广东高考英语 高考真题研练命题 基础写作 课件1

1、高考真题研练2021/8/8 星期日12011广东高考真题以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道。2021/8/8 星期日2基本信息：书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授出版时间：2010年内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论2021/8/8 星期日3相关报道：中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取*耶鲁：Yale *哈佛：Harvard2021/8/8 星期日4写作内容根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍,内容

2、包括：1.图书的基本信息；2.图书的相关报道。写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯。2021/8/8 星期日5 认真审题：从命题形式上看，是中文提纲，但也完全可以转换为表格形式。从内容上看是要求写一篇图书介绍，属说明文。主体时态是一般过去时、一般现在时或现在完成时。 信息重组：基本信息有5个小点，相关报道有3个小题，我们要将信息重组为5组，以便用5句话来表达。根据信息点之间的关系密切程度或逻辑关系来组合，可分为：2021/8/8 星期日6 基本信息(1)和(3)关系密切，书名和出版时间必须用一句话来表达；(2)和(4)都有“作者”信息，即书的内容是作

3、者本人教育自己的女儿，因此，(2)和(4)用一句话来表达较好；要点(5)单独用一句话来表达。 相关报道，3个要点用两句话来表达，既可以(1)和(2)用一句话来表达，因为(1)和(2)之间有转折关系；也可以(2)和(3)用一句来表达，因为这两句之间有让步关系。2021/8/8 星期日7 在表格或提纲式中，表述方式多为不完整的句子，我们必须用完整的句子来表达，写成短文的形式。因此，一定要注意补全句子省略字眼。如，“(4)内容：作者”不能译成 “Contents: the author”，可用 “The book tells”或 “The author tells”来表达，在英文中不用content

4、s一词。表达提示：2021/8/8 星期日8 A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of p

5、arenting is superior, the traditional way or the American way. Version 12021/8/8 星期日9It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reporte

6、d to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.2021/8/8 星期日10 A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese wa

7、y. Ever since its publication, a heated discussion has been around about whether the Chinese way of educating is better than the American way. Version 22021/8/8 星期日11The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chuas way

8、 of parenting. A recent report says that Amys elder daughter, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.2021/8/8 星期日12has started a debate as to已经引起了一场关于的讨论a heated discussion has been aroused about已经引起了一场关于的讨论the Chinese version of the book这本书的中文版本美词佳句2021/8/8 星期日13the majority of 大多数的disagree

9、 with sb不同意某人的看法be reported to have done据报道已经It is reported that 据报道A recent report says that 最近报道2021/8/8 星期日142. 2010年广东高考真题以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。2021/8/8 星期日15内 容：公共场所禁烟实施时间：2011年1月1日起实施范围：全国目 标：所有室内公共场所无烟措 施：张贴禁烟标志相关数据：（1）吸烟人数：约3.5亿（2）分 布：男性75;女性：25（3）受二手烟影响人数：约5.4亿（4）因二手烟死亡人数：超过10万/年二手烟：secon

10、d-hand smoke2021/8/8 星期日16写作内容 略试题解读 要求写一则通讯，表示现状用一般现在时，“已经决定”用现在完成时，决定将要落实的事用一般将来时。 本题中没有一个是完整的句子，且信息点散而多，写作时一是注意信息的整合，二是要补全句子和省略字眼。2021/8/8 星期日17 The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country. This decision, which aims to make all indoor public places smoke-

11、free, will come into effect from the first day of 2011. To this end, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. Version 1 2021/8/8 星期日18Currently China has about 350 million smokers, among whom 75% are men and 25% are women. Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smo

12、ke， which causes 100，000 deaths per year.2021/8/8 星期日19 The Chinese government has decided that smoking be banned in indoor public places all over the country. This decision, which will be carried out from January 1,20011,aims to bring a complete smoke-free indoor environment. In order to achieve th

13、is goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. Version 22021/8/8 星期日20Statistics show that China has approximately 350,000，000 smokers, among whom 75 percent are men and 25 percent are women. Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100，000 deaths p

14、er year.2021/8/8 星期日21in public places在公共场所aim to (do) 以为目标，旨在come into effect开始实施；开始生效to this end为了这个目的；为达此目的no-smoking signs禁烟标志in order to achieve this goal为了达到这个目标put up张贴carry out实施；进行cause (132) deaths引起/造成(132人)死亡Statistics show that. 数据显示美词佳句2021/8/8 星期日223. 2009年广东高考真题你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这

15、次采访的情况：2021/8/8 星期日23时间：上周末对象：眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授主题：我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness)问题基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50(2)人数：世界第一专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂(2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视(3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动(4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关2021/8/8 星期日24试题解读1. 从方框内采访的情况来看，要点显得多，但从写作内容列的三条来看，要点显得少，因此，写作时需要我们根各信息点之间的逻辑关系进行组合或分解成五组信息，以便用五个句子来表达。(1)“采访的时间、对象和主题”可以

16、用一句话来表达；(2)因为“发生率高”与“有近视的人数排世界第一”逻辑关系紧密，所以“中小学生近视的发生率及人数”用一句话来表达；2021/8/8 星期日25(3)导致近视的原因很复杂，所以没有哪一种药物能治愈近视，逻辑关系紧密，故“专家解读”的(1)(2)用一句话来表达；(4)“专家解读”中，“建议”本身有“不要过度用眼”和“多参加户外活动”两个信息点，用一个句子表达到；(5)“专家解读”中，“特别提示”用一个句子来表达。2021/8/8 星期日261.词组或短语。rank the first位据第一；名列前茅point out指出the cause for. 的原因do outdoor a

17、ctivities做户外活动be related to. 与有关have an interview with sb. 采访某人美词佳句2021/8/8 星期日272. 以下是写采访报道的典型句式,建议在熟读范文的基础上重点记忆。(1)Last weekend， I had an interview with sb. concerning/about sth.上周,我就(某问题)采访了(某人)(2)According to sb.， . 根据某人的看法，(3)He pointed out that.他指出(4)He suggested that.(should) do.他建议(5)He part

18、icularly reminded us that.他特别提醒我们2021/8/8 星期日28 Last weekend， I had an interview with Professor Wang， an eye-doctor， concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China. According to Professor Wang， slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted， ra

19、nking the first in the world. 2021/8/8 星期日29He also pointed out that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness. He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities. He particularly reminded us that how to

20、hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness.2021/8/8 星期日304. 2008年广东高考真题你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。2021/8/8 星期日31背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断1928：中断1932：重回奥运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。写作内容请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：2021/8/8 星期日32试题解读 该题以中文提

21、纲的形式出现，要点已非常明确，写作时不易漏掉要点。但提纲简明，省略了一些句子成分，大多不完整，写作时一定要注意补全句子，如“现状”后的“稳步发展”都缺少主语“shooting这个运动项目(the sport)”，写作时要补上。同时也要注意省略字眼，象提纲中的“背景”“现状”，由后面句子的内容本身可以体现出来，不要再将其译出，否则就会画蛇添足。2021/8/8 星期日33 因提纲本身是按时间顺序排列的，大体上可按此顺序一条一条写出来即可，但写作要求中规定只能用五句话，所以还需将提纲中的内容进行适当组合，组合成五个要点以便用五个句子来表达。如：1904年和1928年两次中断，既然都是中断，就可合在

22、一起来表述，既可以与“1896年第一次成为奥运项目”合在一句之中，也可与“1932年重回奥运会”这个要点合在一句中。2021/8/8 星期日34 要做到篇章连贯，一是前后句子内容本身要逻辑关系紧密，二是要适当使用连接性词语，如本文可使用but, and等连词。2021/8/8 星期日35 Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were conteste

23、d during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.Version 12021/8/8 星期日36 It was not until at the end of

24、 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate

25、in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896s three events to todays seventeen.Version 22021/8/8 星期日37develop into发展成为in the late 19th century在19世纪晚期return to.恢复到compete in参加be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事grow steadily from.to.由稳步发展成It was not until.that.直到才美词佳句2021/8/8 星期日385. 2007年广东高考真题上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查（survey）以下是调查数据：2021/8/8 星期日39偶像(idol) 女生 男生 伟 人 18 18 父 母 25 1.1 影视明星 50 14 体育明星 6 48 没有偶像 1 92021/8/8 星期日40试题解读1. 本题虽以表格的形式出现，但可转换成下列图表形式，两者完全相同：2021/8/8 星期日412. 像这样要求表达两者之间的差异对比的作文，要善于运用while (而却)，but, however, on the contrary等连接性词语。表示相同用