短文改错归纳课件-高考英语二轮复习

Proof-reading短文改错

绥德中学

马春霞Learningaims1.Icanknowthetestingrulesofproof-reading2.Icangrasptheeffectiveskillsofcorrectingthemistakes

Whatisproofreading？满分10分，给出一篇10个错误的短文，要求考生将错误找出并规范改正。错误所占比例为1(添)：1（删）：8（改）建议时间：8分钟

Longlongago,therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvised

himwork

asacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecouldfindintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighborangry.“InthecemeteryalltheothersarelyingwhileIamtheonlyonewhohavetostand.Practice1

Longlongago,therewasthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvisedhimworkasacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecould_________for_________histo介词冠词代词a非谓语∧形容词最高级

findintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighbor____________wassurprise动词时态固定搭配after逻辑错误angry.“InthecemeteryalltheothersarelyingstillwhileIamtheonlyonewhohavetostand.”_______has形容词angrily动词的主谓一致常考错误类型错误类型

句法行文逻辑词法名词动词形容词副词代词冠词介词连词固定搭配名从定从状从主谓一致时态一致人称一致逻辑一致

动词形，名词数还要注意形和副非谓语，细辨别习惯用法要记住

代词格，细领悟句子成分多分析冠词连词常光顾逻辑错误须关注ALimerickPracticemakesperfect.

高考真题演练

Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgarden,sincethen---foralltheseyear---wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!

.1.通读全文，把握大意2.细读全文，仔细斟酌3.再读全文,复核审查Themethodofcorrecting改明显错误对照考点，排除法三种题型是否齐，题量分布是否符合命题规律3steps幻灯片20

动词形，名词数还要注意形和副非谓语，细辨别习惯用法要记住

代词格，细领悟句子成分多分析冠词连词常光顾逻辑错误须关注ALimerickHomework:Finishthepoof-readingfromnationalpapersof20142.Analyzethemistakepoints

Haveaniceday!Thankyou!1.Iholdmylunch-boxinmyhandwhenIwasgoingtoschool.Thesmellfromitwasverygood.(3.Katia,likemanyotherRussiangirls,areniceandlively.2.Itwasawonderfulsurpriseasnothinglikethathadeverbeenhappenedtous.

动词形heldis

1.动词的时态和语态错误.

2.主、谓不一致的错误。1.名词单、复数形式误用注意可数名词与不可数名词1.…sothatI’llgetgoodmarksinallmysubject.

2.Hecollectedsomeinformationsaboutcomputers.

subjectsinformationprogress,furniture,equipment,fun,news,information,advice名词数1.分清形容词和副词用法2.正确使用比较级和最高级1.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.2.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.angrily名词作定语表语动词,形容词,副词,作状语

还要注意形和副

1Playfootballmakesusgrowuptallandstrong.2Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousaboutthenewworld.Playingfeeling1）不定式；2）动名词作主语、宾语；3）并列连词and等连接的不定式或动名词前后要一致(注意距离较远时)；4）现在分词和过去分词的区别等。非谓语，细辨别

inhurryinSundayafternoonsuchmanypeopleaon∨so

习惯用法要记住 1.Marydidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.

2.Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.

her(一）人称代词要一致(性/数/格)(二）反身代词(三)不定代词误用(someone,something,anyone,anything等)(四)it作形主、形宾或指代时有无缺漏(make,find,think)

∨it

代词格，细领悟（一）单数可数名词前须加a/an(泛指)或the(特指)（二）注意用或不用冠词特殊情况

1.

Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof.

2.Whatafunitistogoswimminginsummer.

the冠词

1.Everybodysleepsintents,thatisveryinteresting.

2.Althoughitisrainingheavily,butIdecidedtogoout.3.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.which(一)注意定语从句中关系代词和关系副词正确用法

名词性从句（连接代词/副词/从属连词的混用）(二)注意连词and/but,and/or,but/however之间错用(三)注意从属连词如because与so,though/although与but,if与and/or等不能同时使用.what连词

与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误.Theangeltouchedhiseyes,buthecouldseeeverythingclearly.

and

逻辑错误需关注

动词形，名词数还要注意形和副非谓语，细辨别习惯用法要记住

代词格，细领悟句子成分多分析冠词连词常光顾逻辑错误须关注ALimerick

Longlongago,therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvised

himwork

asacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecouldfindintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighborangry.“InthecemeteryallothersarelyingstillwhileIamtheonlyonewhohavetostand.练一练

Longlongago,therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim.Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp.Theneighboradvisedhimworkasacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecould_________for_________histo介词冠词代词格a非谓语∧形容词最高级

findintheworld.Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker.Buttoeverybody’ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit.“It’sunfair.”Hesaidtotheneighbor____________wassurprise动词时态固定搭配after逻辑错误

Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.Sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine,hehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularI’dalwayswanted.Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn’tlooking.Iguessed,evenatthatage,Iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;IwouldalwaysknowI’ddonesomethingwrong.Lateon,myauntdrovemehome.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappened,butshethankedmeandevermentioneditagain.Practicemakesperfect.Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.Sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine,hehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularI'dalwayswanted.

Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn'tlooking.Iguessed,evenatthatage,Iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;IwouldalwaysknowI'ddonesomethingwrong.Lateon,myauntdrovemehome.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappened,butshethankedmeandevermenti