高考英语一轮备考：如何表达精彩的句子素材

高考英语书面表达在句子结构方面得高分的评分要求是：应用了较多的语法结构;语法结构方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构所致;具备较强的语言表达能力。在整篇文章中，要尽量使用不同的语法结构，以避免重复。非谓语动词、名词性从句、定语从句、虚拟语气等，都属于较复杂的语法结构。正确地使用这些语法结构，便可写出精彩的句子表达，从而提高作文的得分档次。例如：1.使用非谓语动词一般表达：Allthewaywewerechatting，singing，laughing，andenjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.精彩表达：Allthewaywewerechatting，singingandlaughing，enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）一般表达：Mr.Smithcameintotheclassroomandmanystudentsfollowedhim.精彩表达：Followedbymanystudents，Mr.Smithcameintotheclassroom.（过去分词短语作伴随状语）一般表达：WhenhearrivedinLondon，hegavemeaphonecallimmediately.精彩表达：On/UponarrivinginLondon，hegavemeaphonecallimmediately.（动名词短语作介词的宾语）一般表达：Whentheyfinallyreachedtheairport，theyfoundtheplanehadtakenoff.精彩表达：Theyfinallyreachedtheairportonlytofindtheplanehadtakenoff.（onlytodo...表示意想不到的结果）2.使用名词性从句一般表达：Tooursurprise，theywonthechampionshipatlast.精彩表达：Whatsurpriseduswasthattheywonthechampionshipatlast.一般表达：Isuggestedthatweshouldchangethedate.Heagreedwithme.精彩表达：Heagreedtomysuggestionthatweshouldchangethedate.3.使用定語从句一般表达：InordertoimproveourEnglish，wearegoingtoholdanEnglishpartyinourschoolsnewgymandpartiesareoftenheldthere.精彩表达：InordertoimproveourEnglish，wearegoingtoholdanEnglishpartyinourschoolsnewgym，wherepartiesareoftenheld.一般表达：TheEnglishpartywillstartfrom7p.m.to9p.m.nextFriday.DuringthattimeyouwillenjoyEnglishstories，songs，poemsaswellasshortplaysattheparty.精彩表达：TheEnglishpartywillstartfrom7p.m.to9p.m.nextFriday，duringwhichyouwillenjoyEnglishstories，songs，poemsaswellasshortplaysattheparty.（介词+which引导定语从句）4.使用状语从句一般表达：Iwillnotbelievehiswords.精彩表达：Nomatterwhathesays，Iwontbelievehim.一般表达：Itmayrain.Youdbettertakeanumbrella.精彩表达：Youdbettertakeanumbrellaincaseitrains.5.使用倒装结构一般表达：Wesufferedfromcoldandhungerinthosedays.Thedaysaregone.精彩表达：Gonearethedayswhenwesufferedfromcoldandhunger.一般表达：Tomdidntgotobeduntilhisparentscamebackfromwork.精彩表达：NotuntilhisparentscamebackfromworkdidTomgotobed.一般表达：Itgotusclosetonature，gaveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolworkandpromotedthefriendshipamongus.精彩表达：Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork，butalsoitpromotedthefriendshipamongus.6.使用省略结构一般表达：Ihaventsucceeded，butIhopethatIcansucceed.精彩表达：Ihaventsucceeded，butIhopeto.一般表达：IfIamgivenmoretime，Iwilldoitbetter.精彩表达：Ifgivenmoretime，Iwilldoitbetter.7.使用强调结构一般表达：Hedidntattendthemeetingbecauseofillness.精彩表达：Itwasbecauseofillnessthathefailedtoattendthemeeting.一般表达：Hereallywrotetohisparentslastweek.精彩表达：Hedidwritetohisparentslastweek.8.使用with复合结构一般表达：Springcomes.Thetreesturngreen.精彩表达：Withspringcoming，thetreesturngreen.一般表达：Theteacherenteredtheclassroom.Therewasabookinhishand.精彩表达Theteacherenteredtheclassroomwithabookinhishand.9.使用虚拟语气一般表达：Hedidntfollowmyadvice.Sotheaccidenthappened.精彩表达：Ifhehadfollowedmyadvice，theaccidentwouldnthavehappened.一般表达：Theyaretalking.Theyseemtobeoldfriends.精彩表达：Theyaretalkingasiftheywereoldfriends.10.变换时态或语态一般表达：Thebellisringing.精彩表达：Theregoesthebell.一般表達：Werequireallthecontestantstospeaknomorethan5minutes.精彩表达：Allthecontestantsarerequiredtospeaknomorethan5minutes.练一练将下列句子改成精彩的表达。1.Thebusiscoming.2.Weshouldpaymuchattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.3.Weleftlate.Sowemissedthetrain.4.HespeaksGermanveryfluently.HemayhavestudiedGermaninGermany.5.Hefellasleepbutthelightwason/burning.6.Shedidntgotoworkbecausehermotherwasill.7.Themedicineisquiteeffectiveifitistakenintime.8.HereallyworkshardatEnglish.9.Theenvironmentwillneverimproveuntileveryonetakescareofit.10.Youcanborrowit.Butyoushouldpromisetotakecareofit.11.Paulgotfiredlastweek.Itobviouslymadehimfeelblue.12.Ifyoulikeanything，youcantakeit.13.“Wecantgooutinthisweather，”saidBob，andlookedoutofthewindow.14.Shewasbornandbroughtupinthecountry.Sosheisntusedtocitylifenow.15.Iwokeup，butIfoundeveryonegone.16.Whenwewerebathedinsunshine，wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.17.Ipaid$5forthebook.Thebookiswellworthreading.1.Herecomesthebus.2.Muchattentionshouldbepaidtoprotectingtheenvironment.3.Ifwehadleftearlier，wewouldnthavemissedthetrain.4.HespeaksGermanveryfluentlyasifhehadstudiedGermaninGermany.5.Hefellasleepwiththelighton/burning.6.Itwasbecausehermotherwasillthatshedidntgotowork.7.Themedicineisquiteeffectiveiftakenintime.8.HedoesworkhardatEnglish.9.Notuntileveryonetakescareofitwilltheenvironmentimprove.10.Youcanborrowitonconditionthatyoupromisetotakecareofit.11.Paulgotfiredlastweek，whichobviouslymadehimfeelblue.12.Youcantakewhateveryoulike.13.“Wecantgooutin