读后续写练习指导-2023届高考英语二轮复习写作专项

读后续写练习指导读后续写材料：Iwasasinglemotherinmy20swholivedclownandoutwithmydaughterPeggyinasmallapartment,strugglinghardtomakeourneedsmeet.Oneday,Iheadedtothedowntownforaninterview.Isatclowninthestreetcar,andthereagainsttheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrolls,amongwhichtherewasanamecarved.Onimpulse（冲动）1determinedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellatoprotectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonehookforthename.Ifounditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenaladyanswered."Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement,"liwasmyumbrellawhichhadbeenstolenayearago."SoappealingwasherpleasurethatIforgotIwaslookingforajobandwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shetooktheumbrella,withtearyeyes,explainingwithchokedvoicethattheumbrellawasgivenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找回）thisspecialpossessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherrewardwouldhavespoiledsomething,soIrefusedherofferandleft.Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icanonlyobtaintemporaryemployment,forasmallsalary.Whatwasworse,IhadjustlostmylastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollarsleft.Unlessamiraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,foodlessandjobless.Ihadprayedsteadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeennoanswerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingandchildrenshoutinginthebitterduskoftheevening.ButthereshouldbenoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogifts,noremembrancewhatsoever.Thinkingofthis,Icouldn'tcontrolmytearsonmywayfrontthestreetcartohome,butImanagedasmilesoIcouldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrewherselfinmyarms,screamingjoyouslyanddemandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.ThereIstood,frozen,overwhelmedbymisery.注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；Paragraph1:Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyrushedtoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.Paragraph2:Suddenly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes..【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，上文讲述了单亲妈妈带着女儿艰苦生活去市区寻找工作，发现了一把精致的雨伞，决定寻找雨伞的主人，找到主人后，拒绝雨伞主人的答谢。后来妈妈圣诞节前失业，雪上加霜，穷途末路，伤心绝望，而女儿满心欢喜地期待圣诞礼物，妈妈却不知所措……【情节】续写部分分为两段：第一段开头是：突然，门铃响了，Peggy跑去开门，说这一定是圣诞老人。所以后文应该是讲述母女俩收到包裹的事情，包裹是给作者的，作者感到很惊喜。第二段开头是：突然，一个包裹上的一张纸条引起了我的注意。本段应该写作者知道了寄包裹的人就是之前归还雨伞的主人，在那个寒冷的圣诞节作者因为她的举动感到异常温暖。【语料库】greetsbheartily：由衷地问候某人can'thelpclappingone'shands：情不自禁地拍起手来inrapture/withecstasy/withmerriment/withsheerexhilaration：欣喜若狂beoccupiedwithloadsof…：满是大量的…inaconfused/puzzledtone/voice：用疑惑的语调/声音belostinadeepthought：陷入沉思holdthenotetightly：紧紧握着纸条onthevergeoftears：快哭了withacurrentofwarmthspreadingovermybody：一股暖流传遍全身afreezingcold/bone-chillyChristmas：在寒冷/刺骨的圣诞节myheartwasbrimmedwithappreciation:我的心充满了感激PraytoGod/Godheardmybenediction：向上帝祈祷/上帝听到了我的祈祷asurgeofinnerpeacecamefloodingmeinwaves：一股内心的平静涌上来淹没了我fuelsbwithgreathope：使某人充满希望范文Paragraph1:Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyrushedtoanswerit,callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.Iheardnman>reetPegayheartily,tellingherthattherewereseveralChristmaspackagesandthenhandthemtoPegHV,whocouldn'thelpclappingherhardsinraptureatthenews.Apparently,hewasadeliveryman,hisarmsoccupiedwithloadsofparcels.Isaidinaconfusedtore,“Sir,itmustbeamistake”,buthecheckedmyname,confirmeditandleftimmediately.Iwaslostinadeepthought,wonderingwhowoulddelivermesuchunexpectedChristmasgifts,whilePeggysatdownorthefloorandbegantochecktheparcelswithsheerexhilaration.Paragraph2:Suddenly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.Comingintomvsightweresomebriefwords,savin日，“Thankyouforreturningmyumbrella,whichmeansalottome.MerryChristmas!”ItwasthatladywhosentmesurprisingRifts.Holdingthenotetightly,Iwasorthevergeoftears,withacurrentofwarmthspreadingovermvbodv.OnthisfreezingcoldChristmas,Ihadnomoneyforrent,withonly15dollarsleftinmypocket.Butmyheartwasbrimmedwith