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1、PAGE13专题5短文改错过考点18名词改错Proofreading12022安徽省滁州市高三年级9月联合质量检测Anopeningweekheldincurschoollastweeksothatwecouldshowthegreatachievementswemadeinarteducation.TheartworksexhibitionwentonfromMondaytoFriday,exhibittheexcellentartworks,suchaspapercuts,paintingsorflowerarrangements.Bothoftheartworkswerecreatedb

2、ythestudentsofourschool.ThatattractedthepublicmostwasthesinginganddanceperformancesinFridayafternoon.Alltheseactivitiesdrawthecloseattentionofthepublicandtheparentsaswell,receivinghighpraisesfromthepublic.Throughtheseactivity,thepublichasabetterunderstandingofourschool.Asaresultof,weallthinkthattheo

3、peningweekwasofgreatsuccessful.Proofreading22022贵州省贵阳市重点中学高三年级上学期适应性考试（一)Thoughmanypeoplehateit,butcigarettesmokingremainsacommonhabit.About20percentofadultmenintheUSAsmokecigarettesregular.Inspiteofthis,anumberofindividualswhohavegivenupsmokingisincreased.Therearemanyfactorsthatdeterminesapersonssm

4、okinghabit,includedincome,education,andoccupation.Peoplewholiveincitysmokemorethanthosewholiveonfarms.Well-educatedmenwithhighincomesarelesslikelysmokecigarettesthanmenwithfeweryearsofschoolingandlowerincomes.Intheotherhand,ifawell-educatedmanwithahighincomedoessmoke,whotendstosmokemorecigarettesper

5、day.Proofreading32022辽宁省大连市高三年级双基测试WithTeachersDaydrawnear,IwouldliketoexpressmythankstoMs.Li,whotaughtmeEnglishlastyear.Atthattime,IwashavingatroublestudyingEnglishandmyscoresfell.Ms.Liencouragedmeandtoldmystorythatshenevergaveupbeforeherstudiesdidntgowell.Shealsosaidthatitwasnecessarytomakeefforts

6、sothatIwouldnotregretwastingtime.Herwordswasthebestmedicinebecauseshestoodinmyshoetodealwithproblemsandgavemesincereadvice.Shedidntsimplecomfortme.Herteachingmethodsalsocount.IthadneveroccurredmethatstudyingcouldbesointeresteduntilImetMs.Li.参考答案Proofreading1Anopeningweekheldincurschoollastweeksothat

7、wecouldshowthewasgreatachievementswemadeinarteducation.TheartworksexhibitionwentonfromMondaytoFriday,exhibittheexcellentexhibitingartworks,suchaspapercuts,paintingsorflowerarrangements.BothoftheartworksandAllwerecreatedbythestudentsofourschool.ThatattractedthepublicmostwastheWhatsinginganddanceperfo

8、rmancesinFridayafternoon.Alltheseactivitiesdrawtheondrewcloseattentionofthepublicandtheparentsaswell,receivinghighpraisesfromthepublic.Throughtheseactivity,thepublichasabetterunderstandingofourschool.Asaactivities去掉ofresultof,weallthinkthattheopeningweekwasofgreatsuccessful.successheld前加was【解析】考查被动语

9、态。上周我们学校举行了一个开放周活动。因为主语Anopeningweek和动词held之间是被动关系,故应用被动语态,又根据lastweek可知,举行开放周活动发生在过去,故用一般过去时的被动语态washeld。一般现在时的被动语态：am/is/aredone一般过去时的被动语态：was/weredone一般将来时的被动语态：willbedoneexhibitexhibiting【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：艺术作品展从周一持续到周五,展出了优秀的艺术作品,如剪纸、绘画和插花。exhibit与主语Theartworksexhibition之间是逻辑上的主谓关系,故用exhibiting。ora

10、nd【解析】考查连词。根据语境可知,句中的剪纸、绘画和插花是并列关系,故此处用并列连词and。BothAll【解析】考查代词。句意：所有的艺术作品都是由我们学校的学生创作的。所有的艺术作品应多于两个作品,故用All。两者,用both;三者或三者以上,用all。ThatWhat【解析】考查主语从句。句意：最吸引公众的是星期五下午的歌舞表演。what引导主语从句,表示什么,故把That改为What。inon【解析】考查介词。在具体某一天的上午或者下午用介词on。drawdrew【解析】考查动词时态。句意：所有这些活动都引起了公众和家长的密切关注,受到了公众的高度赞扬。此处叙述的情况发生在过去,所以

11、谓语动词draw应改为drew。activityactivities【解析】考查名词复数。句意：通过这些活动,公众对我们学校有了一个更好的了解。此处指这些活动,故用activities。删除result后的of【解析】考查固定短语。句意：因此,我们都认为开放周是很成功的。asaresult意为结果,因此,是固定短语,故删除of。asaresultof+名词、动名词等意为由于,作为的结果。例如：Hewaslateforschoolasaresultofthetrafficjam.因为交通堵塞,他上学迟到了。successfulsuccess【解析】考查名词。此处考查be+of+名词结构,waso

12、fgreatsuccess=wassuccessful意为成功的。类似的表达有：beofgreatimportance重要的；beofgreatsignificance有意义的;beofgreatbenefit有益处的。Proofreading2Thoughmanypeoplehateit,butcigarettesmokingremainsacommonhabit.去掉butAbout20percentofadultmenintheUSAsmokecigarettesregular.Inspiteofthis,aregularlythenumberofindividualswhohavegi

13、venupsmokingisincreased.increasingTherearemanyfactorsthatdeterminesapersonssmokinghabit,includedincludingincome,education,andoccupation.Peoplewholiveincitysmokemorethanthosecitieswholiveonfarms.Well-educatedmenwithhighincomesarelesslikelysmoketocigarettesthanmenwithfeweryearsofschoolingandlowerincom

14、es.IntheotherOnhand,ifawell-educatedmanwithahighincomedoessmoke,whotendstosmokeHemorecigarettesperday.删除but【解析】考查连词。句意：虽然很多人讨厌它,但是吸烟依然是一个很常见的习惯。though引导让步状语从句时,不能和but在同一句中出现,故删除but。because和so也不能连用。regularregularly【解析】考查副词。句意：在美国,大约20%的成年男性经常吸烟。应用副词修饰动词smoke,故把regular改为regularly。athe【解析】考查冠词。已经戒烟的人的数

15、量正在增长。thenumberof的数量,故把a改为the。increasedincreasing【解析】考查动词时态。根据句意可知,此处描述的是正在发生的动作,应用现在进行时。故把increased改为increasing。determinesdetermine【解析】考查动词。句意：一个人吸烟、习惯的形成受很多因素的影响,包括收入、教育和职业。此处that指、代factors,在后面的定语从句中作主语,故把determines改为determine。includedincluding【解析】考查介词。根据句意可知,此处表示包括,故把included改为including。included,

16、形容词,意为包括在内的,仅用于名词后。including,介词,意为包括,包含在内。citycities【解析】考查名词。句意：住在城市里的人比住在农场的人吸烟更多。根据后面的farms可知,city要用复数形式与之形成对应,故把city改为cities。likely后加to【解析】考查固定句式。句意：受教育程度高的高收入人群与受教育程度较低的、收入较低的人群相比更不可能吸烟。belikelytodosth.很可能做某事为固定结构,故在likely后加to。InOn【解析】考查介词。句意：另一方面,如果一个受教育程度高、收入高的人吸烟的话,他往往会每天吸更多的烟。ontheotherhand另

17、一方面为固定搭配,故把In改为On。whohe【解析】考查代词。分析句子结构和句意可知,句中含有if引导的条件状语从句,主句的主语指代awell-educatedmanwithahighincome,故把who改为he。Proofreading3WithTeachersDaydrawnear,IwouldliketoexpressmythankstoMs.Li,whodrawingtaughtmeEnglishlastyear.Atthattime,IwashavingatroublestudyingEnglishand去掉amyscoresfell.Ms.Liencouragedmeandt

18、oldmystorythatshenevergaveupbeforeherwhenherstudiesdidntgowell.ShealsosaidthatitwasnecessarytomakeeffortssothatIwouldnotregretwastingtime.Herwordswasthebestmedicinebecauseshestoodinweremyshoetodealwithproblemsandgavemesincereadvice.Shedidntsimplecomfortshoessimplyme.Herteachingmethodsalsocount.IthadneveroccurredmethatstudyingcouldcountedtobesointeresteduntilImetMs.Lerestingdrawdrawing【解析】考查非谓语动词。句意：随着教师节越来越近,我想要表达我对去年教我英语的李老师的谢意。这里使用了with+宾语+宾补这一结构,TeachersDay和draw之间为逻辑上的主谓关系,故此处用drawing作宾补。删除a【解析】考查冠词。句意：那时,我在学习英语上有困难,并且成绩下降。此处考査havetrouble(in)doingsth.这一用法,故删除a。myher【解