外研版高中英语必修3《odule-7-Revision-Writing》示范课课件-1

高一期中考试书面表达讲析Book3Module7WritingSkills

高一期中考试书面表达讲析Book3Module71Writing书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你班邀请一位老艺人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00来班里推广剪纸艺术，你打算邀请你们学校酷爱中国文化的英国交换生Peter参加。请你写封E-mail,邀请他参加，并告诉他活动安排。参考词汇：手艺人craftsman;

剪纸艺术paper-cutart

Writing书面表达（满分25分）2普遍错误：1.单词拼写错误2.不会表达日期3.

be动词的漏用或错用WewillbeinviteanoldmanItwillholdonApril21st4.old前误用a5.主谓不一致普遍错误：1.单词拼写错误3审题不清，要点缺失审4Writing书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你班邀请一位老艺人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00来班里推广剪纸艺术，你打算邀请你们学校酷爱中国文化的英国交换生Peter参加。请你写封E-mail,邀请他参加，并告诉他活动安排。

Writing书面表达（满分25分）5逻辑不清逻6思路点拨1.

文章的首段要开门见山，言明写邮件的目的；2.

第二段主体部分表述要准确、流畅，结构要清晰3.

结尾要重申希望参加的愿望，

并期待对方尽早

回复。（交际性）思路点拨7

如何使书面表达更加流畅清晰得高分?想一想:内容不能空，逻辑不能乱想一想:内容不能空，逻辑不能乱81.Whatshouldwewrite?Whatexpressionsandsentencescanweuse?1.Whatshouldwewrite?What91.我班将邀请一位老艺人来班里教学剪纸艺术。2.这是一个很好的机会去了解剪纸，这个传统技艺有约2000年的历史了3.该活动于4月21日上午8:00到10:00举行。4.受邀艺人将推广剪纸艺术，并有相关活动安排。（难点）

学生考场作文摘录：1.我班将邀请一位老艺人来班里教学剪纸艺术。学生考场作文摘10句子形式的变化变一变更好考生原句Myclasswillinviteanoldcraftsmanwhoisgoodatpaper-cuttingtoteachuspaper-cutart.Anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.句子形式的变化变一变更好考生原句Myclasswill112.考生原句Itisagoodwaytolearnaboutthepaper-cut,whichisatraditionalChinesearthasaround2000yearshistory.…..,atraditionalChineseartwith

ahistoryofaround2000years.2.考生原句Itisagoodwaytolea123.考生原句ThisactivityisonApril21standbeginsat8:00amendsat10:00.ThisactivityfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.3.考生原句ThisactivityisonApr134.受邀艺人将推广剪纸艺术，并且要告知Peter相关活动安排。联想相关动词：explain/teach,show/display,guide/directThecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillsabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.并列句的使用节奏明快，使得文章错落有致考生缺少信息4.联想相关动词：Thecraftsmanwille14要点罗列“布”词句外研版高中英语必修3《odule-7-Revision-Writing》示范课课件_1152.Howcanweorganizethenecessaryinformationandrelatedideaswewanttowrite?2.Howcanweorganizethenec16句间：不可松散堆砌式，起承转合连贯好。句间：171.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.做好要点之间的连贯和必要的延伸

2.Meanwhile,youwillmakesomenewfriends.Inaword,youcanexperienceChinesecultureandbroadenyoureyesatthesametime.思考：对哪个要点做连贯和延伸？受邀艺人将推广剪纸艺术，并且要告知Peter相关活动安排。

喧宾夺主不可取1.Besides,therewillbealot18文中：逻辑分明交流要好文中：19在结尾处添加表希望、祝愿的语句，适当增加一些人情味，会使全文更加完整，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。在结尾处添加表希望、祝愿的语句，适当增加一些人情味，会使全文20DearPeter,①IamLiHua,

theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.知道你热爱中国艺术，

I’dliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningful

activity.

KnowingthatyouarecrazyaboutChineseartdeeply,DearPeter,①IamLiHua,

the21

Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.我班将邀请一位老艺人来推广剪纸艺术。ItfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.

此外，还会有一些有趣的活动，你可以从中更加了解中国的文化。Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Asweknow,thepaper-cutis22如能接受我的邀请我将不胜感激。I'msureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!lookforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaIwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.如能接受我的邀请我将不胜感激。I'msureitcan23DearPeter,I

amLiHua,

theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool

.KnowingthatyouarecrazyaboutChineseartdeeply,

I’dliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningfulactivity.Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.It

fallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.

.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Iwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.I'msureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!lookforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,DearPeter,24全国I卷书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：1.时间和地点；2.内容：学习唐诗；3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Homework全国I卷Homework25Thanksforyourattention!Goodbye!Thanksforyourattention!Good26优秀满分范文DearLeslie,Howareyou?GladtoseeyouhavemadesomeprogressinChineselearningandI’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutournextlesson.Thelessonwillbegivenfrom3pmto5pmontheafternoonofnextTuesdayintheclassroom502.Intheclass,youwillmainlylearnTangpoetry,whichreflectstraditionalChinesecultureandisdeeplylovedbyChinese.YoucanfeelthebeautyofChinesebylearningTangPoetry.You’dbettermakefullpreparationsbeforeclassandhaveabriefunderstandingofthehistoryofTangDynasty,whichmakesiteasyforyoutogothroughtheclass.IfthereisanythingthatIcanhelpyou,pleasedon’thesitatetotellme.Lookingforwardtomeetingyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua优秀满分范文27高一期中考试书面表达讲析Book3Module7WritingSkills

高一期中考试书面表达讲析Book3Module728Writing书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你班邀请一位老艺人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00来班里推广剪纸艺术，你打算邀请你们学校酷爱中国文化的英国交换生Peter参加。请你写封E-mail,邀请他参加，并告诉他活动安排。参考词汇：手艺人craftsman;

剪纸艺术paper-cutart

Writing书面表达（满分25分）29普遍错误：1.单词拼写错误2.不会表达日期3.

be动词的漏用或错用WewillbeinviteanoldmanItwillholdonApril21st4.old前误用a5.主谓不一致普遍错误：1.单词拼写错误30审题不清，要点缺失审31Writing书面表达（满分25分）假设你是李华，你班邀请一位老艺人在4月21日上午8:00至10:00来班里推广剪纸艺术，你打算邀请你们学校酷爱中国文化的英国交换生Peter参加。请你写封E-mail,邀请他参加，并告诉他活动安排。

Writing书面表达（满分25分）32逻辑不清逻33思路点拨1.

文章的首段要开门见山，言明写邮件的目的；2.

第二段主体部分表述要准确、流畅，结构要清晰3.

结尾要重申希望参加的愿望，

并期待对方尽早

回复。（交际性）思路点拨34

如何使书面表达更加流畅清晰得高分?想一想:内容不能空，逻辑不能乱想一想:内容不能空，逻辑不能乱351.Whatshouldwewrite?Whatexpressionsandsentencescanweuse?1.Whatshouldwewrite?What361.我班将邀请一位老艺人来班里教学剪纸艺术。2.这是一个很好的机会去了解剪纸，这个传统技艺有约2000年的历史了3.该活动于4月21日上午8:00到10:00举行。4.受邀艺人将推广剪纸艺术，并有相关活动安排。（难点）

学生考场作文摘录：1.我班将邀请一位老艺人来班里教学剪纸艺术。学生考场作文摘37句子形式的变化变一变更好考生原句Myclasswillinviteanoldcraftsmanwhoisgoodatpaper-cuttingtoteachuspaper-cutart.Anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.句子形式的变化变一变更好考生原句Myclasswill382.考生原句Itisagoodwaytolearnaboutthepaper-cut,whichisatraditionalChinesearthasaround2000yearshistory.…..,atraditionalChineseartwith

ahistoryofaround2000years.2.考生原句Itisagoodwaytolea393.考生原句ThisactivityisonApril21standbeginsat8:00amendsat10:00.ThisactivityfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.3.考生原句ThisactivityisonApr404.受邀艺人将推广剪纸艺术，并且要告知Peter相关活动安排。联想相关动词：explain/teach,show/display,guide/directThecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillsabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.并列句的使用节奏明快，使得文章错落有致考生缺少信息4.联想相关动词：Thecraftsmanwille41要点罗列“布”词句外研版高中英语必修3《odule-7-Revision-Writing》示范课课件_1422.Howcanweorganizethenecessaryinformationandrelatedideaswewanttowrite?2.Howcanweorganizethenec43句间：不可松散堆砌式，起承转合连贯好。句间：441.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.做好要点之间的连贯和必要的延伸

2.Meanwhile,youwillmakesomenewfriends.Inaword,youcanexperienceChinesecultureandbroadenyoureyesatthesametime.思考：对哪个要点做连贯和延伸？受邀艺人将推广剪纸艺术，并且要告知Peter相关活动安排。

喧宾夺主不可取1.Besides,therewillbealot45文中：逻辑分明交流要好文中：46在结尾处添加表希望、祝愿的语句，适当增加一些人情味，会使全文更加完整，使文章读起来更亲切，完全达到与读者进行交流的目的。在结尾处添加表希望、祝愿的语句，适当增加一些人情味，会使全文47DearPeter,①IamLiHua,

theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool.知道你热爱中国艺术，

I’dliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningful

activity.

KnowingthatyouarecrazyaboutChineseartdeeply,DearPeter,①IamLiHua,

the48

Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.我班将邀请一位老艺人来推广剪纸艺术。ItfallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.

此外，还会有一些有趣的活动，你可以从中更加了解中国的文化。Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChineseculture.Asweknow,thepaper-cutis49如能接受我的邀请我将不胜感激。I'msureitcanleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou!lookforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHuaIwouldappreciateitifyouacceptmyinvitation.如能接受我的邀请我将不胜感激。I'msureitcan50DearPeter,I

amLiHua,

theleaderofthepaper-cuttingclubinourschool

.KnowingthatyouarecrazyaboutChineseartdeeply,

I’dliketoinviteyoutoattendameaningfulactivity.Asweknow,thepaper-cutisafamoustraditionalChineseartwithahistoryaround2000years.Fortunately,anoldcraftsman,whoisskilledatpaper-cutting,

willbeinvitedtoteachuspaper-cutart.It

fallsonApril21st,beginningat8:00amandendingat10:00am.Thecraftsmanwillexplainsomebasicknowledgeofpaper-cutart,teachussomeskillabouthowtomakeitandguideustofinishourownworks.

.Besides,therewillbealotofusefulandinterestingactivities,fromwhichyoucanhaveaclearerpictureofChi