2020高考英语课件(山东专用)：专题十-概要写作

专题十概要写作高考英语

(山东专用)专题十概要写作高考英语(山东专用)1Writing1(2019浙江6月)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofThe

A

to

Z

Guide

to

Raising

Happy

and

Confident

Kids,says,“We'vegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenpar-

entstendedtobemorestrict.”Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey'rebuildingtheir

children'sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfire

and,whengiveninawaythat'sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakeariskforfear

ofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents'praisehasputthem.Still,don'tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingas

givingtoomuch.Kidswillfeellikethey'renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon'tcareand,asaresult,

mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments.五年高考五年高考2Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthan

thequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoften

asyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeour

children'seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal,”saysDonahue,authorof

Parenting

Without

Fear:Letting

Go

of

Worry

and

Focusing

on

What

Really

Matters.“Onething

torememberisthatit'stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe'soutthereeverydayand

playinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingthe

effortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardto

cleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenona

case-by-casebasisandbeproportionate(相称的)totheamountofeffortyourchildhasputintoit.

Sowhatistherightamountof3答案[写作提示]1.本文是一篇议论文。文章论述了如何有效表扬孩子的问题。文章结构清楚,论点明确。2.文章第一段指出过度的表扬不利于孩子的成长。第二段认为不表扬孩子也不好。第三段指

出了表扬的核心:要关注过程而非结果。最后一段指出,我们要表扬孩子的努力,不必太过关注

结果。3.针对此类文章最好在概要中加入主旨句,先对文章的总体内容给予介绍。Onepossibleversion:Howtopraiseourkidsisreallyasensitiveproblem.(主旨)Expertsbelievethattoomuchpraiseor

praisingthekidsinawrongwaymayhaveoppositeeffectsonchildren.(要点1)Ontheotherhand,

nopraisealsodoesharmtokids'development.(要点2)Togainthebestresult,ourpraiseshould

focusontheprocessratherthantheendproduct.(要点3)Therefore,whatweshouldpraiseisour

kids'propereffort,regardlessoftheresult.(要点4)答案4精彩语句

1.精美词汇sensitiveadj.敏感的focuson集中于regardlessof不管2.出彩结构①Howtopraiseourkidsisreallyasensitiveproblem.(“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作主

语)②Therefore,whatweshouldpraiseisourkids'propereffort,regardlessoftheresult.(what引导主

语从句)精彩语句

5Writing2(2018浙江11月)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。It'sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolook

andsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacol-

legecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequip-

mentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovis-

itcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemore

thanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsof

yourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.There'snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplications

evenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon'tbeas

muchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren'tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsome

timebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou'dliketoattend.Writing2(2018浙江11月)6Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon'tlikeaboutcertain

campuses,thingsthatyouwouldn'tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCol-

legeWeekLive.It'sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecoun-

selors(顾问),anditwon'tcostyouapenny!Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairatcollege-

.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan'ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,

itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformed

decisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou'dliketoattend.

Itcansaveyoualotofheart7答案[写作提示]本文是说明文。文章结构比较清楚,段落之间的逻辑关系也很紧密。文章第一段开门见山,提出观点:在你上大学之前,要去亲眼看看目标的大学。第二段特别指出对附近的大学一定要去看看。第三段的内容是,如果你在申请之前没有去过,在申请之后,或得到offer之前,一定要去看看,免

得将来后悔。第四段的主要内容是如果无法去亲自参观的话,可以登录网站了解相关的信息,并提供了网站

的信息。Onepossibleversion:Itisawisechoiceforyoutopayapersonalvisittothecollegeyouareapplyingto,especiallythe

onesthatareclosetoyou.(要点1)Inordertoavoidbeingregretful,youshouldatleastvisitthecol-

legeyoudecidedtoattend.(要点2)Ifalltheaboveisnotaffordable,itwillbehelpfultosearchthe

onlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLivewhereyoucangetthenecessaryinformation.(要点3)答案8高级语块1.especially[ɪˈspeʃəli]adv.特别;尤其2.affordable[əˈfɔːdəbl]adj.支付得起的3.onlinecollegefair网上大学博览会高级语块9A组

2017—2019年高考模拟·考点基础题组Writing1(2019浙江杭州高三一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Sometimes,wewishwecouldstoptheclockandgobackintime.Well,twiceayear,countriesin

theEuropeanUnion(EU)andmoststatesintheUnitedStatesactually“changethetime”them-

selves.Eachspring,theyputtheirclocksforwardanhourandinthefall,clocksareturnedanhour

back.Thisisknownasdaylightsavingtime(DST).ThepracticefirstbecamewidespreadduringWorldWarOne.Atthattime,artificiallightingwas

expensiveandhavinganextrahourofdaylightwasbelievedtohelpreducethecostofrunning

suchlighting.However,aboutacenturylater,thisoldpracticemaybecomeathingofthepast.StartinginOctober2019,theEUwillendthepracticeofDST,reportedBloomberg.Thedecision

cameafterasurveypublishedbytheEuropeanCommissioninAugustshowedthatabout85per-

centofthe4.6millionEUcitizenswantedtoendDST.It'sbelievedthatDST'soriginalfunction三年模拟三年模拟10ofsavingenergyisnowuseless.“Newerstudiesshowthattheenergysavingsnowadaysare

marginal(不重要的),”EuropeanCommissionVice-PresidentMarosSefcovictoldtheReuters.

Weareclearlyheadingtowardsmartcities,smartbuildingsandsmartsolutions,whichwillbring

muchmoresavingsthanchangesoftheclock.Meanwhile,itwasfoundthatDSTcouldactuallyhavebadinfluencesonpeople'shealth.Polish

lawmakerBronislawKarasektoldThe

Washington

PostthatDSTcouldcause“imbalanceinthe

bodyclock,leadingtomoodchanges,troublewithsleeping,andanincreasedriskofheartat-

tacks”.“Ourbodieschangeradicallyoverthecourseofadaybasedonhowmuchlightwesee

andhowmuchsleepweget.Evenanhour'sshiftinresttimeanddaylighthoursscrewseverything

upslightly,”accordingtoPopular

Science.However,DSTisn'tcompletelywithoutitsbenefits.AccordingtoThe

New

York

Times,withDST,

peoplecouldhaveanextrahourofactivitiesoutdoorsduringthespringandsummer.WhileDST

willcometoanendintheEUin2019,itisn'tgoingtodisappearforgood,asmanycountrieswill

keepitinuse.ofsavingenergyisnowuseles11

12答案[写作提示]文章介绍了欧盟取消夏令时的前前后后。文章共分5个自然段,划分的意群比较细致。在进行

概要写作时,可以根据文章的逻辑进行整合,不过要注意句子之间的逻辑衔接。Onepossibleversion:TheEUisplanningtoputanendtodaylightsavingtime.(要点1)Asameansofdecreasing

lightingcosts,daylightsavingtimebecamepopularinWorldWarOneandisbeingperformedin

manyplaces.(要点2)Butnowtherearebetterwaystosaveenergy.(要点3)Besides,it'ssaidthatit

maybeharmfultohealth.(要点4)Nevertheless,itwillcontinuetoexistinotherplacesasitdoes

providesomebenefits.(要点5)高级语块1.putanendto结束;终止2.decrease[dɪˈkriːs]v.减少;减小;降低3.saveenergy节能4.nevertheless[ˌnevəðəˈles]adv.尽管如此答案13Writing2(2019浙江金丽衢十二校高三第二次联考)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Technologyisforeverchangingthewaywegetournews.Manypeoplenowgetalotoftheirnews

onelectronicdevices,insteadoftraditionalmedia,suchasnewspapers,televisionorradio.Anin-

creasingnumberofpeoplealsoreportturningtosocialmediaforinformation.Now,thereisanewtechnologythatcouldgreatlychangethewaywegetthenews:computer-cre-

atednewsreaders.Recently,Chinalaunchedwhatiscalledtheworld'sfirstartificialintelligence,

orAI,newspresenters.Thenewsreaders,supportedbymachinelearningtechnology,arebasedontworeal-lifeChinese

newsmen.OneisabletopresentnewscastsinEnglish;theother,inMandarinChinese.Reportsaid

machinelearningwasusedtoexaminevideoimagesandsoundsofthetwonewsmen.Similar

technologyhasbeenusedtocreatevideoproductsknownas“deepfakevideos.”Adeepfakeisa

videothatlooksreal,butwaselectronicallychanged.Suchvideoscanmakepeopleappeartosay

thingstheyneversaid.Writing2(2019浙江金丽衢十二校高三第二次联考14It'ssaidthattheAIpresenterswillbeagreatimprovementtothenewsteambecausethey“can

work24hoursaday”onitswebsiteandonsocialmedia.Oneofthepresentersevenpromisedto

“worktirelessly”tokeeppeopleinformed.Somemachinelearningexpertssaidthesystem

showedoffChina'slatestprogressinvoicerecognition,text-to-speechtechnologyanddataanaly-

sis.Otherswonderedabouttheeffectsrobotsmighthaveonemploymentandworkers.Somepeople

arguedthatonlylow-leveljobsrequiringheavylaborwillbeeasilyreplacedbyrobots.Others

praisedthetechnologyasawayforcompaniestomakemoneyfromlow-costlabormachines.

Somebusinesseshaveexperimentedwithsimilartechnologyforpossibleuseinnewsoperations.Britain'sBBCrecentlyreleasedavideothatusedmachinelearningtomakeitlooklikeoneofits

newsreadersspeakingdifferentlanguages.TheLondon-basedcompanythatdevelopedthesystem

saysitsgoalisto“removethelanguagebarrier”formanydifferentkindsofvideosontheInter-

net.Also,Amazon'sworkingonAlexasmartspeakersystemtocreateaspecialnewsreadervoice.

AmazonisreportedlypreparingtolaunchAlexa'snewsreadervoiceinthenearfuture.It'ssaidthattheAIpresente15

16答案[写作提示]文章介绍了中国开创的一种新的技术:AI播音技术。文章共分6个自然段。进行概要写作时,

一定要把握好每一段的核心,然后进行有机整合。要注意语言的提炼和构思。Onepossibleversion:Technologyhasbeenupdatingoursourceofinformation.(要点1)Now,anothertechnology,so

-calledAInewsreader,hasbecomeahit.(要点2)Thisnewinventionusesthevoiceoftwogreat

Chinesenewsmen,broadcastingbothinEnglishandChinese.(要点3)Oneadvantageofthema-

chineisthatitcanworknon-stop.(要点4)Manycompanies,includingBBCandAmazon,aretry-

ingtoproducebetterlearningmachines.(要点5)高级语块1.update[ˌʌpˈdeɪt]v.更新;升级2.so-calledadj.号称的;所谓的3.non-stopadv.不间断地,连续地精彩语句原句:Oneadvantageofthemachineisthatitcanworknon-stop.分析:本句话的主干是Oneadvantage...isthat...,that引导表语从句。译文:这种机器的一个优点是它能不间断地工作。答案17Writing3(2019浙江丽水、衢州、湖州高三质检)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。In1971,China'sfirstsubwaylineinBeijingwasformallyputintooperation.ByDecember2017,

therewere171subwaylinesstretchingover5,083kmin35citiesontheChinesemainland.Cur-

rently,Chinahasthelongesturbanrailwaynetworkintheworld,whichispredictedtosurpass6,0

00kmby2020.TherapiddevelopmentofChina'surbanrailwaysystemreflectsthecountry'sgrowingeconomic

strength.Thesystemhasexperiencedthefastestgrowthoverthepast15yearsduetotheinvest-

mentofwealthaccumulatedfromthereformandopeningupinurbaninfrastructureconstruction.

Anurbanrailwaysystemisexpensivetobuild,withonekilometerofsubwaycostingapproximate-

ly700millionyuan($110million).Acitywithouteconomicstrengthcannotdevelopsuchanex-

pensivesystem.Theprogressinurbanrailwayconstructiontechnologieshasalsocontributedtothefastexpansion

oftheinfrastructure.Subwayconstructioninvolvesbuildingundergroundtunnels,layingrails,Writing3(2019浙江丽水、衢州、湖州高三质检)18manufacturingtrainsandtheoperationandmanagementofsubways.Itisasystematicproject

whichnotonlycoverstraditionalinfrastructurebuildingbutalsomodernelectronicsandinforma-

tiontechnology.China'srailwayconstructiontechnologiesarethebestintheworld,withChinese

subwaytrainsnowexportedtodevelopedcountriesincludingtheUnitedStates.TheexpansionofChinesecitieshasmadeitnecessarytodevelopurbanrailwaysystems.Sincethe

startofthereformandopeningup,alargenumberofpeoplehavemigratedtocitiesandthenum-

berofprivatecarshasincreaseddramatically,resultinginserioustrafficcongestion.Building

subwayshasbecomeanimportantwaytosolvethisproblem.Thisyearmarksthe40thanniversaryofthelaunchofChina'sreformandopeningup,andthe

rapiddevelopmentofChina'surbanrailwaysystemexemplifiestheachievementsmadebythe

policy.AsChinafurthersitsopeningup,itwillcontinuetomaintainsteadyandrapideconomic

growthandrailwaysystemswillbeavailableinmoreandmorecities.

manufacturingtrainsandtheo19答案[写作提示]文章体裁为说明文。介绍了中国改革开放40年来城市地铁的飞速发展。文章共分5个自然段,

思路清晰,主题鲜明。进行概要写作时,可以根据需要将文章段落大意重新整合,并注意复杂句

子和高级表达的使用。Onepossibleversion:ThepastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthefastdevelopmentofChineseurbanrailwaysbothinnum-

berandlength,whichisareflectionofChina'sprosperouseconomy.(要点1)Actually,notonly

thegrowingconstructiontechnologiesbutalsotheexpansionofChinesecitieswithboomingpopu-

lationandheavytraffic,stimulatestheurbanrailwayconstruction.(要点2)Withthedeepeningof

thereformandopeninguppolicy,moreurbanrailwayswillcomeintouse.(要点3)高级语块1.witness[ˈwɪtnəs]v.见证2.urban[ˈɜːbən]adj.城市的;都市的3.reflection[rɪˈ

flekʃn]n.反映4.prosperous[ˈprɒspərəs]adj.繁荣的5.expansion[ɪkˈspænʃn]n.扩张6.stimulate[ˈstɪmjuleɪt]vt.刺激答案20精彩语句原句:ThepastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthefastdevelopmentofChineseurbanrailwaysbothin

numberandlength,whichisareflectionofChina'sprosperouseconomy.分析:本句话的主干是Thepastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthefastdevelopment...。which引导非

限制性定语从句,先行词为前面主句的宾语。译文:几十年来,我国城市地铁在数量和长度上都得到了快速发展,这是我国经济繁荣的反映。精彩语句21Writing4(2019浙江临安昌化中学高三上学期期末)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Noisyneighborsareacommonprobleminasocietywheremanypeoplelivecloselytogether.Ob-

viously,thisissuecanbemostsignificantwhenyousharewallsorafloor/ceilingwithaneighbor

inanapartment.Anoisyneighborcanmakelifechallenging,particularlyifnoisecontinueswell

intothenight,oroccursduringearlymorninghours.Thissituationneedstobedealtwithproperly,

whichrequiresyourabilitytokeepcalm.Youshouldfirstattempttotellyournoisyneighborsaboutthenoise.Thisconversationshouldbe

polite,evenfriendly.Itcanbeginwithastatementlike“I'mnotsureyou'reaware.”Explainthe

noiseissuebriefly,andasktheneighbortoturndownthemusic,ornottoholdpartiesuntil3a.m.

Youcanalsoaddthatyourealizetheyhearyournoisetoo,andyou'recertainlywillingtotryto

stopanythinginyourbehaviorthatiscreatingextranoise.Youshouldknowthatnotallneighborsaregoingtorespondtoyourrequest,andsomemayre-

spondinabadmanner.Ifthenoisyneighborsdon'tchangetheirbehavior,thenextstepshouldbeWriting4(2019浙江临安昌化中学高三上学期期末22towritetheneighborsaletter.Thelettershouldstatethespecificgrievances(不满)andanydates

whenthenoisewasparticularlybothersome.Forexample,ifyourneighborhasloudgatheringsev-

eryFridaynightthatlastintotheearlymorning,thenwritedownthosedates.Whenthenoiseremainsongoing,youshoulddefinitelyreportittolocalauthorities.Startwith

landlordsorHOASandcontinuewithcallstothepolicedepartment,whenabsolutelynecessary.

Often,however,theproblemisresolvedwhenthenoisyneighborsknowyouaregoingtocallthe

police.Dobeawarethatyoucannotalwaysrequestnoisyneighborstobequiet.Whenthenoiseremains

ongoing,itiswisenottorespondtonoiseinanangryorretaliatory(报复性的)fashion.Ifyouhave

followedthroughwiththestepsandletter,don'tstartbangingthingsaroundinyourhomeorturn-

ingupthemusictoannoytheneighbors.Simplyreporttheirbehaviortotheappropriateauthorities.

towritetheneighborsalette23答案[写作提示]文章体裁为说明文。介绍了生活中常见的被吵闹的邻居打扰的现象,并给出了解决这个问题

的几条建议。进行概要写作时,可以根据建议的顺序,有序展开。但是要注意概要的层次和逻

辑。Onepossibleversion:Beingdisturbedbynoisyneighborshappenscommonlyinourlife.(要点1)Todealwiththisprob-

lem,youneedtofollowthesesteps.(要点2)Firstofall,youareadvisedtohaveafriendlyconver-

sationwithyournoisyneighborsaboutthisissue.(要点3)Iftheydon'trespondorrespondinabad

manner,trywritingthemaletter,inwhichyoushoulddetailthenoiseandyourgrievances.(要点4)

Whenthesetwomethodsfail,justreporttheissuetorelevantauthorities,butdoremember:don't

returnlikeforlike.(要点5)高级语块1.issue[ˈɪʃuː]n.问题2.inabadmanner态度恶劣3.detail[ˈdiːteɪl]v.详述,详细列举4.grievance[ˈɡriːvəns]n.委屈答案24精彩语句原句:Iftheydon'trespondorrespondinabadmanner,trywritingthemaletter,inwhichyou

shoulddetailthenoiseandyourgrievances.分析:本句话的主干是trywritingthemaletter。前面是由If引导的条件状语从句。后面是由in

which引导的非限制性定语从句,先行词为aletter。译文:如果他们没有回应或以很不好的态度回应,请尝试着给他们写封信。在信中你应该详细

描述噪音和你的不满。精彩语句25Writing5(2018浙江温州一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Doeswritingcomehardtoyou?Areyoudiscouragedtofindyourselfpooratwriting?Nobodyis

bornknowinghowtowrite.Goodwritinghabits,whichhelpmakeyouwriteonaregularbasis,are

necessaryforyoutoimproveyourwriting.Firstly,youaresupposedtoreadawiderangeofbooks.It'sobviouswhenawriterisnotwell-read

lackofreadingwillbeobviousineverysentenceonewrites.Readingpreparesyouwithnecessary

knowledgetobeagoodwriter.What'smore,itprovidesyouwithbasicskillsforwriting.The

importanceofreadingcannotbestressedtoomuch:readasmuchandasoftenasyoucan.Secondly,it'simportanttomakeawritingscheduleandwritedailyifitispossible.Whetheryou

writefortwohoursadayorfifteenminutesaday,dailywritingisthekeytodevelopinggoodwrit-

inghabits.It'sbettertowriteforfifteenortwentyminuteseverydaythantositforfiveorsix

hourstowriteovertheweekend.However,ifyoucanmakeadailywritingschedulewithlonger

hoursonyourwritingonweekends,thenit'smuchbetter.Writing5(2018浙江温州一模)26Oneoftheworsthabitsisnevertogethelpfromotherstoimproveyourwriting.Itisadvisedthat

youshareyourworkwithothers.Forexample,youcansendyourwritingtoafewfriends,round

upsomereadersandletthemcommentonyourwriting.Thatway,you'llfindyourwritinggradu-

allyimproved.

Oneoftheworsthabitsisnev27答案[写作提示]文章主要讲述好的写作习惯对提高写作水平的帮助。文章结构比较清晰,以自然段为基础概

括要点即可。其中第一段是主旨段,而后面的三段为具体的做法。Onepossibleversion:Goodwritinghabitscontributealottoimprovingyourwriting.(要点1)First,youshouldreadas

muchaspossibletogettheknowledgeandskillsforwriting.(要点2)Youshouldalsomakeawrit-

ingplanandkeepupyourdailywriting.(要点3)Besides,you'dbetterturntoothersforhelptoim-

proveyourwriting.(要点4)高级语块1.contributeto有助于2.keepup坚持3.turnto向……求助答案28Writing6(2018浙江金华十校一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。ThefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationintheUSandevery

schooldaytransportsroughly25millionyoungpeopletoschoolandhomeagainaftertheschool

dayends.Meanwhile,itisthesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool,accordingtothe

NationalHighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration(NHTSA).Childrenare70timesmorelikelyto

arriveatschoolsafelyontheschoolbusthaniftheyhadtraveledtoschooldrivingthemselvesor

ridingwithfriends.Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenation'smotorvehiclesafetystandardsthananyothervehi-

clesontheroad.Also,severalnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbuseseven

safer,suchasvideocamerasontheinsideandoutside,stoparmcameras,GPStrackingandcolli-

sionlesseningsystems.Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks,closely-spacedseats

andenergy-absorbingseats.ButeventhesafenessofschoolbuseswouldnotcompletelysumupwhychildrenaresaferwhenWriting6(2018浙江金华十校一模)29ridingthebig,yellowbus.Thebusisonlyassafeastheprofessionalmenandwomenwhodrive

them.AlldriversmustobtainaClassBorCCommercialDriver'sLicense(CDL).Theyareran-

domlytestedforalcoholanddrugs,usuallyhavetheirdrivingrecordchecked,andaregiventhe

samereviewofcriminalhistoryasteachersandotheremployeeswhohavecontactwithstudents.

Inordertoserveasaschoolbusdriver,mostapplicantsarerequiredtosuccessfullycompletea

trainingcourse,alongwithinstructionintheclassroomandbehindthewheel.Schoolbusesaresafefortheenvironment,notonlybecauseeachbusreplaces36passengercars

thatwould,butforthebuses,beontheroadtakingandpickingupschoolchildren.Additionally,

schoolbusesusealternativegreenfuelslikenaturalgas,andelectricpower.ToddMonteferrario,PresidentoftheNationalSchoolTransportationAssociation,saidparents

shouldrememberthatthesafestandsmartestchoiceistoputtheirchildrenonthebigyellowbus

whentheycan.

ridingthebig,yellowbus.Th30答案[写作提示]本文是议论文。文章主要论述校车的好处。文章的结构为“总——分——总”模式。第一

段是主题段,提出了主要观点。第二至第四段分别是具体的论据。最后一段提出结论。Onepossibleversion:TheschoolbusisthesafestandwisestchoicetoschoolintheUS.(要点1)Firstly,schoolbusesnot

onlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped.(要点2)Secondly,

thebusdrivershavetopassstrictqualificationtestsandsafetydrivingtraining.(要点3)Thirdly,

schoolbusespoweredbygreenfuelsareenvironmentallysafebyreducingthenumberofprivate

carshittingtheroads.(要点4)Thereforechildrenareencouragedtogotoschoolbyschoolbus.(要

点5)高级语块1.vehicle[ˈviːɪkl]n.车辆;交通工具2.safetystandard安全标准3.technologically[ˌteknəˈlɒdʒɪkli]adv.技术上地4.qualification[ˌkwɒlɪfɪˈkeɪʃn]n.资格5.greenfuel绿色燃料答案31精彩语句原句:Firstly,schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologically

equipped.分析:本句话含有notonly...butalso...结构。notonly...butalso...连接两个并列的谓语动词。译文:首先,校车不仅达到了很高的车辆安全标准,而且还配备了技术装备。精彩语句32Writing7(2017浙江衢州高三一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Amongallthefastgrowingscienceandtechnology,theresearchofhumangenes,orbiologicalen-

gineeringaspeoplecallit,isdrawingmoreandmoreattentionnow.Discussionsaboutitarein-

creasinglyheatedaroundtheworld.Thegreatestthingthatgenetechnologycandoistocureseriousdiseasesthatdoctorsatpresent

canalmostdonothingwith,suchascancerandheartdisease.Everyyear,millionsofpeopleare

murderedbythesetwokillers.Andtodate,doctorshavenotfoundaneffectivewaytocurethem.

Butifthegenetechnologyisapplied,notonlycanthesetwodiseasesbecuredcompletely,bring-

inghappinessandmorelivingdaystothepatients,butalsothegreatamountofmoneypeople

spendoncuringtheirdiseasescanbesaved,thereforeitbenefitstheeconomyaswell.Inaddition,

thehumanlifespan(寿命)canbeprolonged.Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtohealthierandclevererchildren.Somefamilies

havegeneticdiseases.Thismeanstheirchildrenwillforsurehavethefamilialdisease,whichisaWriting7(2017浙江衢州高三一模)33greattroubleforthesefamilies.Inthepast,doctorscoulddonothingaboutgeneticdiseases.But

genetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly.Scientistsjustneedtofindthewronggeneand

correctit,andahealthychildwillbeborn.Somepeopleareworryingthatthegeneresearchcanbeusedtocreatehumanbeingsinlargequan-

tities.Inthepastfewyears,scientistshavesucceededincloninganimalssuchasmice,sheep,and

dogs;therefore,thesepeoplepredictthathumanbabieswouldsoonbeclonedandthatitwouldbe

beyondcontrol,leadingtosomedisastrousconsequences.Butmanybelievethatclonedbabieswill

notcomeoutinlargequantities,formostcouplesintheworldcanhavebabiesinaverynormal

wayandtheyalsobelievemeasureswillbetakentocontrolg