthattheUnitedStatesernmentshouldcreatenew,muchstricterregulationsforhandlingandstoringcoalash.However,representativespowercompaniestaketheoppositeview:theyarguethatnewregulationsareunnecessaryandmightactuallyhavenegativeconsequences.TheyusethefollowingargumentssupporttheirRegulationsFirst,powercompanyrepresentativespointoutthateffectiveenvironmentalregulationsalreadyexist.Forexample,oneveryimportantregulationrequirescompaniestouseliner—specialmaterialthatpreventscoalashcomponentsfromleakingintothesoilandcontaminatingthesurroundingenvironment.Companiesthatdisposeofcoalashindisposalpondsorlandfillsmustuselinerineverynewpondorlandfilltheybuild.ConcernsAboutRecyclingCoalSecond,someystspredictthatcreatingverystrictrulesforstoringandhandlingcoalashmightdiscouragetherecyclingofcoalashintootherproducts.Currently,alargeportionofcoalashgeneratedbypowerplantsisrecycled:itused,forexample,inbuildingmaterialssuchasconcretebricks.Recyclingcoalashreducestheneedtodisposeofitinotherwaysandpresentsnoenvironmentaldanger.However,ifnew,stricterrulesareadoptedforhandlingcoalash,consumersmay econcernedthatrecycledcoalashproductsarejusttoodangerous,andmaystopbuyingtheIncreasedFinally,strictnewregulationswouldresultinasignificantincreaseindisposalandhandlingcostsforthepowercompanies—perhapsasmuchastentimesthecurrentcosts.Powercompanieswouldbeforcedtoincreasethepriceofelectricity,whichwouldnotbe edbythegeneralTPO41ortobeonlywhenortobeonlywhennewpond.tcompanybuildsanewarenotrequiredtoaddlinertooldpondsandlandfills.Yetseveralofthoseolderdisposalsiteshavecausedsignificantdamage.Forexample,theharmfulchemicalsfromcoalashleakedintogroundwaterandcontaminateddrinkingwater.Weabsoluyneedstricternewregulationsthatwillpreventenvironmentaldamageatallcoalashdisposalsites,thenewsitesaswellastheoldones.Second,stricterrulesforhandlingcoalashwon'tnecessarily regulationsforotherdangerousmaterials.Takemercuryforexample.Mercuryisafairlyhazardousmaterialandit'sbeensubjecttoverystricthandlingandstoragerulesforalongtime.Yetdespitethoserules,it'sbeensuccessfullyandsafelyrecycledforover50years.Andconsumershavehadveryfewconcernsaboutit.Soit'sunlikelythatconsumerswill afraidtobuyrecycledcoal