英语读后续写续写好句积累-突破20+

高考"读后续写"要求尽可能地应用较多较复杂的语法结构和词汇，同时能有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。下面是九个在续写中经常用到的句型，如果你能在续写中加以使用，一定会给你的续写增添色彩，也会让阅卷老师眼前一亮。将这些句型熟练地组合使用，根据需要加入状语从句、名词性从句或者是定语从句，可以在这九个句型的基础上写出许多较复杂的好句来。续写突破20+不是梦，就看你用不用。——艾斯英语小许Doing...,主+谓...doing作状语,逻辑主语与句子的主语一致,构成主动关系；有时可以在doing前加before,after,while等；但如果是被动关系，应该使用过去分词done作状语。例如：SeeingtearsinMark'seyes,AnniedecidedtopromisetotheboythatshewouldletMarkcutherhair,too.Hesitatingalittle,MarkpromisedtoAnniethathewouldworkhardathisEnglish.Findingaclinicnearby,theywentinsideandtoldthereceptionistwhathadhappen.Ignoringherwords,themanwalkedawayquickly.Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Hearingthis,Catherineranasfastasherlegscouldcarryher.WhiledecoratingthetreetogetherwithMama,Iaccidentallydroppedandbrokeanoldglassonit.Wantinghimtotakehisflowerandgoofftoplay,Ifakedasmileandthenturnedtotheotherside.Afterreachinghome,shetoldeverythingtoherbrother.Hearinghisbrother'swords,sherushedbacktotheshoptofindtheboybuttimeneverwaitsforanyone.Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestressforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.Dressedinaballetdress,shemanagedtoslipintothedressingroomwithoutbeingnoticed.主+谓...,doing...doing作伴随状语,与句子的谓语动词同时发生,逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系；该句型可以以并列谓语的形式出现，转化为：主+谓…and谓…；但如果是被动关系，应该使用过去分词done作伴随状语。例如：Thegirlbegankickingandswinging,tryingtogetfreeoftheman'shold.Shebravelyapproachedhim,handinghimabunchofredroses.Bittermemoriesoftheman'sharshwordscamefloodingbacktoher.4)Herfatherwaslyingonhisback,trappedunderthetruck.HerDadwasstillconscious,yelling,"Onemoretry!""It'sOK,"Mamasaid,comfortingmewithahug.Carefullylayingthenoteaside,Icleanedupthebrokenpiecesoftheball,wishingIcouldstickthemtogether.Ifollowedher,notbelievingmyeyes.主1+谓…，主2+doing...逻辑主语2与doing构成主动关系,构成独立主格,在句中作状语。该句型或以转化为并列句：主1+谓...and主2+谓...。例如：Hestoodthere,tearsofgratitudewellingupinhiseyes.--Hestoodthereandtearsofgratitudewelledupinhiseyes.Sheopenedtheletter,herhandstremblingwithexcitement.--Sheopenedtheletterandherhandstrembledwithexcitement."Don'tstandinmyway,"Timyelledout,hisvoicequiveringwithrage."Don'tstandinmyway,"Timyelledoutandhisvoicewasquiveringwithrage.主+谓1...,谓2...,and谓3描述一系列的动作。如果是两个动作，可以用这样的结构：主+谓...and(then)谓...。例如Theadultsputonperformance,chatted,andsaidtheirgoodbye.Shestoppedthetrucksafelyoutsidethegarageandthenrushedbacktothebasement.Peterrushedtothesceneandwasastonishedtofindthecatingoodshape.Sheyawnedandturnedtolookbackatherhouseacrossthestress.Despitethegreatdifficulties,healwayshadapositiveattitudeandgreetedeveryoneeachmorningwithahugesmile.Hestoodrightbeforeme,andsaidwithgreatexcitement,"LookwhatIfound!"Ireachedfortheflowerandreplied,"JustwhatIneed."Grandmasighedandturnedtowardsthekitchen.Shethoughtforawhileandthencontinued.Sheturnedaroundandsawmestandinginthedoorway.表情感类的形容词,主+谓...情感类的形容词在句中作状语，说明主语的状态，可以转化为Feelingadj,主+谓...。有时可以放在句后：主+谓...，表情感类的形容词。例如：Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryellowblouse,tryingtoattractothers'attention.Exhaustedandscared,Janelaydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.ToAnnie'sdelight,surroundedbyhisclassmates,Markseemedlikearockstar,cheerfulandproud.Andthenheranofftoplay,unawareoftheimpacthe'dhadonme.Shegotdisappointedandreturnedhome,continuouslyangryatherself.Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock.Istoodinthelivingroomdoorway,absolutelyshocked.Shehungherhead,notsurehowtoreply.Theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determinedtolivethelifetothefullest.Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.Extremelyworried,theydecidedtowaitforthematMac'shome.方式副词(ly),主+谓…方式副词在句中作状语，修饰谓语动词，一般放在句末，但有时根据需要可以放在句首。例如：Gently,shepickedupthefirstbaby,ranbackoutsideandlaiditonthesidewalk.Quickly,shefollowedthesoundtoastream.Attentively,welistenedtotheteacherinclass.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Carefully,Timdidhishomework.句子副词，主+谓...句子副词在句中作状语，修饰整个句子，放在句首，引出句子。例如：Andamazingly,theboysrecoveredsoonafterbeingperformedCPR.Fortunately,thecatwasstillalive,thoughbadlyinjured.Incredibly(Unbelievably),shewasabletocarryherlastchildoutbeforetheroofandwallsfell."Actually,Iwastouchedbyyourkindness!"saidJenny,wipinghertears.Luckily,Iwasabletoborrowafewdollorsfromaclerkatthehotel.地点状语或表示运动方向的副词+谓(vi)+主该句型是一个全部倒装句，主语必须是名词，谓语动词为不及物动词，常见的表运动方向的副词有：in,out,off,away,up,down,outside,inside等。例如：AtthebackofthecrowdwasMark,determinednottobeleftbehind.Inhishandwasaflower,withitspetalsallworn.AtthefrontdoorstoodherdearhusbandwhosufferedgreatanxietywhenJanewasnowheretobefound.Aheadsatanoldwoman.Awaywentthecrowdonebyone.Downfelltheleaves.Incameastrangerinblack.时间状语，主+谓...时间状语一般放在句末，但有些时间状语放在句首，能使行文连贯，逻辑合理。如：shortlyafterwards,hourslater,beforelong,atthatmoment,afterthat,severalminutesafterthat,afterseeminglyalongtime,afterwhatseemedalongtime,inthemeanwhile,beforeIknewit,Itwasn'tlongbefore...等。例如：Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Forthefirsttimeinherlife,Mariafeltfrightenedandalone.Inthemeanwhile,Bradandhiswifejumpedintotheircarandfollowedclosebehind.Onthemorningofthecompetition,shewasnervous.However,withhermother'sencouragement,shehadnothingtofear.Amonthlater,LarryappearedinEric'sclassro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