2018英语写作素材

2019年高考写作辅导（1）--续写（一）背诵文本精选No.1 Ann’sDiary（环境描写）Iwonderifit,sbecauseIhaven,tbeenabletobeoutdoorsforsolongthatI,vegrownsocrazyabouteverythingtodowithnature.Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky,thesongofbirds,moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.That,schangedsinceIcamehere.Oneeveningwhenitwassowarm,Istayedawakeonpurposeuntilhalfpasteleveninordertohaveagoodlookatthemoonbymyself.Butasthemoongavefartoomuchlight,Ididn,tdareopenawindow.AnothertimefivemonthsagoIhappenedtobeupstairsatduskwhenthewindowwasopen.Ididn'tgodownstairsuntilthewindowhadtobeshut.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.ItwasthefirsttimeinayearandahalfthatI,dseenthenightfacetoface.Sadly,I,monlyabletolookatnaturethroughdirtycurtainshangingbeforeverydustywindows.It,snopleasurelookingthroughtheseanylongerbecausenatureisonethingthatreallymustbeexperienced.No.2 CharlieChaplin（人物传记）CharlieChaplin,afamouscomedian,brightenedthelivesofAmericansandBritishthroughtwoworldwarswhentheyfeltdepressed,sotheycouldfeelmorecontentwiththeirlives.Uptonownobodyhasbeenabletodothisbetterthanhim.Borninapoorfamily,CharlieChaplinwastaughttosinganddanceassoonashecouldtalkandwalksothathecouldearnhisownlivingwithhisparents,whowerebothmusichallperformers.Unfortunately,whenhewasfiveyearsold,hisfatherdied,leavinghisfamilyevenworseoff.Byhisteens,Chaplincouldmimeandactthefoolinasubtleway.Withtimegoingby,hebecamemoreandmorepopular.Onceheplayedatrampwhoworeamoustache,wornoutshoesandwidetrousers,walkingaroundstiffly.Thischaracterwasasocialfailurebutwaslovedforhisoptimismanddeterminationtoovercomedifficulties.No.3 JohnSnow（叙事步骤）JohnSnowwasafamousdoctorinLondonandhebecameinspiredwhenhethoughtabouthelpingordinarypeopleexposedtocholera,whichwasadeadlydiseaseofitsday.Manythousandsofterrifiedpeoplediedeverytimetherewasanoutbreakbecauseneitheritscausenoritscurewasunderstood.Heknewitwouldneverbecontrolleduntilitscausewasfound.Hebelievedonetheorywhichsuggestedthatpeopleabsorbedthediseaseintotheirbodieswiththeirmeals.Hetriedtoprovethis.SowhenanotheroutbreakhitLondon,hebegantogatherinformationandmadeamap,markingwhereallthedeadpeoplehadlived.Itwasvaluable.Andfinallyheconcludedthatthewaterwastoblame.Then1JohnSnowlookedintothesourceofwater.Hefoundallthedeathswerelinkedtopollutedwater.Sohewasabletoannouncewithcertaintythatpollutedwatercarriedthevirus.Topreventthisfromhappeningagain,JohnSnowsuggestedthatthesourceofallthewatersuppliesbeexaminedandnewmethodsofdealingwithpollutedwaterbefound.Finally“KingCholera”wasdefeated.No.4 TheUnitedKingdom（地理介绍）PeoplemaywonderwhytheUKconsistsoffourcountries,England,Wales,ScotlandandNorthernIreland.YoucanclarifythisquestionifyoustudyBritishhistory.GreatBritaingotitsnamewhenEnglandandWaleswerejoinedtoScotland.TheNorthernIrelandwasconnectedtotheminthe20thcenturyinapeacefulway.Totheircredit,thefourcountriesdoworktogetherinsomeareas.However,theyhavedevelopeddifferenteducationalandlegalsystemsaswellasdifferentfootballteams.Englandisthelargestofthefourcountriesandforconvenience,itisroughlydividedintothreezones.Whilesomeindustrialcitiesdon,thavehistoricaltreasures,Londonisaplacewhereculturalrelicscanbeseeneverywhere,asithasbeeninfluencedbydifferentinvaders.SoifyouaregoingtomakeatriptotheUKenjoyableandworthwhile,youmustkeepyoureyesopen.No.5 QuitSmoking（劝说说服）Itiseasyforyoutostartsmoking,butonceyoubecomeaddictedtoit,youmayfindithardforyoutoquitit.Firstly,youmaybecomephysicallyaddictedtonicotine.Secondly,youmaydevelopthehabitofsmokingandfinallybecomementallyaddictedtoit.Smokingmayhaveallkindsofharmfuleffectsonthehealthofthesmokersaswellasnon-smokersaroundthem.Itnotonlyaffectsyourphysicalfitness,butalsodoesharmtoyourheartandlungsandcausesavarietyofdiseases.Soitisimportantforonetoquitsmokingandliveahealthierlife.Togiveupsmoking,youshouldbewell-prepared.Dosomethingelseinsteadofsmokingacigarette.Remember,ifyoukeeptrying,youwillsucceedeventually.No.6 GlobalWarming（科技说明）Thereisnodoubtthattheearthisbecomingwarmerandthatitishumanactivitythathascausedthisglobalwarmingratherthanarandombutnaturalphenomenon.Allscientistssubscribetotheviewthattheincreaseintheearth,stemperatureisduetotheburningoffossilfuels.However,theattitudesofscientiststowardsthisrisearecompletelydifferent.Ontheonehand,somescientiststhinkthatthetrendwhichincreasesthetemperaturewouldbeacatastrophe.Ontheotherhand,Othersareopposedtothisviewandpredictthatanywarmingwillbemildwithfewbadenvironmentalconsequences,formorecarbondioxidewillmakeplantsgrowingquickerandencouragemoregreaterrangeofanimals.Greenhousegasescontinuetobuildupintheatmosphereandtheclimateisgoingtokeeponwarmingfordecadesorcenturies.Nooneknowstheexacteffectsofglobalwarming.Onlytimewilltell!（二）写作常用语用结构:(1).利用语法结构的变化来增强表达：.虚拟语气IfonlyIwereaflyingbird!Butforyourhelp,wewouldn,thavefinishedtheworkaheadoftime.IfIhadnotdivedforPescawhenhelayunderwater,Ishouldneverhaveheardeventhenameofthewoman,whonowismywife.如果我没有跳入水中去救Pesca,我就不会遇到我的妻子,甚至都不会听说她的名字。.强调句型Itisfailurethatteachesusmuchmorethansuccess.It,swhenyousolvealargeproblemthatyoucanhaveapowerfuleffectontheworld.Sometimesitistheoneswhokeeptheircoolandworkthehardestwhogettheresults..倒装Onlyafterhermothercametohelpherforthefirstfewmonthswassheallowedtobeginherproject.Hardly(Nosooner)hadsheseenthewhitewall,thewhitecurtainandthewhitequiltwhen(than)hertearsbegantowellup.NeverbeforehasheseenanybodywhocanplaytennisaswellasRobert.NotoncediditoccurtoMichaelthathecouldonedaybecomeatopstudentinhisclass.Herearesomesuggestionstohelpyoukeepfit.Thereontheothersideofthevalleywasalittlehouseanditswindowsweregolden.在山谷的另一头有一个小房子，它的窗户闪着金色的光。.问句与反问句：Haveyoueverwanttobeafamoussinger?Haveyoueverdreamedofplayinginfrontofalargeaudience?Tobehonest,Johnwasthepersonthatwas.Whyrideabike?Notonlyisbikinggoodexercise,butswitchingfromacartoabikealsoreducestheamountofpollutionintheair.Whobearstheburdenofresponsibilityforofferingassistance everyone.谁该承担提供帮助的责任？我们每个人。Howwasitpossibletowalkforanhourthroughthewoodsandseenothingworthofnote?.。。。。when••・..结构ThewolfwasabouttocatchMacwhenhejumpedintothecarwithallhisstrength.Wewerevoyagingacrosstheoceanwhenacloudofsmokegoingupcaughtourattention.Hewaswalkingalongthestreetwhenalittleboycaughthisattention..双重否定Wecan,tlivewithoutwater.Yetwithouttheairwecouldnotsurvivemorethanafewminutes.Nothingcouldbemoreimportant.Icouldn,tbehappier..with结构Myfacebecameredwithembarrassment/anger..3Shewasshakingwithcold.Hisfingerswerenumbwithcold.Skillcomeswithpractice.熟能生巧Shecouldseeawonderfulhousewithshininggoldenwindowshighonanotherhill.Withencouragementandsupportofmyfriends,Ihaveovercomemanydifficultiesinmylife..比较结构Themoreknowledgeyoupossess,theeasieritcanbetodealwithdifferentsituations.(2)利用修辞技巧来增加语言的渲染力：1递进：Themoreknowledgeyoupossess,theeasieritcanbetodealwithdifferentsituations.Ididn,tknowmuchabouttheharmfuleffectofsmoking,Ididn,tknowitcoulddodamagetoyoulungs.Icertainlydidn,tknowtheirbabiesmaybeabnormal.NeitherdidIknowmycigaretteaffectednon-smokers.However,whatIdidknowwasthatmygirlfriendthoughtIsmeltterrible..排比Todoctors,heisamedicalcuriosity;Toscientist,heisapioneerinthestudyoftheuniverse.Somehaveevendescribedhimtheworld,sgreatestlivingphysicist.Loveisdear,loveisrare.Bylookingatus,listeningtous,respectingourinput,affirmingourvalue,givingusasenseofdignity,Papawasunquestionablyourmostinfluentialteacher.Wecanincreaseourknowledge,broadenthemind,enrichourlifeandmakeourselvesrelaxedbyreadingbooks..比喻Brickscoveredthegroundlikeredautumnleaves.Hardhillsofrockbecameriverofdirt.Thelightfromtheseanimalsmakethewaterlooklikeaskywithmovingstarsinit.Thewater,whichwascoldasiceandflowedfasterthanariver,wasaboveherknees.Astheoldsayinggoes,“Youcan,tjudgeabookbyitscover.”人不可貌相Lifeissometimeslikearacewithtracksstretchinglong.Agoodstateofmindcanactuallybringoutourbest.生活就像是一场赛跑，跑道很长。好心态才能让我们把最好的发挥出来。ThereisanEnglishsaying:“Laughteristhebestmedicine.”Humoristhebestmedicinethatcreatesmiracle.Thebeautifulsceneryisafeastfortheeyes!Joinusandyouwon'tbedisappointed..对比Itwasthebestoftimes,itwastheworstoftimes,itwastheageofwisdom,itwastheageoffoolishness,itwastheepochofbelief,itwastheepochofincredulity,itwastheseasonofLight,itwastheseasonofDarkness,itwasthespringofhope,itwasthewinterofdespair..夸张Wehavewaited340yearsforourrights!…This'wait,hasalmostalwaysmeans‘never7Thereshesawawallofwaterthatwasquicklyadvancingtowardsher..重复Thevillagewellsroseandfell,roseandfell..拟人Thecitybegantobreatheagain.The19thcenturysawthewidespreaduseofelectricityandthebirth..情景烘托Shestoodbythewindowandlookedoutatagreycatwalkingalongagreyfenceinagreybackyard.Theroomisturningslowlyawayfromthemoon.Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.Bathedinthesunshineanddelightedbyfantasticscenery,weheadedforthedestination.沐浴着阳光，在美景中心情愉快，我们朝着目的地出发。（三）好词好句：.心理描写：Ifonlyshecouldhaveadiamondring.（愿望）Shehadfalleninlovewithitatfirstsight.（爱情）Asdayspassed,Simongrewmoreandmorebitter.苦涩）Notadaypassedwithoutfeelingstressful.（压力大）Johnwasoverjoyed/Johnwasthrilled.（喜悦）Jessiesmiledtoherself.（欣慰）Andywasshellshocked.（惊讶）Shewasovercomebyastrongfeelingofshame.^耻）Shecouldnotevencatchonelastglimpseofherhusband.遗憾）Shewasvisiblynervous.（紧张）Mypersonalcuriositywasaroused.（惊讶）Shesankontheground,knowingshewillneveragainhear“Mom”fromherson,slips.（悲痛）Seeingsuchextraordinarybeauty,Ithinkeverycellinmybodywokeup.（兴奋）Myheartwasbeatingwildly-feltveryexposedinsuchdeepclearwater.（紧张）.外貌描写：Hewastallandhandsomewithsmoothhairandadeepvoicealthoughhisfacialexpressionneverchanged.他虽然面部表情毫无变化，但是个子高大，相貌英俊，头发平整，声音低沉浑厚。Hehadalarge,squareface,withstronglypronouncedeyebrowsandcheekbones.他有一张宽大的方脸，眉毛很重，颧骨突出。Aswepulledoutofmydriveway,Iagaingazedathisbeautifulface.HislipswerefUllbutfirm,hisnosestraightandperfect,hishairsun-streakedblond当我们驶出车道时，我又一次凝视着他美丽的脸庞。他的嘴唇丰满而结实，鼻子笔直完美，头发金黄。Hereyesflashedathimbehindthescreenthatseparatedtheminthevisitingroom.Bothdimplesshowedonherpalefacewhenshesmiled.AyellowdresshidthethinnessofherbodyandmadeherlookeveryinchoflivingLilythatshewas.她的眼睛在那隔离了他们的屏幕后闪烁着，她一笑，苍白的脸上就露出酒窝。黄色的裙子掩盖了她身体的瘦弱，让她看起来就是我那个充满灵气的女儿。Iflushedinembarrassment,asIbegantosaysomething,butJoshinterruptedme.我尴尬地脸红了，我开始说些什么，但Josh打断了我.Hiseyessparkledandhisfacewaslitup.Butwhattouchedmyheartmostwaswhenhewalkedbackovertothedugout.HelookedoveratmewiththebiggestsmileI,veeverseenandsaid,“Iloveyoutoo,Ter”他的眼睛闪闪发光，他的脸亮了起来。但是最触动我的是当他走回到球员休息处时，用最灿烂的微笑看着我说：“我也爱你，Ter”“Yes,youwillallbesearchingforyourfutureprofessions”,shesaidwithaglowonherface-asthoughthiswasthebestthingshedidinherclassroomeveryyear.（她说着，满面红光。）glow：vi，发光，灼热；脸红；洋溢，喜形于色Hisfaceglowedwithdelight.他高兴得满面通红。Iwillfeelaglowjustthinkingofyou...我一想到你就会感到一阵暖意。"It'seasy,justgolikethis,”Mikeassuredhimashegrinnedfromeartoear,displayingthebrightsmilethatbecamehistrademark.很简单，就这样走吧，”迈克向他保证，他咧开嘴，露出了他那标志性的灿烂的笑容。（smilefromeartoear咧着嘴笑）ThetearsstartedtodryandasmilecametomyfaceasIpicturedPaulstillconceiving,stillbelievingandstillachieving,armedwithhisnewlydevelopedcuriosityandself-esteem.当我想象着Paul带着那份新兴的好奇心和自尊，心中仍然有理想，仍然有信念，仍然有作为的时候，我的泪水开始干了，我的脸上露出了笑容。Karenlookedoutintothefacesoftheyoungaudience.TearsrolleddowntheircheeksastheyrememberedKyle.Karen向年轻观众的脸望去。当他们想起Kyle时，眼泪顺着脸颊滚落下来。Hiseyesshiftedtowardsme.Theylookedtired,andfullofpain—painthatIhadneverseen,ormaybethatIhadignored.Ifeltalumpforminginmythroatashecontinuedtocry.Slowly,thatlumpturnedtotears,andtheystartedpouringfrommyeyes.他的目光转向了我，那眼神看起来很疲惫，充满了我从未见过的或者我忽略了的疼痛。当他继续哭的时候，我感到喉咙有肿块，慢慢地，那肿块变成了眼泪，开始从我的眼中涌出。Scoot,"hesaidtomewithawink,“Andcomeandseemewhenyougetback”"快去吧，"他对我眨眨眼说道，“回来后去找我。”Theylookedkindoflikedeerinheadlights,standingoutsidethedoor,handsjammedinpockets,mouthhalf-open.他们看上去有点像车灯前忐忑的小鹿，站在门外，双手插在口袋里，半张着嘴。.环境描写：Thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookwonderful.Inthevalleyscolourfulbutterfliesflewaroundusandwesawmanyyaksandsheepeatinggreengrass.Warmsunshinepouredoverthelittlebush.Thegardenlooksbeautifulwhenalltheplantsareinflower.GreyishBlackcloudscoveredthesky.Atmidnighttheskybecameclearerandthestarsgrewbrighter.Itwassoquiet.Therewasalmostnowind一onlytheflamesofourfireforcompany.6Themoonwatchedfromtheskybehindthecloudasthestarsblinkedtheireyesinfatigue.Everythingisinsleep,notasinglesoundnorasinglemovementcanbeseenorheard.Likeadimlamp,themoonshoneformabove.Thestarstwinkletheireyeswithcuriosity.There'snotasinglesound,eventhecricketsareasleep.Onlythefirefliesarestillawake,carefullyweavingapictureinthenightskywiththeirgentlestrokes.Springiscoming.Avarietyofflowerscomeouttoshowtheirbeautyandbringusfragrance.Itisafeastforoureyesandsouls.Theyellowgrasssuddenlyturnsgreen.Theyoungleavesgrowonthebranches.Theswallowsflybackhomewiththegreetingofspring.ThefirstthingIbecameawareofwasallthevividcolourssurroundingme-purples,reds,oranges,yellows,bluesandgreens.Thecoralswerefantastic-theywereshapedlikefans,plates,brains,lace,mushrooms,thebranchesoftreesandthehornsofdeer..动作与动态场景描写：Shesteppedback,appearingsurprisedandputupherhandsasifindefence.（戒备）Exhausted,Islidintobedandfellfastasleep.（疲劳）Theirpanicwasrisingandtheycouldfeeltheirheatbeatingmoreandmorewildly./Stillshiveringalloverwithfear,hewasscaredstiffwhenhethoughtofthedeath.害怕）Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom（.开心）Heswallowedhissaliva,staringathisgrandmaandmumbling,“Didyoureallyhavelunch?”“Ofcourse."Hisgrandmakepthereyeslowerandchewedapieceofradishslowly.Veryquickly,thelittleboywolfeddownthemeal.（饥饿）Idrovealongthesameway,passingthesamebuildings,thesameneighbourhoodandeventhesamefurnitureshop,allofwhichcondemnedmetothedeepregret.（悔恨）Jackwipedthecoldsweatfromhisbrow.Hatredovercamehimoutofthedepthofhisheart.（仇恨）Jacksatup,feelingwarmatthememoryofthelilyhisdaughterhadbroughthim.Shehadhuggedtheclaypotbeforesheletgoofit.Thenshesaid,“"Daddy,thisisme.EverytimeyouseethislilythinkofmeforIamyourLily.”.（亲情）Shelookedatherselfinthemirrorandsighed,wonderingwhyherboyfrienddidn,treplytothelettershehadpostedtheweekbefore.Shesmoothedherhairdownwithawetcomb,wipedhershoeswithawetclothandthoughtaboutthebeautifuldayswithhim.Withallthesedone,shefinallymadeadecision.Twohourslater,shewasonthetraintohiscity,feelingbothnervousandexcited.（用动词表达忐忑不安的心情）Havingheardwolveshowlingintheforest,Lalaacceleratedherwalkupthepathtothecavesfearingthattheremightbewildbeastslyinginwaitforher.（害怕）Shehadnomanwithhisspeartoprotecthershehadalmostreachedherdestinationwhenadelicioussmellarrestedherprogressandshestopped.…Hersensebecamedizzywithhunger.（饥饿）Abruptlyshesatdown,onlytobescoopedupbyherlaughing,shoutingsisterLuna.（利用动词描写人物性格）Thecaptainsawawhitetowerofwater,sohighthathecouldn,tbelievehiseyes,advancingtowardsthem,itracedtomeettheship.Theshipjumped.Withatearingcrash,tonsofwater7felluponthedeck,asthoughtheshippassedunderawaterfall.Thentherewasnowind,notabreath.Theunexpectedsilencemadehimfeeluncomfortable.Hewaslisteningforthefirstsoundsofreturningwindwhentheroarofthewindsdrewnearfast.Thehurricane,withitspowertosinktheshipandtodestroystrongwalls,hadfoundthislittleshipinitspath.（利用动词描写快速变化的场景、）Y人生感悟：Inneremptinesscomesfromalackofonethingonly:alackofawarenessoflove.Weliveinauniverseoflove,whichisalwaysavailabletouseach,andyouwon,tfeelemptyinsideifyouknowhowtoopenyourselftothatlove.Whateverdifficultieswearefacing,weshouldnotbeaf