丁往道英语写作手册课件

英语基础写作

EnglishWriting

WuHaiping(武海平)英语基础写作EnglishWritinAgametostartwith...

Agametostartwith...

Agametostartwith

Titanicisgoingtosink...Thereare8passengers.However,thereareonly7seatsinthelifeboat.Agametostartwith

TitanicThepassengers:1acleaner2adoctor3afarmer4asinger5ateacher6apregnantwoman7apolicewoman8acollegestudentThepassengers:1acleaner丁往道英语写作手册课件Part1ManuscriptForm文稿格式Whatisagoodmanuscriptform?writingthetitle写标题leavingmargins纸边留空indenting段落开端缩进capitalizing大写dividingwords词的移行Part1ManuscriptForm文稿格

1Arrangement安排Abouttitles关于题目1)writethetitleinthemiddleofthefirstline.题目应写在第一行的中间

1Arrangement安排Abouttitles关于题目2）capitalizethefirstandlastwordsofthetitleandallotherwords.题目的第一个和最后一个词应用大写字母开始。3)(includingwordsfollowinghypensincompoundwords包括复合词中在连字符后面的词)Abouttitles关于题目Abouttitles关于题目4）exceptarticles,coornidatingconjunctions,shortprepositions,andthetoininfinitives.但冠词、并列连词、介词和不定时的to除外5）Noperiodisusedattheendofatitle.题目后不加句号Abouttitles关于题目Abouttitles关于题目6）useaquestionmarkifthetitleisadirectquestion,butdonotuseoneifthetitleiaanindirctquestion如果题目是疑问句，应加问号：如果是间接引语形式的疑问句，则不加问号Abouttitles关于题目Abouttitles关于题目7）usequotationmarkswithquotesortitlesofarticles题目中的引用词语或文章的标题，应加引号。8)underline/italicizenamesofbooks.书名应用斜体或在下面划线

Abouttitles关于题目Indentthefirstlineofeveryparagraph,leavingaspaceofabout4or5letters.每段的开头应缩进，即留出4到5个字母的空白。Part1ManuscriptForm文稿格式

IndentthefirstlineofeveryPart1ManuscriptForm

文稿格式1Arrangement安排2Capitalization大写3WordDivision移行4Punctuation标点

5Handwriting书法Part1ManuscriptForm

鸡肉炒面

Chickenchowmein

视频\中餐速成.Chinese.Food.Made.Easy鸡肉炒面.mp4鸡肉炒面

Chickenchowmei丁往道英语写作手册课件利伯缇大学公开课：英文写作

AmericanLibertyUniversity

利伯缇大学公开课：英文写作

AmericanLibertPart2TheSentenceⅠ.CompleteSentencesandSentencesFragments完整句和不完全句Part2TheSentenceⅠ.Completsubject主语predicateverb谓语动词transitiveverb及物动词object宾语link-verb系动词predicative表语complement补语subject主语attributes定语adverbials状语attributes定语逗号错

commafaultTheuseofacommainplaceofaperiod,asemicolon,acolon,oradashinEnglishwritingiscalledthecommafault.中文里可以用逗号将两个完整的句子分开，英文则不可以。英文里需要用句号，分号、冒号、破折号分开两个句子，否则就叫“逗号错”逗号错commafaultTheuseofaP35Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

句子类型

(use)1.Declarative,interrogative,imperative,andexclamatorysentences陈述句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句P35Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

1.declarativesentence陈述句Sheismyfiance.1.declarativesentence陈述句2.interrogative疑问句Whoisyourfavouriteauthor?2.interrogative疑问句3.imperativesentence祈使句Don'ttouchme.3.imperativesentence祈使句4.exclamatorysentence感叹句Howwellyoulook!Whatamess!4.exclamatorysentence感叹句P35Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

句子类型

(structure)2.simple,compound,complex,orcompound-complexsentences简单句、并列句、复合句或并列复合句P35Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

simplesentence简单句Ithasonesubjectandonepredicateverb.Toseeistobelieve.simplesentence简单句compoundsentence并列句Itconsistsof2ormoresimplesentencesandlinkedbyand,but,or,etc.Honeyissweet,poundsentence并列句complexsentence复合句Itcontainsonemain(principle)clauseandoneormoredependent(subordinate)plexsentence复合句Whoevercomesiswelcome.Thequestionishowhedidit.IbelievethatIcanfly.Allthatglittersisnotgold.Youareabletogowhereveryoulike.Wpound-complexsentence并列复合句compound-complexsentenceADaytoRememberADaytoRemember3.loose,periodic,andbalancedsentences松散句、圆周句（掉尾句）或对偶句P37Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

句子类型

(rhetorical修辞的pointofview)3.loose,periodic,andbalan松散句Aloosesentenceputsthemainideafirst,andletsthereaderknowwhatitismainlyaboutwhenhehasreadthefirstfewwords.松散句Aloosesentenceputsthem圆周句Inaperiodicsentence,themainideaisexpressedatorneartheendofit.圆周句Inaperiodicsentence,the对偶句Whenasentencecontainstwoparallelclausessimilarinstructurebutcontrastedinmeaning,itisabalancedsentence.对偶句WhenasentencecontainstLoosesentencesareeasier,simpler,morenaturalanddirect.Loosesentencesareeasier,siPeriodicsentencesaremorecomplex,formalandliterary.PeriodicsentencesaremorecoBalancedsentencesareimpressive.Theyaremainlyusedinformalwriting,likeexpository说明的andargumentative议论的proseandspeeches.Balancedsentencesareimpress丁往道英语写作手册课件MyNationalDayMyNationalDayP41

Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句1.Unity统一性2.Coherence连贯性3.Conciseness简洁性4.Emphasis强调性5.Variety多样性P41Ⅲ.EffectiveSentencesP41

1.Unity统一性Aunifiedsentenceexpressesasinglecompletethought.Itdoesnotcontainideasthatarenotcloselyrelated,nordoesitexpressathoughtthatisnotcompletebyitself.P411.Unity统一性Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句1.Unity统一性2.Coherence连贯性3.Conciseness简洁性4.Emphasis强调性5.Variety多样性Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句2.Coherence连贯性Coherencemeansclearandreasonableconnectionbetweenparts.2.Coherence连贯性CoherencemeanP422.Coherence连贯性1)faultyparallelconstructions平行结构使用有误2)pronounswithambiguousreference代词指代不明P422.Coherence连贯性1)fault3)dangling(mispalced)modifiers垂悬修饰语（使用不当的修饰语）4)confusingshiftsinpersonandnumberorinvoice,tenseandmood.人称、数、语气和语态上的变动混乱3)dangling(mispalced)modifieⅢ.EffectiveSentences有效句1.Unity统一性2.Coherence连贯性3.Conciseness简洁性4.Emphasis强调性5.Variety多样性Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句

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3.Conciseness简洁性

Asentenceshouldcontainnounnecessarywords.Iftheideaisfullyexpressed,thefewerwordsareused,thebetter.Wordinessonlyobscurestheidea.P463.Conciseness简洁性

AseⅢ.EffectiveSentences有效句1.Unity统一性2.Coherence连贯性3.Conciseness简洁性4.Emphasis强调性5.Variety多样性Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句P49

4.Emphasis强调性Whenthereisanimportantidea,itshouldbeexpressedwithemphasis.P494.Emphasis强调性Wh(1)Emphaticsentences整句强调1.shortsentences短句2.sentencefragments不完整句3.invertedsentences倒装句4.parallelconstructionsandbalancedsentences平行结构和对称句5.periodicsentences

圆周句(1)Emphaticsentences整句强调1.6.imperativeandexclamatorysentences祈使句和感叹句7.Rhetoricalquestions修辞问句或反问句8.negative-positivesentences否定肯定句9.Sentenceswithrepeatedwordsorphrases有重复词或短语的句子6.imperativeandexclamatory(2)Emphasiswithinthesentence句内强调1placing位置2repetition重复3theverbandactivevoice动词和主动语态4subordination从属5emphaticwordsandphrases表示强调的词或短语6alliteration头韵(2)Emphasiswithinthesenten丁往道英语写作手册课件

P63PartFour:TheParagraph段落Aparagraphislikeamini-essay;itshouldbeunified,coherentandwelldeveloped.P63PartFour:TheParagraphⅠ.EffectiveParagraphs有效段落

1.unity统一性Ifallthesentencesinaparagraphleadtoonecentraltheme,theparagraphisunified.Thecentralthemeisusuallysummarizedinwhatiscalledthetopicsentence.Ⅰ.EffectiveParagraphs有效段落

1P62P62P63

P63

丁往道英语写作手册课件丁往道英语写作手册课件丁往道英语写作手册课件丁往道英语写作手册课件丁往道英语写作手册课件P65Ⅰ.EffectiveParagraphs有效段落

2.Coherence连贯性P65Ⅰ.EffectiveParagraphs有丁往道英语写作手册课件WaysofDevelopingParagraphs

段落的展开法1.Developmentbytime按时间展开WaysofDevelopingParagraphs

2.Developmentbyprocess按过程展开2.Developmentbyprocess3.Developmentbyspace

按空间展开3.Developmentbyspace4.DevelopmentbyExampleorGeneralization

用举例和归纳方式展开4.DevelopmentbyExampleorG5.DevelopmentbyComparisonandContrast用类比和对比方式展开5.DevelopmentbyComparisona6.DevelopmentbyCauseandEffect

用原因和结果方式展开6.DevelopmentbyCauseandEf7.DevelopmentbyClassification用分类方式展开7.DevelopmentbyClassificati8.DevelopmentbyDefination用定义方式展开8.DevelopmentbyDefination丁往道英语写作手册课件英语句型作文模板引出话题

Recentlytheproblemof...hasbeenbroughtintofocus.最近......问题引起了关注。Nowadays...hasbecomeaproblemwehavetoface.现今,()已成为我们不得不面对的问题。英语句型作文模板引出话题

Recentlythe英语句型作文模板

表达不同观点

People'sviewson...varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat...However,othersbelievethat...人们对......的观点因人而异，有些人认为......然而，其他人却认为......英语句型作文模板

表达不同观点

People'svi英语句型作文模板表示结尾Inshort,itcanbesaidthat...总之，可以说......Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat...把所有这些因素考虑进去，我们可以得出结论......英语句型作文模板表示结尾Inshort,it英语句型作文模板提出建议Itishightimethatweputanendto...

该是我们停止......的时候了。Thereisnodoubtthatenoughconcernmustbepaidtotheproblemof...毫无疑问，对......问题应予以足够重视。英语句型作文模板提出建议Itishightim丁往道英语写作手册课件OnChineseFever

关于汉语热1世界各地兴起了汉语热2汉语热兴起的原因3我的看法

OnChineseFever

关于汉语热1世界各丁往道英语写作手册课件

英语基础写作

EnglishWriting

WuHaiping(武海平)英语基础写作EnglishWritinAgametostartwith...

Agametostartwith...

Agametostartwith

Titanicisgoingtosink...Thereare8passengers.However,thereareonly7seatsinthelifeboat.Agametostartwith

TitanicThepassengers:1acleaner2adoctor3afarmer4asinger5ateacher6apregnantwoman7apolicewoman8acollegestudentThepassengers:1acleaner丁往道英语写作手册课件Part1ManuscriptForm文稿格式Whatisagoodmanuscriptform?writingthetitle写标题leavingmargins纸边留空indenting段落开端缩进capitalizing大写dividingwords词的移行Part1ManuscriptForm文稿格

1Arrangement安排Abouttitles关于题目1)writethetitleinthemiddleofthefirstline.题目应写在第一行的中间

1Arrangement安排Abouttitles关于题目2）capitalizethefirstandlastwordsofthetitleandallotherwords.题目的第一个和最后一个词应用大写字母开始。3)(includingwordsfollowinghypensincompoundwords包括复合词中在连字符后面的词)Abouttitles关于题目Abouttitles关于题目4）exceptarticles,coornidatingconjunctions,shortprepositions,andthetoininfinitives.但冠词、并列连词、介词和不定时的to除外5）Noperiodisusedattheendofatitle.题目后不加句号Abouttitles关于题目Abouttitles关于题目6）useaquestionmarkifthetitleisadirectquestion,butdonotuseoneifthetitleiaanindirctquestion如果题目是疑问句，应加问号：如果是间接引语形式的疑问句，则不加问号Abouttitles关于题目Abouttitles关于题目7）usequotationmarkswithquotesortitlesofarticles题目中的引用词语或文章的标题，应加引号。8)underline/italicizenamesofbooks.书名应用斜体或在下面划线

Abouttitles关于题目Indentthefirstlineofeveryparagraph,leavingaspaceofabout4or5letters.每段的开头应缩进，即留出4到5个字母的空白。Part1ManuscriptForm文稿格式

IndentthefirstlineofeveryPart1ManuscriptForm

文稿格式1Arrangement安排2Capitalization大写3WordDivision移行4Punctuation标点

5Handwriting书法Part1ManuscriptForm

鸡肉炒面

Chickenchowmein

视频\中餐速成.Chinese.Food.Made.Easy鸡肉炒面.mp4鸡肉炒面

Chickenchowmei丁往道英语写作手册课件利伯缇大学公开课：英文写作

AmericanLibertyUniversity

利伯缇大学公开课：英文写作

AmericanLibertPart2TheSentenceⅠ.CompleteSentencesandSentencesFragments完整句和不完全句Part2TheSentenceⅠ.Completsubject主语predicateverb谓语动词transitiveverb及物动词object宾语link-verb系动词predicative表语complement补语subject主语attributes定语adverbials状语attributes定语逗号错

commafaultTheuseofacommainplaceofaperiod,asemicolon,acolon,oradashinEnglishwritingiscalledthecommafault.中文里可以用逗号将两个完整的句子分开，英文则不可以。英文里需要用句号，分号、冒号、破折号分开两个句子，否则就叫“逗号错”逗号错commafaultTheuseofaP35Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

句子类型

(use)1.Declarative,interrogative,imperative,andexclamatorysentences陈述句、疑问句、祈使句和感叹句P35Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

1.declarativesentence陈述句Sheismyfiance.1.declarativesentence陈述句2.interrogative疑问句Whoisyourfavouriteauthor?2.interrogative疑问句3.imperativesentence祈使句Don'ttouchme.3.imperativesentence祈使句4.exclamatorysentence感叹句Howwellyoulook!Whatamess!4.exclamatorysentence感叹句P35Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

句子类型

(structure)2.simple,compound,complex,orcompound-complexsentences简单句、并列句、复合句或并列复合句P35Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

simplesentence简单句Ithasonesubjectandonepredicateverb.Toseeistobelieve.simplesentence简单句compoundsentence并列句Itconsistsof2ormoresimplesentencesandlinkedbyand,but,or,etc.Honeyissweet,poundsentence并列句complexsentence复合句Itcontainsonemain(principle)clauseandoneormoredependent(subordinate)plexsentence复合句Whoevercomesiswelcome.Thequestionishowhedidit.IbelievethatIcanfly.Allthatglittersisnotgold.Youareabletogowhereveryoulike.Wpound-complexsentence并列复合句compound-complexsentenceADaytoRememberADaytoRemember3.loose,periodic,andbalancedsentences松散句、圆周句（掉尾句）或对偶句P37Ⅱ.TypeofSentences

句子类型

(rhetorical修辞的pointofview)3.loose,periodic,andbalan松散句Aloosesentenceputsthemainideafirst,andletsthereaderknowwhatitismainlyaboutwhenhehasreadthefirstfewwords.松散句Aloosesentenceputsthem圆周句Inaperiodicsentence,themainideaisexpressedatorneartheendofit.圆周句Inaperiodicsentence,the对偶句Whenasentencecontainstwoparallelclausessimilarinstructurebutcontrastedinmeaning,itisabalancedsentence.对偶句WhenasentencecontainstLoosesentencesareeasier,simpler,morenaturalanddirect.Loosesentencesareeasier,siPeriodicsentencesaremorecomplex,formalandliterary.PeriodicsentencesaremorecoBalancedsentencesareimpressive.Theyaremainlyusedinformalwriting,likeexpository说明的andargumentative议论的proseandspeeches.Balancedsentencesareimpress丁往道英语写作手册课件MyNationalDayMyNationalDayP41

Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句1.Unity统一性2.Coherence连贯性3.Conciseness简洁性4.Emphasis强调性5.Variety多样性P41Ⅲ.EffectiveSentencesP41

1.Unity统一性Aunifiedsentenceexpressesasinglecompletethought.Itdoesnotcontainideasthatarenotcloselyrelated,nordoesitexpressathoughtthatisnotcompletebyitself.P411.Unity统一性Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句1.Unity统一性2.Coherence连贯性3.Conciseness简洁性4.Emphasis强调性5.Variety多样性Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句2.Coherence连贯性Coherencemeansclearandreasonableconnectionbetweenparts.2.Coherence连贯性CoherencemeanP422.Coherence连贯性1)faultyparallelconstructions平行结构使用有误2)pronounswithambiguousreference代词指代不明P422.Coherence连贯性1)fault3)dangling(mispalced)modifiers垂悬修饰语（使用不当的修饰语）4)confusingshiftsinpersonandnumberorinvoice,tenseandmood.人称、数、语气和语态上的变动混乱3)dangling(mispalced)modifieⅢ.EffectiveSentences有效句1.Unity统一性2.Coherence连贯性3.Conciseness简洁性4.Emphasis强调性5.Variety多样性Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句

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3.Conciseness简洁性

Asentenceshouldcontainnounnecessarywords.Iftheideaisfullyexpressed,thefewerwordsareused,thebetter.Wordinessonlyobscurestheidea.P463.Conciseness简洁性

AseⅢ.EffectiveSentences有效句1.Unity统一性2.Coherence连贯性3.Conciseness简洁性4.Emphasis强调性5.Variety多样性Ⅲ.EffectiveSentences有效句P49

4.Emphasis强调性Whenthereisanimportantidea,itshouldbeexpressedwithemphasis.P494.Emphasis强调性Wh(1)Emphaticsentences整句强调1.shortsentences短句2.sentencefragments不完整句3.invertedsentences倒装句4.parallelconstructionsandbalancedsentences平行结构和对称句5.periodicsentences

圆周句(1)Emphaticsentences整句强调1.6.imperativeandexclamatorysentences祈使句和感叹句7.Rhetoricalquestions修辞问句或反问句8.negative-positivesentences否定肯定句9.Sentenceswithrepeatedwordsorphrases有重复词或短语的句子6.imperativeandexclamatory(2)Emphasiswithinthesentence句内强调1placing位置2repetition重复3theverbandactivevoice动词和主动语态4subordination从属5emphaticwordsandphrases表示强调的词或短语6alliteration头韵(2)Emphasiswithinthesenten丁往道英语写作手册课件

P63PartFour:TheParagraph段落Aparagraphislikeamini-essay;itshouldbeunified,coherentandwelldeveloped.P63PartFour:TheParagraphⅠ.EffectiveParagraphs有效段落

1.unity统一性Ifallthesentencesinaparagraphleadtoonecentraltheme,theparagraphisunified.Thecentralthemeisusuallysummari