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读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Twentyyearsago,ChasePoustwasonly7.OnSundaymorningjustbeforetheMemorialDay,he,hisdadSteven,andhis4-year-oldsisterAbigail,wereoutforafamilyboatingtriponFlorida*sSt.JohnsRiver.ChaseandAbigailwereswimmingatthebackoftheanchoredboatwhileStevenwasondeck（甲板）fishing.Itwasaperfectouting一itwassopeacefulandthecolorsofthedeepbluesky,thelightgreenriverwaterandthemildlateMaysunshinemixedtocreateamagicscene.Offtheshorelayquietlyseveralcottages.Everyth]ngwassounduntilastrongcurrentemergedandloosenedAbigail*sgraspandsheletgooftheboat.Instantlyrealizinghissisterwouldbesweptaway,Chaseletgooftheboataswelltotryandreachher.Atthesametime,Chasescreamedathisfatherdesperately.Withoutthinkingtwice,Stevenjumpedintothewaterandswamtowardsthetwokidswithal1hisefforts.Butafterrealizinghecouldn,tkeepupwithbothkids,hewasfacedwithaheartbrokendecision.Hetoldthemhelovedthemverymuchbecausehewasn'tsurewhat'sgoingtohappen.Steventriedhisbesttostickwithbothofhischildren.Heworehimselfout.Buthislittledaughterwaswashedawayfromhim.DirectingChasetoswimtoshoreforhelp,Stevenstayedbehind,keepingascloseashecouldtoAbigaiIasthe1ife-vestthatwaskeepingherabovethewavesfloatedfurtherandfurtherfromhisreach.Itwasatoughgoforthe7-year-old,butratherthanattemptingtoswimallout,Chasewiselypacedhimself.Stoppingtofloatordogpaddlewhenhewastired,he'drestandthensetoffagain.Thecurrentwasgoingtheoppositewayofgoingtotheboatandtheshore,soitwasveryhardtoswimthatwayforChase.注意:.续写词数应为15()左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Anhourlater,Chaseswamtotheshore,anyhow.Paragraph2:Luckily,StevenandAbigailwerefoundandrescued.试题分析文章分析：.人物：Chase：7yearsold；Abigail:hissister,4yearsold；Steven:hisfather.事件：两年前的一个星期天的上午，父亲Steven带着Chase和Abigail去佛罗里达州的St.Johns河游玩。两个小孩在拴好的小船边游泳，而父亲Steven则坐在小船上钓鱼。起初，一切都很安好一一蓝天碧水，加上五月末和煦的阳光，不远处还有几幢小屋。突然，来了一股很强的水流，Abigail没抓牢小船，被水冲了出去，Chase试图松开原先抓着小船的手边向父亲大喊边想方设法去拉住妹妹，但水流急，被冲开。父亲Steven想尽力把两个孩子都救起来，无奈因体力不支等原因，意识到不能同时救两个小孩，就指挥Chase游到岸边求救，然后径自去救女儿Abigail。自救对于一个7岁的孩子来说，难度可想而知。好在Chase非常明智地做出了行动。.冲突点:父亲Steven不能同时救两个孩子，儿子Chase如何自救.情节安排：a第一段：①Chase如何上岸（与前一句的swamtotheshore衔接）②上岸后，他做了什么③开始实施救援（与下一段开头衔接）a第二段：①父女被救上岸后的情况（与开头句衔接）②三人全部获救，父亲对救援人员的感激之情③感谢和庆幸的同时，要特别给7岁的儿子Chase点赞下水作文Anhourlater,Chaseswamtotheshore,anyhow.Soexhaustedwashethathehadtostoptofloatonceagain.Ashortmoment*srest,withthehopeofsurvival,Chasegatheredallhisstrength,swimmingtotheshore.Fortunately,hegrabbedabranchofatreestickingtotheriversurfaceandclimbedtothebank.Withoutanydelay,heranbreathlesslytothecottagesforhelp.Athoroughrescueworkwassooncarriedout,somecallingforambulance,somerunningalongtherivertosearchforthefatheranddaughter.（84words）Luckily,StevenandAbigailwerefoundandrescued.TheyhadtheluckthatnothingwaswrongwiththemexceptthatAbigailwasstillinthestateoffear.Seeingthefamilymemberswereallright,Stevenfeltquitearelief,andbowedagainandagain,thankingalltherescuersfortheirtimelyhelp,courageandselflessness.WhatmadeStevenfeelproudwaswhatChasedid-Chase'sbravery,wisdomandsuitableaction,whichgavehimthechancetorescueAbigail.Andonelessontheylearnedwasthat“SafetyFirst”shouldbealwaysinmind.（85words）参考范文Anhourlater.Chaseswamtotheshore,anyhow.Onceonsolidground,herantothenearestcottageandcalledforhelp.HearingSteven'sdesperatecries,peopleinthecottagerushedoutimmediately.Realizingwhathadhappened,theysprangintoaction.TheyrushedtothebankoftheriverfollowingChaseandpaddledtheirboatinstantlywithrescueequipmenttowardsthedadanddaughter.Meanwhile,someonecalledtheRescueDepartment.Soonafter,rescuersarrived.Allofthemdideverythingtheycouldtocarryoutathoroughsearch.(79words)Luckily,StevenandAbigailwerefoundandrescued.Afterensuringtheirsafety,peoplebreathedasighofrelief.Stevenwasdeeplymovedandexpressedhisgratitudetoalltherescuerswithtearsswirlinginhiseyes.ThenhehuggedChaseandAbigaillightlyandcouldn'the