英语写作技巧与写作注意事项

18/18HYPERLINK"/"第七讲：英语写作（二）————————————————————————————————————————————大作文往年试题：Directions:writeacompositionofnolessthan250wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.Sample1MyViewonPlayingComputerGames有人认为学生打电脑游戏有利于智力开发。有人认为学生打电脑游戏阻碍学习。我的观点。Sample2：对贫富差距加大现象谈谈看法评分标准GlobalscoringContentLanguage2分:条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破裂或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严峻错误。5分：差不多切题。表达思想不清，连贯性差。有较多的严峻语言错误。8分：有些地点表达思想不够清晰，文字牵强连贯；语言错误较多，其中有一些严峻错误。11分：切题。表达思想清晰，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误14分：切题。表达思想清晰，文字通顺，连贯性较好，差不多上没有语言错误，仅有个不小错。注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个独立的词而无法表达思想，给0分。严峻错误——语法错误Therearemanyreasonscausedtheaccident.Thedriverofthecarnoin.Thelifeisbecominggooderandgooder.Thatdayrainbigly.ThemanwhothroughthestreetThecarwhichinafastspeedhithim.Thecarwhichinafastspeedhithim.Igottheplacewherehappenedtheaccident.Ourcitywouldhappenmanytraffic.写作注意事项审好题，想好再写，不要写了又划掉，也不要写完了发觉字数不够有写，如此整篇文章就不联贯了。把握好文章的重心，一般“我的观点”应该是重心。注意写作的格式——缩进式或齐头式。拿不准的词、短语或用法应幸免使用。表达要清晰、简洁，不必一味追求结构的复杂而尽可能多的使用从句，如此文章会显得专门罗嗦。如：Theeconomyisdevelopingataspeedwhichisveryfast.注意用词和搭配。检查-s和-ed，尽量幸免严峻错误。ChoiceofWords1.ThreelevelsofEnglishwordsEnglishnativewords(core)informal(oral)FrenchorSpanishwordsLatinorGreekwords(academicwords) formal(written)ExamplesEnglishFrenchorSpanishLatinorGreekask inquire interrogatebreak sever separatefire flame conflagrationhouse abode residencekingly royal regalmanly male masculinerise mount ascendtime age epochIknowthat IamawarethatIbelievethat IamconvincedthatIhaveagoodidea. Agoodideaoccurstome.Cause giverisetoEmphasize layemphasisonBecauseof dueto,owingtoStop,end cometoastop/endSuddenly allofasuddenOften moreoftenthannot2.ConnotationofWords(Englishexplanation)common,peasant,assassinate,gay,acquire,date,property,enemy,problem,issue3.GeneralVsSpecificterms(overuseofgeneralterms)beautiful,delicious,famous,China’sEnglish小康社会、缘分、丞相、风水、三个代表孔子、孟子、老子容易用错的词词性lack,serve,contact,last,marry,concern,like2.汉语阻碍moreperfect,veryexcellent,returnback,repeatagain,goodmemorypower,listeningability,highqualitygoodslearntheknowledge常见错误twopredicatesinonesimplesentenceEveryyearlotsoffamilyssitatthefrontofTVwaitthisgameafterhavedeliciousmeal.TherehavemanypeoplelikeSFG.Mymothercooksfoodisverydelicious.(2)OmissionandoveruseofBeNowdaypeople’slifelevelisarise.ManypersonarelikewatchSFGintheeve.SFGwasappearedsince1984.SFGislikedbymanypeople.Howfasttimewasgone!SFGcandivideintoseveralparts.Weverybusy.(3)Comparativedegreemoreandmorebetterbecomegooderandgooder,(4)Conjunctionbecause….soalthough….butWhile(5)IverylikeSFG.Veryhate(6)PartofspeechmostofweChinese,makemesurprise,withthequickdevelopmentofeconomicandsocial,Inmy’sopinion,IadvicetokeepSFG.eatinggood,drinkinggood,playinggood;goodplays,goodlook,gooduse;Ithinkitduestothedevelopment,Let’sanalysisanddiscoverythemainfactorsleadingthechanges.Tomen,womenjustlikedclothes.theylikeitlikemelikeit.twoweekspastchoose,choice,succeed,success,successful,die,dead,death(7)ChoiceofwordsThewholefamilyassembletohaveadinner.congratulateSpringFestival,abolish(stop,giveup)SFG,sitbehindtheTVtolookSFG,ManypeoplefallinlovewithwatchingSFG.Wecanelectotherprogramstosee.celebrateSFGwithbomb,standintheshadow/shademosquitobite/stingIt’sagaymeeting/party(8)Phrasesinallin;onehand,anotherhand,thirdhand;atonehand,atsecondhand,atlasthand;inonehand,fromotherhand;lastbutnotthelast,lastbutnotmost;onmyopinion;Acoinhastwohands(coins).Everythinghastwohands(coins).(9)SpellingWecan’tcansle(cancer,cancle)it.SFGiswatchedbyholeword.happyness,include(ing)SF,EverystudentincludemeenjoysPoorpeoplemaybeveryangry(hungry).eatthesoap(soup);BenefitialDrivedDispiteIwilladopttothecampuslife联贯并列：and,aswellasontheonehand…ontheotherhandforonething…..foranotherfirstly….secondly….thirdly…finallysubsequently,then,thereafter,afterward,inthefollowing…atfirst,initially,originallyatlast,eventually2.递进：Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Additionally

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Apartfrom…3.转折ButYetHoweverNeverthelessWhileWhereasOnthecontraryIncontrast4.结果SoTherefore,ThusHenceAsaresult（consequence）Consequently5.缘故Because(of)DuetoOwingtoOntheaccountofInviewofThankstoOnthegroundsthat6.假设If…..GiventhatProvidedthatUnlessOntheconditionofAs(so)longas7.其他Sentenceadverbs:absolutely,alternatively,currently,undoubtedly,certainly,consequently,subsequently,obviously(2)PP:ingeneral,onaverage,infact,ineffect,intheory,inpractice,inreality,inparticular,(3)Advspeaking:generallyspeaking,broadlyspeaking,strictlyspeaking,theoreticallyspeaking(4)preciselybecause,mainlybecause,merelybecause,onlybecause段落用语Beginning:WiththedevelopmentofAsiswellknowntoWeallknowthatAsweallknowAsaproverbsays,AsasayinggoesAsfor…somepeopleholdtheopinionthat….Whileothersargue(maintain)thatEverycoinhastwosides.Ithasmeritsanddemerits.Ithasprosandcons.SupportersandopponentsDevelopmentRecentresearcheshaveproven/shown/indicatedthatMyarguments/reasons/ideaswillbelistedasfollows:Inthefollowingparagraph,IwillFirstly,secondly,andfina