中考英语写作指导课写作课-(共30张)课件

1、How do we write a composition?12How do we write a composition? 基本句型结构的掌握简单句的句子结构：1. 主语+谓语。（这里的谓语为行为动词）2. 主语+谓语+宾语。3. 主语+谓语（及物动词）+间接宾语+直接宾语4. 主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语（补充说明宾语的成分就叫做宾语补足语）。5,主语+系动词（be/keep/stay/remain/taste/look/sound/smell/feel）+表语（形容词，名词，介词短语）这种结构表示一种状态22022/9/28 基本句型结复合句：其结构是：从句+逗号+主句 = 主句+从句（

2、1）条件状语从句： 主句+连词（if , unless ）+从句（2）时间状语从句 ：主句+连词（when , while , after , before , until ,till，as soon as ）+从句（3）原因状语从句： 主句+连词（because ）+从句（4）宾语从句：主语+谓语动词+that / if /whether / 疑问词+从句。.32022/9/28复合句：其结构是：从句+逗号+主句 = 主句+从句32022一审(search)二列(list)三加(add)四连(connect)五美(beautify)考场作文五步法While writing42022/9/28

3、一审(search)二列(list)三加(add)四连(co假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报SurveyNamesHobbiesDream JobsReasons Yi Ke writingwriterBring her pleasure and success Li Rui travellingguideExperience life and learn about different cultures Wu Fanlooki

4、ng after anima1sWWF workerhelp animals live in peace I(Xiao Peng) 52022/9/28假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、时态、字数、结构、提示要点和补充信息。写作第一步：审(search)62022/9/28写作第一步：审(search)62022/9/26假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查报告。SurveyNa

5、mesHobbiesDream JobsReasonsYi KewritingwriterBring her pleasure and successLi Ruitrave11ingguideExperience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1turesWu Fan1ooking after anima1sWWF workerhe1p anima1s 1ive in peaceI(Xiao Peng) 主题字数人称体裁提示要点补充信息一般现在时时态72假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组用简单的单词、短语和句子列出文章要点提纲。 注

6、意：要根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用明知是错的单词或没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道，符合英语表达习惯。列 (list)写作第二步：82022/9/28用简单的单词、短语和句子列出文章要点提纲。列 (list) Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes t

7、ravelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures. Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace. My dream is to work at school . I want to be an English teacher. Because I like speaking E

8、nglish. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. 92022/9/28 Yi Kes hobby is writing. 加首尾句，使结构完整。可以采取总分总三段式结构或总分一段式结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。加(add)写作第三步：102022/9/28加首尾句，使结构完整。加(add)写作第三步：102022/Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success.

9、Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with ch

10、ildren and it makes me happy and pleased. Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.a nice heada nice taila nice body112022/9/28Yi Kes hobby is writing. She 恰当运用关联词，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。连 (connect)写作第四步：122022/

11、9/28恰当运用关联词，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。连 (c英语作文连接词1.表文章结构顺序：First of all; Firstly/First; Secondly/Second And then; Finally; In the end; At last 2.表并列补充关系：What is more; Besides; not onlybut also, In addition; 3.表转折对比关系：However; But; Although; On the one handOn the other hand ; sothat4.表 因 果 关 系： Because; As;

12、So; As a result ， therefore5.表换一种方式表达的：In other words; that is to say 6.表进行举例说明：For example; such as +n/doing7.表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, 8.表达自己观点：As far as I know; In my opinion，to my understanding, from my point of view,9.表总结：In short; in general ;As I see, As for me, As we all know,

13、in a word; All in all; Generally speaking， 132022/9/28英语作文连接词1.表文章结构顺序：First of all; Boys and girls， Everyone has hobbies and dreams. Now let me share ours with you. Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui

14、 likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . he can experience different life and learn about different cultures. Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. he wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace. I want to be an English teacher. I like speaking English. I can be good with child

15、ren and it makes me happy and pleased. I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.alsoIn this wayBecause 142022/9/28 Boys and girls，alsoIn this wa美 (beautify)用好词好句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：152022/9/28美 (beautify)用好词好句，美化文章。在有把握的情况Skill One 适当运用名言或俗语Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbi

16、es and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.Yi Kes hobby is writing. So she thinks writing makes her relaxed and it also brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. In this way he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after ani

17、mals. I want to be an English teacher. Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.She wants to be a writer .She wants to be a successful writer in the future, just like Mo Yan. He wants to b

18、e a guide . He is looking forward to travelling abroad so he wants to be a guide in foreign countries. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace. When she grows up, she wants to be a WWF worker to save the animals in danger and help animals live in peace.Time is money. 一寸光阴一寸金Time wa

19、its for no man.岁月不待人Knowledge is power.知识就是力量Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧Its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老162022/9/28Skill One 适当运用名言或俗语Boys aSkill Two Make your sentences correct(标题、大小写、标点、单词拼写、语法错误、人称代词、第三人称单数等等）Good good study, day day up.We should d

20、o sports a week once.Watch TV too much is bad for your eyes.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekWatchingbeachieve172022/9/28Skill Two Make your sentences Skill Three Express in different ways. 简单句的扩展 She is a tall girl. She has long hair. She is a tall g

21、irl and she has long hair. (添加并列连词and) She is a tall girl who has long hair. ( 运用关系代词who引导定语从句)182022/9/28 Skill Three Express Express in different ways When he spoke more, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important for us to learn

22、 English grammar.同义表达的替换192022/9/28Express in different waysWe sh他们在海滩上听音乐。A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach202022/9/28他们在海滩上听音乐。A They listened t她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C

23、She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the 212022/9/28她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is verySummary:searchlistaddconnectbeautify222022/9/28Summary:searchlistaddconnectbe一诊写作那些事儿After writing:232022/9/28一诊写作那些事儿After writing:232022/9中考书面表达评分标准第一档（很好）（17-20分） 包含所有信息要点，能围绕信息适当发挥，

24、内容丰富。使用较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚，没有或几乎没有语言错误，完全达到写作目标，格式正确。书写工整，规范，美观。第二档（好）（13-16分） 完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点，使用了要求的语言结构和词汇能满足任务；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚，达到预期写作目标。第三档（一般）（9-12分） 基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯， 格式正确，书写状况。第四档（较差）（5-8分） 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息，格式不正确，书写较差。第五档（差）（0-4分） 未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，语句无条理，未能清楚传达信息。未写直接0分。242022/9/28中考书面表达评分标准第一档（很好）（17-20分）2420一诊写作中出现的问题及现象：1.语法错误: you eyes， must to do You should keep to do eye exercises. And dont watch phone s