三、书面表达的阅卷情况介绍及复习建议

三、书面表达的阅卷情况介绍及复习建议（一）阅卷情况介绍1.组织结构2.流程（二）书面表达的内容年代体栽题型内容1994应用文（广播通知）文字提示作文（要点式）晚会活动安排通知1995说明文（书信）看图作文指路1996说明文（简历）文字提示作文（表格式）自我介绍1997记叙文看图作文违反交通规则被罚款的经历1998记叙文（日记）看图作文参观农场的经历1999说明文（书信）看图作文介绍学校今昔变化2000记叙文（报告）看图作文交通事故目击报告2001说明文（书信）文字提示作文（表格式）减负带来的变化2002说明文（书信）文字提示作文（表格式）关于公园是否收门票的讨论2003说明文（书信）看图作文介绍所租房屋的基本情况（三）书面表达的评分标准各档次的给分范围和要求：1.第五档(很好）：(21-25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务.--覆盖所有内容要点.--应用了较多的语法结构和词汇.--语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力.--有效地使用了语句的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑.完全达到了预期的写作目的.2.第四档(好):(16—20分)完全完成了试题规定的任务.--虽漏掉1,2个次要点,但覆盖所有主要内容.--应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求.--语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致.--应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构

紧凑.达到了预期的写作目的.3.第三档(适当):(11—15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务.--虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有的主要内容.--应用的语法结构或词汇能满足任务的要求.--有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解.--应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯.整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的.4.第二档(较差):(6—10分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务.--漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容.--语法结构单调,词汇项目有限.--有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解.--较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性.信息未能清楚地传达给读者.Sample1(25points)DearEditor,

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechangedforparks.Inourschool,60%ofthestudentsthinkanentrancefeeshouldnotbechargedforparks.Becausetheythinkparksarepublicplacesforthecitizenstorelaxthemselves.Ifanentrancefeeischarged,largegatesandwallsshouldbebuilt,whichwillhaveabadeffectontheappearanceofthecity.Apartfromthose60%,thereare40%studentswhothinkanentrancefeeshouldbecharged,aslongasthepriceisnotsohigh.Intheiropinion,themoneyshouldbecollectedtopaytheworkersofthegardens,andtobuynewtreesandflowers.Thatisallaboutthediscussion.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHuaSample2(20points)DearEditorI’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechangedforparks.

Sixtyypercentofmyclassmatesthinksthatanentrancefeeshouldn’tbecharged,becauseparksaretheplaceswherepeopleplaygamesandhaveresttimes.Ifanentrancefeeischarged,gatesandwallsshouldbebuiltanditwillhaveabadeffectiveonthelookofthecity.Andotherclassmatesthinksthatanentrancefeeshouldbecharged,butthepriceshouldnotbetoohigh.Themoneycouldbeusedtooffersalariestotheeworkersandbuynewflowersandtrees.Yourstruly,LiHua

Sample3(15points)DearEditorI’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechangedforparks.60%studentsthinkthatanentrancefeeshouldnotbechargedforparks.Becausetheparksarethepublicplace.Ifanentrancefeeischargedforparks,theparksneedbebuiltthedoorsandwalls.Itisnotgoodforthecity.40%studentsthinkthatanentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks,butthechargeshouldn’tbetoomuch.Becausethechargeecouldbeusetopaytheworkersmoney.Italsocouldbeusetobuythenewflowersandtrees.Bestwishesforyou.YourstrulyLiHuaSample4(10points)DearEditorI’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechangedforparks.

Inourschool,about60%ofthestudentsthinkthatanentrancefeeisn’tchargedforparksisgood,becausetheparkisthepublicforthepeopletowalk,readingandsoon.Andifanentrancefeeischarged,theparkshouldbebuildthewallanditwillmakethecitynotgood.40%ofthestudentsconsideredthatanentrancefeeisneedtocharge,butitcan’tveryhigh.Becausethereismanyworkedworkinthepark,andthatmustbebuysomeflowersandplantsforthepark.Sochargetheentranceisneed.YourstrulyLiHuaSample5(5points)DearEditorI’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechangedforparks.Have60%student’sthinktheparkdon’tmustentrancefee,Becausethearepeopletesting’splace,ifgointheparkneedentrancefeethepeoplewillnotgo.Andgointheparkneedentrancefee,sothattheparkhavebuildgate,sothatthecitybenotbeautif.But40%studentsthinkgointheparkneedentrancefee.Butthereisnottodear.Because,theparkworkerhavemoney.Andbutbuyflowersandtreesmustmoney.Sogointheparkneedentrancefee.YourstrulyLiHua（四）复习建议词、句、篇“三部曲”写作法2.ParagraphUnity

3.SentenceCohesion

请根据下列英语提示写一篇100—120词的短文。短文的开头已写好，你只需接着写。Subject(主题)Insomecountriesthereishardlyenoughfoodforthegrowingpopulation.Suggestsomewaysinwhichthisproblemmightbesolved.Planandideas（提纲）Introduction1.

Problemofpopulation&foodrisesinworldpopulationDevelopmentPossiblesolutions:2.

Discouragelargefamilies.3.

Modernisefarming&developlandtoproducemorefood.4.

Export（出口）resourcestoimportfoodConclusion5.

Solutionsnoteasy,butproblemcanbesolved.Manycountriesintheworldarefacedwiththeproblemsofincreasingpopulationandashortageoffood.Thereareanumberofpossiblesolutionstotheproblem,butnoneofthemiseasy.Firstly,governmentcoulddiscouragepeoplefromhavinglargefamilies.Whynothavejustonechild?Secondly,farmingmethodsinthosecountriesareverysimpleandofteninefficient.Ifthepeopleboughtnewagriculturalmachinery,modernizedtheirfarmingmethodsanddevelopedmoreland,theymightsoonproduceenoughfoodfortheirneeds.Thirdly,manycountrieshavenaturalresourcessuchasoil,woodoriron.Thesecouldbeexportedsothatfoodcouldbeimported.Allofthesepossiblesolutionssimplifytheproblem.Buttheyshowthat,ifpeoplemeantosolvetheproblemsofincreasingpopulationandfoodshortage,therearewaysofdoingit.

Transitions.Useaconjunctionorconjunctiveadverbtolinksentenceswithparticularlogicalrelationships.a.

Identity.Indicatessameness.thatis,thatistosay,inotherwords,...b.

Opposition.Indicatesacontrast.but,yet,however,nevertheless,still,though,although,whereas,incontrast,rather,ononehand,ontheotherhand...c.

Addition.Indicatescontinuation.

and,too,also,furthermore,moreover,inaddition,besides,inthesameway,again,another,similarly,asimilar,thesame,...d.

d.

Causeandeffect.

therefore,so,consequently,asaconsequence,thus,asaresult,hence,itfollowsthat,because,since,for,...

e.Indefinites.Indicatesalogicalconnectionofanunspecifiedtype.infact,indeed,now,...f.

Concession.Indicatesawillingnesstoconsidertheotherside.admittedly,Iadmit,true,Igrant,ofcourse,naturally,somebelieve,somepeoplebelieve,ithasbeenclaimedthat,onceitwasbelieved,therearethosewhowouldsay,...g.

Exemplification.Indicatesashiftfromamoregeneralorabstractideatoamorespecificorconcreteidea.forexample,forinstance,afterall,anillustrationof,even,indeed,infact,itistrue,ofcourse,specifically,tobespecific,thatis,toillustrate,truly,...一、巧用修饰法MissLiwillgiveusareport.MissLi,whohasawideknowledgeofEnglish,willgiveusareport.二、明确交待原因