新高考英语作文高分突破读后续写真题分析与备考建议课件

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OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.真题分析：情节OneweekendinJuly,Jane2

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.真题分析：情节Janeroseatthebreakof3

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.真题分析：情节expositionOneweekendinJuly,Jane4OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.真题分析：情节incitingincidentOneweekendinJuly,Jane5OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.真题分析：情节risingactionOneweekendinJuly,Jane6“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.真题分析：情节risingaction“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”真题分析：7Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.真题分析：情节risingactionJaneroseatthebreakofday,8Para1：

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Para2：

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.真题分析：情节climaxfallingaction(resolution)denouementPara1：Butnomorehelicopter91.Whatcentralconflictsdrivetheplot?2.Aretheyinternal(withinacharacter)orexternal(betweencharacters;betweenacharacteroraforce)?3.Howaretheconflictsresolved?Centralconflict:quarrelRelatedconflict:getlost真题分析：情节1.Whatcentralconflictsdriv10

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbed

toahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.真题分析：语言OneweekendinJuly,Jane11

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbed

toahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.真题分析：语言时空背景(setting)事件演进(events)人物心理(stateofmind)OneweekendinJuly,Jane12“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.真题分析：语言“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”真题分析：13Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.真题分析：语言Janeroseatthebreakofday,14档次描述第五档（21－25）－与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段开头语衔接合理。－内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。－所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档（16－20）－与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段开头语衔接较为合理。－内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。－所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。－比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。真题分析：评分标准档次描述第五档－与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段开头语衔接合15档次描述第五档（21－25）－与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段开头语衔接合理。－内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。－所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档（16－20）－与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段开头语衔接较为合理。－内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。－所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。－比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。真题分析：评分标准思维（严密连贯）内容（丰富合理）语言（准确生动）档次描述第五档－与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段开头语衔接合16文体记叙文体。重在讲述故事，应避免轻易议论。

结构分两段，共150词左右，两段词数最好能基本平衡，一般应避免一段过长，一段过短的情况。

内容构思每段开头语已经限制了条件和情景，因此每一段的故事发展逻辑应与短文和每段开头语相符。构思的过程中不要忘记incitingincident引起的矛盾冲突conflict，故事的结局要围绕矛盾冲突的解决来写。一般来说，故事的内容以Jane在林中历尽曲折、最终与Tom相见、两人和好为宜，以形成一个完整的故事环。真题分析：答题建议文体记叙文体。重在讲述故事，应避免轻易议论。结构分两段，共17Whatcentralconflictsdrivetheplot?

Howaretheconflictsresolved?真题分析：情节2.Relatedconflict:getlost1.Centralconflict:quarrel1.Ending:getbacktogether2.Ending:meeteachotherWhatcentralconflictsdrivet18语言时态上，短文叙述发生在过去的一件事情，采用过去时。应注意多使用注重细节的描绘性、描述性的语言。要恰当使用语句连接成分，但需要注意的是，能够完成语句连接任务的并不只有连接词和连接性副词及词组，还包括其他许多手段，如代词(代名词、代动词)、某些修辞手法(如重复、平行结构等)、甚至句式变换等。续写的文气应与开头语相接。

形式

最好能紧接每段开头语续写，使开头语与续写部分形成一个完整的段落，如果是在开头语行下方开始续写，实际上就是另外一段了。书写应整齐工整。整洁美观的卷面永远都是赏心悦目的。不要忘记给所用的关键词划上底线。10个关键词不必全部用到，但最好能超过5个。

真题分析：答题建议语言时态上，短文叙述发生在过去的一件事情，采用过去时。应注意19

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：高分作文Butnomorehelicoptersca20

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

And,asluckwouldhaveit,ahelicopterjustcameby!Janeyelledandskipped,wavingheryellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopternoticedherandlanded.WhatastoundedhermostwasthatitwasTomwhosatinthehelicopter!OutrushedTom.AhugesmilespreadacrossJane’sfaceandthecouplehuggedtightlyforalongtime.ItwasthenarrowescapethatmadeJaneperceivethatlovewaspriceless.Overthenextyears,achangecameoverthecouple.Reasoneddiscussionreplacedfierceargumentsandpolitenessreplacedcontradiction.Theytreasuredthelifeandlovemore.真题分析：高分作文ItwasdaybreakwhenJane21总体：故事内容合理，逻辑性强，语言面貌相当不错，较好地完成了写作任务。得分：23情节：合理逻辑性：与短文融洽度高;与所提供各段开头语衔接合理。语句间连接有效。语言：行为描述，心理描写；总体说明，细节描绘。词汇与语法结构丰富、准确，有不少具有较强表现力的细节描述性语言。关键词：7个真题分析：习作点评总体：故事内容合理，逻辑性强，语言面貌相当不错，较好地完成了22Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,

exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：高分作文(语言)丰富的心理描写Butnomorehelicopterscamea23ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.And,asluckwouldhaveit,ahelicopterjustcameby!Janeyelledandskipped,wavingheryellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,

thehelicopternoticedherandlanded.WhatastoundedhermostwasthatitwasTomwhosatinthehelicopter!OutrushedTom.AhugesmilespreadacrossJane’sfaceandthecouplehuggedtightlyforalongtime.ItwasthenarrowescapethatmadeJaneperceivethatlovewaspriceless.Overthenextyears,achangecameoverthecouple.Reasoneddiscussionreplacedfierceargumentsandpolitenessreplacedcontradiction.Theytreasuredthelifeandlovemore.真题分析：高分作文(语言)多样的句式ItwasdaybreakwhenJane24ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.And,asluckwouldhaveit,ahelicopterjustcameby!Janeyelledandskipped,wavingheryellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,

thehelicopternoticedherandlanded.WhatastoundedhermostwasthatitwasTomwhosatinthehelicopter!OutrushedTom.AhugesmilespreadacrossJane’sfaceandthecouplehuggedtightlyforalongtime.ItwasthenarrowescapethatmadeJaneperceivethatlovewaspriceless.Overthenextyears,achangecameoverthecouple.Reasoneddiscussionreplacedfierceargumentsandpolitenessreplacedcontradiction.Theytreasuredthelifeandlovemore.真题分析：高分作文(语言)生动的描绘ItwasdaybreakwhenJane25Nomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Meanwhile,shedidn’tfindanyhelicoptercoming.AsfarasJanewasconcerned,shefeltverysad.Asaresultofshecouldnotfindthelake,shewasstillintheforest.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.What’smore,shedidn’thaveanythingtoeat.Inthatcase,sheatesomeberriesanddranksomewaterinthestream.Therefore,sheflaggedheryellowblouse.Asamatteroffact,shethoughtofTomandfeltsad.Tosumup,shehadahardtimeintheforest.Lastbutnotleast,Janewassaved.真题分析：衔接连贯内在逻辑，是深层结构，不是表层结构。Nomorehelicopterscame26Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：衔接连贯Butnomorehelicopterscamea27Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：衔接连贯Butnomorehelicopterscamea28Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：衔接连贯Butnomorehelicopterscamea29Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,

exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：衔接连贯衔接上文Butnomorehelicopterscamea30Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,

exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：衔接连贯Butnomorehelicopterscamea31Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,

exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：衔接连贯Butnomorehelicopterscamea32Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,

exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：衔接连贯Butnomorehelicopterscamea33Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,

exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：衔接连贯Butnomorehelicopterscamea34Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,

exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.Allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn’thelpcrying,

“Hadn’tIquarreledwithTom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,Iwouldn’tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying.”Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.真题分析：衔接连贯词汇与逻辑的衔接手段Butnomorehelicopterscamea35备考建议理解叙事要素，学会构思。依据叙事要素，积累语言。创设合理情节，模仿提升。备考建议理解叙事要素，学会构思。361.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。2.不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。3.动物也有着自己的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。4.议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。5.记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。6.大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。7.由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的立意。8.提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多。9.抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。感谢观看，欢迎指导！1.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，37读后续写样题分析与技巧新高考·英语读后续写样题新高考·英语38

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.真题分析：情节OneweekendinJuly,Jane39

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.真题分析：情节Janeroseatthebreakof40

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.真题分析：情节expositionOneweekendinJuly,Jane41OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.真题分析：情节incitingincidentOneweekendinJuly,Jane42OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.真题分析：情节risingactionOneweekendinJuly,Jane43“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.真题分析：情节risingaction“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”真题分析：44Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.真题分析：情节risingactionJaneroseatthebreakofday,45Para1：

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Para2：

ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.真题分析：情节climaxfallingaction(resolution)denouementPara1：Butnomorehelicopter461.Whatcentralconflictsdrivetheplot?2.Aretheyinternal(withinacharacter)orexternal(betweencharacters;betweenacharacteroraforce)?3.Howaretheconflictsresolved?Centralconflict:quarrelRelatedconflict:getlost真题分析：情节1.Whatcentralconflictsdriv47

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp,”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbed

toahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.真题分析：语言OneweekendinJuly,Jane48

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.