【课件】读后续写情绪描写-无灵主语句课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习

Continuationwriting——Emotion读后续写之人物情绪描写WritingFearAngerJoyDisgustSadnessShewassosadthatsheburstintocrying.Shewasstandingbythedoor,cryingsadly.PleasemakeasentencetodescribehowZhenHuanfelt.Shewassoangrythatshecouldn’thelpshouting.ShewasshoutingatMarukoangrily.PleasemakeasentencetodescribehowMaruko’smotherfelt.Sufferinganddespairdefeatedher,andshefellsobbingbythedoor.痛苦和绝望击垮了她，她靠在门上哭泣。Maruko’smotherfeltthatawaveofangersweptoverher.小丸子的妈妈感到一阵愤怒。Shewassosadthatsheburstintocrying.She

wasstandingbythedoor,cryingsadly.Sufferinganddespairdefeatedher,andshefellsobbingbythedoor.Shewassoangrythatshe

couldn’thelpshouting.ShewasshoutingatMarukoangrily.Maruko’smotherfeltthatawaveofangersweptoverher.“无灵”主语句情绪名词拟人化运用“无灵”主语句，突出人物的心理、情感，使续写语言更加生动形象、栩栩如生。句式①(aburst/wave/surge/sense/feelingof+)表情感状态的名词+有灵动词+sb.

表“某人感到...”或“一阵/一种...向某人袭来”。Sufferinganddespair

defeated

her.Awaveofanger

sweptover

Maruko’smother.“无灵”主语句Checkyouranswers情绪名词情绪名词高兴后悔激动、兴奋焦虑不安惊讶、震惊厌烦失望孤独伤心痛苦惊慌失措沮丧害怕、恐惧困惑绝望恶心担心、担忧生气内疚宽慰happinessexcitementsurprisedisappointmentsadnesspanicscaredespairworryguiltregretanxietyboredomlonelinesssufferingdepressionconfusiondisgustangerrelief袭来：sweep/flood/rushover击垮：defeatgetthebetterof掠过：flash/cross把...撕碎：opieces吞噬；淹没：swallow“有灵”动词抓住：seizeget/takeholdof使失望；有负于：fail逃离：escape>>>Practicemakesperfect!I.根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。1.她感到一阵惊慌，但是强迫自己镇静地离开了房间。___________________________(主语)_______________________________(动词)her,butsheforcedherselftoleavetheroomcalmly.2.她站在门口,绝望得说不出话来。Shestoodbythedoor,and___________________(主语)choked

herwords.3.她慢慢走出屋子，内疚和担忧一阵阵涌上她的心头。Sheslowlywalkedoutoftheroom,and__________________________(主语)_________________________________(动词)herinwaves.Awave/burst/senseofpanicseized/tookholdof/sweptoverdespair/hopelessnessguiltandworryrushedover/floodedover/sweptover>>>Practicemakesperfect!4.她焦虑不安，在比赛前突然失去了信心。_________________(主语)toreherintopieces,andbeforethecompetitionher_________________(主语)suddenly___________________________(动词)her.5.意识到小男孩说了谎时，

她的脸上掠过失望的神情。Whensherealizedthelittleboyhadlied,_________________________(主语)____________________(动词)herface.Anxietyconfidenceescaped/failedalookofdisappointmentcrossed/flashed>>>Practicemakesperfect!II.根据I中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。1.她忽然怒从心头起，但她强迫自己镇静下来。2.我抱着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。3.他开车驶过那座桥时，阵阵孤独与痛苦涌上心头。4.她压力很大。她想坚持，却鼓不起勇气。5.他注视着那个沉默的男孩，一脸惊讶。>>>Practicemakesperfect!II.根据I中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。1.她忽然怒从心头起，但她强迫自己镇静下来。

Asuddenwaveofangerseized/tookholdof/sweptoverher,butsheforcedherselftocalmdown.2.我拿着礼物，兴奋得什么话也说不出来。

Iheldthepresent,andexcitementchokedmywords.>>>Practicemakesperfect!3.他开车驶过那座桥时，阵阵孤独与痛苦涌上心头。Whenhedrovebythebridge,lonelinessandgriefrushed/flooded/sweptoverhiminwaves.4.她压力很大。她想坚持，却鼓不起勇气。Stresstoreherintopieces.Shewantedtoinsist,buthercouragefailed/deserted/escaped/abandonedher.5.他注视着那个沉默的男孩，一脸惊讶。Hestaredatthesilentboyandalookofsurprisecrossed/flashedhisface.句式②

表示身体部位/音容笑的名词+有灵动词Myfingersshook

withanger.Iwasrelievedwhenabright,sweetvoice

interruptedus.常见名词：eye,face,heart,hand,finger,laughter,smile,tears,voice...常用动词：照亮：brighten/lightup

涌出：wellup

浮现：spreadacross

掠过：flash

用...装满：fill...with...

显得阴沉(恐惧、愤怒、忧愁等):cloudover“无灵”主语句>>>Practicemakesperfect!I.根据汉语和提示用无灵主语或有灵动词填空，并背诵。1.他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。Themomenthesawthefamiliarhandwriting,_______(主语)___________(动词)inhiseyes.2.激动人心的时刻到了，她的心提到了嗓子眼儿。Thencametheexcitingmomentwhen__________(主语)___________(动词)hermouth.3.看到那头可怕的狼，我吓得喉咙发紧，两腿发软。Atthesightofthefrighteningwolf,Ifeltsoscaredthat__________(主语)________(动词)and__________(主语)feltweak.tearswelledupherheartflewupmythroattightenedmyknees>>>Practicemakesperfect!II.根据I中各句进行一对一仿效写句，并背诵。1.当老人多年后回到家乡时，激动得热泪盈眶。

Whentheoldmanreturnedtohishometownaftersomanyyears,tearsofexcitementwelledupinhiseyes.2.接着到她表演了，她的心都快跳到嗓子眼儿了。

Thencameshetoperform,andherheartflewuphermouth.

3.看着那头发怒的北极熊，我们吓得心脏狂跳，两腿发软。Atthesightoftheangrypolarbear,wefeltsoscaredthatourheartswerepoundingandourkneesfeltweak.III.微续写：根据汉语提示利用无灵主语句填写空白部分，使之构成一个完整的故事。Ittook8hourstorebuildKelly’sinjuredface.Duringthelong8hours,Rockywaswaitingaloneoutsidetheoperationroom.①____________________________________(他的小脸苍白，愁云满面).Fear,depression,anxiety,②______________________________________(他心中涌现这些负面情绪)ashewaited.③___________________________________________(因为痛苦和绝望将他撕成碎片),thefive-year-oldboyjustcouldn’tstopcryinghisheartout.NosoonerhadthedoctortoldRockyhismotherwasfinethanherushedintotheroom.Whatfirstenteredhiseyeswashismother’sfacecoveredwithbandage.HislittlefacewaspaleandcloudedoverallthesenegativefeelingssuddenlysweptoverhimAssufferingandhelplessnesstorehimintopiecesAstearsstream