高考英语读后续写训练 DAY 3

高考作文训练DAY3I.应用文写作假定你是李华，你校将举办校园英语广播员竞选活动，请你用英语写一篇演讲稿参加竞选，内容包括：1.自身优势；2.对工作的规划与设想。注意：写作词数应为80左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Goodmorning,everyone!ItisagreathonortobeheretorunforEnglishbroadcasterforourschoolradiostation.IbelieveIcouldbeaqualifiedbroadcaster.BeingexpertinEnglishspeakingandwriting,Ihavetheabilityofreadingscriptfluentlyasanativespeakerandaccuratelyeditingavarietyofpassages,whichareessentialpartsofthisposition.Moreover,IpreferreadingEnglishstoriesandvisitingEnglishwebsitesinmyleisuretime.Allthesewillbeofhugebenefittothejob.IfIsucceedtobecomethebroadcaster,IwilltrymybesttochoosesuitableEnglisharticlesandprovideinterestingprogramsforusstudents.IhopeIcangetthechancetobecomethebroadcaster!II.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。MyFather’sSweaterVestsWhileinmiddleschool,studentsseemtohaveonegoal:tobepopular.Morethananything,mostofthestudentsferventlyhopetonotbeaccusedofgoingagainstthegrain.Theseyoungteenagerswouldmuchratherconformandbeacceptedbythe“in”crowdthanfocusonfindingtheirownidentity,styleorpath.Likemostthirteen-year-olds,Isuccumbedtothisneedtofitin.Oneafternoon,however,Ihadaconversationwithmyfatherthatmademethinktwiceaboutfollowingtherestofthelemmingsovertheproverbialcliff.MydadandIweresittinginthediningareaonadrearywinterafternoon.Then,I'mnotquitesurehowthediscussionbegan,westartedtalkingaboutpopularity.ItoldhimthatIwantedtobepopular，oratleastacceptedfavorablybythosewhowere.HelookedatmeandaskedmewhyIfeltthatway.IhadneverstoppedtothinkaboutwhyIfelttheneedtofitin…Isimplydid.IhadbeentoldbymyfriendsthatIshouldwanttobepopular,andsinceIhadalwaystrustedthem,Iwasinclinedtobelievethem.Myfatherproceededtotellmeastoryfromhiscollegedays.Hismother,mygrandmother,hadmadehimseveralsweaterveststowearatschool.Thesesweatervestswerepracticalandcomfortable,buthardly“instyle."Nevertheless,theybecameastapleofmyfather'swardrobe.Hedidn'tcarethathewasn'tsportingthelatestfashion.Infact,hedidn'tcarewhateveryonethoughtofhim,either.Iwasshocked.Whatwasevenmoresurprisingwasthatafterafewweeks,otherstudentsatmydad'sschoolbeganwearingsweatervests.Bydeviatingfromthenorm,myfatherhadstartedatrend.Whatheworebecamefashionablebecausetheotherstudentssawtheconfidencewithwhichhedressed.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thisinformationwasalotforathirteen-year-oldgirltoprocess.AsthedayspassedandIthoughtitover,Irealizedthatmyfather'swordsmightmakesenseafterall.【文章解析】1.浅层分析人物：I:athirteen-year-oldgirl,wanttobecomepopularinschoolMyfather重要物品：Myfather’ssweatervests文章大意：“我”在初中时总是希望变成受大家追捧的焦点，爸爸用他少年时天天穿奶奶织的毛衣马甲来做例子，真正的时尚，来源于自信，而不是随波逐流。II．深层分析①主人公的成长点：她当下有什么问题？Theseyoungteenagerswouldmuchratherconformandbeacceptedbythe“in”crowdthanfocusonfindingtheirownidentity,styleorpath.Likemostthirteen-year-olds,Isuccumbedtothisneedtofitin.从上述原文来看，“我”和其他青少年一样，想变成别人眼中的时尚者，哪怕是做自己不喜欢的事，而不是顺从自己的喜好。②促成她改变的原因？通过第二段的段首句，AsthedayspassedandIthoughtitover,Irealizedthatmyfather'swordsmightmakesenseafterall.说明父亲的话对她产生了影响，她逐渐想明白父亲的话是有道理的，随波追流而获得的关注并不是真正的受欢迎。③同龄人的对比？本文中的两组对比：①我的父亲的我周围的同学：我的父亲青少年时对模仿时尚一点也不在意，穿着奶奶织的毛衣背心，坦然自信我周围的同学们都绞尽脑汁希望变成人群中最受欢迎的焦点②改变后的我和我周围的同学这个对比应该在续写段落里写出来，我受到爸爸的影响，我做了什么？我的做法会对周围人产生什么样的影响呢？【思路解析】第一段：Thisinformationwasalotforathirteen-year-oldgirltoprocess.“这段信息对于十三岁的女孩来说，太难理解了。”可知，当时的我并没有理解爸爸的话，没有理解为什么爸爸会坦然穿过时的衣服，不怕与别人不一样，甚至还成了新潮流的引领者。那一时不理解的我，会做什么事呢？第二段：AsthedayspassedandIthoughtitover,Irealizedthatmyfather'swordsmightmakesenseafterall.慢慢理解了父亲的我，还会和以前那样做吗？这里可以参照前文，我以前的做法在第一段。Morethananything,mostofthestudentsferventlyhopetonotbeaccusedofgoingagainstthegrain.Theseyoungteenagerswouldmuchratherconformandbeacceptedbythe“in”crowdthanfocusonfindingtheirownidentity,styleorpath.Likemostthirteen-year-olds,Isuccumbedtothisneedtofitin.【范文】Thisinformationwasalotforathirteen-year-oldgirltoprocess.Ifoundithardtobelievethatgoingagainstthegraincouldhavebenefitsforme,soIcontinuedtowearthesameclothes,listentothesamemusicandgotothesameplacesthatmypeersdid.Surelymyfatherwasmistaken.Thisisalso,ofcourse,thestageinwhichchildrenthinktheyknowinfinitelymorethantheirparents.Ihadnotyetseenthelight,andIcontinuedonmyquestforpopularity.However,ourconversationthatbleakwinterdayreplayedoverandoverinmymind.AsthedayspassedandIthoughtitover,Irealizedthatmyfather'swordsmightmakesenseafterall.IbegantoevaluatemywardrobetofindwhichitemsIhadboughtbecausetheywerecoolandwhichitemsI'dboughtbecauseItrulylikedthem.Ialsolookedbackatmyactions,attemptingtodeterminehowmanyofthemIperformedtopleasethecrowdandhowmanyofthemIperformedbecauseIactuallyenjoyedth