托福写作教程市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件

托福写作教程第1页托福写作介绍综合写作形式:读+听+写内容:说明观点相互联络性分数权重:1/2时间要求:20分钟字数要求:150-225词独立写作形式:议论文内容:对议题发表看法分数权重:1/2时间要求:30分钟字数要求:最少300词第2页托福写作分数换算3028252220171410987654第3页应试写作三个层次写得出写得对写得炫第4页应试写作难点写作本身难度大,是驾驭一门语言最高境界,属于信息输出,是逻辑、语法、词汇、文化等综合统一第5页应试写作难点大脑一片空白基本无话可说绿叶对根情意Doyouagreeordisagreethatprogressisalwaysgood?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.第6页应试写作难点表示漏洞百出可读性相当差InChina,becauseitstradition,theoldismostraisedbytheirchildren.InChina,becauseofitstradition,theoldaremostlysupportedbytheirchildren.第7页应试写作难点中式英语泛滥考官哭笑不得Pollutionmakesuscannotbreathefreshair.Pollutionmakesusunabletobreathefreshair.第8页应试写作难点口语痕迹显著好似娓娓道来Isayit’sagoodthing.NowI’lltellyouastoryaboutmyself.第9页应试写作难点表示捉襟见肘词句鲜有亮点第10页越来越多刚才毕业大学生发觉找到好工作是越来越难。Moreandmorecollegegraduateswhohavejustgraduatedfromuniversityfindthatfindingagoodjobismoreandmoredifficult.第11页越来越多刚才毕业大学生发觉找到好工作是越来越难Agrowingnumberoffreshgraduatesfindthatobtainingadecentjobisincreasinglydifficult.第12页越来越多刚才毕业大学生发觉找到好工作是越来越难。Agrowingnumberoffreshgraduatesfindthatbeingemployedbyadecentemployerisincreasinglydifficult.第13页越来越多刚才毕业大学生发觉找到好工作是越来越难。Thedifficultyofbeingemployedbyadecentemployerisontherise,asthenumberoffreshgraduatesgrows.第14页托福独立写作评分标准5分:文章切题,阐说充分,文章有说服力;段落组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有很强逻辑性;段落内句与句连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活,成熟;用词确切,得体.文章中有个别语法拼写错误,但不影响内容表示.4分:文章切题,阐说基本充分,在一些细节上有缺点.段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,逻辑性强;句间连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活;用词基本得体.文章中有少许用词不妥和语法拼写错误.3分:文章切题,阐说尚可,展开不够.段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有逻辑性;句间连接基本顺畅;有部分句法错误;用词普通,有时不得体.词性区分和拼写等有若干错误.2分:文章切题,段落组织基本合理,有逻辑性,但只存在于语义层次上,语言表示上未能表示;句子框架结构基本成立,但有许多语法错误,句间联络不顺畅,往往是不善于使用逻辑连词,显得幼稚,生硬.词汇方面拼写错误多,常有用词不得表示象.1分:文章切题.阐说没有展开,只限于三言两语地回答下列问题;没有段落组织,很乱,长度很短,只有一段;句子排列有一定逻辑关系,能看出各句基本框架,但结构或语法错误较多;用词不得题,拼写错误多.0分:文章各方面都有严重错误,句子不像句子.总体印象是根本没有写作能力,英语水平太低,够不上1分标准,只能打最低分.第15页托福独立写作要求谋篇:观点突出结构合理谋段:论证充分言之有物谋句:正确多变关联谋词:准确多变

第16页托福独立写作题目分类对比选择型支持反对型自选叙述型问题分析型

第17页托福独立写作步骤审题内容？形式？构思头脑风暴Outline行文检验

ThefirstdraftofanythingisSHIT.----ByHemmingway第18页对比选择型Somepeoplethinkthattheautomobilehasimprovedmodernlife.Othersthinkthattheautomobilehascausedseriousproblems.Whatisyouropinion?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.第19页OutlineFor方便高效convenient&efficient丰富生活enrichlifestyle推进相关产业boostrelatedindustriesAgainst耗尽石油资源depletefuelresourcesworldwide空气污染airpollution交通阻塞和事故

trafficjamandaccidents第20页Structure结构Introduction总起段Body主体段Conclusion总结段第21页Introduction总起段Background背景Controversy(2different/oppositeideas)争议Statement观点Transition过渡第22页Background背景Beingacontroversialissue,thegreatpopularityofautomobilehasarousedagreatdealofattentioninsocietyduringthepastdecades.Nowadays,theissueonthegreatpopularityofautomobileishighlydebatable,andideasvaryfrompersontoperson.第23页Controversy争议Somepeoplethinkthatitisgood,otherpeoplethinkthatitisbad.Somepeoplethinkthattheautomobilehasimprovedmodernlife.Othersthinkthattheautomobilehascausedseriousproblems.第24页Controversy争议Somewouldclaimdailylifehasbeenupgradedduetoautomobile,whilesomeothersmaysuggestthatsevereproblemsaretheresults(whichare)broughtbyautomobile.Somewouldclaimdailylifehasbeenupgradedduetoautomobile,whiletheideathatsevereproblemsaretheresultsbroughtbyautomobileisstillheldbysomeothers.第25页Controversy争议Think→claim/suggest/believe/advocate/maintain/argue/supposeGood→beneficial/profitable/helpful/sound/decentBad→harmful/detrimental/hazardousAdvantage→merit/virtue/benefit/profit/proDisadvantage→demerit/drawback/flaw/shortcoming/con/cost第26页Statement观点简练明了concrete&conciseAsforme,Isidewiththeformer/latter.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ibelieveautomobileisindispensableineverydaylife.Inmyview,itismuchbettertohaveeverydaylifewithoutautomobile.第27页Transition过渡Inthefollowingparagraphs,Iwouldpresentsomereasons.Afewexplanations/exampleswouldbepresentedasfollows.Thusessentialandpersuasiveevidenceswouldbeprovidedinthesubsequentparagraphstoverifymyperspective.第28页Conclusion总结段Statement观点rewrite,notcopyAllinall/Toconclude/Inconclusion/Ingeneral/TosumupWhenalltheabove-mentionedfactorsaretakenintoconsideration,aconclusioncouldbedrawnthat…第29页Conclusion总结段Frommypointofview,itisadvisabletotakeadvantageofautomobilewhileeliminateitsdrawbacks.FromwhereIstand,automobilecannotbeanessentialfactorinpursuingaperfectlife.第30页Body主体段Tobeginwith/Firstly/FirstandforemostSecondly/Inaddition/MoreoverInthethirdplace/Furthermore/Lastbutnotleast第31页OutlineFor方便高效convenient&efficient丰富生活enrichlifestyle推进相关产业boostrelatedindustriesAgainst耗尽石油资源depletefuelresourcesworldwide空气污染airpollution交通阻塞和事故

trafficjamandaccidents第32页ForIntroductionTobeginwith,automobilemakessomeworkconvenientandefficient…Inaddition,automobileenricheslifestyle…Furthermore,automobileboostsrelatedindustries…让步段Conclusion第33页ForIntroductionTobeginwith,itisconvenientandefficienttotravelbyautomobile…Inaddition,lifestylecanbeenrichedviaautomobile…Furthermore,automobileboostsrelatedindustries…让步段Conclusion第34页方便高效convenient&efficientTobeginwith,itisconvenientandefficienttotravelbyautomobile.Forexample,fromdowntowntosuburb,bycar,itcostsafewhours.Otherwise,bybicycleoronfoot,nearlyonedayisneeded.Anywherearoundthecitycouldbereachedwithinoneday.Itistheautomobilethatbringsabouturbanization.第35页丰富生活enrichlifestyleInaddition,lifestylecanbeenrichedviaautomobile.Withautomobile,lifestylecouldbemorecolorfulandentertainingandliferadiusmaybeenlarged.Travelingwidenshorizonandvisualizeswhatislearntinbooks.Besides,shoppingenablesonetorelievethepressureofworkandstudy.Onlybyhisowncarcanonegoanywhereatanytime.第36页推进相关产业boostrelatedindustriesFurthermore,automobileboostsrelatedindustries.Nowitispossibletodeveloptourismandlogistics.Fastspeedsavestime,andlongdistanceisnolongerabarriertothetouristattractionsfaraway.Besides,freshfruitandvegetablecouldbedeliveredacrossthenationwithinafewdays,andtheexpressindustrymaybebooming.第37页让步段Althoughautomobilemaysometimesseemtohavesomedemerits,suchasleadingtodepletionoffuelresourcesworldwide,airpollutionandtrafficjamandaccidents,itsoverallprofitsfaroutweighitsdrawbacks.

第38页让步段Despitethefactthattherearestillsomeflawsexisting,suchasleadingtodepletionoffuelresourcesworldwide,airpollutionandtrafficjamandaccidents,automobileisprofitableonthewhole.第39页一边倒AgainstIntroductionTobeginwith,automobiledepletesfuelresourcesworldwide…Inaddition,automobileleadstoairpollution…Furthermore,automobileleadstotrafficjamandaccidents…让步段Conclusion第40页一边倒AgainstIntroductionTobeginwith,fuelresourcesworldwidearedepletedduetoautomobile…Inaddition,airpollutionresultsfromautomobile…Furthermore,trafficjamandaccidentsareproblemsbroughtbyautomobile…让步段Conclusion第41页耗尽石油资源depletefuelresourcesworldwideTobeginwith,fuelresourcesworldwidearedepletedduetoautomobile.Itisestimatedthatthegreatamountofcarsconsumemostfuel,andtheproportionkeepsexpanding.Humanbeingsareinthecrisisofoilshortage,whichmayposeapotentialthreattotheworldpeace,andtriggerconflictorevenwar.第42页空气污染airpollution

Inaddition,airpollutionresultsfromautomobile.Globalwarmingisaninternationalissue,andthelargenumberofcarbondioxide(whichis)emittedfromcarsacceleratesglobalwarming.Besides,sulfurdioxidecontributestoworseningofairquality,andthereforefreshairisnolongeravailable.Andacidrainstemmingfromsulfurdioxidedestroysplantsinthefield.第43页交通阻塞和事故

trafficjamandaccidents

Furthermore,trafficjamandaccidentsareproblemsbroughtbyautomobiles.Withtheever-increasingnumberofcars,citizenssuffertrafficjamgreatly.Inrushhour,bycar,itusuallycosts30minutestocoverthedistanceoffiveminutes’walk.Moreover,trafficaccidentsarefrequentlytheheadlinesofnewspaper.Itisnotuncommonthattrafficaccidentsdisablesomedriversandpedestrians,andevendeprivethemoftheirlives.第44页让步段Althoughautomobilemaysometimesseemtohavesomemerits,suchasconvenienceandefficiency,enrichinglifestyle,andboostingrelatedindustries,itsoveralldrawbacksfaroutweighitsprofits.

第45页让步段Despitethefactthattherearestillsomemeritsexisting,suchasbeing

convenientandefficient,enrichinglifestyle,andboostingrelatedindustries,automobileisdetrimentalonthewhole.第46页议论文论点论据论证第47页常见论证方法举例：形象化，生动化，易于了解比较：中国人强调绝对，好就是好，很好就是很好；西方人强调相对，任何东西要放在整体环境中看引用：itisreportedthat…,itissaidthat…,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…,itisrevealedbyofficialfigurethat…反证：从with这个角度不好想到，那么就从without入手第48页对比选择型Somepeoplesaythatcomputershavemadelifeeasierandmoreconvenient.Otherpeoplesaythatcomputershavemadelifemorecomplexandstressful.Whatisyouropinion?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.第49页支持反对型Doyouagreeordisagreethatprogressisalwaysgood?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.第50页Background背景Beingacontroversialissue,theevaluationofprogresshasarousedagreatdealofattentioninsocietyduringthepastdecades.Nowadays,theissueontheevaluationofprogressishighlydebatable,andideasvaryfrompersontoperson.第51页Controversy争议Somewouldclaimprogresscontributesgreatlytoeverydaylife;whiletheideathatprogresshasitsownflawsisstillheldbysomeothers.第52页OutlineAgainstInternetTransportationSearchinginformationFastfood第53页Thedramaticleapintele-communicationandtransportationtotallytransformstheworld.WithInternet,onecanhaveinstantcommunicationwithhisfriendsorworkmatesondifferentcontinents,andwatchliveNBAgamesathomeviasatellite.第54页Nevertheless,humanbeingssuffergreatlyfromtechnologicalinnovation.Thepaceoflifehasbeenaccelerated,anditseemseverycitizen,regardlessofastudent,anemployeeoraboss,isundergreatpressure.第55页Someadvanceintechnologyisphysicallydetrimental,suchascomputerandInternet.Longtimeexposurebeforescreenwillleadtonearsightedness.Inaddition,radiationcausesskinproblem,andonemayeasilyleadasedentarylifeduetoInternet.第56页Advancedtransportationshortensthedistanceandresultsinglobalization.However,theenvironmentisseriouslypollutedbecauseofautomobilesandairplanes,andfreshairandcleanwaterarenolongeravailable.Humanbeingscannotreturntotheerawhencarriages,whichdidnotgeneratecarbondioxideandsulfurdioxide,werethemainvehicle.第57页Sotheenvironmentalpollutionandthedepletionofnaturalresourcesareinevitable.Gradually,theecosystemwillbeimbalancedandevenbreakdown.Finally,mankindcannotsurviveonthisplanet.第58页Someprivacyislostintheprocessofadvanceofsearchinginformation.ThesearchcapabilityissopowerfulonInternetthatitcostsmerelyafewsecondstoidentifytheneededinformation.Bycontrast,atleastafewhoursarespentbyhandwork.第59页Meanwhile,someprivateinformationcannolongerbekeptconfidential.Andtheeffortless“copyandpaste”operationacceleratesthespreadofinformation.Names,ages,IDcardnumbers,addresses,andphonenumberscouldbeeasilyobtainedfromInternet.第60页ItisnotuncommonthatonewillreceivemuchspamafterregisteringinawebsiteandleavingE-mailaddress,andthesamesituationhappenswhenmobilephonenumbersaregivenawayaccidentally,allofwhichwillcausesometroubleduetosomeevilpurposes.第61页Itisconvenientandefficienttohavefastfood.Incontrast,traditionalfoodistime-consumingandusuallycostsseveralhourstohaveonemeal.Inthecurrentfast-pacesociety,fastfoodsolvestheproblemwell.Onecanfinishamealwithin10-20minutes,savingmuchtimeandenergy.第62页However,fastfoodisphysicallydetrimental.Lackingvitaminandminerals,fastfoodalwayscontainsmuchfatandcalories.Consequently,mostoverweightproblemisduetoexcessiveintakeoffastfood,andlittlenutritionandunbalanceddietendangerhealth.第63页支持反对型Ithasrecentlybeenannouncedthatalargeshoppingcentermaybebuiltinyourneighborhood.Doyousupportoropposethisplan?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyouranswer.第64页OutlineFor就业机会jobopportunities休闲娱乐recreation丰厚收入largeincomeandrevenueAgainst噪音污染noisepollution不稳定原因socialunstability交通阻塞

trafficjam

第65页支持反对型Insomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.Doyouthinkthisisagoodidea?Supportyouropinionbyusingspecificreasonsanddetails.第66页OutlineFor积累经验accumulateexperience学会技能learnskills培养责任感developresponsibilityAgainst浪费时间timeconsuming分散注意力distractattention误入歧途maygoastray

第67页自选叙述型Agift(suchasacamera,asoccerball,orananimal)cancontributetoachild’sdevelopment.Whatgiftwouldyougivetohelpachilddevelop?Why?Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyourchoice.第68页Outline学习知识acquireknowledge培养责任感developresponsibility解除寂寞relieveloneliness

第69页Introduction总起段Itisbelievedthatintheformativeyearsofchildren,agiftisverybeneficial.However,preferencesvaryfrompersontoperson.Frommyview,Iwouldpickapet.Andafewreasonswouldbepresentedasfollows.第70页学习知识acquireknowledgeChildrencanacquireknowledgeviapetraising.Usually,whatisleantintextbooksissuperficialandchildrencannothaveavividimpressionontheinformation.Playingwithpetsenableschildrentoknowmoreaboutanimalsandthenature,andmaystimulatetheirinterestinbiology.Itislikelythattheywilldecidetohavefurthereducationorresearchintherelateddomain.第71页培养责任感developresponsibility

Petraisingdevelopsresponsibility.Mostchildrenfromsingle-childfamiliesarealittlespoiledbecausetheirparentslovetheminacrazyandblindway.Childrenover-protectedbyparentsmayhaveacarefreelife,andcanobtainwhatevertheydemandwithouteffort,suchaspocketmoney,toysanddigitalproducts.However,theyhavenoideaonwhatresponsibilityis.Therefore,childrenareencouragedtoraisepettofulfilltheirduty,whichisofvitalimportancewhentheybecomeparentsinthefuture.第72页解除寂寞relievelonelinessLonelinesscanberelievedbykeepingpet.ItisnotuncommonthatinChina,duetoitsone-childpolicy,achildalwaysfeelslonelyathome,especiallyduringvacations,ashedoesnothaveanysiblings.Notsurprisingly,hewouldresorttoInternet,playingon-linegamesandleadingasedentarylifealldaytokillthetime.Withapet,thesituationdiffersdramatically.Hecanplaywiththepet,takeawalk,andissupposedtofeedthepet.Timespentontheseactivitiesismuchmoreworthwhileandmeaningfulthanonidling.第73页Conclusion总结段Inconclusion,Iwouldregardpetasthebestgifttoachildforhisgrowth.Fewchildrencanresistlovingapet.第74页自选叙述型Ifyoucouldmakeoneimportantchangeinaschoolthatyouattended,whatchangewouldyoumake?Usereasonsandspecificexamplestosupportyouranswer.第75页问题分析型Ingeneral,peoplearelivinglongernow.Discussthecausesofthisphenomenon.Usespecificreasonsanddetailstodevelopyouressay.第76页Outline丰富营养richnutrition先进医疗advancedmedicine体育锻炼physicaltraining

第77页Introduction总起段Background背景Statement观点第78页Background背景Accordingtoarecentsurvey,theaveragelifespanextendsrapidly,andthisissuehasarousedgreatpublicattention.Itisreportedthatlongevityprevailsamongtheelderly,whichattractsgreatpublicconcern.第79页Statement观点Itisthegoalofthisessaytoexploresomepossiblecausestotheproblem/phenomenon.第80页Conclusion总结段Statement观点rewrite,notcopyAllinall/Toconclude/Inconclusion/Ingeneral/Tosumup,manyfactorscontributetothedramaticexpansionoflifespan.Itisestimatedthatlongerlifeisnotadreamaslongasmedicinekeepsdeveloping,andtheimportanceofhealthishighlyemphasized.第81页丰富营养richnutritionLongevitypartlycomesfromrichnutrition.Itiswidelyacceptedthatnutritionplaysanessentialroleinmaintaininghealthy.Inthepast,starvationwasthemainthreattolife,andadequatefoodwasthecommonwish,sonutritionwasalwaysignored.Currently,itisknownvitamin,minerals,proteinandfiberallhavetheircontributiontohealthydietandlongevity.Theseingredientsstrengthenthefigure,andhelpthelong-termoperationofsomeorgans.第82页先进医疗advancedmedicineTheadvanceofmedicineresultsinlongerlifespan.Manybreakthroughsoverthedecadesarenowsimplytakenforgranted,andhavepreventedmanydiseaseswhich,inbygonedays,ledtoearlydeaths,suchassmallpox.Eventhoughnocertaincurehasyetbeendiscoveredforheartattackandcancer,thelatesttechnologiesusedinvarioustreatmentsandoperationsaswellastheuseofnewmedicationshavegreatlyincreasedthechancesofsurvivalforpatients.Doctorsareabletocontrolthespreadofvirusesorcells,preventingtheworseningofdisease.第83页体育锻炼physicaltraining

Physicaltrainingcannotbeignoredaswell.Inearlydays,whenthelivingstandardwaslow,everyonewasbusyworkingtomakealiving,andnorecreationwasavailableatthattime.Nowadays,technologydevelopssodramaticallythatworkissimplifiedandburdenisrelived.Thus,onehashisfreetimetodophysicaltraining.Itissaidthereisapositivelinkbetweenamountofexerciseandlifespan.Thereisnodoubtthoseelderlywhodoexerciseseverydayinearlymorningusuallyhavelongerlifespan.第84页问题分析型Manystudentshavetolivewithroommateswhilegoingtoschooloruniversity.Whataresomeoftheimportantqualitiesofagoodroommate?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestoexplainwhythesequalitiesareimportant.第85页托福写作遣词用句常见错误中式英语主谓不一致句子不完整句子成份多出时态语态使用错误词性了解错误单词使用错误倒装和平行结构从句使用错误错误大杂烩第86页中式英语Environmentalpollutionhurtspeople’shealth.Environmentalpollutionisphysicallyharmful/detrimental.第87页中式英语Ifhavenoelectricity,wecan’tdoanything.Wecandonothingwithoutpower.第88页中式英语Ihaveawish,Iwishworldpeace,nowars,thisalsoisthewishofpeopleinthewholeworld.Iwishworldpeace,withoutwars,whichisthewishofpeopleworldwideaswell.Iwishworldpeace,withoutwars,andthisisthewishofpeopleworldwideaswell.第89页中式英语Non-stopstudyingknowledgeisveryimportant.Itisveryimportanttokeepacquiringknowledge.Itisofvitalimportancetokeepacquiringknowledge.第90页中式英语Wemusttakeactivesolutionstocontrolenvironmentalpollution.Activesolutionsshouldbetakentocontrolenvironmentalpollution.第91页中式英语Ifyoudonotpayattentiontoenvironmentalproblems,youmustsufferhugelosssoonerorlater.Ifwedonotpayattentiontoenvironmentalproblems,wemustsufferhugelosssoonerorlater.Ifenvironmentalproblemsarenotgivenenoughattention,hugelossisinevitable.第92页中式英语Gamestakeuptoomuchtimeofstudents,andignorelearning,sportsandevenfamily.Studentsspendtoomuchtimeongames,andignorelearning,sportsandevenfamily.第93页中式英语Pollutionmakesuscannotbreathefreshair.Pollutionmakesusunabletobreathefreshair.Pollutiondisablesustobreathefreshair.Pollutionpreventsusfrombreathingfreshair.第94页中式英语Pleasegivemeareplyifyouareconvenient.Pleasegivemeareplyifitisconvenientforyou.Pleasegivemeareplyifyouarefree.第95页中式英语E-mailmakespeopleeasierandquickertoknoweachother.E-mailmakesiteasierandquickerforpeopletoknoweachother.第96页中式英语Internetiseasiertosearchinformationthanlibrary.ItiseasiertosearchinformationonInternetthanlibrary.ItiseasiertosearchinformationonInternetthanitisinlibrary.ItiseasiertosearchinformationonInternetthaninlibrary.第97页中式英语Thepresentsituationbecomesseriousandserious.Thepresentsituationbecomesmoreandmoreserious.第98页中式英语Onewillbedangerousifoneriskshelpingtheadventureroutwhenthesituationisunclear.Itwillbedangerousifoneriskshelpingtheadventureroutwhenthesituationisunclear.Onewillbeendangered/indangerifoneriskshelpingtheadventureroutwhenthesituationisunclear.第99页中式英语Theoldareinevitabletohavegenerationgapwiththeirchildren.Itisinevitablefortheoldtohavegenerationgapwiththeirchildren.第100页中式英语Overseasstudymakesstudents’eyeswider.Overseasstudywidens/broadensstudents’vision/horizon.第101页中式英语MyMP3cannotlisteneventhoughithasmuchelectricity.MyMP3cannotworkeventhoughitisfullycharged.第102页中式英语Peoplenowhaveconditiontoeatgoodthings.Itisaffordabletohaveanutritionaldietnow.第103页中式英语Thereasonsforthechangehave5points.5reasonsleadto/bringabout/resultinthechange.第104页主谓不一致MemorizingasmanynewwordsaspossiblearethewishofeveryEnglishlearner.MemorizingasmanynewwordsaspossibleisthewishofeveryEnglishlearner.第105页主谓不一致Smoking,coupledwith/aswellasalcohol,arephysicallydetrimental.Smoking,coupledwith/aswellasalcohol,isphysicallydetrimental.Smokingandalcoholarephysicallydetrimental.第106页主谓不一致Howtodealwiththeseproblemsareaseriouschallengeforthegovernment.Howtodealwiththeseproblemsisaseriouschallengeforthegovernment.第107页主谓不一致AsignificantnumberofyoungpeopleisthecrazyfansofJayChow.AsignificantnumberofyoungpeoplearethecrazyfansofJayChow.第108页主谓不一致Someoneevensuggestthatweshouldweartraditionalclotheseverydayinordertoremindusofthecultureandhistory.Someoneevensuggeststhatweshouldweartraditionalclotheseverydayinordertoremindusofthecultureandhistory.第109页主谓不一致Theproblemswhicharebroughtaboutbyraisingpetsishardtosolve.Theproblems,whicharebroughtaboutbyraisingpets,arehardtosolve.第110页主谓不一致Howyoureacttotheincidentrevealwhatsideyoustandon.Howyoureacttotheincidentrevealswhatsideyoustandon.第111页主谓不一致Television,alongwithothermeansofcommunication,helpustokeepinformedaboutthelatestnews.Television,alongwithothermeansofcommunication,helpsustokeepinformedaboutthelatestnews.第112页主谓不一致Oneofthemostpressingproblemhumanbeingsfacearetheoldageboom.Oneofthemostpressingproblemshumanbeingsfaceistheoldageboom.第113页主谓不一致Airpollution,whichleadtosomediseases,isveryserious.Airpollution,whichleadstosomediseases,isveryserious.第114页句子不完整Oneofthemanybenefitsofoverseastravelinglearningtocommunicatewithforeigners.Oneofthemanybenefitsofoverseastravelingislearningtocommunicatewithforeigners.第115页句子不完整Itiseasyforpeoplewhooverweighttogetheartattack.Itiseasyforpeoplewhoareoverweighttogetheartattack.Itiseasyfortheoverweighttogetheartattack.第116页句子不完整Themainpointofmyessayisthatpersonalsuccessonlycomesfrom.Themainpointofmyessayisthatpersonalsuccessonlycomesfromhonestyandhardwork.第117页句子不完整Iwilldiscussindetailinthefollowingparagraphs.Iwilldiscusstheissueindetailinthefollowingparagraphs.第118页句子不完整Myroommateissotroublesome,Icanhardlyputupwithhimanymore.MyroommateissotroublesomethatIcanhardlyputupwithhimanymore.Myroommateissotroublesome,andIcanhardlyputupwithhimanymore.第119页句子不完整Smoking,drinkingarenotallowedinschool.Smokinganddrinkingarenotallowedinschool.Smokingandalcoholarenotallowedinschool.第120页句子不完整ItisunclearRedBullcanhelpreviveenergy.ItisunclearwhetherRedBullcanhelpreviveenergy.第121页句子不完整Theoutputofismorethan.Theoutputofismorethantheoutputof.Theoutputofismorethanthatof.第122页句子不完整Itisadvertisementmakessomesportsbrandsfamousworldwide,suchasNikeandAdidas.Itisadvertisementthatmakessomesportsbrandsfamousworldwide,suchasNikeandAdidas.第123页句子不完整StudentsspendtoomuchtimeonTV,ignoretheirstudies.StudentsspendtoomuchtimeonTV,andignoretheirstudies.StudentsspendtoomuchtimeonTV,ignoringtheirstudies.第124页句子不完整Firstofall,foreigncountries,whichcreateawonderfullanguageatmosphereforstudents.Firstofall,foreigncountriescreateawonderfullanguageatmosphereforstudents.第125页句子成份多出InChinahasmorethan10millionpeoplewatch《PrisonBreak》.InChina,morethan10millionpeoplewatch《PrisonBreak》.InChina,morethan10millionviewerswatchPrisonBreak.第126页句子成份多出Humanraceneedwaterandairtosurviveineveryday.Humanraceneedwaterandairtosurviveeve