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Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingbutcouldmakedecisionsbymyself.Besides,myparentsdidn'tseemtothinkso.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghomeforcollege.Atlast,Iwillbeontheirown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturnwheneverIneedhelp.Theteenageyearfrom13to19wer亡themostdifficulttimeforme.TEl亡丫wereyearsalsothebestandwze亡yearsinmylife.Attl\iirEtnIthought]kneweveyttriug;butv^orstand.couldmakedecisionsbymyself.Bssidss,myparentsdidn'xseemrothinkso-.TheyHoweveralwaystellmewhatrodoand.ho取todoir.Alcnetime,Ievenfeltmypaienrsro-ldcouldn'tunderstandmeso]hop亡d]could.be班亡lyfromtheiTLI血时亡dthemIfreewasindependentby化arstrangecl&tiies.NowIamleavinghomeforcollege.Atlast,wearingIwillbeontiieifown,butIsti11wanttohavemyparentstoturn-■^vhm.^er]needmytoIwasreadinganarticleinabookwhileIcameacrossawordIdidn'tknow.“Dad,whatisthemeaningoftheword”Mydad,asheusualdidafterwork,waswatchinghismostfavoriteshow.“Youhavethedictionary,don'tyou”heshotback.Hedidn'tevenlookupmyface.Iwentbackmyroom,andthereonmystudytableisthatdictionary.Ilookeditupandfoundit'sexactmeaning.TenyearhavepassedandIstillusethatdictionary,alongwiththelessonIreceivedearlierinlifefrommyoldman:tobeindependent.Iwasreadingan^rtiGLeinabookwhilclcameacnssawordIdidn^th»5r.竝whatistbcmcaamg4ftbcWhi<iLwwd?Trf/da&aslieusualdid■after附山wuwatdkingbisawtfovulte曲id碉^Ybuhaveth&dktiaiarvdozft
usually\ayniT'beshoebactHedidn'tevaloolupmvfkc.IwanbactAmyroam,audibcrcanmystudytableisthatattowasdjctian町.IIfwkcditup-aodfowdifscmctmeaning,layearhavepassedandlsuUuscthm4jciiciDar);alongwithitsyear(hrIckqd1rwriviodcarlwrjnlife&ommyqUmao;iQb^iudcpaulnit.earlyDearSir,I'velearnedateachingassistantforforeignteachersiswantedinyourschool.I'mwritingtoapplytotheposition.Firstofall,IhadgraduatedfromAnhuiUniversityonemonthago.Havingexposedtoforeignteacherssinceayoungage,IcancommunicatewithothersinfluentlyEnglish,What'smore,yearsofexperiencesofbeingmonitormakesmeabrilliantorganizer,whowillhelpalottokeeptheclassinorder.ThemostimportantfactoristhatIlovekids,andI'mconfidentofmypatienceandcarewillundoubtedly,winhistrust.Allinall,Ithinkmyenthusiasmandfullsenseofresponsibilitywillmakemeaqualifyingteachingassistant.I'dappreciateyouifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,LiHun【解析】1.句意为我想要应聘这个职位。applyfor为固定搭配,表示申请。故将to改为for。句意为我一个月前从大学毕业。这里考查的是时态问题。从amonthago可知,毕业应该是过去时,应该用一般过去时。故将had去掉。3•句意为从小的时候开始我就接触了外国老师。考察explose用法,暴露与作者之间应该是被动语态。故在having后面添加been。4.句意为我能和他人用流利的英语交流。fluently为副词,不能修饰名词。故将fluently改为fluent。句意为当班长的多年经历让我成为一个很好的组织者。experience没有复数形式。故将experiences改为experience。句意为这会对保持班级秩序有很大帮助。该句为非限制性定语从句,而且此处的关系代词应该是指的是作者是一个很好的组织者,为一件事,不能用who。故将who改为which。7.句意为我的耐心和关怀会毫无疑问的赢得他们的信任,对此我很有信心obeconfidentof后面加名词。beconfidentthat引导从句。故将of改为that。8•由文意可知,作者是想当助教。因此赢得的信任应该是一群学生,而不是一个人。故将his改为their。句意为我认为我的热情和责任感,会让我成为一名合格的助教。考查形容词。qualified为符合资格的。故将qualifying改为qualified。{句意为如果你将我的申请列入考虑范围内的话,我将非常感谢。考察appreciate用法。wouldappreciateit...为固定搭配表示感谢。故将you改为it。OnenightIwasgoingtoworkonmyusuallybusroute.Uponourarriveattheterminal,InoticedthatIwastheonlypassengerleftonthebus.Ilookedaroundandsawamobilephoneinachairthatmusthavebeenleftbehindbythepassenger.Igiveittotheconductor.Twodaylater,theconductortoldmethatthepassengerwasverymuchhappythatIreturnedthemobilephone.Thepassengerwastryingtogethername,soshewantedtopostonFacebookaboutwhathadhappenedasasortofappreciation.Ithoughtitwasunnecessary.WhatwasimportantwaswhenIsawthesmileonherface,Iwashappy.46.第1处【答案】usually改为usual【解析】用形容词修饰名词。第2处【答案】arrive改为arrival【解析】Uponone'sarrival是固定用法,意思是某人到来时。第3处【答案】on改为in【解析】句意:我发现我是汽车里唯一剩下的乘客,on改为in。第4处【答案】the改为a解析】泛指“一位乘客”,所以用不定冠词。第5处【答案】give改为gave【解析】发生在过去的事情,所以用一般过去式。第6处【答案】day改为days【解析】Day是可数名词,且被“two"修饰,所以用名词复数。第7处【答案】去掉much【解析】"非常高兴”,直接说veryhappy,所以去掉much。第8处【答案】her改为my【解析】句意:这名乘客想要知道我的名字,所以her改为my。第9处【答案】so改为because【解析】句意:因为她想要张贴在脸书上。表示原因,所以so改为because。第10处【答案】when前加thatThebluewhaleiscertainlythelargestanimalsontheplanettoday.Justtheheartofabluewhalecanweightasmanyasafamilycar.Youmightthinkthatsuchabiganimalwouldneedtoeatanotherbiganimalstosurviving.Surprising,thebluewhalefeedsonsomeofthesmalleroceananimals.Abluewhalecanlivebetween80and90years.Unfortunately,itisbelievethattherewereonly10,000to25,000alive.Theywerehuntedforinthe1900sbuthundredsofthousandsofthemwerekilled.Let'shopenumberofwhalesontheplanetstartstoincreaseinthecomingyears.Thebluewhaleiscertainlythelargestanimalsontheplanettoday.Justtheheartofablueanimalwhalecanweightasmanyasafamilycar.Youmightthinkthatsuchabiganimalwouldneedtomucheatanotherbiganimalstosurviving.Surprising,thebluewhalefeedsonsomeofthesmallerothersurviveSurprisingly<oceananimals.Abluewhalecanlivebetween80and90years.Unfortunately,itisbelievethattherewerearebelievedonly10,000to25,000alive.Theywerehuntedforinthe1900sbuthundredsofthousandsofthemare去掉forandwerekilled.Let'shopeAnumberofwhalesontheplanetstartstoincreaseinthecomingyears.aWhenmytwentiethbirthdayscame,Iwasnotathome.Inordertocelebratesuchimportantdaywithmyparents,Iwrotehimaletter,inwhichIthankedthemforhavingraisedmefortwentyyears,andexpressedmyloveforthem.Latermymothertellmewhentheyreadtheletter,tearswerefilledhereyes.Andmyfatherappearedverycool.Beforethat,hereaditalonecareful,andthenheputitawayintoadeskdrawer.IcanimaginethesceneclearlybecauseIknowfather.Beingamanwithlittlewords,heprefersshowhisloveformeinasilentway.61.birthdays改为birthday62.such后加an改为them64.tell改为told65.去掉were66.And改为But67.Before改为After68.careful改为carefully69.little改为few70.prefers后加toMyparentsliveinthecountry.TheykeepadogcallingAhFu.OnedaymyparentwenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong.Whiletheyworking,mysisterwalkedtotherivernearby.AhFufollowsherthere.Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhileshefellintotheriver.AhFubarkedandjumpedtothewaterimmediately.WhenmyparentsheardofAhFubarking,theyrantotheriver.TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryinghislittlesister.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarm.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesister.calling改为calledparent改为parentsthey后加werethe改为afollows改为followedwhile改为whento改为into
8.去掉heard后面的of9.his改为my10.warm改为warmlyLastsummer,tomydelight,IgotachancetogototheUnitedKingdom.IwaseagertoseehowEnglandwaslike.Althoughmyparentsobjectedtomydecisionatfirst,butfinallytheywerepersuaded.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhavetravelledabroadalone.Feltexcited,Iboardedtheplane.Suddenly,however,Ifoundmyluggagesgoneandfelthelplessly.Itwasonthatmomentthattheairhostesscametomyassistance.Afterhelpingmefinditback,shesuggestedthatIattachedalabeltomysuitcaseonmynextjourney.Iwasthankfullytothekindladyforhishelp!Whatunforgettabletrip!Lastsummer,tomydelight,IgotachancetogototheUnitedKingdom.Iwaseagertoseehowwhatwerepersuaded.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhavetravelledabroadalone.Feltexcited,1howwhatwerepersuaded.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhavetravelledabroadalone.Feltexcited,1boardedtheplane.Suddenly,however,Ifoundmyluggages
luggagegoneandfelthelplessly.Itwasonatthatmomentthattheairhostesscametomyassistance.Afterhelpingmefinditback,shesuggestedthatIattached
attachthankfullyalabeltomysuitcaseonmynextjourney.Iwas恼nkfusuggestedthatIattached
attachthankfullyalabeltomysuitcaseonmynextjourney.Iwas恼nkfultothekindladyforhis
herhelp!WhatAanunforgettabletrip!Nowadays,asthedevelopmentofhightechnology,smartphoneisverypopulartohighschoolstudent.Smartphoneonceisforbidden.Butnowithasbecomeaverycommontoolforstudents.Alotofstudentskeephiseyesonsmartphonesallthetime.Teachersareannoyingaboutthissituation,sotheyfeelmoststudentsignorethemwhentheyaregivinglessons.Someteachersthinkitistimetoletthestudentshandtohandintheirsmartphones.Idon'tthinkitisgoodidea.Evenfortheteachers,theyusedtheirphonessomuch,letalonethestudents.Theteachersshouldimprovetheirteachingmethodstocatchthestudents'interest.
asNowadays,w^thedevelopmentofhightechnology,smartphoneisverypopularasTOC\o"1-5"\h\ztoiswith/amonghighschoolstudents.Smartphoneoncew^forbidden.Butnowithasbecomeatoolshisverycommon品&forstudents.Alotofstudentskeep£^7eyesonsmartphonesallthetime._annoyingsoTeachersareannoyedaboutthissituation,because/astheyfeelthatmoststudentsignorethemwhentheyaregivinglessons.Someteachersthinkitistimetoletthestudentstohandintheirsmartphones.AusedIdon'tthinkitisagoodidea.Evenfortheteachers,theytheirphonessomuch,letausealonethestudents.Theteachersshouldimprovetheirteachingmethodstocatchthestudents'interest.DearSir,I'mXiaoli,astudentofSenior3.Iamwritingtoaskyourselfforsomeadvice.SinceIenteredSenior3,myparentsandteachershavekeptaskingmetoboard(寄宿)intheschool.Theysayitwillbeverymuchconvenientformetoaskquestionwheneverandwherever.However,theythinkboardingwillmakethispossibletomakefullusemynighttime,andthatIcanalsodeveloptheabilitytolookaftermyself.However,inmyopinion,stayathomeintheeveningallowmemoretimetoworkatmylessons.Atasametime,IcanlearnwhichIthinkI'mnotgoodat.Ireallydon'tknowhowtodealwiththedisagreement.CanyouhelpmeoutYours,Xiaoli71.yourself改为you72.去掉much73.question改为questions74.However改为Besides75.this改为it76.use后面加of77.stay改为staying80.which改为what78.allow改为allows79.a改为theAsaSeniorTwostudent,myfavoritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourschoolfootball
team.WepracticeforthreetimesaweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchonTVorontheInternettogether.Playfootballnotonlymakesusgrowtallandstrongbutalsogiveusasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepinmindsthatweplayfortheteaminsteadourselves.Also,sportsteachustheimportantofobeyingtherulesinamatch.Eachplayermustlistentothecaptain,whichistheleaderoftheteam.Andtheymustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthegame.wasmatch_threetimesaweekandoftenwatchfootballmamatch_threetimesaweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchesonTVoronPlaygivetheInternettogether.footballnotonlymakesusgrowtallandstrongbutalso晶品usasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepinmindsasenseoffairplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepinmindthatweplayfortheteaminsteadofobeyingtherulesinamatch.EachplayerAimportantofobeyingtherulesinamatch.Eachplayerofourselves.Also,sportsteachustheimportancewhichtheymustlistentothecaptain,耐。istheleaderoftheteam.Andwemustnotbreaktherulestoooftenifwewanttowinthegame.Thewinterholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgesthatwecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.71.【答案】第1处how改为what第2处chose改为choose第3处take改为taking第4处but改为and;第5处about后加the第6处your改为our第7处knowledges改为knowledge第8处删除can或can改为should第9处thought改为think第10处many改为muchAsthesayinggoes,chancesfavoredthepreparedmind.Ilearnedthisfromoneofmyexperience.Iwasnotchosenasmemberofthevolleyballteamofourschool.Becauseofthis,Idecidedtogiveupplayvolleyball.Luckily,mybestfriendstoppedmebutpointedoutthatitwasmylazinessandpoorpreparationwhichledtomyfailure.Afterthat,Ipracticedplayingvolleyballoneveryday.Whenanothertryoutarrived,Iwasfullpreparedandtriedmybest.Asaresult,Iwasselectedandbecameanimportantplayeronourschoolteam.Fromthis,Iamfirmlyconvincingthat,nomatterwhenchancesarrive,wewereabletoseizethemaslongaswegetwellprepared.Asthesayinggoes,chancesfavoredthepreparedmind.Ilearnedthisfromoneofmyfavorexperience.experiencesIwasnotchosenasAmemberofthevolleyballteamofourschool.Becauseofthis,I%adecidedtogiveupplayvolleyball.Luckily,mybestfriendstoppedmebutpointedoutthatitwasplayingandmylazinessandpoorpreparationwhichledtomyfailure.Afterthat,Ipracticedplayingvolleyballthatoneveryday.Whenanothertryoutarrived,Iwasfullpreparedandtriedmybest.Asaresult,Iwas去掉onfullyselectedandbecameanimportantplayeronourschoolteam.
Fromthis,Iamfirmlyconvincingthat,nomatterwhenchancesarrive,wewereabletoseizeconvincedarethemaslongaswegetwellprepared.It'snoteasyforustoacceptthefactwhichwearegoingtoleaveourbelovedschool.However,wearelookedforwardtoourfuturelife.Lastnight,myfriendsandIwalkaroundourschooltalkingaboutthefunnythingsthathadbeenhappenedinthepastthreeyears.Suddenly,Igotanidea.Isaidtohimweshouldmakeadealthatwecouldgettogetherherefouryearslate.Myfriendsweresoexcitingaboutit,andtheyagreedwithme.IstartedtothinkaboutwhatIwouldbecomeinthefuture.Imaybecomingateacher,oradoctor.Ithinkdealwillhelpuskeepintouchtoeachother.51.which-that52.looked-looking53.walk-walked56.late-later59.deal前加the57.exciting-excited58.becoming-become56.late-later59.deal前加the57.exciting-excited58.becoming-become60.to-withOneneighborofmyisauntyAnabel.Everyoneintheneighborhoodknowsherforthe“queenoftheneighborhood”.Youmayaskwhat.Well,it'sbecausesheusedtocookingfortheentireneighborhoodwhenevertherewasfestival.IrememberthedaythatMr.Carterceleberatedhis90thbirthday.Inordertomakesureeveryoneknewaboutit,hemadeMrs.Carterbakesmallcookies.Thenhewalkedaroundandgiveeveryhouseonecookie.Believeitornot,butitwasaninvitation.Assoonasmyauntyheardthenews,shegotallneighbortogetherandstartedahugebarbecuepartyforhim.Therewasn'tonepersonwhowillingstayedhomethatday.myforOneneighborofmjneisauntyAnabel.Everyoneintheneighborhoodknowsher£thewhatcooking"queenoftheneighborhood”.Youmayask耐丫.Well,it'sbecausesheusedtocookfortheAthatentireneighborhoodwhenevertherewasafestival.Iremembertheday齐石MrCarterceleberatedhis90thbirthday.Inordertomakesureeveryoneknewaboutit,hemadeMrsCartergivebakesmallcookies.Thenhewalkedaroundandgaveeveryhouseonecookie.Believeitornot,neighborbu^itwasaninvitation.Assoonasmyauntyheardthenews,shegotallneighborstogetherand
startedahugebarbecuepartyforhim.Therewasn'tonepersonwhowillingwillinglystartedahugebarbecuepartyforhim.Therewasn'tonepersonwhowillingwillinglystayedhomethatday.Onemorning,ablindboysatonasquarewithahatbyherfeet.Heheldupasignwhichwassaid:“Iamblind,pleasehelpme.”Therewasonlyafewcoinsinthehat.Amanwaswalkingby.Hetookthesign,turningitaround,andwrotesomethingonit.Heputthesignbacksothateveryonewalkedbywouldseethenewwords.Surprising,soonalotmorepeopleweregivingmoneytotheblindboy.Thatafternoon,themanwhohadchangedthesigncametoseewhatthingswere.Theboyrecognizedhisfootstepandasked:“AreyoutheonewhochangedmysignthismorningHowdidyouwrite”Themansaid:“TodayisabeautifuldayandIcannotseeit.”herOnemorning,ablindboysatonasquarewithahatbyfeet.Heheldupasignwhichwassaid:"Iamblind,pleasehelpme.”Therewereonlyafewcoinsinthehat.Amanwasturningwalkingby.Hetookthesign,neditaround,andwrotesomethingonit.HeputthesignbackASurprisingsothateveryone耐。walkedbywouldseethenewwords.surprisingly,soonalotmorepeopleweregivingmoneytotheblindboy.Thatafternoon,themanwhohadchangedthesignfootstepfootstepsandasked:"Areyoutheonefootstepfootstepsandasked:"Areyoutheonecametoseehowthingswere.TheboyrecognizedhiswhochangedmysignthismorningHowwhochangedmysignthismorningWhatdidyouwrite”Themansaid:"Todayisabeautifuldayand赢1cannotseeit.”DearHarry,\IhavegoodnewsforyouthattherewillbeainternationalmusiccampinourcitythissummerThecampisopenlytostudentsfromallovertheworldwhoisinterestedinplayingmusicalinstruments.Iknowyouareamusiclover,sowhynottojointhecamptogetherwithusAtthecamp,campersaregivingclassesbyexpertsinthemoringandintheafternoontheydoacoupleofhourofpractice.Intheevening,thereisamusicexchangeconcertthatcamperscangiveperformancesandplaysdifferentkindsofmusicfromtheirowncounties.I'msureyouwillhavealotoffunsthere.I'mlookingforwardyourreply.
Yours,
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