高中英语读后续写积累素材积累一

完好版高中英语读后续写积累素材积累一完好版高中英语读后续写积累素材积累一完好版高中英语读后续写积累素材积累一续写积累姓名：______________班级：_______________一、环境描述的素材环境描述分为客观和主观两种角度：客观为从环境事物自己下手，主观那么从观察者角度描写。平时在描述时主客观交替进行，主观描述比重稍大。客观环境描述：Part1环境描述的adj要求：有声，有色，有质感，有味道thebluesky(蓝天〕thesongsofbirds〔鸟鸣〕thethunderingclouds〔电光闪雷鸣〕thefragileflowers(娇贵的花〕;〔thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚〕thegreengrass〔青草〕thefragrantroses〔明媚的玫瑰〕;thesetting/risingsun(斜阳/渐渐升起的太阳〕⋯Part2环境描述的verb〔vi&vt〕要求一)．Wind〔blow/click/howl/wail/roar〕1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,一⋯阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.风，轻柔却寒冷，轻点着树枝，搅动着斜坡下的灌木丛。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark凉.爽的细风吹拂着沉静的公园。4.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.(冷风吹拂过我的头发〕Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.〔今日正是放风筝的晴日气，激烈的风力带动了风筝的上升。〕二)．Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)声音：1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某处，潺潺的的水声在山谷中奏响。颜色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.离此不远,有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔跑闪烁。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.忧如它在温柔低语，就一位天真少女对着她那慈祥的母亲细细私语。(action,sound,colour)三)．Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.天空是浓浓的灰色，伴着拥挤的朵朵云2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar蓝蓝的天空高高耸立1主观环境描述：1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人发现某物〔状态/动作/被〕...2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/听到/感觉/闻到某物〔状态/动作/被〕3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是这样....致使于4.Sthkeptsbspellbound/amazed/光景使我这样陶醉/惊讶/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower光景让我完好惊呆了5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike光景看起来像⋯⋯二、场景描述的素材〔来自原著：追风筝的人〕1.Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.〔放风筝的场景描述，从各个角度，立体描述〕空中已经挂着最少二十来只风筝，仿佛纸制的鲨鱼，巡游搜猎食品。不到一个钟头，这个数字翻了一番，红色的、蓝色的、黄色的风筝在苍穹来回飞舞，熠熠生辉。寒冷的细风吹过我的头发。这风正合适放风筝，风速不大，恰好能让风筝飘浮起来，也便于控制。2.Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。3.ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.〔场景、比喻〕我抬初步，看见两只红色的风筝，带着长长的蓝色尾巴，在天空中渐渐升起。它们飞舞着，飞越公园西边的树林，飞越风车，并排飘浮着，仿佛一双眼睛俯视着旧金山，这个我现在看作家园的城市。4.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.CreekswhereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby〔.场景、比喻〕天空一碧如洗，阳光像烙铁般灼痛后颈。整个春天我和哈桑在溪流取水漂，到了夏天它们也枯竭了。黄包车嗒嗒走过，扬起阵阵灰尘。5.Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某个地方传来树枝劈啪作响的声音，还有猫头鹰的叫声。寒风轻轻拂动树枝，吹过山坡上的灌木丛。而下面，水流在山谷淌动，传来阵阵稍微的声音。26.Bythreeo'clock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark〔.天气〕到三点时，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布，一阵寒风吹过公园。7.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.〔情形〕太阳开始下山，那些岌岌可危的房子的裂缝中，溢出闪闪的红色斜晖。三、描述时间，动作，心理和感情一)、感情好词：1.喜乐①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石相同闪闪发光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface他.脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。

③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵激动声穿过他们。④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里缭绕。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。⑥Awildgaiety〔快乐〕tookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石相同闪闪发光，嘴角保持着牢固的微笑。⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜假设狂。⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我快乐得难以形容。⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。?Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。?Sheshedtearsofjoy.她快乐得流下了眼泪。?Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光辉。?Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。?Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激动得满脸通红。?Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起欢乐。?Iwasfloatingonair.我飘扬在空中。?Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛显露出快乐的神情。2.气愤：①Iwasseizedbyanger我.充满了气愤。②Hewasfumingwithrage.他气得雷霆之怒。③Hisangerboiledover.他的气愤爆发了。④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充满着怒火。⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因气愤而颤抖。

⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他气愤地看了我一眼。⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的目光怒目着我。⑨Heflaredupattheword.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。

⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得神情阴沉。3.悲伤烦恼①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。3②IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我飘扬在悲伤的海洋里。③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftear她s.的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwi听ne到.这个信息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom她.突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhand她s.掩面哭泣。⑦Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。⑧Afrown〔皱眉〕nowstoodonhisface.他皱起了眉头。⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那处，带着一脸愁闷。⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.这信息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。?Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他尽是悲伤⋯⋯?Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他们陶醉在沉痛之中。?Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.这些日子他情绪低落。4.害怕：①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了害怕。②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.害怕慢慢地延长到她身上。

③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...她感觉害怕⋯⋯④Shewaschokedbyfear.她因害怕而窒息。⑤Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied她.神情苍白地站在那处，舌头打结。⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一阵害怕。/害怕淹没了他。⑦Herheartbeatso