读后续写练习写作指导讲义-高三英语二轮复习写作专项

试题原题第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

SunlightfloodedthroughthewindowwhenTomaswassittingatthekitchentable,strugglingwithaliteraryclassic.Streamersofcloudsdriftedbyhighaboveinthesky.Notfaraway,thehugenewtowerblockslinedtheroad.Thefaintsoundofcarswasdimlyheard.

Hismotherwaschoppingtomatoesfortheirdinnerasusual.Suddenlyshesaid,“Youknow,thethingImissmostiscookingareallyhotsalsa（辣番茄酱）,withfreshpeppersstraightfromthegarden.”Shesighed.“That’swhatImissmostaboutMérida.”

Tomaslookedupfromhisbookinsurprise.Hismotherhadnevertalkedlikethisabouttheiroldlifebefore.Hestudiedhernow.Shelookedalittlesad,butthenshesmiledathimandsweptthepileofchoppedtomatoesintothecookingpot.

“ButI’vealreadylearnedalotaboutthisnewcountry,Tomas,”shesaid.“Forastart,I’velearnedthatthere’smorethanonewaytomakeasalsa!”Shewavedapacketofchilispicepowderathim,andtheybothlaughed.

Watchinghismotherbusyinthekitchenpreparingdinner,Tomasthoughtabouttheinsighthismotherhadgivenhimintoherfeelings,andherealizedthathefeltthesamewayaboutleaving.

Sure,ithadbeengreatforhisfathertogetthisgoodjob,butithadalsobeenhard.Tomasmissedhisoldhome—especiallythesunandthebeach.AndhismothermissedMérida,too.Shehadlovedworkinginhermarketgarden,sellingthefreshvegetablesthatshehadgrownherselfandthencominghometocookuphuge,tastymealsforherfamily.Tomas’sstomachrumbledatthememories.

Hethoughtabouthowdifferentthingswereforthemnow,livinginthislarge,grayapartmentblockwheretherewasnogardenandnofriendsdroppingbytosharetheirdeliciousmeals.Hesighed.AtleasttheywerestillabletospeakregularlyeverynightafterdinnerwithhisgrandmotherbackinMexicooverthecomputer—Grandmother!Abuela!注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。SuddenlyTomashadanidea.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico._________________________________________________________________________________________________________

试题分析1.试题分析：（1）人物：♥Tomas:儿子，因为爸爸在他国找到了一份不错的工作，跟着爸爸妈妈移居他乡♥Tomas’smother:从墨西哥移居他乡♥Grandmother:留在墨西哥（2）前文情节：远在他乡，思念之情油然而生。Tomas无意间注意到一天晚饭前，妈妈说起了思念家乡Merida及家乡用刚从菜园采摘的辣椒做的辣番茄酱。Tomas开始不解，后来经过思量，也了解了妈妈的话意。他也开始想念家乡了，特别是家乡的阳光和沙滩。为了生计，现在移居他乡，多少有点失落，没有大大的菜园，没有朋友的欢聚。但是，至少还能通过网络与远在墨西哥的奶奶说说话。于是，Tomas就……2.主题：人与社会，人与自我如何解妈妈的思乡之情？3.情节设计：●第一段：SuddenlyTomashadanidea.①决定给妈妈一个惊喜②与奶奶交流③奶奶决定给Tomas寄新鲜的辣椒过来●第二段：Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico.①打开包裹②送给妈妈③主题升华——

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SuddenlyTomashadanidea.“ItwasapparentthatIcan’tgotoMexico,butatleastIcanenjoythetastyfoodfromit,”hethoughttohimself,wearinganexpressionofexcitement.Thinkingofthedeliciousfoodrangingfromhotsalsatofreshvegetables,hefeltasifhehadtastedallofthem.Tomaswastednotimeturningonthecomputeranditdidn’ttakemuchtimetogetintouchwithhisgrandmother.Theychattedwitheachothercheerfully,sweetmemoriescrowdingin.Hishandssweatingandheartpounding,hebrieflyexplainedhisintention.Itwasnosurprisethathisgrandmotheragreedwithoutanyhesitation.(104words)

Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico.NosoonerhadTomasreceivedtheboxthanheopenedit.Whatespeciallyastonishedhimweresomemarvelousfreshpeppers,aswellasphotosattachedtothebox,enablinghimtorecallthewonderfulsunandbeautifulbeach.ThenhetookittoMom,hopingtogiveherasurprise.Thrilledasshewas,sheturnedbacktoTomasandhuggedhimtightly,“Ihavenoideathatmysonissuchaconsiderateboy!”Withabrightsmilebeamingonherface,Momwastooamazedtofindahotsalsa.Tearsrolleddownherfaceinseconds.ItwasthenthatTomasrealizedhowbothofthemmissedMerida!(111words)

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SuddenlyTomashadanidea.WhynotturntoAbuelaforhelp?Seizedbytheincreasingeagernesstocontacthisgrandmother,hewolfedhissupperonceitwasready.Rightafterdinner,Tomasracedtothecomputerbeforehehadevenhadhisfavoritedessert,leavinghismotherincuriosity.Themomenthegotthroughtohisgrandmotherviathevideochat,heloweredhisvoice,whispering,“Abuela,Ineedyourhelp!”AfterTomaspouredouthisidea,Abuelaclappedherhands,promising,“Excellent!You’llreceivewhatyouwant!”Besidehimselfwithjoy,TomaswavedgoodbyetoAbuela,expectantlywaitingforthepackage.

Aweeklater,aboxarrivedfromMexico.Bubblingoverwithexcitement,Tomasinvitedhismothertoopentheboxtogether.Unfoldingbeforetheireyeswereasealedpackageofdriedhabaneropeppersandacolorfulpacketofseeds.“That’swhatImissmost!AtastefromHOME!”,blurtedouthismother,herlipscurvingintoabroadbeamandeyesglittering