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议论文介绍段+核心段+结尾段轻松搞定6-6.5Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17糟糕的心路历程1.我到底要赞同还是不赞同啊！！！2.要不哪边好写就写哪边吧！3.(写了100词以后)完蛋！写不下去了！4.要不把两边都写了吧！5.完蛋！我到底赞不赞同啊！6.不管了，反正都讨论到了！2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17糟糕的心路历程错误写法1：1.介绍段2.赞同者认为…3.反对者认为…4.我认为错误写法2：1.介绍段2.诚然,一些人认为…….3.然而,我认为…….4.综上所述2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17整篇文章只能讲解你自己的观点或者陈述事实，绝对不要花大量笔墨去讨论别人的看法。2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17三种可能的个人观点1.completelyagree---顺着题目写咯(出现的几率最低，因为题目中经常出现极端限定词)2.completelydisagree---逐一反驳咯(比较高的可能性，怼起来很爽。但是你的怼人能力有限。)3.一分为二地来看问题(其实相当于部分赞同partlyagree，但我要求尽可能是一个明确的个人观点，要求比较高的掌控力)1).我认为题目中一部分对，另一部分错(题目中必须出现and连接了两个部分)2).题目说的太笼统，我认为应该分人或者分情况(别乱用，一定要确保有明确的划分标准)2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17完全赞同的写法并不常见，最主要的原因是官方出题的时候经常在题目里设定极端限定词，这就导致完全赞同的写法会显得比较肤浅。但是，大家最好还是把完全赞同的逻辑藏在某个小角落，万一有时候能用到呢。2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/171.改写观点，然后表达完全赞同；2.赞同理由-13.赞同理由-24.赞同理由-35.Inconclusion,重复自己的观点.2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Somepeoplethinkthatunpaidcommunityserviceshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschoolprogrammes(suchasworkingforacharity,improvingtheneighbourhoodorteachingsportstoyoungchildren).Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/172022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Somepeoplehavebenefitedfrommoderncommunicationtechnology,butsomegroupsofpeoplehavenotbenefitedatall.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17The21stcenturyhasseenalargenumberofchangesthatarebeyondourwildestexpectations.Oneoftheseadvancesistherapiddevelopmentofcommunicationstechnology.Theadvantagesofconvenienceandhighefficiencybroughtbydigitalcommunicationareobvious,butIdonotthinkthateveryonehasaccesstothesebenefits.​Digitalformsofcommunicationenablemanypeople,mainlyincludingstudents,familiesaswellasentrepreneurs,toreapthemaximumbenefits.Fromaneducationalperspective,learningcanbeincrediblyefficientandeffective,asstudentshavingtheinternetconnectioncanvirtuallysolvealltheirpuzzlesbybrowsingteachingwebsitesoraskingforhelpfromteacherssimultaneously.Internet-basedcommunicationalsocontributespositivelytostrengtheningfamilyrelationshipsandincreasingclosenessbetweenfamilymembers.Forexample,studentswhoattendboardingschoolsorstudyabroadareabletokeepindailycontacteasilywithparentsbysendinggreetingmessagesorcamerachatting.Whatismore,companiescanberunatamuchlowercostbecausetheinternetandcomputershelptoexpandbusinesscheaplyandbecauseinformationtechnologyallowsemployeestoworkathome,whichsavesmostoftherentsforofficespace.2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17However,Iwouldarguethatthebenefitsofinformationandcommunicationtechnologyarerestrictedtocertaingroupsofusers.Inotherwords,somepeople,particularlytheoldandthepoor,arenotbeneficiariesofmodernwaysofcommunication.Withregardtotheformer,alargepercentageofelderlypeopleareunableandreluctanttoadapttonewtechnology,whichmeansthattheybarelyenjoytheconvenienceandfunbroughtbythedevices.Asforpeoplelivinginextremepoverty,mobilephones,computersandanyotherelectronicdevicesareluxuries.Allweb-basedactivitiesmeannothingtothem,neithermakingthemrelaxednorprovidingthemwithcareeropportunities.Inconclusion,Iagreewiththeideathattechnologicaladvancesininformationandcommunicationhaveonlybroughtbenefitstoacertaingroupofpeople,eventhoughitisalargegroup.2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17完全不赞同逻辑的使用比例比完全赞同多得多，这是因为有的题目读起来简直丧心病狂。作为作者，只想怼死这个提出观点的人，所以就直接针对题目里的各个点进行反驳就好。反驳的可能逻辑：这会带来负面影响；这么做不公平；这么做不现实；2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/171.改写观点，然后表达完全不赞同；2.不赞同理由-13.不赞同理由-24.不赞同理由-35.Inconclusion,重复自己的观点.2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Somepeoplebelievethatwildanimalshavenoplaceinthe21stcentury,soprotectingthemisawasteofresources.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Somepeoplearguethatitispointlesstospendmoneyontheprotectionofwildanimalsbecausewehumanshavenoneedforthem.Icompletelydisagreewiththispointofview.Inmyopinion,itisabsurdtoarguethatwildanimalshavenoplaceinthe21stcentury.IdonotbelievethatplanetEarthexistsonlyforthebenefitofhumans,andthereisnothingspecialaboutthisparticularcenturythatmeansthatwesuddenlyhavetherighttoalloworencouragetheextinctionofanyspecies.Furthermore,thereisnocompellingreasonwhyweshouldletanimalsdieout.Wedonotneedtoexploitordestroyeverylastsquaremetreoflandinordertofeedormodatetheworld’spopulation.Thereisplentyofroomforustoexistsidebysidewithwildanimals,andthisshouldbeouraim.2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Ialsodisagreewiththeideathatprotectinganimalsisawasteofresources.Itisusuallytheprotectionofnaturalhabitatsthatensuresthesurvivalofwildanimals,andmostscientistsagreethatthesehabitatsarealsocrucialforhumansurvival.Forexample,rainforestsproduceoxygen,absorbcarbondioxideandstabilisetheEarth’sclimate.Ifwedestroyedtheseareas,thecostsofmanagingtheresultingchangestoourplanetwouldfaroutweighthecostsofconservation.Byprotectingwildanimalsandtheirhabitats,wemaintainthenaturalbalanceofalllifeonEarth.Inconclusion,wehavenorighttodecidewhetherornotwildanimalsshouldexist,andIbelievethatweshoulddoeverythingwecantoprotectthem2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Somepeoplethinkthatcompaniesshouldhavethesamenumberofmaleandfemaleemployees.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Itisundeniablethatmenandwomenshouldhaveequalaccesstojobopportunities.However,Icompletelydisagreewiththeideathatthenumberofmalesandfemalesinacompanyshouldbeexactlythesame.Firstofall,manycompaniesaremoreattractivetoonegenderthantheother,sothenumberofjobapplicantsishighlylikelytobeone-sided,meaningthatitisalmostimpossibletorecruitthesamenumberfrombothsexes.Forexample,acompanyengagingintheconstructionindustrywillreceivemostofapplicationsfrommen,withfewwomeninterestedinitspositions.Asaresult,havingthesamenumberofmenandwomeninsuchacompanyseemsunrealistic..

2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17AnotherreasonwhyIamagainstthegivenopinionisthatitislikelythatworkefficiencyofacompanyadoptingsuchapolicywillbenegativelyaffected.Thisisbecausemalesoutperformfemalesincertainjobs,andviceversa.Forexample,ifaprivatehospitalhadasamenumberofmaleandfemalenurses,therewouldbealotofcomplaintsasaresultofthesignificantdifferencebetweenmenandwomenintermsoftheirabilitiestotakecareofpatients.

Finally,althoughanequalnumberofemployeesofeachsexseeminglymakespositivecontributionstoimprovinggenderequalityinthejobmarket,itissimplyunfairtobaseemploymentforapositiononthegenderofanapplicant.Ifamalecandidateisthebestchoiceforapositioninacompany,itissurelywrongtorejecthiminfavourofafemalewithlowercompetenceandfewerqualifications.Companiesshouldtreatallcandidatesfairlybyconsideringtheirworkexperience,expertiseandsocialskills,etc.,ratherthantheirgender..

2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Inconclusion,theselectionofemployeesshouldbebasedonfactorsthatrepresentacandidate’squalitiesandqualifications.Itwouldbecounterproductivetomakeaselectiondecisionongender..

2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Individualscandonothingtochangesociety.Newdevelopmentscanbeonlybroughtaboutbygovernmentsandlargeinstitutions.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?.

2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Opinionsaredividedonwhetheritispossibleforindividualstomakechangestosociety.Ibelievetherearemanyexamplesofindividualscientists,inventorsorevenpoliticalactivistswhohavemadesignificantcontributionswhichhavebenefitedtheirsocietiesormankindingeneral.Therefore,Icompletelydisagreewiththegivenstatement.Onefieldinwhichindividualshavemadepositivechangesisthatofscience,examplesofwhicharemedicineandelectricity.Withregardtotheformer,aBritishscientistscalledSirAlexanderFlemingaccidentallydiscoveredpenicillinwhenhenoticedthatbacteriacouldnotsurvivenearcertainfungi.Thisdiscovery,thefirstantibiotic,hassavedmillionsoflives.Asfaraselectricityisconcerned,perhapsthegreatestscientistofallwasNicolaTesla,withoutwhoseinventionsinthisfieldwemightnothavethesafesystemofdistributingelectricitybyalternatingcurrentthatwehavetoday.AmonghisotherinventionswereradiowaveswhichareusedtobroadcastTVandradio,andofcoursewifi.2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17Apartfromscience,anumberofpoliticalactivistshavealsomadesignificantcontributionstotheirsocieties,andhavehelpedtowinfreedomfortheirpeople.PerhapsthemostfamousofthesewasMahatmaGandhi,anIndianlawyerwhohelpedtowinindependenceforhisnationfromtheBritishwithhisuniquestyleofpeacefulprotest,whichwaslateraninspirationtootherleadersinthe20thcentury.Forexample,intheUS,ablackcivilrightsleadercalledMartinLutherKingacknowledgedtheinfluenceofGandhi.King’spassionatestyleandnon-violentprotestsagainstsegregationhelpedtobringaboutpoliticalchangeforblackpeopleinthatcountry.Inconclusion,thescientists,inventors,andactivistsmentionedaboveshowclearlythatindividualscancontributegreatlytotheirsocieties,soitisnottruethattheycannotchangesociety..

2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17思考这个问题在历史上，男性领导者带来了很多的暴力和冲突。有人认为如果女性来承担领导人角色的话，她们能创造一个更和平的世界。你是否赞同此观点？.

2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17占到80%以上的一分为二逻辑一分为二的逻辑被严重依赖，这是因为两个原因。首先，这种写法能充分保障字数；其次，这种构思能体现你对所给观点的精准看法。2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17覆盖更全面的一分为二逻辑1.改写陈述题目观点。Ibelievethat一句话写出你的清晰观点(前面所提到的两种一分为二方法)2.Itistruethat…/Iacceptthat…/Iadmitthat…(这里有n种方法来写topicsentence)………………3.However/Nevertheless,开始对另一部分或者另一种情况进行分析。4.Inconclusion,重复自己的观点和看法。2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17

“虽然…但是…”的一分为二Task2：Somepeoplethinkthatalargeamountofmoneyandtimeisspentontheprotectionofwildanimalsandthatthismoneycouldbebetterspentonhumanpopulation.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17

“虽然…但是…”的一分为二Itisarguedthatifthefinancialandtimeresourcesinvestedinprotectingwildanimalswereusedforhumanbenefits,therewouldbebetteres.Idonotthinksuchanargumentcanbejustified.

Thereisnodoubtthattheamountofmoneyandtimepaidforpreservingrarespecieshasbeensignificantandincreasing.Forexample,atacostofbillionsofdollars,theChinesegovernment,sincethe1970s,hasestablishednationalreservesforgiantpandas.Afteryearsofprotection,theonce-endangeredanimalhasnowbeenremovedfromthelist.Also,alargenumberofnon-governmentalorganizationshavebeenmakinggreatefforttomaintainasustainableenvironmentforwildanimalsagainstenvironmentalpollutionandillegalhunting.

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“虽然…但是…”的一分为二TherearetworeasonswhyIdonotthinkthattheresourcesforanimalprotectionshouldbeusedforthebenefitsofhumanbeings.Firstly,withoutspendingmoneysavingwildlifefromingextinct,wewouldnotbeabletoliveontheEarthfortoolongbecausehumansrelyheavilyonotheranimalspeciesforvariouspurposes,likethecontrolofinsects.Secondly,theprotectionofnaturalhabitatsofwildanimalsplaysacrucialroleinensuringhumansurvival.Forexample,rainforestsproduceoxygen,absorbcarbondioxide,andstabilisetheEarth’sclimate.Ifwebudgetedthemoneytowardsotherfields,thecostsofmanagingtheresultingchangestoourplanetwouldfaroutweighthecostsofconservation.

Inconclusion,试着自己写个结尾段2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17

“取决于”的一分为二Task2：Toomuchmoneyisspentlookingafterandrepairingoldbuildings.Weshouldknockthemdownandbuildmodernonesinstead.Doyouagreeordisagree?2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17“取决于”的一分为二Mostgovernmentsarefacedwiththedilemmaofwhethertospendahugeamountofmoneyprotectingoldbuildingsorsimplyknockthemdown.Inmyopinion,whetheranoldbuildingshouldbetorndownandmakewayforanewonemainlydependsonitsvalueintermsofartandhistory.

Ontheonehand,itisnotwiseforthegovernmenttoinvestfinancialandotherresourcesinprotectingsomevaluelessoldbuildingsinspiteoftheircenturialexistence.Ifahouseortowercloselyresembleshundredsofotherbuildingsintermsofdesignandfunction,thenitwouldbeawasteofmoneytokeepitalive.Thegovernmentinsteadshouldconsidermakingspaceformodernbuildings,especiallythosehigh-riseones,whichwillbefollowedbyarangeofbenefits,suchasincreasingaffordablehousingsupplyandimprovinglivingconditions.2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17

“取决于”的一分为二Ontheotherhand,itisundoubtedlyworthwhiletopreservebuildingswithhistoricandartisticmeaningsevenatasignificantcost.Thefirstreasonisthatthesebuildingsattractpeoplefromdomesticcitiesandallovertheworld.Whetherthefeelingispatrioticorexotic,visitorstothesemeaningfulsitescanbespirituallysatisfiedandatthesametimemakeeconomiccontributionstothecity.Inaddition,today'sdesignersmaybeabletolearnfromsomecreativelydesignedandwellerectedbuildings.Forexample,acentury-oldmansionmaybeatextbookteachingmoderndevelopershowtoconstructhousesthatcouldwithstandthefiercestofhurricane.

Inconclusion,Idonotagreethatalloldbuildingsshouldbedemolishedwithouttakingtheiruniquemeaningsintoconsideration.Culturallyandhistoricallyvaluable

oldarchitecturalworksareworthpreservingandprotecting.2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17介绍段的可能性改写原题观点+自己的观点---最常用事实背景+改写原题观点+自己的观点---容易重复词汇事实背景+自己的观点---难度最大2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17是否赞同的介绍段Increasingthepriceofpetrolisthebestwaytosolvegrowingtrafficandpollutionproblems.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?版本一：Itissometimesarguedthattheincreaseinthepriceoffuelscanbethebestsolutiontoproblemsrelatedtotrafficandenvironment.Icompletelydisagreewiththisopinion.版本二：Itissometimesarguedthattheincreaseinthepriceoffuelscanbethebestsolutiontoproblemsrelatedtotrafficandenvironment.AlthoughIbelievethathigherfuelpricescanreducethenumberofcarsonthestreet,Idonotagreethatasimpleriseinthepriceisenough.2022/12/172022/12/172022/12/17是否赞同的介绍段Somepeoplethinkthatinsteadofpreventingclimatechange,wen