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赏析：赏析：2013高考上海卷英语作文谈论II.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiveninChinese.上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆仍是社区图书室）搜集民众建议，假定你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信一定知足以下要求：简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；说明你的原由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对照）DearSir/Madam,I'vejustlearnedthatShanghaiMuseumistoholdafamouspaintingexhibitionandyou'recollectingpublicsuggestionsaboutwhichlocationtoholdit.I'mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.AsfarasI'mconcerned,itismorereasonabletoholdthepaintingexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.Ontheonehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopletoreachShanghaiMuseum,locatedinthecenterofthecity.Visitorscangotherebysubwayandbusandsoon.What'smore,ShanghaiMuseumismuchmoreextensivethancommunitylibraries,providingvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmenttoappreciatethefamouspaintings.Ontheotherhand,ShanghaiMuseum,awell-knownanddistinguishedmuseumathomeandabroad,ismoreprofessionalinholdingpaintingexhibitions.What'sofgreatsignificanceisthatnotonlydoesitprovideadvancedfacilitiesandhigh-techmonitorsbutalsooffersprofessionalsecurityguardstoprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombeingdamagedorstolenintheprocessofexhibition.Consequently,IstronglyproposethatthepaintingexhibitionistobeheldintheShanghaiMuseum.Yours,WangMin今年上海市的高考英语作文话题切近学生的生活实质，用书信的载体表现，让考生对画展感觉到有话能够说，可是想要达到A类作文，不单需要有扎实语言功底,还需要对博物馆和社区图书室及画展等生活类的语言应用熟练，更需要学生从专业一点的角度，深入剖析其选择的原由，这个层面好多学生很难用专业的语言区描绘,学平生常学习时间紧张，没有时间到社会上参加一些社会活动，并且在紧张的时间里，更别提用一些复杂的语言构造区展现自己的原由，因此学生写到高分不是很简单，大多数学生获取15/16分是没有问题的。采纳这样的命题思路对英语教课有较好的反应作用，学校和家庭不只是敦促学生的学习更要供给时机让孩子走出讲堂，走向社会，培育学生创建性和批评性思想。提示：生活类词汇:museumlibrarypaintingexhibitionadvancedfacilityhigh-techmonitorsecurityguard分词的应用：locatedprovidingdistinguished句型：主语从句口号从句倒装等2012年上海高考英语作文Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（以下图），回家后你用英语写了一篇日志，内容包含：•对两堂绘画课的详细描绘；•你从中获取的启迪。2012ShanghaiEnglishTestwritingsample3(forreferenceonly)TodayIhadanunusualexperience,whichrefreshedmymind.WithpupilsIspenttwoperiodsoftimeinaprimaryschool,watchingthemlearnhowtopaint.AlittlegirlnamedAmy,onestudentoftheclass,leftmeadeepimpressionwithheruniquepainting.Inthefirstlessontheteacherrequiredthepupilstopaintfreely.Namely,inanywaytheycoulddrawwhateverthey'dliketo.Amywasthefirstonetohavetry.Iasawherthinkforalittlewhile,takeoffhershoes,thendipherfeetslightlyintothepaint/ink.Muchtomysurprise,inaflashshemanagedtomakeanicedesignonabroadpieceofwhitepaper/blanketwithbothofherfeet.Whathappenednext,variousoftypesofworkspaintedbyotherchildrenappearingbeforemyeyesonebyone,keptmelaughingwithjoyandamusement.Followingabreak,thesecondclassbegan.smiling,theteachermadeabriefcomment,whichwasfullofpraiseaswellasappreciation.Afterthat,shegavethestudentssomeguidanceaboutthetraditionalwayofpainting.Withherteacherswords'inmind,Amypracticedagain.Paintingbrushinhand,shesatadeskproperly/straight,payingfullattentiontoherwork.Thistime，witheaseandexcitementshedrewsomebirdsflyinghighinthesky/sun.Lookingbackatthetwowaysofgivingaclass,Ihavetoadmittheteacherwaswellworthfollowinginmattersofcultivating“flowers”inthespiritGivenoforiginalitythatchildren.areofgreatimaginationandelasticityintheirgrowth,theyaresupposedtobegivenasmanychancesandopportunitiesaspossibleinthecourseofbeingeducatedsoastodeveloptheirpotentialtothefull.Weretheyoungalwaysconfinedtotheestablishedwaysofdoingthingswithoutafreeworld,onethatisalsolongedforbytheambitiousbirdsdrawnbyAmy,howcanweexpectthenextgenerationourcivilizednationwouldbemoreinnovativeandcreative?2012ShanghaiEnglishTestwritingsample4(forreferenceonly)TodayIhadanunusualexperience,whichrefreshedmymind.WithpupilsIspenttwoperiodsoftimeinaprimaryschool,watchingthemlearnhowtopaint.AlittlegirlnamedAmy,onestudentoftheclass,leftmeadeepimpressionwithheruniquepainting.Inthefirstlessontheteacherrequiredthepupilstopaintfreely.Namely,inanywaytheycoulddrawwhateverthey'dliketo.Amywasthefirstonetohaveatry.Isawthinkherforalittlewhile,takeoffhershoes,thendipherfeetslightlyintothepaint/ink.Muchtomysurprise,inaflashshemanagedtomakeanicedesignonabroadpieceofwhitepaper/blanketwithbothofherfeet.Whathappenednext,variousoftypesofworkspaintedbyotherchildrenappearingbeforemyeyesonebyone,keptmelaughingwithjoyandamusement.Followingabreak,thesecondclassbegan.Withasmile,theteachermadeabriefcomment,whichwasfullofpraiseaswellasappreciation.Afterthat,shegavethestudentssomeguidanceaboutthetraditionalwayofpainting.Withherteacherswords'inmind,Amypracticedagain.Painting-brushinhand,shesatadeskproperly/straight,payingfullattentiontoherwork.Thistimewitheaseandexcitementshedrewsomebirdsflyinghighinthesky/sun.Simpleandamusingasitseemed,thetwowaysofpaintingarethought-provoking.Asisgenerallyaccepted,students,especially,childrenhavegreatpotentialintheirgrowthanddevelopment.Asamatteroffact,whethertheirtalentscanbedevelopedtothefull,toagreatdegree,dependsonhowchildrenareeducated.Whilesomevaluabletraditionsarewellworthcherishing,thinkinginanoriginalwayshouldbeencouragedandemphasizedamongchildrenwhenitcomestoteachingoreducation,whoaresupposedtobecharacterizedbycreation”.Onlyinthis“innovationway,cantheykeepinpacewiththe-fastdevelopingmodernworld.2011年上海卷高考英语作文范话题：向一个基金会申请2000元做个项目来支持贫穷学生，需要包含以下的一些重点1.介绍自己2.项目详细实行方案3.2000元怎样利用Dearfoundationorganizers,MynameisJerryLu,astudentcurrentlystudyingatShanghaiXXHighschool.Iamwriting,onbehalfofmyclassmates,toapplyforthe2000yuanworthoffundinabidtoinitiateaprogramaimedathelpingthosestudentswhoarefinanciallydisadvantaged.Beingraisedinfamiliesthatdon'thavetoworryaboutputtingfoodonthetableneednotmeanobliviontoourlessfortunatepeers.Onthisaccount,wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldsponsorourpoverty-reliefendeavor.Thefollowingishowwewouldgoaboutusingthemoney.Wewouldspend1500yuanpurchasingsomestationeryfortheneedystudentsatourschool.Itisworthnotingthatwewouldinformthemtopickuptheschoolsuppliesthemselvesinsteadofus“dolingout”thesuppliessothatwewouldn'tembarrassthosewhowewanttohelp.Theremainderofthefundwouldbeusedtoinviteamotivationalspeakerwhowastotalkabouthowtoliftoneselfthefundwouldbeusedtoinviteamotivationalspeakerwhowastotalkabouthowtoliftoneselfoutofpovertybymakingrightacademicandprofessionaldecisions.Modestasoureffortsmaysound,webelievetheywillwarmsomehearts.MuchobligedifyouModestasoureffortsmaysound,webelievetheywillwarmsomehearts.Muchobligedifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.YoursSincerely,JerryLu2010年上海高考作文及典范下列图是小学重生的讲堂一脚，比较你当时的上课状况，作出比较并说说你的感觉。你的作文一定包含：•描绘图片里学生上课的场景•比较你同期间的上课状况•简单说说你的感觉Asisdescribedinthepicture,agroupofforeignstudentsareraisingtheirhandstogiveanswerstothequestioninajoyfulandactiveway.Thepurposeofthepictureistoshowushowactivetheclassperformanceisintheforeigncountry.Westernstudentsaremorelikelytobeopen-mindedandwillingtoexpresstheiruniqueideasinclass.Justasthepictureshows:Whentheteacherisaskingaquestion,everychildraisestheirhandsandiseagertoanswerthequestion.Theydonotfeargivingthein-classperformancewhileothersarewatching.ThissceneremindsmeofmyownclasssituationwhenIwasatelementaryschool.AsChinesechildrenaremoreoftenthannotveryconservativeandmodest,therefore,myteachersusuallycalledastudent'snameifnobodydaredtoanswerthequestions.Thentheappointedchildbehavedawkwardlyandwasreluctanttosayjustafewwords.Thisrecollectionmakesmefeelratherdisappointed.Infact,weshouldatleastgiveatry,whethertheanswerisperfectornot.It'sachanceoflearning,morespecifically,ifwearewell-done,wewillgainconfidence;ifnot,wewillgetinformedofabettersolution,whichwillprovideusexperienceinthelatersituation.Allinall,it'smoresensibletobeactiveinclass.图画式谈论文特色：是经过察看和剖析单幅或一组画，把图画内容转变成文字信息。注意点：.要仔细审图.需从整体上掌握图画所表现的主要内容，办理好人物与时空的关系及局部与整体的关系，找出文章的线索或主题。.“丰满的想象+变化的表达”构造：第一段描绘图画，一般不超出三分之一篇幅第二段揭露画旨(一般一言即可)第三段发布感想、谈论或提出建议(占主要篇幅)第四段简单说说自己的感觉注意：二三两段可合成一段2009年上海高考作文及典范某国外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了以下课程：园艺(gardening)，烹调(cooking),防身术(self-defence)，护理(nursing)。若是你是王跃华(不能够用自己的真切姓名)，写一封申请信，报名参加此中一门课程的学习。信的内容一定包含：1、你感兴趣的课程2、你希望从这门课程中学到什么3、为何想学这些内容Itissaidthatasummercampistobeheldbyyourschoolandafewcoursesareavailabletochoosefrom.Iaminterestedingardening,inthatIbelieveitfeaturesmycharacterandpersonalbenefits.Duringthelearningperiod,Iexpecttogainsomeunexpectedknowledge.AradicaltechniqueI'dliketoobtainistoknowhowtotelldifferentspeciesofplantsandflowersapart.Thishelpsmetohaveaclearoutlookofthoseinmygarden.Furthermore,thepropercuttingtimeandfrequencytowateraresomeotherskillsIwanttolearn.Alittleknowledgeconcerningchoosingsuitablesoilorthereasonableplantingpositionswillalsobeagoodchoice.ThemanireasonwhyIchoosegardeningisthatIwanttohelpmyparentswiththeirworkinthedomesticgarden.Inaddition,Ifindthatwestudentsgenerallylacktheknolwdgeofgardening,missingachancetohaveawordwithnature,sothatknowingthesurroundingsisimperitave.Lastbutnotleast,byattendingthecourse,Iwillhaveameaningfulsummervacation,anddrowningmyselfbewteenplantswillbyallmeansaddabrillianttouchtomylife.2008年上海高考作文及典范你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞竞赛(groupdancingcooipetition)，班长希望大家踊跃参加。对此说说你的见解。你的文章一定包含以下内容：•你能否会参加竞赛•你做出该决定的详细原由Version1:Agroupdancingcompetitionwillbeheldinourschoolandthemonitorcallsoneverybodytotakeanactivepartinit.Whilemostofmyclassmatesarestillhesitatingwhethertoparticipate,Ihavesaidyestoourmonitorwithgreatpleasure.Generallyspeaking,therearetworeasonsformydecision.First,itisagoodopportunityformetorelaxmyself,whichwillenablemetostudymoreefficiently.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy,sogoesthesaying,whichclearlyshowsustheimportanceofrelaxation.Besides,IthinkIamagooddancerafterlearningdanceformorethanfiveyears.Participatinginthecontestwillbeagoldenchanceformetoshowmydancingskillsandmakesomecontributionstotheclass.Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisnosurprisethatIhavesuchastrongenthusiasmonthegroupdancingcompetition.Version2:Todaythemonitorcallsoneverybodytotakeanactivepartinthegroupdancingcompetitionwhichwillbeheldinacoupleofdaysinourschool.Butaftersomecarefulconsideration,Ihavedecidednottoparticipate.smore,withoutany'sbetterforThereareanumberofreasonsformydecision.Firstandforemost,astheCollegeEntranceExamisjustaroundthecorner,studyisthetoppriorityforme.Participatinginthegroupdancingsmore,withoutany'sbetterforexperienceofdancing,Idon'tthinkIcanbeagooddancingpartner.Iamafraidmypoordancingskillswillprobablyspoiltheperformanceofthewholeclass.Inthiscase,itspectatorcheeringformyclassmates.Forthesereasons,itseemsmoreappropriateformetowatchthecompetitionthantodancemyself.2007年上海高考作文及典范以“礼品”为主题写一篇作文。该文章一定包含以下内容：你送礼品的对象及所送的礼品；该礼品对他（她）可能产生的影响或带来的变化。APresentforFather'sDayTheFather'sDaywillcomesoon.andIwanttogivemyDadapresent.ThatisaVIPcardofahealthclub.WhenIwasalittleboy,Dadworkedhardasateacher.Duringterm,MotherandIsometimesaccompaniedDadinhisofficetillalatehour.Fromthenon,IunderstoodthatDadworkedwithgreateffort.TherearestilltoomanypreciousmemorieswhichI'llcherishinmyheart.AndIwanttogivethispresenttoexpressmythankstohim.TimefliesandI'm18now.AsIgrowup,Fatherisgettingolder.Heisnowstilldivingintopilesofbooks.Withthehealthclubmembership,Ihopethathewillmaketimetodomoreexercises.Ithinkthathewillrelaxinthehealthclubandmakemorefriends.2006年上海高考作文及典范下表供给了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。经过比较作出选择，并联合个人情况说明原由。南方大学北方大学学费8000元/年5000元/年招生人数20人10人优惠政策无加20分VersionAOfthetwouniversitieslistedabove,Iprefertheoneinthenorth.Themainreasonisthatthetuitionisonly5,000RMBfortheuniversityayear,comparedwith8,000RMBfortheuniversityinthesouth.Thismakesabigdifferenceforafamilylikeamine,becausemyfatherispeasantandtheonlybreadwinnerinthefamily.Studyingatthenorthernuniversitycansavemyfatherbigmoney.AnotherreasonItakeintoconsiderationisthepreferencepolicythenorthernuniversityoffers.Anycandidatewhochoosestostudytheremaygainanextra20points,whichgreatlyraisesthepossibilityofmybeingadmittedtothisuniversity.Ofcourse,itdoesn'tmeanthatitwillbequiteeasytopasstheentranceexambecausethisuniversityhaslimitedthenumberofqualifiedcandidatesto10only.However,Ihavebeendoingquitewellinschool,soIbelieveIcanpasstheentranceexamwithflyingcolors.VersionBComparedwiththenorthernuniversity,thesouthernoneismoretomyliking.Itistruethatintermsoftuitiontheformeris3,000RMBcheaperthanthelatter.However,that'snotaproblemtomebecauseIcanworkmywaythroughcollegeonceIgetadmitted.Whatcountsisthereputationithas.OnceIenterthisschool,myfuturecareerisguaranteed.Also,theuniversityinthesouthrecruits20newstudentsinsteadof10,whichmeansthatIwillstandabetterchanceofgettingadmitted.Thecompetitionisverykeen,though,asyoucanseebecausethisuniversitydoesn'tgivecandidatesanyextrapoints.SoallIcandonowisstudyhard,passthetoughentranceexam,andqualifyasastudentoftheuniversityofmychoice.2005年上海高考作文及典范先人云：“天生我材必实用”请你描绘你生活中的一件事，说明人各有千秋，不论才能大小都能成为实用的人。Manypeople,especiallythosewhothinktheyarenotastalentedasothers,tendtogiveupintheirundertakingsandthuscomplainaboutlife.Suchpeoplewillcertainlyendupgettingnowhere.Noticethatmostsuccessfulpeoplearenotunlikeus.Whatmakesthemstandoutistheirdevotednesstothejobtheyaredoing,whichistypicalofthestoryofLiDahua,aneighborofmine.Dahuawasbroughtupinapoorfamily.Sincehedidn'tdowellinschool,hejoinedhisfatherincollectinggarbageforalivingsoonafterhegraduatedfromelementaryschool.Hisneighborsshooktheirheadswhenevertheysawhim,thinkingthatthisboywouldbynomeanscarveoutabrightfuture.Yearspassedby,andDahuakeptcollectinggarbage,buthetookonestepfurther.Throughbooksheknewhowtosortoutthewastehehadcollectedandhaveitrecycled.Youknowwhat?Hehassetuparecyclingfactoryandbecometherichestmanintown!HissuccessprovestheancientChinesesaying:"Theremustbeauseformytalent."2004年上海高考作文及典范老师要求你负责班级墙报（wallnewspaper）工作并征采你的建议。在日志中表述你的决定并说说想法。MyDiaryThursday,March11Thismorningmyheadmasterhadachatwithme.Hetoldmethathedecidedtochoosemetobeinchargeoftheclasswallnewspaper.HewantstokinowifIamwillingtoacceptthetaskandwhatIplantodoforit.Firstofall,IwouldliketosayIwouldalwayssetahighvalueondoingaservicefortheclass.SoI'monlytoowillingtobeinchargeofthewallnewspaper.Asastudent,todomybitforourclassisagoodwaytoputmyabilitytogooduse.Tohelprunthewallnewspapercangivefulplaytomytalent.Weallknowoursocietyneedspeoplefullofcreativityanfcreativitydoesncomefrombooksbutfrompractice.Thewallnewspaperprovidedsmewithachancetopractise.I'msureIcanbenefitalotfromit.Secondly,Iregardthewallnewspaperasawindowofourclass.Itservesasabridgebetweentheteachersandthestudents.WiththeactiveparticipationofthewholeclassIcanhaveitpublishedeverytwoweeks.Throughthewallnewspaperwecanexchangeourwaysoflearning,freelycommunicateourviewsonschoollife,voiceourconcernsoverhealthcaresandevenmakeproposalsontheteachingmethodandthetestingsystem.Someofmyclassmatesaregoodatdrawing.Theycanhelptoaddcolourtothewallnewspaper.Ihopemyideasforthewallnewspaperwillmeetwiththeteacher'sfavourableconsideration.2003年上海高考作文及典范你的挚友因家境一般买不起名牌而郁郁寡欢。给他写封信，说说你的见解和建议。收信人：徐海青寄信人：黄平（不行用自己的真切姓名）写信日期：2003年6月8日June8,2003DearXuHaiqing,Yousaidinyourletterthatmanyofyourclassmateswerewearingfashionableclothes,butyoucouldn'taffordtobuythebestbrands.Soyoufletverydepressed.Therearedifferentviewsonpeople'swear.Thefollowingaremyideasaboutit.Firstly,youshouldn'tputtoomuchemphasisonphysicalappearance.Youmustalwaysrememberthemostimportanttaskforyoutodayistoconcentrateyourattentiononyourstudies.Nomatterwhatyouwear,youwillreallylookyourbestwhenyoucomeoutfirstinyourexaminations.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Grugality（节约）isthemotherofvirtue.”So,secondly,youmustunderstandthatitisafinevirtuetolearntoliveinfrugalitywillbenefityoualotinyourlaterlife.IhopeyouunderstandwhatImean.Iamsureyouwilltakeapositiveattitudetowardslifeandwillbehappyagainwhenyoureadmyletter.BetRegards,HuangPing2002年上海高考作文及典范2002秋天高考II.GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsbasedonthepictureandtheinstructionsgivenbelow.简要描绘图片内容，联合生活实质，就图片的主题说说自己的感想。Duetotheone-childpolicyinChina,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildisregardedasthetreasureofthewholefamily.Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusuallyspoilthechildtoomuch.Asisdepictedinthepicture,whenachildislearningtorideabicycle,herparentsandgrandparentaresweating,runningalongsidethebikeandtryingtheirbesttoprotectthechildforfearthatsheshouldfallandgethurt.Weallknowthegreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfalling,butinrisingeverytimewefall.SoIthink,fortheparents,theyshouldbeawareofthenegativeeffecttoomuchspoilinghasontheirchild.Undertheparentsprotection,'thechildknowsonlycomfortandease.Iftheydon'tlearnhowtoliveindependently,howcantheycopewiththehardshipsandtrialswhichtheywillmeetinthefuture?Forthechildren,theyshouldlettheirparentsknowthattheyhaveconfidenceinthemselvesandareabletoexistinthecompetitivecommunitywithouttheconstantwatchfuleyeofaneagerparent.Thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles.Onlywhenwehavelearnedtostandonourownfeet,canwesurvivethechallengingworld.(219words)2002年春天高考依据所给图表，简要描绘某城市最近几年每百人手机(mobilephone)用户增加状况，并试剖析其增加原由。某城市最近几年每百人中手机用户增加表示图Moreandmorepeoplehavemobilephonesinrecentyears,shownastheabovediagram.In1995,onlyonepersoninahundredhadamobilephoneinsomecity.10peopleinahundredhadmobilephones.Thenumberofthepeoplewhohadmobilephoneswastentimesasmanyasin1995.In1999,therewere20peopleinahundredwhohadmobilephones.In2001,ahalfofthepeopleinahundredhadmobilephones.Thereareseveralreasonsfortheincreaseofthenumberofpeoplehavingmobilephones.Firstly,mobilephonesareusefulinpeople'lifes.Wecancommunicatewithothersveryconveniently.WecantakephotosandevensurftheNetwiththelatestmodel.Secondly,people'sincomehasbeenincreasingquickly,andthemobilephonesarecheaperthanbefore.Inthiscase,peoplecanaffordamobilephone.Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisnosurprisethatsomanypeoplehaveboughtcellphonesandthistrendwillnotstopinthenearfuture.图表式作文的几种形式：一是以表格形式，将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式表现出来，即统计表。二是以图形形式A表示数据变化的曲线图；B表示数据的大小或数目之间的差别的柱状图；C表示整体内部构造变化的扇形图。图表式作文写作分三步：第一步：直截了当地址明本图表所反应的主题。常使用的词汇有:table,chart,figure,graph,describe//tell,show,represent等常用句型：Thegraph/chart/tableaboveshowsFromtheabovegraph/chart,itcanbeseenthat...Asisshowninthegraph,...Thechart/tableshowsthedifferencesbetween第二步：剖析数据间的主要差别及趋向，而后描绘（在描绘数据间变化及总趋向特色时，可采纳分类式或对照式以支持主题，并说明必需的原由）。注意层次。即factsandreasons常用转折，对照及比较的词汇：While,but,onthecontrary,however,comparewith,incontrastto,asas,thesameas,besimilarto,bedifferencebetween,among,morethan,lessthan常用描绘趋向变化的词汇：Increase,rise,goup,reduce,drop,godown,fall,reach,remain,by/to,slowly,slightly,gradually,sharply,rapidly,thenumberof,fromto及比较级，倍数句型等。常用句型：Facts:Therewasagreat/slightincrease/riseinTherehasbeenasudden/slow/rapidfall/dropin3.Itis20%lower/higherthan4.Thenumber/ratehasnearlydoubled,asagainstthatoflastyear.Thenumberistimesasmuchasthatof.6.Itincreases/rises/decreases/reducesby/%/twothirds.7.Bycomparisonwith,itdecreased/increased/fellfromtoReasons:1.Thereasonforisthat2.OnemaythinkofthechangeasaresultofThechangeinlargelyresultsfromthefactthatThereareseveralcausesforthissignificantgrowthin.First,.Second,ThisbringsouttheimportantfactthatThefollowingreasonsareresponsiblefor第三步：概括总结或发布谈论。常用词汇：1.inaword,/inshort,/generallyspeaking2.It'sclearfromthechartthat3.Insummary,itisimportant4.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat5.Obviously,ifwewantto,itisnecessaryThereisnodoubtthatattentionmustbepaid第四步：假如要求说说感觉AsfarasIamconcerned,2001年上海高考作文及典范请你说说轿车大批进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。Nowadaysthenumberofpeoplewhoownprivatecarsisontherise.Likeeverythingelse,privatecarshavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,thefavorableaspectscanbelistedasfollows.First,privatecarscanbringconvenienceandmobilitytoowners.Acarallowsapersontomovecomfortablyandsafelyaswellasquicklyandfreely.Becausemyfamilyownsacar,weareabletomakeextensivejourneyseveryyear.Therefore,IbelievethetouristindustryinChinasmore,thewilldevelopmorequicklywiththeincreaseinthenumberofprivatecars.Secondly,ifmorepeoplebuycars,theautomobilesindustrywilldevelopdramatically.Whatgrowthof'smore,thetheautomobileindustrycantriggertheboomofotherimportantandrelatedindustriessuchasironandsteelproduction,energyandtechnologicalapplicatio