(新高考)高考英语二轮专题读后续写精读精炼（十五）（含答案解析）

高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十五）一：原文重现AsuddencallcameintoJimmyGilleece’sbarthispastMarch.Anewlymarriedwomanwhohadspenttheafternoonatthedivebeachbarcouldn’tfindherwallet.Shedidn’tcareaboutherID,creditcards,or$150incash,butherweddingringwasjustinside.21·世纪*教育网Gilleece,42,didn’tliketheideathatatheftcouldhavehappenedathisplace,sohespenthourssearching16differentcameras,watchingthewoman’severystepuntilshewenttositonabenchoutsideandleftwhenherridearrived.Withinminutes,ayoungmaninahoodie(连帽衫)approachedthebench,putsomethinginhispocket,andwalkedoff.Gilleecepostedacliponthebar’sFacebookpage.“Ididn’twanttocriticizehim,”hesaid.“Ijustaskedifanybodyknewwhotheguywas.”Withinhours,Gilleecegotatextmessagefrom17-year-oldRiversPrather,whoadmittedtakingthewalletandsaidhe’ddoneitbecausehehadn’teatenintwodays.Thinkingtheringwasfake,hethrewthewalletintotheoceanandtookthemoneytobuyasandwich.【出处：21教育名师】Gilleece,unsurewhetherhebelievedPrather,toldtheteenagertomeethimatthedocks(码头).There,theygottotalking,andPrathersaidthathewasn’tgettingalongwithhisfamilyandhadbeenlivinginthewoodsforaweek.Gilleece,afatheroftwo,tookstockof(审视)Prather―hissmallbody,hisflushing(涨得通红的)cheeks一andsawhimforwhathewas:moreofakidthanacriminal.【版权所有：21教育】However,thepolicewerealreadyonthecaseandbecauseofthemissingring,Prathercouldbefacingseverecharges.Gilleecedecidedtohelp.HeemployedtwolocaldiverstosearchthewaterswherePratherhadthrownthewallet.Meanwhile,thepolicewantedGilleecetobringtheteendowntothestation.Instead,Gilleececalledthepoliceandtoldthem,“He’sgoingtobeatthedockswithmetomorrow.”注意：1.续写词数应为150词左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Acrowdhadgatheredtowatchthetwodiverssearchinthestrongcurrent.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Butitwasn’toverforGilleece._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二：文本解析题型分析：这篇读后续写属于人性光芒类的读后续写，故事里词汇和人物关系稍有难度，续写部分是有关Gilleece如何雇人将戒指找到并且帮这个青春期少年解围，对尚无多少人生经历的学生来说，难度不小。2-1-c-n-j-y一、准确理解材料，理清人物事件1.浅层信息理解首先审题：体裁是记叙文；人称是第一、三人称；主体时态是一般过去时；记叙文“六要素”who（Gilleece，Anewlymarriedwoman,17-year-oldRiversPrather，thepolice）、when（tomorrow）、where（atthebeach）、what（Gilleecetriedtohelpthewomanfindherweddingringwhichwasstolenandthrownintotheocean.）、why（Gilleecedidn’tliketheideathatatheftcouldhavehappenedathisplace.）2.整合本篇的情节和情感线索：海滩酒吧的老板Gilleece接到顾客的投诉，一位女士的钱包被偷，急于寻回放在钱包里的订婚戒指。Gilleece查了酒吧的监控，找到了线索，并将视频片段传到网上，想通过网络的力量找到拿走钱包的人。几小时后，一个叫RiversPrather的17岁少年主动联系了他。两人见面后，Prather讲述了拿走钱包的缘由，作为两个孩子的父亲，Gilleece决定不追究其责任。但警察正在跟踪此案，Prather有可能面临严重的指控。Gilleece决定帮助这个少年，他请了两个潜水员去Prather扔钱包的地方搜寻。同时，警察要求Gilleece将Prather带去警察局。但是，Gilleece却告诉他们Gilleece第二天会和他一起去码头。二、分析续写段首，确定续写方向①由第一段首句内容Acrowdhadgatheredtowatchthetwodiverssearchinthestrongcurrent（人们早已聚集过来看着两个潜水员在大浪中搜寻。）可知，第一段可描写潜水员搜寻钱包的过程。设问如下：21教育名师原创作品1.Howdidthediverssearchforthewallet?2.WhatdidGilleece,Pratherandthepolicedo?3.Howdideachofthemfeel?4.Didtheyfoundthewallet?根据第二段首句Butitwasn’toverforGilleece.（但是这件事情对Gilleece来说还没有结束。）虽然提示语简短，但是Gilleece在前文中所表现出的商量和想要帮助这个少年的决心，让学生不难猜出，他想要继续帮助Prather。因为Gilleece和Prather是这个故事的主角，不能突然消失。设问如下：21·cn·jy·com5.Whatdidhewanttodo?6.WhathappenedtoPrather?7.Whatdoesthestoryintendtotellreaders?三、借助文本资源，创设续写情节根据六要素和自己的想象，借助文本资源，创设续写两段故事的情节。[开端]人们围观潜水员找钱包。[故事发展]找的过程——Gilleece焦急——警察开始盘问。[高潮]钱包被找到——Gilleece想要继续帮助Prather——Prather不再流离失所。[结局]Prather痛改前非——感悟。三：续写单句训练一群人聚集在一起，观看这两名潜水员在湍急的水流中搜寻。一个多小时过去了，没有任何戒指的迹象。Gilleece开始担心，尤其是当警察开始审问Prather，并试图让他承认保留了戒指时。每过一分钟，他都增加了他逮捕那个年轻人的机会。然后，一个潜水员跳了出来。他手里拿着钱包，里面是戒指。人群中爆发出了欢呼声。就连侦探也很高兴。但吉里斯的一切还没有结束。他一直为Prather睡在寒冷的树林里而感到烦恼。Gilleece知道他的家足够大，可以给Prather一个地方住一段时间。他告诉这个少年，他可以和家人呆在一起，直到那个男孩再次站起来。他还给了这个孩子一份在这个酒吧工作的工作。“大多数人都会把这段录像（监控录像）交给警方，但他选择相信我并帮助我。我会像他预期的那样，努力努力成为一个好人，”Prather在一次采访中说。四：佳作展现Acrowdhadgatheredtowatchthetwodiverssearchinthestrongcurrent.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Butitwasn’toverforGilleece._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五：课后练笔IwasstillathiefwhenImetAnil.Andthoughonly15,Iwasanexperiencedandfairlysuccessfulhand.21教育网Anilwasabout25atall,thinfellowandhelookedeasy-going,kindandsimpleenoughformypurpose.ImightbeabletogetintohisIgavehimmymostappealingsmile.“Iwanttoworkforyou.”Isaid.“ButIcan’tpayyou."PerhapsIhadmisjudgedtheman.Iasked,“Canyoufeedme?www-2-1-cnjy-com“Canyoucook?"“Icancook.”Ilied.“Ifyoucancook,thenIcanfeedyou.”ThemealIcookedthatnightmusthavebeenterriblebecauseAnilgaveittoastraydogandtoldmetobeoff.ButIjusthungaroundsmilinginmymostappealingway,andhecouldn’thelplaughing.2·1·c·n·j·yLaterhepattedmeontheheadandsaidnevermind,he’dteachmetocook.Healsotaughtmetowritemynameandsaidhewouldsoonteachmetowritewholesentencesandtoaddnumbers.Iwasgrateful.IknewthatonceIcouldwritelikeaneducatedmantherewouldbenolimittowhatIcouldachieve.21*cnjy*comOneeveninghecamehomewithasmallbundleofnotes,sayinghehadjustsoldabooktoapublisher.Atnight,Isawhimputthemoneyunderthemattress(床垫).【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】It’stimeIdidsomerealwork,Itoldmyself.Afterall,hedoesn’tevenpayme.Anilwasasleep.Icreptuptothebed.Anilwassleepingpeacefully.Myhandslidunderthemattress,searchingforthenotes.WhenIfoundthem,Idrewthemoutwithoutasound.Anilsighedinhissleepandturnedonhisside,towardsme.Iwasfrightenedandquicklycrawledoutoftheroom.21*cnjy*comIbegantorun,holdingthenotesbythestringofmypajamas(睡衣).ButIsloweddownandsatdownintheshelteroftheclocktower.IshouldgobacktoAnil,Itoldmyself,ifonlytolearntoreadandwrite.注意:1.续写词数应为150词左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Ihurriedbacktotheroomfeelingverynervous.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IawokelatenextmorningtofindthatAnilhadalreadymadethetea.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案三：单句训练Acrowdhadgatheredtowatchthetwodiverssearchinthestrongcurrent.Morethananhourpassed,withnosignofthering.21世纪教育网版权所有Gilleecegrewworried,especiallywhenthepolicebeganquestioningPratherandtryingtogethimtoadmittokeepingthering.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】Eachpassingminuteincreasedthechancesthathewouldarresttheyoungman.Thenadiverpoppedup.Inhishandwasthewallet,andinsidewasthering.Cheerseruptedfromthecrowd.Eventhedetectivewashappy.Butitwasn’toverforGilleece.He’dbeentroubledaboutPrathersleepinginthecoldwoods.GilleeceknewhishomewasbigenoughtogivePratheraplacetoliveforawhile.Hetoldtheteenhecouldstaywithhisfamilyuntiltheboygotonhisfeetagain.Healsogavethekidajobathisbar.“Mostpeoplewouldhavegiventhefootage(监控录像)topolice,buthechosetobelievemeandhelpme.I’llworkhardtobecomeagoodguy,justasheexpected,”Prathersaidinaninterview.四：佳作展现（一）Acrowdhadgatheredtowatchthetwodiverssearchinthestrongcurrent.Morethananhourpassed,withnosignofthering.Gilleecegrewworried,especiallywhenthepolicebeganquestioningPratherandtryingtogethimtoadmittokeepingthering.Eachpassingminuteincreasedthechancesthathewouldarresttheyoungman.Thenadiverpoppedup.Inhishandwasthewallet,andinsidewasthering.Cheerseruptedfromthecrowd.Eventhedetectivewashappy.Butitwasn’toverforGilleece.He’dbeentroubledaboutPrathersleepinginthecoldwoods.Gilleeceknewhishomewasbigenough