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1、如何取得作文高分-CET4作文精讲（二）DAI HuiEnglish Dept., SFLGDUT如何取得作文高分-CET4作文精讲（二）DAI HuiFear can hold you prisoner;Hope will set you free. -“Andy” from Shawshanks Redemption Fear can hold you prisoner;考试大纲 p1-2 一般性写作任务两个“一般性” 一般性话题290-710500均值+70425， 550 考试大纲 p1-2第二课 TYPE 1的写法和作文使用技巧（上）第二课 TYPE 1的写法和作文使用技巧（上）一、

2、 TYPE 1的写作手法（正反我型）题目：Reading Selectively Or Extensively?提纲：1）有人认为读书要有选择2） 也有人认为应当博览群书 3） 我的想法一、 TYPE 1的写作手法（正反我型）题目：ReadingThe issue over how to read is heatedly discussed. Some people claim that we should read selectively. They argue that, with the evolution of society, books in growing numbers are

3、 published. It is impossible for us to read all of them. Moreover, there are countless bad books which are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them, at all. But others may not agree. They emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have m

4、ore chances to succeed, of course. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in others, he is not likely to succeed. So far as I could understand, both of them have something sensible. And I think we should read extensively first and read selectively in one particular field afterwards. (142

5、 words)The issue over how to read is TYPE1 大模板分析P1-第一段S1：XX问题已经变成了我们讨论的热点。S2: 有人认为我们应该。S3: 他们强调说。比如。TYPE1 大模板分析P1-第一段TYPE1 大模板分析P2-第二段S1：然而，另有一些人并不同意。S2：他们坚持认为XX是合理的做法。S3：举例来说，。TYPE1 大模板分析P2-第二段TYPE1 大模板分析P3第三段S1：关于以上问题，我认为S2：因为。S3：总的来说，如果能很好的结合两种观点，XX将会更加完善、有效。TYPE1 大模板分析P3第三段P1The issue over ( )is

6、 heatedly discussed. Some people claim that 选择A is a preferable choice.They emphasize that todays world is not what it was before. With the evolution of society it is sensible to3分钟，自己写一个P2模板P1The issue over ( )is heatP2S1：Others, however, may not accede to such idea. S2: They hold on to the belief

7、that we should (选择B)S3: Take YY for example,P2S1：Others, however, may not P3S1: So far I am concerned, I agree to the former/latter viewpoint because.S2: Judging from the two sides of the story, if we can achieve a balance between A and B, XX will function more appropriately for us.P3S1: So far I am

8、 concerned, I总结T1(正反我型)的命题有什么特点？1. 选择性疑问句 Should we. Or should we.?2. 提纲中出现“有些人，另一些人”“赞成，反对”，“好处，弊端”“正面，反面”。有“我的看法”不一定是T1。总结T1(正反我型)的命题有什么特点？反模板训练临摹训练滴水穿石点石成金反模板训练临摹训练写作技巧（上）1. 词汇多样性：(详见所有词汇替换词表)观点 idea-opinion-viewpoint-notion认为 think-argue-claim-maintain-insist-adhere to the belief that写作技巧（上）1. 词

9、汇多样性：(详见所有词汇替换词表)练习 词汇Many people _ it and _ that.applaud, argueIt has become _ for college students toFashionableRecently, there has been a _ over the issue.dispute,_ has not been reached among people as to the issue ofconsensus练习 词汇Many people _ it and 写作技巧（上）2句子结构长短句 （必）被动语态 （必）倒装 （选）插入语 （必）问句 （选

10、）写作技巧（上）2句子结构长短句Our college is completely overcrowded. The lack of space is apparently in all parts of the campus. With thirty students sit in only forty-odd square meters, the classrooms are so jammed that students look like sardines.短长长、短长、短长短长短句Our college is completely oNowadays people tend to b

11、uy more things online. They simply squander their money on the Internet ranging from books to cosmetics, from clothes to bags. This is called cyber shopping or E commerce.Nowadays people tend to buy mo被动语态From the above mentioned, a conclusion can be easily drawned. Consensus among people can not be

12、 reached when it comes to the problem ofFrom what has been discussed above,Disagreement was incurred when we talk about the issue of被动语态From the above mentioned, 倒装位置？Only by striking a balance between the two can we have a more objective idea of Only through joint efforts can people really have a s

13、ound and efficient future.Solely by energy from the two parties can human race forever prosper.倒装位置？插入语Others, however, do not agree.They argue that, with the progress of human society, integrity is becoming increasingly important.插入语Others, however, do not agr练习 插入语The issue of building a green uni

14、versity, _, calls for more attention than any age in human history.presentlyThe conclusion, _, can be naturally worked out.therefore练习 插入语The issue of building a 问句位置？What is happiness? Apparently, peoples agreement can not be reached.How shall we look at the problem of reading books?What is the rea

15、son for such phenomenon?But, do lucky numbers really bring good fortune?问句位置？写作技巧（上）3 亮点修辞 My love is a red, red rose. My love is like a beautiful red rose. Robert Burns警句名言 Practice makes perfect.Even Homer nods. 写作技巧（上）3 亮点练习 句子结构There are countless reasons accounting for such noticeable phenomenon, according to my humble understanding. First, recreational activities are important. Second, they bring us a lot of fun. Finally, we can get a lot from them.句子间的平衡感练习 句子结构There a