2019版高考英语二轮复习练酷版练习：专题六 应用文写作常见8大文体(六)-祝贺信(含解析)

1、应用文写作常见 8 大文体(六)祝贺信一、一、写作架构要规范祝贺信是一种向收信人表示祝贺的信件，一般用于对收信人有什么喜事或取得了什么成绩，如婚姻、节日、寿诞、毕业等的祝贺。具体写作结构为：二、二、靓点句式背一番(一)开头常用语1I want to congratulate you with all my heart.我想向你致以最诚挚的祝贺。Congratulations on your winning first prize in the.contest.祝贺你在比赛中获得一等奖。Youknowhowexcitedandhappywefeltatthenewsof.Weareproudof

2、yourachievement.得知的消息，你不知道我们有多激动、多开心。我们为你取得的成就而自豪！(二)主体部分常用语1Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIknowmorethananyoneelsehow much effort you have putin.这些年来，我一直钦佩地注视着你的进步，我比任何人都知道你付出了多大的努力。2Iamdelightedthatthethreeyears of your effort has been rewarded in thisway.我很高兴你三年的努力得到了这样

3、的回报。3It is obvious that you will have a promising future.很显然，你将会有一个充满希望的未来。(三)结尾常用语1Wish you good luck and success in the coming .祝你在接下来的中有好运并取得成功。2I hope you can make every effort to realize your dream.我希望你尽一切努力实现你的梦想。三、三、润色完善很关键(2018潍坊三模)假定你是李华，得知你的英国好友Tom 通过了来华支教的申请，将于今年七月到边远地区教学。请根据下面的提示给他写一封祝贺信

4、：表示祝贺；分析可能遇到的挑战；注意：1.100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(一)准审题、准表达保基本分定体裁定体裁祝贺信定人称第二人称为主定时态一般现在时和一般将来时为主定要点定结构开头：祝贺事由(通过了来华支教申请)主体：面临的挑战(天气、学生基础、与人交流) 结尾：个人建议(了解当地风俗)；表达祝愿中档作文 DearCongratulations to yo！ You have passed your application to be a volunteer teacher for rural area.m more than delighted to learn you

5、will come to China this writing to tell you some relevant details.Thereisnodoubtthatyouwill face allkindsof challengesduringthistime.Firstly,theweatherthereis totally different from the w eather of London.You must prepare for the changeable weather in the mountainousarea.Secondly,childrentherearepoo

6、rinEnglish.Youwillhavedifficultyincommunicatingwith each other.Besides, you should learn more about local customs and manners in advance.It will help you adapt tothenewsurroundings.Youwillbeabletodoyourworkbetteronlywhenyouarewellprepared.Yours， Li Hua(二)巧润色、大升级创高分(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文) Dear Tom，(1)Con

7、gratulationstoyouforhavingpassedyourapplicationtobeavolunteerteacherforruralareas合并句为一个简单句morethandelightedtolearnyouwillcometoChinathiswritingtotellyou some relevantdetails.Thereisnodoubtthatyouwill(2)befacedwith词汇升级(3)varietiesof词汇升级challengesduringthistime.Firstly,theweatherthereistotallydifferen

8、tfrom (4)that (ofLondon.Youmust(5)make preparationsforthechangeableweatherinthemountainousarea.(6)Secondlychildrenthereareso poorinEnglishthatyouwillhavedifficultyincommunicatingwitheachother.合并句)Besides, you (7)are supposed to (词汇升级) learn more about local customs and manners in advance,(8)which wi

9、ll help you adapt to the new surroundings ( 升 级句为定语从句)(9)Only when you are wellpreparedwillyoubeabletodoyourworkbetter(升级句为倒装句)Yours， Li Hua四、四、“一题两用”错不犯下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有 10 处语言错误，请改正。Dear Tom，Congratulationsforyou!trulyhappytolearnthatyourapplicationtobethevolunteerteacherforrural areas has

10、approved and come to China thisJuly.Since this is yourfirstvisitto China, and I would like to list several things relating.First, prepare forthe changeableweatherinthemountainarea.Second,childrentherewerepoorinEnglish.Third,youmightnotbe accustomed to the localdiet.In addition,dot forget to learn about local customs and manner in advance, what will help you fit in with thenewsurroundings.Onlywhenyouarewellpreparedwillyoubeabletodo