2023年高考备战英语作文经典范例

2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试备战英语书面表达汇编一.假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东MrsWilson不在家，你准备外出，请给MrsWilson写一留言条，内容包括：1．外出购物2．替房东还书3．Tracy来留言：1〕咖啡屋〔BoltonCoffee〕见面取消 2〕此事已告知Susan 3)尽快回电注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mrs.Wilson,I’mgoingoutshopping,andwon’tbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.AtaboutIo’clockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.Shefeltverysorryaboutthat,butsaidthatyoucouldsetsomeothertimeforthemeeting.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.ShehasalreadytoldSusanaboutthischange.LiHua二.一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容应包括：1．地点：距白山人口处500米2．房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元／天；双人间(共15间)，150元／天；热水淋浴；3．餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡)；4．游泳池：全天免费开放；5．欢送预定。注意：1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。WelcometoBaishanMountainHotelBaishanMountainHotelisnowopenforbusiness.Ourhotelstands500metersawayfromtheentrancetoBaishanMountain.Ithas20afaigleroomsand15doublerooms,allwithhotshowers.Asingleroomis100yuanandadoubleroom150yuanforonenight.Youareadvisedtobookinadvance.ThehotelservesthreemealsadayandthereareChinesefoodandwesternfoodforyoutochoosefrom.Youcanalsoenjoyyourselfatthecafedrinkingteaorcoffeeintheevening.Wealsohaveaswimmingpool,whichisopenalldayandfreeofcharge.Allarewelcome!三.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文.请你根据以下要点写回信.要点:1.参加中文学习班;2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。June8,2023DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritemeinChinesenexttime.BestwishesLiHua四.假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，方案星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一那么广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确〔箭头所指内容〕。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。注意：1．词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．参考词汇：牛津——Oxford费用——feeDearSir/Madame,I’mwritingformoreinformationaboutthedaytourtoLondon.AsastudentatOxfordUniversity,I’dliketoknowifyouhaveanyspecialpriceforstudents.Asforthemoneyyoucharge,doesitcovertheentrancefeesforvisitingtheplaceslisted?Whataboutlunch?Isitincluded?OrdoIneedtobringalongmyownfood? Howlongwillthetourlast?SinceIneedtopreparemylessonsforthenestday,I’dliketoknowthetimetoreturn.Besides,isthereanytimeforshopping?IreallywanttohavealookatthebigstoresinLondon.Yours,Lihua五.假定你是李华．希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信．描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1．年龄2．性别3．爱好〔旅游、运动、宠物等〕。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节．以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好。DearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.Iwanttohaveapenfriend,hopefullyagirlinherearlytwenties,andwithinterestssimilartomine.Inmymind,sheissomeonewhoisinterestedintraveling,swimming,andplayingtabletennis.Besides,itwouldbebetterforhertohaveapetdogasIhavekeptoneathomeforsometime.Withsuchapenfriend,IhopeIcansharewithherourexperienceintraveling,takingcareofpetsorwhateverwehaveincommon.AndIbelieveIwillimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearnmoreabouthercountry.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Bestregards LiHua六.假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。赞成迁出：反对迁出：1．游客多，交通堵塞2．郊区环境好1．建于1906年，中外闻名2．搬迁易造成动物死亡注意：1．词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．参考词汇：

郊区—suburbJune

3

,2005Dear

Editor

,Recently

,our

class

have

had

a

heated

discussion

about

whether

the

Beijing

Zoo

should

be

moved

out

of

the

city

.

Some

of

my

classmates

are

in

favor

of

the

move

.They

say

large

crowds

of

tourists

to

the

zoo

will

result

in

traffic

jams

.They

also

say

that

once

moved

,animals

will

have

more

space

and

better

living

conditions

in

the

suburbs

.However

,other

students

are

against

the

idea

,saying

that

the

Beijing

Zoo,

built

in

1906

,has

a

history

of

100

years

,and

is

well

–known

at

home

and

abroad

.So

it

should

remain

where

it

is

.What’s

more

,moving

may

cause

the

death

of

some

animals

.To

move

or

not

,this

is

a

big

decision

which

has

to

be

made

by

people

in

Beijing.Yours

truly,

Li

Hua七.假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy

Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢送他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：※

上午：学校活动※

下午：游览市区※

晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天注意：1．词数：100左右2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3，参考词汇：安排—arrange

Dear

Andy,I

am

glad

to

learn

that

you

are

coming

to

China

and

will

stay

at

my

home.My

parents

and

I

are

very

pleased

to

have

you

with

us.

Now

let

me

tell

you

what

we

have

arranged

for

you.

I

know

the

school

will

organize

a

lot

of

things

for

you

to

do

in

the

morning,

but

in

the

afternoon,

I’ll

show

you

around

and

take

you

to

some

places

of

interest.

We’ll

mostly

stay

at

home

in

the

evening

watching

TV,

playing

games,

and

meeting

people.

I’m

sure

we’ll

have

a

wonderful

time

and

enjoy

each

other’s

company.I’m

looking

forward

very

much

to

meeting

you

soon.Yours

sincerely,Li

Hua八.假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1．词数：100左右。2．参考词汇：房租—rent(n.)。DearBob,I’m

so

glad

to

learn

that

you’re

coming

in

September.

I’ve

found

a

place

for

you.

It’s

a

small

flat

of

25

square

meters,

with

a

bedroom,

a

bathroom

and

a

kitchen.

In

the

bedroom

there

is

a

bed,

a

sofa,

a

desk

and

a

chair.

The

rent

is

500

yuan

per

month.

The

flat

is

in

a

building

on

Fangcao

Street,

which

is

not

far

from

Jianxiu

Chinese

School.

Bus

No.11

can

take

you

straight

to

the

school.

In

fact,

it’s

only

one

stop.

Do

you

think

you’d

like

it?

If

not,

I

can

try

and

find

another

place

for

you.

Just

let

me

know.Yours，Li

Hua九.最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。

2、词数：100左右。

3、参考词汇：门票：entrance

feeDear

Editor,I’m

writing

to

tell

you

about

the

discussion

we’ve

had

about

whether

an

entrance

fee

should

be

charged

for

parks.Opinions

are

divided

on

the

question.

60%

of

the

students

are

against

the

idea

of

entrance

fees.

They

believed

a

public

park

should

be

free

of

charge.

People

need

a

place

where

they

can

rest

and

enjoy

themselves.

Charging

entrance

fees

will

no

doubt

keep

some

people

away.

What

is

more,

it

will

become

necessary

to

build

gates

and

walls,

which

will

do

harm

to

the

appearance

of

a

city.On

the

other

hand,

40%

think

that

fees

should

be

charged

because

you

need

money

to

pay

gardeners

and

other

workers

and

to

buy

plants

and

young

trees.

They

suggest,

however,

fees

should

be

charged

low.

Yours

truly,Li

Hua十.假设你是李华。你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。周末活动〔减负前〕周末活动〔减负后〕白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11:30就寝时间：11:30范文：Dear

Dick,How

nice

to

hear

from

you

again.

You

want

to

know

what

is

going

on

in

schools

in

China?

In

short,

things

have

begun

to

improve

since

schools

were

called

on

to

reduce

learning

load.

I

don't

know

about

others,

but

I

used

to

have

to

work

even

at

weekends

doing

endless

homework

and

attending

classes

as

well.

Now

I

have

more

free

time.

I

can

follow

my

own

interests

such

as

reading

books,

visiting

museums,

and

taking

computer

lessons.

In

the

evenings

I

can

watch

news

on

TV

or

read

newspapers.

What's

more,

I

can

go

to

bed

earlier.

As

far

as

I

know,

everyone

is

happy

about

this

new

arrangement

of

things.Best

wishes,Li

Hua附高考英语书面表达实用技巧(1)注意篇章结构，合理布局开始局部(openingparagraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文局部(Bodyparagraphs)——围绕主题开展表达、讨论。结尾局部(concludingparagraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后照应，祛除与主题无关的内容。(2)确定主题句主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛〞的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。写主题句应注意以下几点：①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点。②提炼出一句具有概括性的话。③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。在最后的冲刺时间里，不管是什么类型的文章，在具体的写作过程中，我们均可以按如下四大步骤进行强化训练，从而提高写作技巧，解决问题：步骤一：认真审题立意，确定写作中心。找出根据这个中心能够扩展的材料有哪些，要防止那些与中心内容无关的细节。以命题作文“TheClassmateIAdmireMost〞为例，文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位同学，因而就不能泛泛谈论这位同学的家庭关系、社会背景等，而要紧紧抓住这位同学身上能够吸引你的地方展开去。步骤二：围绕中心，列出写作提纲。提纲一定要包含所提供的情景、要点，同时尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。仍以“TheClassmateIAdmireMost〞为例，提纲可以这样写：①WhoistheClassmateIadmiremost?②Myreasons.

(SomeExamples)③WhatcanIlearnfromtheclassmate。步骤三，根据字数要求，扩展成篇。有几个可以遵循的规律，供大家参考：1、在整篇文章中，努力防止只是用一、两个句式。要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、比照句、分词短语、介词短语等。2、使用不同长度的句子，通过分句和合句，增强句子地连贯性和表现力。3、改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序，可以把状语置于句首，或用分词等。4、学会使用关联词。如：①递进关系：furthermore；moreover；further；Inthisway；still；notonly...butalso...；not...but...；inaddition(to)；etc。②转折关系：but；evenso；however；though；eventhough；etc。③归纳总结类：inotherwords；onthewhole;insum;therefore；hence；inshort；tosumup；inconclusion;insummary；etc。④强调关系：infact;especially；particularly；moreover；naturally;whatismoreimportant；inreali