高一读后续写练习课件

ContinuationWriting（读后续写）精选ppt1ContinuationWriting精选ppt1

读后续写:

提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。（满分25分）新高考考试说明精选ppt2读后续写:精选ppt2精选ppt3精选ppt3精选ppt4精选ppt4第五档：21-25第四档：16-20第三档：11-15第二档：6-10第一档：1-5精选ppt5第五档：21-25精选ppt5评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档

(21-25)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。

内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。

所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。

精选ppt6评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分与所给短文融洽度高，Step1.ReadthepassageStep2.Getthemainidea

(who?When?Where?What?Why?How?)

Step3.Predictthepossibleplotdevelopment

(theplot,logical,reasonable,thegiventwosentences)Step4.Begintowrite(theunderlinedwords)Step5.

Polishyourwriting(词汇、句式、语法的多样性)

Howtowriteacontinuation?精选ppt7Step1.ReadthepassageHowWhen?Where?Who?what?Why?how?howtogetthemainidea精选ppt8When?howtogetthemainidea精Basicformsofthe6questionsWhendidthestoryhappen?Wheredidthestoryhappen?Whoisthemaincharacter?Whathappenedinthestory?Whywasthemattercaused?Howwasthemattersolved/ended?精选ppt9Basicformsofthe6questions读后续写练习II

WhenIwasalittlegirl,everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething,he

wouldaskmetoholdthehammer,andmeanwhile,haveaconversationwithme.Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout.Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily.

Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeand

since

then,mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning,nomatterwhat.SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse,

which

mydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80-degreesummerheat.Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim.ButIwasalwaysbusy,

unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim.

OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual.Inoticedthatmydadhad

forgottensomethingswediscussedlately.Iwasinahurry,soourconversationwasshort.Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital.ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为60左右；2.至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分只有一段，开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。精选ppt10读后续写练习II精选ppt10When?Where?Who?What?Why?

How?whenIwasalittlegirlmydad,Ihaveaconversationwithme

…mydadtakescareofmyfamily…精选ppt11whenIwasalittlegirlmydaStep1.ReadthepassagePara.1WhenI

wasalittlegirl,everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething,hewouldaskmetoholdthehammer,andmeanwhile,havea

conversationwithme.Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout.Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily.Mainidea:WhenIwasalittlegirl

mydadliketohaveaconversationwithme,whotakescareofmyfamily.精选ppt12Step1.ReadthepassageMainStep1.ReadthepassagePara2.Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeandsincethen,mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning,nomatterwhat.SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse,whichmydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80-degreesummerheat.Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim.ButIwasalwaysbusy,unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim.Mainidea:WhenIgrewup,mydadwanttotalktome.ButIwasbusy,unabletohaveaconversationwithhim精选ppt13Step1.ReadthepassageMainStep1.ReadthepassagePara.3OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual.Inoticedthatmydadhadforgottensomethingswediscussedlately.Iwasinahurry,soourconversationwasshort.Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasin

hospital.

Mainidea:OneSundaymorningcameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital.精选ppt14Step1.ReadthepassageMainPara.4

ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad.

whenIgottothehospital......

精选ppt15Para.4whenIgottothehospitStep3.Predictpossible

plotdevelopmentInagrouppredicthowthestorywilldevelop:

Topredictdoesn’tmeanyoucanwritewhateveryoulike.Continuationwritingmustbedesignedinalogicalandreasonableway.Andontopofthatbeingcreativewillbeappreciated.

精选ppt16Step3.PredictpossibleplotStep4.Begintowrite

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为60左右；2.至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分只有一段，开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Theunderlinedwords:I

dad

conversationtalk

unable

hospital精选ppt17Step4.Begintowrite

注意：参考词汇：passaway,die(vi),dead(adj.),losesb.regretdoingsth.后悔做过某事，findsb.lyingonthebed,burstintotears,burstoutcrying,onlythendidIrealize...getovertheillness,recoverfromtheillness,myheartisbroken.selfless,beworriedabout,beconcernedabout精选ppt18参考词汇：精选ppt18Possibleversion1:WhenIrushedtohospital,Ifoundmydadlyingthere,weakandhopless.Holdingbackthetears,Italkedtohimgently.Hisfacelitup.OnlythendidIrealizetheconversationwasmorethanconversation.Itwaslove.IwasgratefulthatmyfathergotovertheillnessandnowitisIwhoalwaysenjoystartingthecoversation.(62字）精选ppt19Possibleversion1:精选ppt19Possibleversion2:

By

thetimeIgottohospital,myfatherhadpassedaway.Nowitwas

hewhodidnothavetimeforaconversationwithme.Irealizedhow

littleIknowaboutmydad,hisdeepestthoughtsanddreams.AfterhisdeathIlearnedmoreabouthim,andevenmoreaboutmyself.（53字）精选ppt20Possibleversion2:By

theStep4.Polishyourwriting简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、with的复合结构、虚拟语气的使用情况。常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。句式结构：语法结构：词汇选择：修辞手法：精选ppt21Step4.Polishyourwriting简单关于衔接：1.关注段落内部句与句之间的衔接；2.关注与续写段落首句之间的衔接；3.关注两个续写段落之间的衔接；4.关注上下文间的前后呼应。精选ppt22关于衔接：精选ppt22ContinuationWriting（读后续写）精选ppt23ContinuationWriting精选ppt1

读后续写:

提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。（满分25分）新高考考试说明精选ppt24读后续写:精选ppt2精选ppt25精选ppt3精选ppt26精选ppt4第五档：21-25第四档：16-20第三档：11-15第二档：6-10第一档：1-5精选ppt27第五档：21-25精选ppt5评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分第五档

(21-25)与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。

内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。

所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。

精选ppt28评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分与所给短文融洽度高，Step1.ReadthepassageStep2.Getthemainidea

(who?When?Where?What?Why?How?)

Step3.Predictthepossibleplotdevelopment

(theplot,logical,reasonable,thegiventwosentences)Step4.Begintowrite(theunderlinedwords)Step5.

Polishyourwriting(词汇、句式、语法的多样性)

Howtowriteacontinuation?精选ppt29Step1.ReadthepassageHowWhen?Where?Who?what?Why?how?howtogetthemainidea精选ppt30When?howtogetthemainidea精Basicformsofthe6questionsWhendidthestoryhappen?Wheredidthestoryhappen?Whoisthemaincharacter?Whathappenedinthestory?Whywasthemattercaused?Howwasthemattersolved/ended?精选ppt31Basicformsofthe6questions读后续写练习II

WhenIwasalittlegirl,everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething,he

wouldaskmetoholdthehammer,andmeanwhile,haveaconversationwithme.Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout.Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily.

Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeand

since

then,mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning,nomatterwhat.SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse,

which

mydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80-degreesummerheat.Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim.ButIwasalwaysbusy,

unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim.

OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual.Inoticedthatmydadhad

forgottensomethingswediscussedlately.Iwasinahurry,soourconversationwasshort.Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital.ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为60左右；2.至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分只有一段，开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。精选ppt32读后续写练习II精选ppt10When?Where?Who?What?Why?

How?whenIwasalittlegirlmydad,Ihaveaconversationwithme

…mydadtakescareofmyfamily…精选ppt33whenIwasalittlegirlmydaStep1.ReadthepassagePara.1WhenI

wasalittlegirl,everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething,hewouldaskmetoholdthehammer,andmeanwhile,havea

conversationwithme.Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout.Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily.Mainidea:WhenIwasalittlegirl

mydadliketohaveaconversationwithme,whotakescareofmyfamily.精选ppt34Step1.ReadthepassageMainStep1.ReadthepassagePara2.Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeandsincethen,mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning,nomatterwhat.SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse,whichmydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80-degreesummerheat.Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim.ButIwasalwaysbusy,unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim.Mainidea:WhenIgrewup,mydadwanttotalktome.ButIwasbusy,unabletohaveaconversationwithhim精选ppt35Step1.ReadthepassageMainStep1.ReadthepassagePara.3OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual.Inoticedthatmydadhadforgottensomethingswediscussedlately.Iwasinahurry,soourconversationwasshort.Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasin

hospital.

Mainidea:OneSundaymorningcameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital.精选ppt36Step1.ReadthepassageMainPara.4

ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad.

whenIgottothehospital......

精选ppt37Para.4whenIgottothehospitStep3.Predictpossible

plotdevelopmentInagrouppredicthowthestorywilldevelop:

Topredictdoesn’tmeanyoucanwritewhateveryoulike.Continuationwritingmustbedesignedinalogicalandreasonableway.Andontopofthatbeingcreativewillbeappreciated.

精选ppt38Step3.PredictpossibleplotStep4.Begintowrite

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为60左右；2.至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分只有一段，开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Theunderlinedwords:I

dad

conversationtalk

unable

hospital精选ppt39Step4.Begintowrite

注意：参考词汇：passaway,die(vi),dead(adj.),losesb.regretdoingsth.后悔做过某事，findsb.lyingonthebed,burstintotears,burstout