看《悲惨世界》搞定作文续写(二)课件-高三英语写作专项突破

1、应试宝典-看悲惨世界，搞定作文续写（二）The novels brief introduction In our last class, we have talked about Jean Valjeans various setbacks after he got out of the prison.上结课，主要讲男主角Jean Valjean（冉阿让）出狱后遇到的种种挫折。In this class, the heroine Fantine (芳汀) showed up.这节课，女主角芳汀出场了。How to describe the peoples appearanceShe did n

2、ot smile, and lines of sadness ran down the side of her pale cheeks.这句是表情悲伤非常新颖的表达方式，建议直接借鉴听到了自己的考试成绩，Lily 笑不出来，悲伤从她虚弱的脸庞滑下：After knowing the test result, Lily did not smile, and lines of sadness ran down the side of her pale cheeks.The couple dressed Cosette in rags and gave her very little food, w

3、hichthey made her eat from a wooden bowl under the tablein rags 穿得破破烂烂的街角有个穿得破破烂烂的男人，正在乞讨：A man in rags was begging in the corner of the street.How to describe the peoples actionMme Thenardier looked at Fantine thoughtfully, but said nothing.thoughtful有两个意思：1. = considerate2. = think deeply妈妈若有所思地看着

4、Lily，什么都没说：Mum stared at Lily thoughtfully, but said nothing.At the end of the year, however, Thenardierwas not happy with just seven francs a month; he demanded twelve andFantine paid without protest, happy that her daughter was being wellcared test v. 抗议pay without protest 毫无疑义地支付尽管觉得很贵，但是妈

5、妈还是毫无疑义地给我买了这件好衣服：Even though it was expensive, mum bought the fancy clothes for me without protest.How to describe the peoples actionThey gavethe dress to their daughter, Eponine, and Cosette went on shivering.shiver vi.因为寒冷而颤抖 也可以用tremble在野外的寒风中，Lily不停地颤抖：WIth the cold wind in the wild, Lily could

6、nt help shivering.As she was wandering aroundthe town, desperately trying to decide what to do, she noticed a crowd ofpeople in the market square. wander vi 漫步（无目的地行走）也可以表示走神Lily在校园里漫无目的地走着，迫切地想决定接下来做什么：As Lily was wandering aroundthe town, desperately trying to decide what to do.How to describe the

7、 peoples actionShe approached themwithout thinking, anddiscovered that they had gathered around a travelling dentist.approach = get close to （物理空间的接近）+ with purpose这个词表示接近，是非常地道的用法，请同学们一定要学会，不要只会get close to，这样说层次太单薄了也不准确。她想也不想就接近他们，发现他们正围着Lily：She approached themwithout thinking, anddiscovered that

8、 they had gathered around Lily.While the policeman was trying to drag her to her feet, however, avoice from the shadows said, One moment please.drag：拖我发现实在很难强迫自己定期出来锻炼：I find it really hard to drag myself out and exercise regularly.How to describe the peoples actionJavert argued with M. Madeleine fo

9、r some time, but finally gave in.argue 最准确的意思应该是“强有力地表达某种观点”，所以也可以表示争吵arguement就是你强有力地表达出来的那个观点Lily和妈妈吵起来了，但是最终还是让步了：Lily argued with mum, but finally gave in/compromised. Fantine gazed at M. Madeleine with tears in her eyegaze at sb. with tears in her eyes双目含泪凝视某人这句话在考试作文中很高频，建议直接借用。How to describe

10、 the peoples actionVery soon, he would reply, and her pale face would light up with joy.light up with joy喜形于色听到这个好消息，她虚弱的脸上喜形于色：After hearing the good news, her pale face ewould light up with joy.M. Madeleine, looking hard at Javert without expression, saidquietly, Im afraid I dont understand.lookin

11、g hard at Javert without expression面无表情地狠狠盯着某人看Lily面无表情地盯着这个调皮的男孩：Lily gazed at the naughty boy without expression.How to describe the peoples actionThat afternoon, M. Madeleine visited Fantine. She had a high fever,and was coughing badly, but she still had only one thing on her mind.Cosette? she as

12、ked him.Very soon, he assured her.assure vt 确保insure vt 保证assume vt 假设”我们什么时候可以去露营？“Lily问妈妈。”很快，”妈妈向Lily保证。When can we go to the camp? Lily asked mum.Very soon, mum assured her.He would lose everythingthat he had worked so hard to achieve.即使你失去了你努力取得的一切成就，你依然是你父母做重要的人：Even though you would lose ever

13、ything that you had worked so hard to achieve, you still mattered most to your parents.How to describe the peoples actionThe next morning, M. Madeleine set off on the long journey toArras.set off 1. = leave for2. = 引爆第二天一早，Lily启程前往另一个城市的漫长旅程：The next morning, Lily set off on the long journey to anot

14、her city.Finally, having heard all the evidence, the judge called forsilence. Hewas preparing to announce his decision when M. Madeleine,pale and trembling, stood up and said:That man is not Jean Valjean.prepare to announce his decision准备去宣布他的决定一夜无眠之后，Lily现在准备宣布她的决定：After a sleepless night, Lily was

15、 preparing to announce her decision.How to describe the peoples actionAn excited whisper went around the courtroom as everybodyrecognized M. Madeleine.An excited whisper went around somewhere一阵兴奋的低语环绕某地一阵兴奋的低语环绕教室当同学们看到Lily的服装扮相以后：An excited whisper went around the classroom as everybody saw Lilys c

16、ostume. At first, no one believedhim, but he managed to persuade the court by skilfully questioning eachof the witnesses, revealing personal information that only the real JeanValjean could have knownmanaged to persuade设法劝说Lily充满技巧地设法劝说妈妈同意她学滑板：Lily skillfully managed to persuade mum to allow her to

17、 learn the skateboarding.How to describe the peoples feelingThe woman looked round and saw a young woman with a child sleepingpeacefully in her arms. sleepingpeacefully 平静地熟睡浙江高考户外主题高频句：经历了一段波动人心的野外旅程，Lily终于回到了家，在自己舒适的床上平静地睡下了：After a stirring wild journey, Lily eventually came back home and slept p

18、eacefully in her own comfortable bed.The Thenardiers did not feel guilty about treating Cosette badlybecause Fantine had stopped sending them regular payments.shameful/ashamed以及guilty都可以表示愧疚的，但是guilty愧疚的程度更深，比如说祥林嫂在失去儿子后非常自责，不停叨念“我错了，我真的错了.”就是已经是guilty的程度给妈妈过生日的蛋糕没做好，Lily非常愧疚：Failing making the birt

19、hday cake for mum, Lily was overwhelmingly shameful.How to describe the peoples feeling/attitudeJavert listened to her coldly, then ordered a policeman to take herawaycoldly 冷酷地Lily冷酷地看着眼前发生的一切：Lily looked at everything coldly.He had always been suspicious of M. Madeleine, and was sure that hehad se

20、en him somewhere before, many years earlierbe suspicious/skeptical/doubtful of怀疑的尽管妈妈怀疑Lily所说的话，但是还是保持沉默：Even though mom was suspicious of what Lily had said, she kept silent.How to describe the peoples feeling/attitudeBut he kept hissuspicions to himself, not daring to say what he really believed:

21、that M.Madeleine was, in fact, a dangerous criminal with a terrible past.keep the suspicions to oneself保留怀疑不说出去担心伤害Lily的感受，妈妈保留了她的怀疑，不敢说出去她所认为的事实：Concerned about hurting Lilys feeling, mum kept hersuspicions to himself, not daring to say what he really believed.The mayor turned to Inspector Javert a

22、nd said, in a soft, firmvoice, This woman must be released.soft and firm voice温柔且坚定的声音（很多又A又飒的大女主都是用这种音调讲话的哦）妈妈转向Lily，用一个温柔且坚定的声音说，“你必须跟Lucy道歉。”Mum turned to Lily and said in a soft, firm voice, You must apologize to Lucy.How to describe the peoples feeling/attitudeThats impossible, Javert replied.

23、She attackeda man in the street, a respectable citizen. And now Ive just seen her spit at you, the mayor of our town. A woman like this deserves to be punished.deserve vt.值得后面既可以接好事，也可以接坏事我早就告诉过你不要这么做，现在你活该：I had told you not to do so, you deserved it.你值得去一个更好的大学： You deserved a better university.Of

24、 course, he denies everything, butthats not surprising. Ideny 否定别否定了，你肯定做过：Dont deny any more, you must have done it.How to describe the peoples feeling/attitudeThis matter is of no interest to me, Javert, he said casually. I am sure you have other work to ddo.casually 随意地cautiously 谨慎地“我对这事儿一点兴趣也没有，”妈妈随意地说，“你赶紧去做你的作业。”This matter is of no interest to me, Mum said casually.Youd better work on your homework right now.With those words he bowed and left the office, leavin