高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文完美课件定稿

高考新题型之概要写作SummaryWriting高考新题型之SummaryWriting1Whatisasummary?

Asummaryisabrief

statementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails(牛津高阶英汉双解词典)Whatisasummary?Asummaryi2Howmuchdoyouknowaboutsummarywriting?

Howmuchdoyouknowaboutsum3《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数少于40的和多余80的，从总分中减去2分《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》概要写作：词数4高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文完美课件定稿5高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文完美课件定稿6《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档（21-25points）：理解准确，涵盖全部要点；能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；完全使用自己的语言；有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。

complete(内容完整)coherent(衔接连贯)correct(语言正确)评分原则concise(用词简洁)60词左右《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中7completecorrectcoherentconcise

“4C”principle(“4C”原则)completecorrectcoherent8Howtowriteagoodsummary?1.Read2.Paraphrase

3.Polish4.Revise——structure,keypoints——rewriteinyourownwords——makeitcoherent——spelling、grammar、vocabulary、words、punctuation（标点）Howtowriteagoodsummary?1.9概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para1)Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词10(Para2)Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofmakingmistakesinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry,theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.(Para3)Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.(Para2)Themainreason11(Para4)Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.(Para5)Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.(Para4)Finally,slower12Step1:Read①readforstructureSkimthepassageandanswerthefollowingquestions.Q1:Isitthepassagea(an)A.narration(记叙文)B.exposition(说明文)C.argumentation(议论文)Q2:Howmanypartscanthepassagebedividedinto?A.3(para1;para2--4;para5)B.4(para1;para2--3;para4--5)C.2(para1;para2--5)√√Step1:Read①readforstructur13Step1:ReadSupportingideas:Conclusion:Topic:Argumentation(议论文）Para1Para2--Para4Para5Step1:ReadSupportingideas:C14Step1:Read②readforkeypointsUnderlinethetopicsentenceorkeypointsofeachparagraphfocusonthefirstsentenceandpayspecialattentiontosuchwordsas:however,onthecontrary,but,yet,thereforeStep1:Read②readforkeypoi15(Para1)Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para1)Thesedayso16Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para2)Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofmakingmistakesinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry,theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(17Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para3)Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(18Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para4)Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(19Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para5)Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(20

①Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.gotaccustomedtoliveaslowerlife策略2：简化句子▲Althoughpeoplehavegotaccustomedtobeinginahurry,

leadingaslowerlifeisbetter.策略3：句型转换

▲Althoughpeoplehavegotaccustomedtobeinginahurry,it'sbettertoliveaslowerlife.Step2:Paraphrase策略1：同义转换①Itappearsthatpeo21②Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofmakingmistakesinarush.Step2:Paraphraseslowdowncommittingerrors▲Themainreasonforslowingdownistoreducethechanceofcommittingerrors.chance②Themainreasonthatconvinc22Step2:ParaphraseAslowpaceoflifeslowingdown▲Aslowerpaceoflifeallowspeopletohavemoreopportunitiestoenjoylifewin/get/have③Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.opportunities▲Moreopportunitiestoenjoylifeareallowedbyaslowerpaceoflife.策略5：合并句子策略6：语态转换策略4：反义转换Step2:ParaphraseAslowpace23Somestrategiestousetoparaphrase策略1：同义转换策略5：简化句子策略4：句型转换策略2：反义转换策略6：合并句子策略3：语态转换words(单词层面)sentences(句子层面)Somestrategiestousetopara24④Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.

Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Step2:Paraphraseofferspsychologically▲Finally,betterhealthconditionphysicallyandpsychologicallyisofferedbyaslowerlifepace.slowingdowncanhelp▲Finally,betterhealthconditionphysicallyandpsychologicallyiswhataslowerlifepaceoffers.④Finally,slowerlifepacepro25⑤Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.Step2:ParaphraseTherefore,let'stakeaslowerlifefromnowon⑤Therefore,takeyourtimean26Step3:Polish—makeitcoherentbyaddingsomeconnectives常见连接词：转折：but,yet,however,though因果：thus,therefore并列：firstly/secondly/lastly举例：forexample/suchas对比：onthecontrary,bycontrast结论：inshort,inconclusion

Step3:Polish—makeitcoher27①Althoghpeoplehavegotaccustomedtobeinginahurry,leadingaslowerlifeisbetter.Step3:Polish②Themainreasonforslowingdownistoreducethechanceofcommittingerrors.③Moreopportunitiestoenjoylifeareallowedbyaslowerpaceoflife.④Finally,betterhealthconditionphysicallyandpsychologicallyiswhataslowerlifepaceoffers.⑤Therefore,let'stakeaslowerlifefromnowonFirstly,Secondlyly,—makeitcoherentbyaddingsomeconnectives①Althoghpeoplehavegotaccus28Despitebeingaccustomedtobeinginahurry,peoplearerecommendedtoleadaslowerlife.(要点1)Firstly,slowingdownreducesthechanceofcommittingerrors.(要点2)Secondly,Moreopportunitiestoenjoylifeareallowedbyaslowerpaceoflife.(要点3)Finally,betterhealthconditionphysicallyandpsychologicallyisalsowhataslowerlifepaceoffers.(要点4)Therefore,let'stakeaslowerlifefromnowon(要点5)(63w)Step4:Revise4“C”:complete,concise

coherent,correct

Despitebeingaccustomedtobe29概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para1)Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,

thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.Timeforpractice概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词30(Para2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardanger

wasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.So

didthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirt

inafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakena

bath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.

(Para3)Thoughthebeliefintheofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighbor

eversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshave

movedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarⅡ.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?

(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,an

Americanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmune

system.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.(Para2)Intheearly16th31(Para1)Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,

thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.Step1:Read(Para1)Gettingridofdirt32

(Para2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardanger

wasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.So

didthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirt

inafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakena

bath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.

(Para2)Intheearly16th33

(Para3)Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighbor

eversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshave

movedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarⅡ.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?

(Para3)Thoughthebeliefi34

(Para4)Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,an

Americanimmunologist(免疫学家),encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmune

system.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.(Para4)Attitudestodirtst35①However,

thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.Step2:Paraphrase②Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease④Attitudesdifferhugelynowadays……encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmune

system.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.③dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.①However,

thereisnothingfix36Step3:Polish常见连接词：转折：but,yet,however,though因果：thus,therefore并列：firstly/secondly/lastly举例：forexample/suchas对比：onthecontrary,bycontrast结论：inshort,inconclusion

Step3:Polish常见连接词：37Step4:ReviseOnepossibleversion:Peoplehavemixedopinionstowarddirt.Intheearly16thcentury,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,France,forexample,believedthatdirtontheskincouldpreventpeoplefromgettingill.However,Sincethe18thcentury,peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.Butnowsomescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpmakeourimmunesystemstrong.Step4:ReviseOnepossiblever38ConclusionWhatisasummary?

Whatarethestepstowriteasummary?

Whatstrategiescanweusetoparaphrase?Whatis“4C”principle?

√√√√Itisabrief

statementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails策略1：同义转换策略2：反义转换策略3：语态转换策略4：句型转换策略5：简化句子策略6：合并句子ConclusionWhatisasummary?W39高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文完美课件定稿40FinishthesummarywritingofthefollowingPassageHomeworkFinishthesummarywritingof41阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Gettingupearlyhasbeenregardedasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgetupearly,wewouldbeenergetic(充满活力的)thewholeday.So,gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.Infact,morningisthebesttimeofaday.Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions(条件).Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthananyothertimeoftheday.阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。42

Ifwedosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning,wecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.Alsowewillhaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.However,ifwegetuplate,wewillprobablyhavetodoeverythinginagreathurry.Letusremembergettingupearlyisagoodhabitandtryourbesttokeepit.Ifwesticktogettingupearlyeveryday,wewillcertainlybenefit(受益)alotfromit.Ifwedosomemorningexer43Gettingupearlyinthemorningisagoodhabitandveryimportant,becauseinthemorningwecanhaveabettermemory,healthierbodiesandbetterpreparationfortheday.Inaddition,morningexercisecanhelpuskeephealthy.So,itisbeneficialtous.参考范文Gettingupearlyinthemornin441.取样要有专人负责，开始时隔－小时取样一次，以后根据取样判定结果再决定取样间隔时间。2.经化验冲洗精度合格后，油冲洗工作即可停止，待油温降至室温后进行排液和管道系统恢复，充填工作油，进行试运转。3.登高作业绑扎用的直爬梯，必须经专人检查绑扎牢固后方可使用，对于一些为了安装方便而搭设的临时操作平台，除必须绑扎牢固，并且其自身保证一定的安全强度。4．这首诗以现实主义的手法叙述故事，最后一段中，松柏梧桐覆盖相交，鸳鸯双双和鸣，是运用了浪漫主义的手法，既象征了刘、焦爱情的不朽，又象征了他们的悲愤和控诉。所以，这首诗是浪漫主义的诗歌。5．这首诗最大的艺术特色是通过大量的人物个性化的语言刻画了人物的性格，一些段落浓墨重彩，如刘、焦话别，兰芝辞母等，使人物形象更鲜明。6．春夏秋冬，流转无穷；人的一生，就像早晨的露水，太阳一晒就消失了。人生好像旅客寄宿，但人生功绩却能刻入金石永远流传。7．“万岁更相迭，圣贤莫能度”是说岁月更替，人生有阻，即便是圣人贤人，也无法超越，这为下文写对待生活的态度做了铺垫。8．诗中“老骥伏枥”四句是千古传诵的名句，笔力遒劲，韵律沉雄，内蕴着一股自强不息的豪迈气概，深刻地表达了曹操老当益壮、锐意进取的精神面貌。感谢观看，欢迎指导！1.取样要有专人负责，开始时隔－小时取样一次，以后根据取样判45高考新题型之概要写作SummaryWriting高考新题型之SummaryWriting46Whatisasummary?

Asummaryisabrief

statementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails(牛津高阶英汉双解词典)Whatisasummary?Asummaryi47Howmuchdoyouknowaboutsummarywriting?

Howmuchdoyouknowaboutsum48《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）词数少于40的和多余80的，从总分中减去2分《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》概要写作：词数49高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文完美课件定稿50高考英语新题型“概要写作”之议论文完美课件定稿51《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档（21-25points）：理解准确，涵盖全部要点；能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；完全使用自己的语言；有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。

complete(内容完整)coherent(衔接连贯)correct(语言正确)评分原则concise(用词简洁)60词左右《考试说明》中评分标准规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中52completecorrectcoherentconcise

“4C”principle(“4C”原则)completecorrectcoherent53Howtowriteagoodsummary?1.Read2.Paraphrase

3.Polish4.Revise——structure,keypoints——rewriteinyourownwords——makeitcoherent——spelling、grammar、vocabulary、words、punctuation（标点）Howtowriteagoodsummary?1.54概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para1)Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词55(Para2)Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofmakingmistakesinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry,theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.(Para3)Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.(Para2)Themainreason56(Para4)Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.(Para5)Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.(Para4)Finally,slower57Step1:Read①readforstructureSkimthepassageandanswerthefollowingquestions.Q1:Isitthepassagea(an)A.narration(记叙文)B.exposition(说明文)C.argumentation(议论文)Q2:Howmanypartscanthepassagebedividedinto?A.3(para1;para2--4;para5)B.4(para1;para2--3;para4--5)C.2(para1;para2--5)√√Step1:Read①readforstructur58Step1:ReadSupportingideas:Conclusion:Topic:Argumentation(议论文）Para1Para2--Para4Para5Step1:ReadSupportingideas:C59Step1:Read②readforkeypointsUnderlinethetopicsentenceorkeypointsofeachparagraphfocusonthefirstsentenceandpayspecialattentiontosuchwordsas:however,onthecontrary,but,yet,thereforeStep1:Read②readforkeypoi60(Para1)Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para1)Thesedayso61Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para2)Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofmakingmistakesinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactioninahurry,theycan'tmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,“Hastemakeswaste.”Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(62Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para3)Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(63Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para4)Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactioninahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(64Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(Para5)Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Yet,muchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.Step1:Read(forkeypoints)(65

①Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,it'sbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.gotaccustomedtoliveaslowerlife策略2：简化句子▲Althoughpeoplehavegotaccustomedtobeinginahurry,

leadingaslowerlifeisbetter.策略3：句型转换

▲Althoughpeoplehavegotaccustomedtobeinginahurry,it'sbettertoliveaslowerlife.Step2:Paraphrase策略1：同义转换①Itappearsthatpeo66②Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofmakingmistakesinarush.Step2:Paraphraseslowdowncommittingerrors▲Themainreasonforslowingdownistoreducethechanceofcommittingerrors.chance②Themainreasonthatconvinc67Step2:ParaphraseAslowpaceoflifeslowingdown▲Aslowerpaceoflifeallowspeopletohavemoreopportunitiestoenjoylifewin/get/have③Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesofenjoyingourlives.opportunities▲Moreopportunitiestoenjoylifeareallowedbyaslowerpaceoflife.策略5：合并句子策略6：语态转换策略4：反义转换Step2:ParaphraseAslowpace68Somestrategiestousetoparaphrase策略1：同义转换策略5：简化句子策略4：句型转换策略2：反义转换策略6：合并句子策略3：语态转换words(单词层面)sentences(句子层面)Somestrategiestousetopara69④Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthconditionsforus.

Butbeinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Step2:Paraphraseofferspsychologically▲Finally,betterhealthconditionphysicallyandpsychologicallyisofferedbyaslowerlifepace.slowingdowncanhelp▲Finally,betterhealthconditionphysicallyandpsychologicallyiswhataslowerlifepaceoffers.④Finally,slowerlifepacepro70⑤Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace.Step2:ParaphraseTherefore,let'stakeaslowerlifefromnowon⑤Therefore,takeyourtimean71Step3:Polish—makeitcoherentbyaddingsomeconnectives常见连接词：转折：but,yet,however,though因果：thus,therefore并列：firstly/secondly/lastly举例：forexample/suchas对比：onthecontrary,bycontrast结论：inshort,inconclusion

Step3:Polish—makeitcoher72①Althoghpeoplehavegotaccustomedtobeinginahurry,leadingaslowerlifeisbetter.Step3:Polish②Themainreasonforslowingdownistoreducethechanceofcommittingerrors.③Moreopportunitiestoenjoylifeareallowedbyaslowerpaceoflife.④Finally,betterhealthconditionphysicallyandpsychologicallyiswhataslowerlifepaceoffers.⑤Therefore,let'stakeaslowerlifefromnowonFirstly,Secondlyly,—makeitcoherentbyaddingsomeconnectives①Althoghpeoplehavegotaccus73Despitebeingaccustomedtobeinginahurry,peoplearerecommendedtoleadaslowerlife.(要点1)Firstly,slowingdownreducesthechanceofcommittingerrors.(要点2)Secondly,Moreopportunitiestoenjoylifeareallowedbyaslowerpaceoflife.(要点3)Finally,betterhealthconditionphysicallyandpsychologicallyisalsowhataslowerlifepaceoffers.(要点4)Therefore,let'stakeaslowerlifefromnowon(要点5)(63w)Step4:Revise4“C”:complete,concise

coherent,correct

Despitebeingaccustomedtobe74概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。(Para1)Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,

thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.Timeforpractice概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词75(Para2)Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdi