高考英语一轮复习 读后续写导学案之情节冲突法学案无答案

姓名________________读后续写情节优化英语郭老师BevisContinuationwriting---情节优化第一课时Learningaims：了解情节是读后续写的灵魂指导塑造情节的方法实战演练三大冲突记住读后续写中的几大冲突，写文章时可以从以下几方面着手，进行合理的拓展。人物自身的冲突（主要表现为人物内心，或者人物的动作和内心）人与人的冲突人与环境（自然、社会环境）的冲突围绕冲突进行合理的拓展人物自身的冲突（主要表现为人物内心，或者人物的动作和内心）适当添加心理描写最能够凸显出人物内心的冲突，或者围绕人物内心的情感变化将整个故事串联起来。比如：平淡无奇→愤怒→懊悔→开心我们应该要写的是为什么会有这样的心理变化，什么导致的心理变化，一般这个要与心理描写和动作描写相结合。人与人之间的冲突人与人之间的冲突，仅仅限于文章中给出的人物，尽量不要随意自己增设新的新人，如果实在不得不增设的时候，一定要对这个人进行描写，一般情况下不建议引入新的人物。描写人与人之间的冲突，一般有帮助、道歉、原谅、生气等等。所以人与人之间的冲突是故事发生的主线索，也就是续写的重点。人与环境（自然、社会环境）的冲突从文章情节的角度讲，可以写为，想出去玩但是天下雨了，想爬山但是下雪了，及环境使人的想法得不到满足。另外，可以从环境对人物的角度来讲，比如阳光明媚表现人物的心情不错。三、教师讲解四、给下面的话题增设冲突和朋友一块到公园玩→___________________→_______________________→妈妈在家做好了饭菜→______________________→好朋友一块到家里吃饭五、限时训练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.AshewalkedalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank,heheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainandagainbutcouldn’tgetthecarmoving.Arthurturnedandlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedworried.Arthurstoppedandasked,“Itlookslikeyou’vegotaproblem,”Arthursaid.“I’mafraidso.I’minabighurryandIcan’tstartmycar.”“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp?”Arthurasked.Theyoungmanlookedatthetwosuitcasesinthebackseatandthensaid,“Thanks.Ifyou’resureitwouldn’tbetoomuchtrouble,youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.”“Notroubleatall.I’dbegladtohelp.”Theyoungmangotoutandtookoneofthesuitcasesfromthebackseat.Afterplacingitontheground,heturnedtogettheotherone.JustasArthurpickedupthefirstsuitcaseandstartedwalking,heheardtheloudnoiseofanalarm.Itwasfromthebank.Therehadbeenarobbery!ParkAvenuehadbeenquietamomentbefore.Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.Arthur,stillcarryingthesuitcase,turnedtolookatthebankandwalkedrightintotheyoungwomaninfrontofhim.Shelookedatthesuitcaseandthenathim.Arthurwassurprised.“Whyisshelookingatmelikethat?”Hethought.“Thesuitcase!ShethinksI’mthebankthief!”Arthurlookedaroundatthecrowdofpeople.Hebecamefrightened,andwithoutanotherthought,hestartedtorun.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1：Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六、文章升格请根据老师的讲解，先在原文中修改后，在此处进行二次创作。Paragraph1：Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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