中考英语书面表达写作训练记叙文写作课件(35张)

1、记叙文写作记叙文写作记叙文是以写人记事为主的文章 记叙文的要求根据提供的情景组织语言材料，编写成文。一般说来记叙文有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素 （五个“w” when，where，who，what，why以及how）。记叙文是以写人记事为主的文章 记叙文的人称 一般使用第一人称和第三人称第一人称 亲切，身临其境 自转，本人的经历或耳闻目 睹的事件 第三人称 客观 对重大事情的客观报道， 以及记叙 他人的经历或事迹。记叙文的人称记叙文的时态 因为叙述的事件都是过去发生的，因此文章的时态是过去时。根据实际需要穿插使用过去进行时态和过去完成时态. （如果介绍人物或单位的现在或将来情况，

2、现在和一般将来时态）记叙文的时态记叙文的篇章结构： 开头the beginning-交代必要的背景，如：时间，地点，人物等。中间the middle-交代故事情节（事情的主体）。如：事件的发生，发展和前因后果结尾the ending-事情的结果或感想，愿望等（the result or feeling）记叙文的篇章结构： 根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。 短文要写得连贯、完整。Sample 1 根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事1. 主题 :2. 时态：3. 人称:1. Go over the requirementA story （a traf

3、fic accident)past tenseTom , he 1. 主题 :1. Go over the requiremTom /ride a bike Along the street/roadA few days ago/ the other day/ one day2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)Tom /ride a bike 2. Go over thThe driver/ frightened/ run away 2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where,

4、when, why, how)The driver/ frightened/ run awA woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch2. Go over the pictures（who, what, where, when, why, how)A woman/ remember the number oCooperation and discussion Contents:1、讨论写作思路. 1点题（时间、地点）2事件的起因3事件的发展/过程4事件的结果5扣题2、交流所需句型、词汇.Cooperat

5、ion and discussion Con My presentation My presenta The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could

6、. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his wrong doing.Passage 13. Writing a passage The other

7、 day, Tom was Key wordssentencesA woman saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. The driver was caught.ride a bike /run fast tosee the accident/remember the number /call the police /be caught be frightened /run awayhit him/fall off his bikeWhen Tom was riding alo

8、ng the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.The driver was so frightened that he ran away.Key wordssentencesA woman saw HAVE A TRYHAVE A TRY2004年辽宁下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生的一件事。请根据图片所提供的信息用英语为你校的“英语园地”写一篇短文。注意：短文须包括所有图片的主要内容。短文的内容要连贯、完整；短文单词数：100左右（已给句子中的单词不计入总词数）；参

9、考词汇：货摊stand (n.) ; 抢夺 snatch (v.) ; 逮捕 arrest (v.)2004年辽宁下面4幅图片描述的是星期天上午在中山公园里发生中考英语书面表达写作训练记叙文写作课件(35张PPT)星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊One Sunday morning,；in Zhongshan Park.；At an ice-cream stand年轻妇女的包被抢snatch her handbag away人们追赶抢包者run after the snatcher在附近长排椅上坐着一位老人There be sb. sitting on the bench nearby提纲星期

10、天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊提纲从老人身旁跑过Run past the old man拿起伞；将伞放在他两腿之间；pick up his umbrella ; put it between the two legs of the snatcher; 摔一大跟斗fall down on the ground heavily从老人身旁跑过两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者Came in a police car; arrest sb.感谢老人的帮助Thank sb. for his help 称赞老人的机智Praise the old man for his cleverness两名警察来到并逮捕抢劫者On

11、e Sunday morning, many people went to Zhongshan Park. As it was very hot, some people got thirsty and were trying to buy some ice-cream. Suddenly a woman at the stand shouted because a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. Seeing this, immediately a few people began to run after him. Howev

12、er, the snatcher ran so fast that it was not easy to catch him. Luckily , there was an old man sitting on a bench nearby. As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs. The young man cried and fell down on the ground hard. At t

13、he end, a police car came and arrested the snatcher. The woman thanked the old man for his help. And all the people Praise the old man for his cleverness.One Sunday morning, many peopGo over the requirement（person, tense, style） Summary : How to write a picture story?Go over the pictures（who, what,

14、where, when, why, how)Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. )Go over the requirement（personGoodbyeGoodbye基本篇章结构 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件） 事件的起因 事件的发展/过程 事件的结果 扣题 基本篇章结构记叙文句型优化记叙文句型优化半个月：half a month 15 days 半年： half a year 6 months两个礼拜: fortnight开始：at the beginning of

15、 summer 结束：at the end of winter有时：sometimes at times最后：At last eventually 结果：as a result consequently期间：Within / during the vocation - in the middle of the night 半个月：half a month 15 days 20年后：in 20 years 有一天：one day the other day 第二天：the following day 现在：Now at the present time 有一次：On one occasion 另

16、一次：On another occasion 一礼拜后：A week later a week passed / went by 晚上：In the evening / in the morning/ in the afternoon/ in towards evening/ morning/ afternoon 20年后：in 20 years 记叙常用链接词时间顺序：Early in the morning / In the early morning; In the middle of the day / At noon; Late in the afternoon / In the l

17、ate afternoon; Far / Deep into the night; 记叙常用链接词时间顺序：Early in the morn My presentation My presenta审题描述过去个人经历第三人称4.主题：3.人称：1.体裁：2.时态：记叙文体一般过去时审题描述过去第三人称4.主题：3.人称：1.体裁：2.时态：1点题（时间、地点）星期天上午，中山公园，冰淇淋货摊旁2事件的起因年轻妇女的包被抢3事件的发展/过程人们追赶抢包者 ；长排椅上坐着一位老人；抢包者从老人身旁跑过，老人用伞将他绊倒4事件的结果两名警察逮捕抢劫者：5扣题妇女感谢老人，人们称赞老人的机智1点题（

18、时间、地点） 副词：suddenly, unfortunately, luckily, immediately as a result so/suchthat two hours later, and 中考英语书面表达写作训练记叙文写作课件(35张PPT) 假如昨天下午在你上学的路上，你目睹了一起交通事故。事故的大体经过是这样的：一辆小汽车突然加速, 把离你不远处的妇女撞倒在地，她还抱着一个孩子,肇事车主不但没有停车反而加速逃跑。最后我把他们送去了医院。请就此事件写篇短文。字数：l00词左右。 1）体裁格式：记叙文叙事格式 2)中心人称：第人称 3)主体时态：般过去时 4)内容要点 一妇女携小孩被一辆小汽车幢倒 妇女和小孩都已受伤严重 3）你把伤者送往医院抢救，为她们祈祷；并希望肇事司机受到惩罚 假如昨天下午在你上学的路上A Car Accident The other day on my way to the school, I happened to involve in a car accident which I would never forget. Some pedestrians /pidestrin/ and I were crossing the street when