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读后续写试题原题阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenmyhusbandRandydiedinlatefall,decidingwhattodowithhisgardenwaswaydownonthelistofnecessarytasks.Duringthefirstfewmonths,Icriedwithourdaughters,plannedamemorial,criedwithmyfamily,celebratedaquietThanksgiving,andpanickedovernothavingboughtChristmaspresents.Asthecalendarturnedtoanewyear,theoftenrainydaysandlongnightsdeepenedmysorrow.IfoundmyselfexhaustedattheendofFebruary,bothphysicallyandmentally.Thenthedaffodilsbloomed(开花)inthegarden.Yearsbefore,Randyhadplanteddozensoftheselemon-yellowflowers.Tohim,theyservedasareminderofhope,apromisethatlightandwarmthwouldsoonreplacecoldanddark.Lookingatthosedaffodils,IthoughtabouthowRandyhadconsideredourgardenalivingworkofart,carefullychoosingplantssowe/dseenewbloomseverymonth.ThenInoticedalltheweedsthathadtakenrootandspreadeverywhere.Theneglect(疏于打理)showed,forRandy'sillnesshadlastedacoupleofyears,atimewhenhedidn'thaveenergyforyardworkthewayhehadbefore.Facedwiththeneglectedgarden,Ifeltoverwhelmedinthebeginning.MydaughterssuggestedIhireaservicetocleaneverythingup.Ididn'trespond.EverytimeIsatinthegardenalone,thememoriesofthelivelygardencameflooding,likethenumerousscenesinanunforgettablefilm.ManydaysRandycamehomefromwork,changedintooldclothes,andheadedoutthedoortomoworprune(修剪).Orangedragonfliesfollowedhimaroundtheyardasheworked.Honeybeesbuzzedamongtheflowers,birdssangbeautifulsongs,andgentlebreezescarriedthesweetsmellofdirt.Nomatterhowcoldorwetitwas,thefreshairandphysicalactivitymadehimenergizedandrefreshed.ForRandy,theworkwasquietandcomforting,whichwasarelief,aswellasapleasure.注意:.续写词数应为150左右;.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thedaysgrewwarmerandlighter,andIstartedtheworkmyself.Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.试题分析.人物:I:失去了挚爱的丈夫,一直处于悲伤当中。daughters:没有太多的描述,但作为"纽带”见证着我的心情的改变。MydaughterssuggestedIhireaservicetocleaneverythingup.Ididn'trespond.Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.家husband:Yearsbefore,Randyhadplanteddozensoftheselemon-yellowflowers.Tohim,theyservedasareminderofhope,apromisethatlightandwarmthwouldsoonreplacecoldanddark.ForRandy,theworkwasquietandcomforting,whichwasarelief,aswellasapleasure..前文情节:失去了挚爱的丈夫后,我一直处于悲伤当中,从前一年的秋末、感恩节、圣诞节,到来年二月,身心已经疲惫至极。终于,有一天,我回忆起了当时Randy还在时候他收拾花园的一幕幕。于是,决定抽点时间把花园整理起来。女儿们的建议是雇人打理一下,而我却一直想着自己把这个花园还原它应有的生机。于是,在天气逐渐转暖的时候,我准备自己动手…….重要句:整篇文章围绕"WhenmyhusbandRandydiedinlatefall,decidingwhattodowithhisgardenwaswaydownonthelistofnecessarytasks.〃来写。.主题:表达对丈夫的爱与思念5,续写线:a一条围绕〃garden的变化〃来写:生机勃勃一一荒芜一一重回生机a一条围绕〃我的心情的变化〃来写:悲伤一一借助美好的回忆一一全新的开始.续写情节安排:V第一段:Thedaysgrewwarmerandlighter,andIstartedtheworkmyself.①从来没去打理过花园,怎么做呢?(与开头句衔接)②回忆起Randy曾经在怎样打理的,我也试着去做了③然后就开始等待荒芜的花园重回生机(与下文开头句衔接)▼第二段:Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.①逐渐恢复生机的花园和我的精神状态让女儿们深感欣喜(与开头句衔接)②重回生机后花园的状态③我从中收获了〃接纳〃和〃调整〃(主题升华)下水文Thedaysgrewwarmerandlighter,andIstartedtheworkmyself.Areallyhardtaskforme!NeverdidIshouldertheresponsibilityoftendingthebeautifulgarden.WhatRandyleftmetodowasjustappreciateit.Sweetmemoriescamebacktome.FollowingwhatRandyoncedid,Iworkedhardtoturnoverthesoilandridtheweeds,makingsoftandcomfortablebedsfordaffodilsandotherflowersandplants.Then,Ispreadthefertilizerandseedsinthem.Nothingwasbetterthanwaitingforthegardentoberefreshedwiththosevividscenes.(86words)Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.WhatamazedthemgreatlywerethelivelygardenandmygradualrecoveryfromlosingbelovedRandy."You'vemadeit,ourgreatMum!〃Ishowedthemaroundtheonceneglectedgarden,whichnowturnedonanewlookwiththedaffodilsandotherflowersblooming.Anddragonflies,honeybeesandbirdscameback,dancingandsingingcheerfully.Thegardenbroughtpresentsandhopestousagain,fromwhichIharvestedasenseofreliefandpleasure.NeverwouldIbeoverwhelmed,thinkingRandywaswithusforever.(85words)范文Thedaysgrewwarmerandlighter,andIstartedtheworkmyself.WhatIfocusedonfirstwasclearingawaytheinvasivespeciesthathadtakenrootandspread.Followingthat,Itendedallthelivelyplantscarefullyoneverysingleday.Attimes,Iworriedthatmyeffortscouldneverbegoodenough.Butasmylistofurgentgardenchoresgotshorter,Istartedtofeelrelieved.Workingintheyardkeptmyhandsbusyandmymindfocusedonthetaskinfrontofme,graduallyofferingmeabeautifulgardenaswellasasenseofachievement.(89words)Weekslater,mydaughtersreturnedtovisitme.Onenteringthedoor,theyweredeeplyattractedbythelivelygardenfulloffragrantblooms,withhoneybeesbuzzingbusilyandbirdssingingcheerfully.Theyturnedtome,confusionmappedontheirfaces.Sensingthat,IexplainedthatIgraduallyenjoyedworkinginthegarde
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