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.提要作文它通常会以汉字、汉字+英文、文字+图画等形式罗列出一系列关键点，要求学生依据所列关键点来组织语言，按照一定逻辑次序正确无误地将信息表示出来。提要作文是高考试题中最常见一个命题形式。在全国18套高考英语试卷中，提要类作文占了14套，其中就包含江西卷。假设你是星光中学李华，将参加主题为“Let’sRideBicycles”英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包含：1．当前汽车带来空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2．骑自行车益处，如节能环境保护、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbonlife）；节能（energysaving）注意：1、词数：120词左右；2、演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其誊录在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuaformXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”.______________________________________________________________________________________________

Thankyou!高考江西卷作文写作步骤？关键点2体裁人称时态主题确定结构普通现在时Para.1

Para.2Para.3关键点1演讲稿第一人称主题总结、发号召Let’sridebicycles

Let’sridebicycles1.认真审题，确定结构当前汽车带来空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；骑自行车益处，如节能环境保护、有利健康等。假设你是星光中学李华，将参加主题为“Let’sRideBicycles”英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包含：1．当前汽车带来空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2．骑自行车益处，如节能环境保护、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbonlife）；节能（energysaving）注意：1、词数：120词左右；2、演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其誊录在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuaformXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”.______________________________________________________________________________________________

Thankyou!高考江西卷作文关键点1关键点2主题①带来一些问题②空气污染③交通堵塞等

Para.1.空气污染交通堵塞等当前汽车带来一些问题cause/leadto/contributeto/bringsomeproblemsairpollutiontrafficjams2.理顺关键点，增加细节当前汽车带来空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；①骑自行车②节能环境保护③有利健康等

Para.2节能环境保护有利健康等骑自行车益处energy-saving;environmentallyfriendly；environment-friendlydogoodtohealth/begoodforhealth/benefithealth/bebeneficialtoourhealth/haveagoodeffectonhealthridingbicycles2.理顺关键点，增加细节骑自行车益处，如节能环境保护、有利健康等。

总结、发号召Let’sridebicyclesInconclusion,weshould……Therefore,let’s……So,let’s……2.理顺关键点，增加细节Para.3你以为你作文完成了吗？

2.理顺关键点，增加细节1.认真审题，确定结构3.变点为句，灵活表示4.连句成篇，衔接恰当5.检验修正，誊写清楚初稿写作步骤:①带来问题②空气污染③交通堵塞等

Para.1.空气污染交通堵塞等当前汽车带来问题cause/leadto/contributeto/bringsomeproblemsairpollutiontrafficjamsAlargenumberofcarshavecausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.3.变点为句，灵活表示①骑自行车②节能环境保护③有利健康等

Para.2节能环境保护有利健康等骑自行车益处energy-saving;environmentallyfriendlydogoodtohealth/begoodforhealth/benefithealth/bebeneficialtoourhealth/haveagoodeffectonhealthridingbicyclesRidingbicyclesisenergy-saving.

Bicyclesisenvironmentallyfriendly.Ridingbicyclesisbeneficialtoourhealth.Ridingbicyclesdogoodtoourhealth.3.变点为句，灵活表示使用恰当连接词逻辑角度适当过渡性词汇⑴排序关系

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Nowadaystheusingofcarshascontributedtomanyproblemsincludingairpollutionandthetrafficjams.Besides,caraccidentsappearmorefrequentlyowingtosomedrivers’carelessness.

However,bicyclescansolvemostoftheproblemscausedbycars.Ridingbicyclesisenvironmentallyfriendlyandenergysaving.Moreover,ithasagreatimpactonourhealth.Itcanbuildupourbodysignificantly.Ridingbicyclesisalow-carbonlifewhichallofusshouldmanagetolive.It’sofvitalimportancetoridebicycleswhereveritispossibleforus.Solet’sridebicyclestolivealow-carbonlife!Thankyou!学生习作

Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.

Howcanwesolvetheproblemsthen?AsfarasI’mconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.Foronething,bicyclesdon’tneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Foranother,bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon’tgiveoffwastegas.What’smore,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisbeneficialtoourhealth.Therefore,let’staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalowcarboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!Thankyou!范文Thanksforlistening

信息3总结、发号召Let’sridebicyclesInconclusion,Solet’sridebicyclestolivealow-carbonlife!Therefore,let’slivealow-carbonlifebyridingbicycles3.变点为句，灵活表示

Therearealargenumberofcarsnowinthecity.Itcausesmanyproblemsatthesametime.Foronething,thecarpollutioniscausedbyusingfuelssothatreducesthequalityoftheair.Foranother,morecarsintheroadleadtoalotoftrafficjams.SoIsuggestthatweshouldridebicyclestogooutside.Itcannotonlysaveenergybutalsocanbebenefittoyourhealth.Ithasmanypositiveeffectsthanwhatyoucanexpect.I’dliketoseethateveryonecanlivealow-carbonlifeinthenearfuturebyridingbicycles.Ihopethatyoucanstartitrightnow!That’sall.Thankyou！学生习作

Whenitcomestolow-carbonlife,amajorityofpeopleholdvariousviewsofitandtakedifferentactiontosupportit.Asastudent,Iheartilysubscribetotheidea——"Let'sRideBicycles".Withtherapiddevelopmentoftechnology,anincreasingnumberofcarsarebeingproduced.Notonlyhascarsbroughtsevereairpollution,buttheycontributetomoretrafficjamsaswell.Butifweusebicycleasourdailytransportationtools,thesituationmightbegreatlyimproved.Firstandforemost,ridingabicycleisundoubtedlyenergy-savingandenvironmental-friendly,thusboostingoursustainabledevelopent.Plus,it'sakindofphysicalexercise,whichdoesmassivegoodtoourhealth.What'smore,we'reinspiredtodevelopameritofbein