辞典第147天2018年8月16日

1、（2018/816：1461一写作（2018/816：1461一写作由于其图画出题的特点，在文章论证展开时，有时候就未必是畅所欲言的。以2005年考题章从孝顺老人，履行职责进入论述最为合理。而2014年考题中，图画为母亲和儿女彼此支角度写母女的彼此关爱，由此对比，同样涉及养老话题，2014年写作题目的写作略大于2005年的写度二、 写作风格体裁的写法可以严谨、也可以体现出散文杂文风格，甚至可以进行社会 和批评，这样同样一篇文章，出现的特点就不一样。这种较为 的写作对于考生至少产生以下三种影响当然这么出题也有其“ ”的一面，那就是由于题目看似简单，很多考生就会越写越 多、越写越快。最终写得越多，

2、则错误越多；而写得越快则控制不住自己的 ，论证层次可能 。五个角度对作 综合评定。考生切勿存侥幸心理，希望用几个模板句就能通过 h ctureh ctureontheleft,ayoungbeautifulwomanwasmovingsteadilyforward alongaroad,holdingherdaughtershand. heotherdrawing,thirtyyearshas elapsed,andthewomansbeautyfadesasshegetsolder.B heerfulandhealthy, she re s on her daughter for a hap

3、py retirement.Mutualsupportmeansmentalcomfortandspiritualbackup.Whenachildisyoung, hisparentsprovidehimwithdailynechasfoodandclothes,guaranteeing by loneliness, depresandanxiety.Soitistheirchildrensresponsibility to extend their helhandsandshowtheirabidingloveandgenuinesincerity. his way, their pare

4、nts,heiryearsofsettingsun,arelesslikelytosuffer fromthementalnolong heshadowofsolitudeandTowit,thecornerstoneofahouseholdischildrensfilialfidelity,which is synonymous with responsibility, obligation, love and devotion.(173 h ctureh ctureontheleft,ayoungwomanwasmovingsteadilyforwardalonga road,holdin

5、gthehandofherdaughter. heoneontherightside,thirtyyears haselapsed,andthewomansbeautyfadesasshegetsolder.Butshelookscheerful, because she can rely on her daughter for a happy retirement.Love is mutual and lasting.nks to this noble feeling, children receive material support and mental security until t

6、hey growotheiradulthood.However, when they stnto maturity, their parents have beenhe twilight years.t dispels old peoples solitude, depresandanxiety.Withloveanddevotion, wi blessing,theirsoulsarenot orment he kingdomofThepriceofloveisabovetherubies,anditisthemightiestofthemightiest. For an elder, it

7、 is a gentle rain from heaven, blessing those who receive it. Probably,themostrom heworldwouldbethefact twestaytogether untiltheoldage.Sup esuchamomentwhentheoldwoman hispictureabove coulddonothingb rouchinawheelchair,withhereyeshalfclosedandina halfsleep.Shecouldstill,inherlosingconsciousness,heara

8、farawayvoice, “Dont be afraid, Mum! Im your daughter.”(248 了物质支持和情感保障，直到他们步入成年。但是当他们步入成 时刻，他们的父母却已经到了落日之年。这时，成年 的关爱就好象明媚的阳光，会驱走老人的孤独、压抑和郁们的 在天国不会痛苦。“”3. 写作模式三：假设考生单词量有限，那么是不是就无法写好2014年的作文呢？考生不以用通俗易懂的词汇，以较少的字数写出 2014 年的考题cture on the left, there stand a child and her mother.he other picture,thechildh

9、asgrownuptobeayoungwoman,whotakesholdofhermother s arm.Clearly, sheisreadytocarriesoutherduty oftakingcareofhTh cture lsus ttruelovebet nparentsandchildrenisdeepand great.Themajorreasonistparentsaffordthesechildrenlivingcostandraise themup.timeenergy. So when they are getting old, their children are

10、 suptheirfamilyandmoralobligation,improvetheseoldpeopleslivingstandards, and give them a happy retirement.hisi e,itisadvised tthegrown-upchildrenenhancetheirawareness oftakingcareoftheirparents.Itisimportant ttheyshowrespecttotheold peoplesideasandpayattentiontotheirmentalsus.By ngso,thesechildren c

11、an truly take their responsibility and give their parents a happy life.（178 建议成状态。这样做，这状态。这样做，这4. 写作模式四：甚至可以写成国家养老和社会养老的关心，只不过很少有考生敢于这样 写。所谓的“ 高考作文”模式。h ctureontheleft,ayoungwomanwasmovingsteadilyforwardalonga road,holdingthehandofherdaughter. heoneontherightside,thirtyyears haselapsed,andthewomansb

12、eautyfadesasshegetsolder.Butshelookscheerful, because she can rely on her daughter for a happy retirement.Behindtheseeminglyrom picture,thecartoonisttendstoignoretheother sideofaso lproblem, tis,itisunrealistictoleaveoldpeopleshealth andhappinesstotheirchildrensconcern.Afterall,theirsonsanddaughters

13、take upmuchoftheirtimeandenergyontheirwork.Meanwhile,theyhavetocopewith the enseso lcompetitionorsupporttheirfami s. hissituation,how coulditbe sibleforthemtofullytakeuptheresponsibilityoftakingcare oftheirparents?Orsup e tthetwogenerationsliveunderthesameroof.In aneraofsoaringhousepri ,howcoulditbe

14、 siblefortheelderstolivea better-offlife,espe llywhenpeopleofdifferentagesshareinashabbyapartment less n60squaremeters? hispleasantandrom ambience,whereis thedutyofthenational ernment?Isntitroleof t ernmenttoprovide the senior citizens with so l security system, medical insurance and nursing (224 wo

15、rds)和 归于其 的责任是不现实的。毕竟他们的 需要在自己的工作上占用大量时间和审题和背诵一样重要： 写作对于考生的有利之处在于，无论水平高低，大都能在拿到题目后，根据题目暗示写出一些内容。但是对于只会背、不爱审题、或者 的考生，则很容易出问题。如题目上要求写孝心、责任、关爱，而考生却写“ 社会上在160字至200字的写作要求限定内，一般几个句子就完成段落要求。写得越少，反而挑选自己会写的，回避自己不会写的。 写作虽然限定写作范围，但是依然留出了不少发挥的空间。考生如果 发现这些空间，就可能将自己会的内容发挥到极致，同时2014习。例如在爱心关注的写法中就有以下常用词句可选：1）lendah

16、elhandtowards 之手）；2）providepeople withemotional support andspiritualcomfort,andspiritualbackup（为人们提供情感支持和精神抚慰）3） vethemfromthedifficultsituation(帮助他们脱离困境)；4）endowpeople withoptimism,courageandfaith （赋予人们乐观、勇气和信念）；5）strengthen mutual support among different sol groups增强互助（增强不同社会团体的互助）；6）consolidateso

17、lstability（增强社会凝聚力）。总结归纳有两个好处：1462“conquer（Ifsubdueagroupofpeople,theyforce. efears（about theingholiday.或者subduelaughterandcheers,subdue1462“conquer（Ifsubdueagroupofpeople,theyforce. efears（about theingholiday.或者subduelaughterandcheers,subdueonesdesire to do something（抑制，什么呢辞典的释义为以个人观点为基础，而非以事实为基础(b

18、ased opinionandideasandnotonfacts.tisbasedonfactsisobjective.的14644）第4subside学过的decrease同的，decreasesubside这一下子命中了广大考生 门”，即在一些问题的看法上，偏偏就不知道自己的想法是什么这样说也许大家接受不了，那么 换一个说法：你的范文是背诵的，从根本上就是去接受别人的想 法，而不是自己的想法，既然想法不是自己的，哪里来的“ ”呢？2）即使大家知道自己的想法是什1）首先要列举事的结论（opinion）考博写作 还好一些，有时候写 you mustsupport your opinion w

19、ith facts or ex les. 考 研写作 则比较“泛泛”，只提到 giveyourcomment, retth cture，既不说要求说理，也 从事实出发，那是客观啊(objective)， 14655）第5Theresnosubstitute for（无星Onethingsubstitutesforanothertaketheplace比辞典中的substituteviolentfordialoguesubstituteforB，就可以将两个首先容易写反，其次就是即使掌握了substitute两个名词也不好选，对于想词能力较差的同学，可能是看得懂，但是不见得做得到。这种情况下，可

20、以考虑使There be 句型：Education can provide youwiththetheory,buttheresnosubstituteforpracticalexperience. （教育提供了理论，但当进入到14655）第5Theresnosubstitute for（无星Onethingsubstitutesforanothertaketheplace比辞典中的substituteviolentfordialoguesubstituteforB，就可以将两个首先容易写反，其次就是即使掌握了substitute两个名词也不好选，对于想词能力较差的同学，可能是看得懂，但是不见

21、得做得到。这种情况下，可以考虑使There be 句型：Education can provide youwiththetheory,buttheresnosubstituteforpracticalexperience. （教育提供了理论，但当进入到theresnosubstitutefor很多subtletyisthequalityofbeingnotimmedia yobviousornoticeable,and therefore difficult to describe. 即语言中那些不太引人瞩目的细节，如果能发现这些细节就好了， Butforthesakeofourchildre

22、nandourfuture,wemustdomoretocombatclimatechange. Now,itstrue tnosingleeventmakesatrend.Butthefactisthe12hottestyearsonrecord haveallcome helast15.Heatwaves,droughts,wildfires,floods-allarenowmore ense. Wecanchoosetobe ve tSuperstormSandy,andthemostseveredroughtindecades,andworstwildfiressomes eshave

23、everseenwerealljustafreakcoincidence.OrwecanEducationcanprovideyouwithmethodologybutthereisnosubstitutefordiligence（教同理，上句也可以套写为: A teacher can provide you wit owledge, skills or even the methodologybuttheresnosubstituteforyourowndiligence （在公司的经营策略里，没 能替代诚信Parentscanprovidechildrenwithfoodclothesan

24、dmoneybuttheresnosubstitutefor the economic independence of these young people. （家长可以为孩子提供食品、衣服和钱，但 辞典例句：Thepain(Catherinessobsubsidedfeeling，后者是感情。在英语中其他表示感 彩的词也可以和 subside o 者椅子上的状况(tosinkorsettledown oasofasitsubside oa 看出来了吧，这其实是讲环保的，背下来吧14666）第6 看出来了吧，这其实是讲环保的，背下来吧14666）第6 实还是读 MyfellowAmerican

25、s,Americahasnevercomeeasy.Ourfreedom,our democracy,hasneverbeeneasySometimeswestumble;wemakemistakes;wegetfrustratedor discouraged.Butformore ntwo dredyearswehaveputthosethingsasideandplacedour collectiveshouldertothewheelofprogresstocreateandbuildandexpandthe sibilities ofindividualachievement;tofr

26、eeothernationsfromtyrannyandfear;topromotejustice,and fairness,andequalityunderthelaw,so tthewordssettop rbyourfoundersaremade realforeverycitizenTheAmericawewantforourkidsarisingAmericawherehonestwork isplentifulandcommunitiesstrong;whereprosperityiswidelysharedandopportunityforall letsusgoasfaraso

27、urdreamsandtoilwilltakeusnoneofitiseasy.Butifweworktogether; ifwesummonwhatisbestinus,withourfeetplantedfirmly odaybutoureyescasttowards tomorrowIknowitswithinourreachBe veit.Godblessyou,andGodblesstheUnited S es of America. to be ve heoverwhelming judgmentof scienceand act before its too late. 但是为了

28、 的子孙后代和未来， 须为应对气候变化做 的工作。单一事件并不代表一个趋势，这是确1215发频繁和严重。 可以选择相信超级风暴“桑迪”（SuperstormSandy）和几十年里最严重的干旱，以及forthesakeofcombatclimatechangenosingleeventmakesatrend：令我很 的一句话，makeatrend native speakerheatwavesdroughts, wildfiresfloods-all arenow morefrequentand more ense：前 and more enseandwerealljustafreakcoinc

29、idence：如果说“不是偶然的，不是孤立的事件”，可 以说 a freak coincidence, 如果加个 not, 就是否定句，, and were not all just a freak actbeforeitistoolate146714687）第7：such such as用法在讲andso on这里应该注意such at healmost pushedme over on thestairs. 这个句子的意思其实并不太重要，关是这个句子的组合方法，仔细看sucha其实是Hewasinahurry.Healmostmeoveronthestairs，是两句话，但是当suchat

30、thealmostpushedmeover146714687）第7：such such as用法在讲andso on这里应该注意such at healmost pushedme over on thestairs. 这个句子的意思其实并不太重要，关是这个句子的组合方法，仔细看sucha其实是Hewasinahurry.Healmostmeoveronthestairs，是两句话，但是当suchatthealmostpushedmeoveronthestairs.是用suchernetprovidespeoplewithsuchtclickofmousebutton,bulkofup-to-d

31、ateinformationisyattheirfingertips.（因特网为人们提供了如此如果erneteducation，Education也可promise，那么如果用suchis写呢1469suggest有关的词，写出It者It1）Theres no such a thing as+名词：Theres no such a thing as. The fact istwhat onestomakethebestuseofhisabilities,workdiligentlyandachievehisgoal. （s.Whatwestomakethebestuseourabilities

32、,workdiligentlyandachieveourgoals.写法不同，但是和1）中的意思一样，还可以倒过来，将such is our sucs放在段落的尾部，做总结用。3）suchisso-called+名词用于段首，表示 ，后面不用写句子，用动名词直接列举：Suchistheir so-calledfilialpietyrefusingtoprovidetheirparentswithfood,clothesandshelter.Due tothesebehaviors,theseseniorpeoplecannotimprovetheirlivingstandardsnordoth

33、eyreceive material support, considerate care and spiritual comfort.怎么写成功：AmericahasnevercomeeasyOurfreedomourdemocracyhasneverbeeneasy. SometimeswestumblewemakemistakeswegetfrustratedordiscouragedButformore n dredyears,wehaveputthosethingsasideandplacedourcollectiveshouldertothewheel of progress（Ame

34、ricanfreedom, democracysuc s，其余不动）怎么写美好未来：TheAmericawewantforourkidsarisingAmericawherehonestworkis plentifuland communities strong; whereprosperityiswidely shared andopportunityforalllets us go as far as our dreams and toil will take us（把AmericaChina）怎么写希望：Butifweworktogetherifwesummonwhatisbestinuswithourfeetfirmly odaybutoureyescasttowardstomorrowIknowitswithinourreach.（不换字，14709）第9suicide这玩