读后续写练习写作指导 学案-高考英语二轮复习写作专项

读后续写练习写作指导学案阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。OnewindydayinMarch,KittyMillerwasonherwaytoschool,whenshespottedagreatpileoflovelyredapplesinastorewindow."Oh,howlovely!”shesaid."IfonlyMammacouldhaveone!”Kitty'smotherwasverypoor.ShehadbeenadressmakereversinceMr.Millerdied,andhadworkedsohardtoearnalivingforherselfandKittythatshehadbecomesick.Shehadtolieinbedallday,andwhenKittywasawayatschool,thehousewasverylonesometoher.WhenKittyreachedtheschoolthatday,herthoughtswerefullofhersickmotherandthelovelyapples.Shewasusuallyagoodstudent,buttodayshemadesomanymistakesthattheteacherlookedatherinsurprise.Thelittlegirlcouldonlysitatherdesk,withherbookbeforeher,anddreamofthoseredapples.Whenschoolwasdismissed,Kittystartedslowlyhomeward.Shehadgoneonlyashortdistancewhenshesawagentlemaninfrontofherdrophispurse.Runningquicklyforward,shepickeditup.ItfeltquiteheavyinKitty'slittlehand.Theremustbeagooddealofmoneyinit,thoughtKitty."HowIwishIcouldkeepit.ThenIcouldbuyMammaaredappleandsomanyotherthingssheneeds.”Butsheknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedafterthegentleman.Touchinghimonthearm,shesaid,"Please,Sir.Youdroppedyourpurse.”“Thankyou,dearJsaidthegentleman,takingthepurse.Thennoticinghowpoorlydressedshewas,hesaid,"Whydidyounotkeepthepurse,mychild?”"Becausethatwouldbestealing/5repliedKitty.But,shecontinuedhonestly,"beforeIthoughtImustgiveitbacktoyou,IdidwishIcouldkeepit,forthenIcouldbuyMammaaredapple.”注意.续写词数应为150左右；,请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Kittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedafterthemanLThestoreownersawthefamiliargirlrushingin,onedollarinhand.读后续写的故事比较简单，本文以任务在线索展开，讲述了一位叫Kitty的小姑娘，想给生病卧床的母亲买一个红苹果，但是又没有钱。一台你放学回家，Kitty看见一个男人掉了一个钱包，她捡起钱包，看见里面有厚厚一叠钱，虽然她非常想给母亲买苹果，但是她还是决定把钱包还给施主。这个故事的情节非常直白，没有弯弯绕绕，请情节推断而言是非常容易下笔的。.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“Kitty知道这样不对，所以她赶紧去追那个男人。”可知，第一段可描写Kitty追上男人把钱包还给男人，男人因为她的拾金不昧给了她一美元。②由第二段首句内容“店主看见那个熟悉的女孩，手里拿着一美元冲了进来”可知，第二段可描写店主免费给了Kitty一个苹果，Kitty非常高兴，回家把苹果和一美元给了母亲。.续写线索：追上男人——还给男人钱包——男人给Kitty一美元——Kitty买苹果——店主免费给苹果——Kitty很高兴，把苹果和钱拿回家——妈妈表扬她。Plots:^Paral：iKittyknewthiswouldnotberight,soshehurriedaftertheman.Para1:Kitty归还钱包（动作、语言、表情）B.失主感动，问明原由，给予回报。C.Kitty激动，达成梦想，感受诚实魅力。D.怀揣1美元，开心前往水果店。Para2:々Thestoreownersawthefamiliargirlrushingin,onedollarinhand.Para2:A.店主开心为Kitty挑最好的苹果。Kitty递钱，店主拒收，送上免费苹果。Kitty带上苹果和一美元回家，分享给妈妈。Kitty受到妈妈表扬，更坚定自己的选择。.可借鉴的语料库：【Para1一语料库】.拽了一下某人的衣袖：tugatone'ssleeve.喘了口气:gaspforbreath/air.仔细地上下打量：lookatsbupanddownwithcaution.低垂下头：droopone'sheaddown.目光盯着地面：withone'seyesfallingontheground.像匹快乐的小马驹一路朝…小跑：galloplikeahappyLittleponytowards...、.欣喜若狂地：inrapture/withecstasy[Para2—语料库]1.因为狂喜而感到脸在发烫：feelone'sfaceburningwithecstasy2,微笑地拒绝：refusesthsmilingly..用免费的最好的苹果奖励某人：rewardsbwiththebestapplefreeofcharge.向某人传达谢意：extendhergratefulnesstosb5,迫不及待地回家：couldn'twaittoheadforhome6・一・・・就・theinstant7.温柔地亲吻某人地额头：kisssbontheforeheadgently4.可借鉴的句式-翻译一下,拉了拉他的袖子，Kitty喘着气说，“先生，你掉了钱包。〃.很明显，那个男人根本就没料到这回事，他上下打量着这个衣着破烂的女孩儿，感到非常惊讶，“你为什么不留着这个钱包？”.“我确实希望我可以留下它，这样的话我就可以给妈妈买一个红苹果。"Kitty低语，垂下头，目光盯着地面，“但是我知道这意味着偷窃。”4.听到这，男人打开钱包，抽出一张一美元的纸币，递给她说，“你那么诚实，应该得到这个。拿着它去给你妈妈买个大红苹果吧！”.手里拿着一美元，Kitty像匹快乐的小马驹一路向着水果店跑去..他选了个最大、最圆、最红的苹果递给Kitty..收下苹果，Kitty因为狂喜而感觉脸在发烫。当她把一美元递给店主时，他微笑着拒绝了，”这个苹果奖给诚实的小姑娘。”.Kitty开心极了，她向店主传达了自己的谢意后，迫不及待地朝家跑去。.一到家，她就将整件事骄傲地讲给了妈妈听。妈妈温柔地吻了吻她地额头，表扬她说，“亲爱的，你做得对。上帝总是保佑那些诚实和值得信赖的人！”范文Kittyknewthiswouldnotbesoshehurriedaftertheman.Tuggingathissleeve,Kittygaspedforbreath,“Sir,youdroppedyourwallet."Evidently,themandidn'texpectsuchanoccasion,andhelookedatthepoorly-dressedgirl,feelingrathersurprised,“Whydidn'tyoukeepit,mykid?”"IdowishIcouldsothatIcouldbuymyMumaredapple/5Kittymurmuredunderherbreath,droopedherheaddownandgluedhereyestotheground,"butIknowitmeansstealing."Hearingthis,themanopenedhiswallet,pulledoutaone-dollarbillandhandedittoKitty,“Sohonestareyouthatyoudeservethis.GoandgetyourMumabigredapple."Withthedollarinhand,Kittygallopedlikealittleponytowardsthefruitstore.Thestores〃wthefamiliar史irlrushin史in,onedollarinhand.Hequicklyselectedthebiggest,roundestandreddestappleandhandedittoKitty.Takingtheapple,Kittyfeltherfaceburningwithecstasy.Whenshegaveonedollartohim,herefusedsmilingly,"Thisappleisrewardedtothehonestgirlfreeofcharge/5Overwhelmedwithjoy,Kittyextendedhergratitudetotheownerandcouldn