读后续写写作指导：送老人去养老院-2023届高考英语一轮复习写作备考

读后续写写作指导：送老人去养老院阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Twentyyearsago,Idroveataxi.Once,Iwascalledat3a.m.topicksomeoneup.WhenIarrived,thebuildingwascompletelydarkexceptforonelightinawindow.Often,manydriverswouldjusthonk（按喇叭）onceortwice,waitashortminute,thendriveaway.Butunlessarealdanger,Ialwayswenttothedoortofindthepassenger.Itmightbesomeonewhoneededmyassistance.WouldInotwantadrivertodothesameifmymotherorfatherhadcalledforataxi?SoIwalkedtothedoorandknocked."Justaminute,“answeredaweakandelderlyvoice.Icouldhearthesoundofsomethingbeingdraggedacrossthefloor.A代eralongpause,thedooropened.Asmallwomaninher80sstoodbeforeme.Byhersidewasasmallsuitcase.“Wouldyoucarrymybagouttothecar?”shesaid."I'dlikeafewmomentsalone.Then；ifyoucouldcomebackandhelpme?I'mnotverystrong//Itookthesuitcasetothecab,thenreturnedtoassistthewoman.Shetookmyarm,andwewalkedslowlytowardthecab.Shekeptthankingmeformykindness."It'snothing/'Itoldher.justtrytotreatmypassengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated.0〃Oh,you'resuchagoodboy,“shesaid.Whenwegotinthetaxi,shegavemeanaddress.Thensheasked,“Couldyoudrivethroughthedowntown?"〃It'snottheshortestway,“Ianswered.don'tmind,“shesaid,'Tminnohurry.I'monmywaytothenursinghome."Isawhereyesshiningwithtears."Idon'thaveanyfamilyleft,“shecontinued."ThedoctorsaysIamtoooldtolivealone/1Iquietlyturnedoffthemeter（计程器）."Whatroaddoyouwantmetotake?”Iasked."First,takemetoSunriseStreet.That'swhereIwasborn.”注意：.续写词数应为150词左右;.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Forhours；wedrovethroughthecity.〃HowmuchdoIoweyou?”sheasked,reachingforherpurse.写作指导:线索：时间:3a.m.人物（背景）：Idroveataxi.Asmallwomaninher80sstoodbeforeme.Z/Idon'thaveanyfamilyleft/7shecontinued.事件:Iquietlyturnedoffthemeter（计程器）.主题：WouldInotwantadrivertodothesameifmymotherorfatherhadcalledforataxi?Shekeptthankingmeformykindness.Z/IjusttrytotreatmypassengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated//情节推测：Forhours,wedrovethroughthecity..她说话（照应人物背景线索：don'thaveanyfamilyleft）.我聆听.到地方“HowmuchdoIoweyou?”sheasked,reachingforherpurse..我回答：不收费（照应事件线索:Iquietlyturnedoffthemeter）.她反响：由惊奇到感激.我反响:照应线索主题（IjusttrytotreatmypassengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated.）Forhours,wedrovethroughthecity..她的表达（回忆过去）和她的神情初稿：Suddenly,shesaid,“ThisistheplacewhereIfirstmyhusband.我们提前预估，本文的对话会很多，如果续写都这样写，不是太好，可以用转述方式润色：Suddenly,sheaskedmetopullupnearapeacefulsquare,where,asshetoldmeinagentlevoice,shefirstmetherhusband.Shesatonthebackseatstill,gazingatthesquarethroughamistoftearsforamoment,andthensignaledmetomoveon.技术手段：多角度丰富声音:inagentlevoice眼睛：gazingatthesquarethroughamistoftearsforamoment手:andthensignaledmetomoveon动作:satonthebackseatstill.我的反响：聆听初稿：Alltheway,Ijustlistenedattentively.润色：Alltheway,IjustlistenedattentivelyasifIwasaloyalaudiencetomymotherwhousedtocalluphergoodolddays.技术手段：加上asif…比喻手法。这种手法是比拟好的，我记得有一次我女儿（小学三年级）给我说，我发现只要用比喻，作文就会被老师表扬。同时也是为主题铺垫。.到达目的地初稿:Twohourslater,wearrivedatthegateofthenursinghomeatdawn.润色：技术手段：Afterwhatseemed...Afterwhatseemedlikeamagicaljourneybacktothepast,weeventuallyarrivedatthegateofthenursinghomeatdawn.“HowmuchdoIoweyou?”sheasked,reachingforherpurse..我的回答：不收费初稿：“Nothing,“Isaid,pointingatthemeter.润色：“Nothing,“Isaidquickly,shruggingwithalightlaugh,winkingatthemeter.技术手段：副词：quickly肩膀:shrugging笑:withalightlaugh眼睛：winkingatthemeter.她的反响：由惊奇到感激初稿:Shewasverysurprisedandthenmoved.Shesaid,Oh,you'resuchagoodboy!Thankyou.”润色：Shelookedatmewithwide-openeyes.Thenhershockslowlygavewaytogratefulunderstanding.〃Oh,you'resuchagoodboy!Thankyou."Sheheldmyhandtightly.技术手段：眼睛:lookedatmewithwide-openeyes情感变化：hershockslowlygavewaytogratefulunderstanding手:heldmyhandtightly.我的反响：主题“IjusttrytotreatyouthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated/'Isaidsoftly.润色：Z/IjusttrytotreatyouthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated/'Irespondedsoftly.ThenIbentoverandgaveherahug.Asuddenwarmthandhappinesshitmelikeagentlebreezewipingmyface.AndIknewitwasthegraceofkindness.技术手段：动作：bentoverandgaveherahug心情：Asuddenwarmthandhappinesshitmelikeagentlebreezewipingmyface.修辞:比喻Iknewitwasthegraceofkindness.完整：Forhours,wedrovethroughthecity.Suddenly,sheaskedmetopullupnearapeacefulsquare,where,asshetoldmeinagentlevoice,shefirstmetherhusband.Shesatonthebackseatstill,gazingatthesquarethroughamistoftearsforamoment,andthensignaledmetomoveon.Alltheway,IjustlistenedattentivelyasifIwasaloyalaudiencetomymotherwhousedtocalluphergoodolddays.Afterwhatseemedlikeamagicaljourneybacktothepast,weeventuallyarrivedatthegateofthenursinghomeatdawn.“HowmuchdoIoweyou?”sheasked,reachingforherpurse.“Nothing,“Isaidquickly,shruggingwithalightlaugh,winkingatthemeter.Shelookedatmewithwide-openeyes.Thenhershockslowlygavewaytogratefulunderstanding.〃Oh,you'resuch