山作文之钟南山英语作文

1、钟南山英语作文篇一：英语话题作文】英语话题作文话题 1 ：家庭、朋友和周围的人part 1: some tips概述：人物介绍属于记叙文( narration )的写作范畴，写作时要围 绕人物组织材料。所写短文中应包括人物 (who) 、时间 (when) 、地点 (where) 、主要事件 (what) 等内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容 清楚，并注意结构的完整性。技巧点拨：仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：确定类型：人物介绍确定体裁 : 记叙文确定主体时态 : 一般现在时确定主体人称 : 第三人称合理安排短文的结构层次，组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性，

2、要与表达内容一致。审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲，其次写出草稿，经过修改之后， 再正式成文。一、人物介绍的写作步骤：age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth placefamily backgroundeducation backgroundbig events in his or her life (in order of time)evaluation二、人物介绍写作常用的词组及句子：age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth placeage:they might ha

3、ve needs and problems of their own.birthday and birth place: was/ were born in oneg. she was born in poland on nov.7,1867.born in 1985, he is now an 24-year-old student.sex marriage1eg. he is a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.he is 35, male and unmarried.appearanceeg: she is a lovely gir

4、l, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long black hair.he is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.height: eg. he is 1.76 meters tall. he is 176 centimeters tall. he is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.health:eg. well looked after, the children look healthy. he is not

5、 so strong, but (he s) in good health.family background was/ were born in/into a poor/ rich family his/her family was so poor that his/ her father was very strict with him the son of a poor family when he was a small boy/ young as a child/ as a boy of 15 during his/ her childhood spend his childhood

6、 inlive a happy/ hard life s family,eg. abraham lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in kentucky on february 12,1809. born into a poor clerk charles dickens had little cation background be admitted to collegegraduate from department of university when at college, he majored inrec

7、eive a doctor s degree go abroad for further studieseg. he started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later. he went to study in beijing university in 1984 and 4 years later he graduated (from that university).we learned many courses, such as english,maths and so on.he got his bachelor s (maste

8、r s, doctor s) degree inmathematics in april 1998.big events in one s lifebe interested in /be fond of work hard at serve as devote his lifetime/himself to concentrate himself todo research about/ into make up one s mind to do sth. do sth with great determination and perseverance 2 be strict in sth.

9、have a way of doing sth try one s best to do sth. encourage sb to do fight for, give up one s life for sb/sth win a prize/the first prize in competition TOC o 1-5 h z receive/obtain/win the nobel prize forbe good at do well in be crazy about enjoy make rapid progress inset a new world record ofequal

10、 the world record win(won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal be selected to/ become a member of study / train hard go through hardship overcome many difficulties have a gift/ talent for language, etceg. his favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis. in his spare time, he likes reading and enjoy

11、ing traveling. he s good at spoken english and even better at using computers.evaluation one of the best/ most importantset a good example fora model teacher/worker be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of be honored as (an excellent athlete) his hard work brought him great success he is the

12、pride of china.his heroic story spread all over the city make great contributions to consistency/perseverance is the key to success. be famous/known as be regarded as become a world champion at championshipsremember sb forevera new chapter of history has been turnedlei feng has been praised for his

13、communist spirit. an inspiring leader描写人物外貌和性格特征 good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired blue-eyed warm-heartedkind- heartedabsent-mindedbad-tempered near-sightedfar-sighted a strong will tall shortbeautiful prettylovely naughtysmartwise cleverbrightdiligen

14、tintelligent hard workinglazyhealthy3 humorous charming attractivetalkative confidentindependentpatient be in conditionbe out of condition finewell三、语法、句法高分 tipsa. 概况：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺 译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一外貌 , 性格：巧用 with 做定语 译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词 , 使文章精炼for further stu

15、dies.degree.生平 : 尽量用倒装 ,非限定定语从句等，润色文章2)e评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组) 2 )四、样本写作 姓名：刘翔出生年月： 1983 年 7 月 13 日 性别；男 出生地：上海 身高： 1.89 米 教练：孙海平 偶像： jordon 专项： 110 栏 成就： 2006 年 7 月 12 日在瑞士洛桑以 12 秒 88 破世界记录 爱好：听音乐，打游戏，看书 自评：为人诚恳，随和，自信 瑞士洛桑 : lausanne, switzerland 写作指导：组织材料，写出句子为人诚恳, 随和, 自信乐观的男孩刘翔 , 出生在 1983 年 7月13日

16、 上海.liuxiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.他的偶像是 jordon, 爱好是听音乐 , 看打游戏及看书 . he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books.拥有身高 1.89 米的他擅长 110 米栏 .with the height of 1.89 metres, he is good at 110 metres hurd

17、les .在他的教练孙海平的帮助下他取得了很多傲人的成绩 . under the training of sun haiping, he has gained many wonderful achievements.他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界记录 he broke the record by 12 88 on july 12th, 2006 in lausanne,switzerland.扩句成文，构成篇章 liu xiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.

18、4 he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. with the height of 1.89 meters, heis good at 110 meters hurdles . under the training of hiscoach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. he hasgained many wonderful achievements and one of achievements is t

19、hat he broke the record by 12 88 on july 12th,2006 in lausanne, switzerland.检查润色 3) 是否用 5 个句子时态是否正确 4) 是否漏掉必要信息人称是否一致 5) 是否语句连贯liu xiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai. he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games

20、and reading books. with the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. for example, he broke the asian record with the time 13 12 in 2002, and two years later, he wonthe championship again in 12 91 in athen

21、which ties the worldrecord. most excitingly, he broke the record by 12 88 on july12th, 2006 in lausanne, switzerland.part 2: have a try一 翻译下列句子姚老师是我们的英语老师，他今年 41 岁，瘦高个，带深度眼镜。黄老师是我们的英语老师，她 1970 年来到我们学校，已经当了30 多年的英语老师。达 . 芬奇 (leonardo da vinci) 是 16 世纪意大利著名画家，科学家。他是一位天才， 把科学知识和艺术想象结合起来。蒙娜丽莎是一幅享有盛誉的肖像画

22、杰作。它是达. 芬奇的代表作。帕瓦罗蒂 (pavarotti) 被誉为 “高音 c(the high c 之s)王 ”，为古典 音乐和歌剧的普及做出了杰出贡献。赵普从小家境贫寒，初中毕业后入伍。他 24 岁下岗，开一家小服装店谋生。安南( annan )先生出生于 1938 年 4 月 8 日，加纳( ghana ) 他在加纳、美国和瑞士上顶尖的大学，获得经济学和管理学的硕士 学位。安南( annan )先生为建立一个更有组织、更和平的世界所做 出的工作得到大家的承认。5【篇二：英语话题作文】英语话题作文话题 1 ：家庭、朋友和周围的人part 1: some tips概述：人物介绍属于记叙文

23、( narration )的写作范畴，写作时要围 绕人物组织材料。所写短文中应包括人物 (who) 、时间 (when) 、地点 (where) 、主要事件 (what) 等内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容 清楚，并注意结构的完整性。技巧点拨：仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：确定类型：人物介绍确定体裁 : 记叙文确定主体时态 : 一般现在时确定主体人称 : 第三人称合理安排短文的结构层次，组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容一致。4 审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲，其次写出草稿，经过修改之后， 再正式成文。一、人物介绍的写作步骤：age, sex,

24、 appearance, character, birthday and birth placefamily backgroundeducation backgroundbig events in his or her life (in order of time)evaluation二、人物介绍写作常用的词组及句子：1. age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth placeage:they might have needs and problems of their own.birthday and birth place: wa

25、s/ were born in oneg. she was born in poland on nov.7,1867. born in 1985, he is now an 24-year-old student.sex marriage1eg. he is a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter. he is 35, male and unmarried.appearanceeg: she is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long black ha

26、ir.he is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.height:eg. he is 1.76 meters tall. he is 176 centimeters tall.he is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.health:eg. well looked after, the children look healthy. he is not so strong, but (he s) in good health.family background was/ we

27、re born in/into a poor/ rich family his/her family was so poor that his/ her father was very strictwith him the son of a poor family when he was a small boy/ young as a child/ as a boy of 15 TOC o 1-5 h z during his/ her childhood spend his childhood ins family,live a happy/ hard life eg. abraham li

28、ncoln, the son of a poor family, was born in kentucky on february 1 2,1809. born into a poor clerkcharles dickens had little cation background be admitted to collegegraduate from department of university when at college, he majored inreceive a doctor s degree go abroad for further studi

29、es eg. he started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later. he went to study in beijing university in 1984 and 4 years later he graduated (from that university).we learned many courses, such as english,maths and so on.he got his bachelor s (master s, doctor s) degree inmathematics in april 1998

30、.big events in one s lifebe interested in /be fond of work hard at serve as devote his lifetime/himself to concentrate himself todo research about/ into make up one s mind to do sth. do sth with great determination and perseverance 2 be strict in sth.have a way of doing sth try one s best to do sth.

31、 encourage sb to do fight for, give up one s life for sb/sthwin a prize/the first prize in coimtiopnet TOC o 1-5 h z receive/obtain/win the nobel prize forbe good at do well in be crazy about enjoy make rapid progress inset a new world record ofequal the world recordwin(won) a gold /silver/ bronze m

32、edal be selected to/ become a member of study / train hard go through hardship overcome many difficulties have a gift/ talent for language, etc eg. his favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis. in his spare time, he likes reading and enjoying traveling. he s good at spoken english and eve

33、n better at using computers.evaluation one of the best/ most importantset a good example fora model teacher/worker be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of be honored as (an excellent athlete) his hard work brought him great success he is the pride of china.his heroic story spread all over th

34、e city make great contributions to consistency/perseverance is the key to success. be famous/known as be regarded as become a world champion at cham pionships remember sb forever a new chapter of history has been turned lei feng has been praised for his communist spirit. an inspiring leader描写人物外貌和性格

35、特征 good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired blue-eyed warm-heartedkind- heartedabsent-mindedbad-tempered near-sightedfar-sighted a strong will tall shortbeautiful prettylovely naughtysmartwise cleverbrightdiligentintelligent hard workinglazyhealthy3 humorous

36、 charming attractivetalkative confidentindependentpatientbe in conditionbe out of condition finewell三、语法、句法高分 tipsa. 概况：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一外貌 , 性格：巧用 with 做定语 译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词 , 使文章精炼 1) for further studies.degree.生平 : 尽量用倒装 ,非限定定语从句等，润色文章2)e评估：注

37、意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组) 2 )四、样本写作 姓名：刘翔出生年月： 1983 年 7 月 13 日 性别；男 出生地：上海 身高： 1.89 米 教练：孙海平 偶像： jordon 专项： 110 栏 成就： 2006 年 7 月 12 日在瑞士洛桑以 12 秒 88 破世界记录 爱好：听音乐，打游戏，看书 自评：为人诚恳，随和，自信 瑞士洛桑 : lausanne, switzerland 写作指导：组织材料，写出句子1) 为人诚恳 , 随和, 自信乐观的男孩刘翔 , 出生在 1983 年 7 月 13 日 上海.liuxiang, an honest, easy-going a

38、nd confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.2) 他的偶像是 jordon, 爱好是听音乐 , 看打游戏及看书 . he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books.拥有身高 1.89 米的他擅长 110 米栏 .with the height of 1.89 metres, he is good at 110 metres hurdles .在他的教练孙海平的帮助下他取得了很多傲人的成绩 . und

39、er the training of sun haiping, he has gained many wonderful achievements.他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界记录 he broke the record by 12 88 on july 12th, 2006 in lausanne, switzerland.扩句成文，构成篇章 liu xiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.4 he has an idol of jordon and li

40、kes listening to music, playing games and reading books. with the height of 1.89 meters, heis good at 110 meters hurdles . under the training of hiscoach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. he hasgained many wonderful achievements and one of achievements is that he broke the record by 12 88

41、on july 12th,2006 in lausanne, switzerland.检查润色 3) 是否用 5 个句子1) 时态是否正确 4) 是否漏掉必要信息人称是否一致 5) 是否语句连贯liu xiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai. he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. with the he

42、ight of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. for example, he broke the asian record with the time 13 12 in 2002, and two years later, he wonthe championship again in 12 91 in athen which ties the worldrecord. mo

43、st excitingly, he broke the record by 12 88 on july12th, 2006 in lausanne, switzerland.part 2: have a try一 翻译下列句子姚老师是我们的英语老师，他今年 41 岁，瘦高个，带深度眼镜。黄老师是我们的英语老师，她 1970 年来到我们学校，已经当了30 多年的英语老师。达 . 芬奇 (leonardo da vinci) 是 16 世纪意大利著名画家，科学家。他是一位天才， 把科学知识和艺术想象结合起来。蒙娜丽莎是一幅享有盛誉的肖像画杰作。它是达. 芬奇的代表作。帕瓦罗蒂 (pavarotti

44、) 被誉为 “高音 c(the high c 之s)王 ”，为古典 音乐和歌剧的普及做出了杰出贡献。赵普从小家境贫寒，初中毕业后入伍。他 24 岁下岗，开一家小服装店谋生。安南( annan )先生出生于 1938 年 4 月 8 日，加纳( ghana )。 他在加纳、美国和瑞士上顶尖的大学，获得经济学和管理学的硕士 学位。安南( annan )先生为建立一个更有组织、更和平的世界所做 出的工作得到大家的承认。5【篇三：英语话题作文】英语话题作文话题 1 ：家庭、朋友和周围的人part 1: some tips概述：人物介绍属于记叙文( narration )的写作范畴，写作时要围 绕人物组

45、织材料。所写短文中应包括人物 (who) 、时间 (when) 、地点 (where) 、主要事件 (what) 等内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容 清楚，并注意结构的完整性。技巧点拨：仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：1) 确定类型：人物介绍2) 确定体裁 : 记叙文确定主体时态 : 一般现在时确定主体人称 : 第三人称合理安排短文的结构层次，组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。句 子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容一致。审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲，其次写出草稿，经过修改之后， 再正式成文。一、人物介绍的写作步骤：1. age, sex, appearance, characte

46、r, birthday and birth placefamily backgroundeducation backgroundbig events in his or her life (in order of time)evaluation二、人物介绍写作常用的词组及句子：1. age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth place1) age:they might have needs and problems of their own.2) birthday and birth place: was/ were born in

47、 oneg. she was born in poland on nov.7,1867.born in 1985, he is now an 24-year-old student.sex marriage1eg. he is a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter. he is 35, male and unmarried.appearanceeg: she is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long black hair.he is thin, t

48、all and wearing a pair of thick glasses.height: eg. he is 1.76 meters tall. he is 176 centimeters tall. he is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.health:eg. well looked after, the children look healthy. he is not so strong, but (he s) in good health.family background was/ were born in/int

49、o a poor/ rich family his/her family was so poor that his/ her father was very strict with himthe son of a poor family when he was a small boy/ young as a child/ as a boy of 15 during his/ her childhood spend his childhood inlive a happy/ hard lifeeg. abraham lincoln, the son of a poor family, was b

50、orn in kentucky on february 12,1809. born into a poor clerk s family,charles dickens had little cation background be admitted to collegegraduate from department of university when at college, he majored inreceive a doctor s degree go abroad for further studieseg. he started school in 19

51、84 and left school 12 years later. he went to study in beijing university in 1984 and 4 years later he graduated (from that university).we learned many courses, such as english,maths and so on. he got his bachelor s (master s, doctor s) degree inmathematics in april 1998.big events in one s lifebe i

52、nterested in /be fond of work hard at serve as devote his lifetime/himself to concentrate himself todo research about/ into make up one s mind to do sth. do sth with great determination and perseverance 2 be strict in sth.have a way of doing sth try one s best to do sth. encourage sb to do fight for

53、, give up one s life for sb/sthwin a prize/the first prize in competitionreceive/obtain/win the n obel prize for be good at do well in be crazy about enjoy make rapid progress inset a new world record ofequal the world record win(won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal be selected to/ become a member of s

54、tudy / train hard go through hardship overcome many difficulties have a gift/ talent for language, etceg. his favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis. in his spare time, he likes reading and enjoying traveling. he s good at spoken english and even better at using computers.evaluation one

55、 of the best/ most importantset a good example fora model teacher/worker be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of be honored as (an excellent athlete) his hard work brought him great success he is the pride of china.his heroic story spread all over the city make great contributions toconsiste

56、ncy/perseverance is the key to success. be famous/known as be regarded as become a world champion atchampionshipsremember sb forever a new chapter of history has been turned lei feng has been praised for his communist spirit. an inspiring leader描写人物外貌和性格特征 good-lookingfunny-lookingstrong-looking ugl

57、y-looking ordinary-looking white-haired blue-eyed warm-heartedkind- heartedabsent-mindedbad-tempered near-sightedfar-sighted a strong will tall shortbeautiful prettylovely naughtysmartwise cleverbrightdiligentintelligent hard workinglazyhealthy 3 humorous charming attractivetalkative confidentindepe

58、ndentpatient be in conditionbe out of condition finewell三、语法、句法高分 tips1.a. 概况：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺 译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一外貌 , 性格：巧用 with 做定语 译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词 , 使文章精炼 1) for further studies.2) degree.生平 : 尽量用倒装 ,非限定定语从句等，润色文章 1) 2)e评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组 1 ) 2 )四、样本写作 姓名

59、：刘翔出生年月： 1983 年 7 月 13 日 性别；男 出生地：上海 身高： 1.89 米 教练：孙海平 偶像： jordon 专项： 110 栏 成就： 2006 年 7 月 12 日在瑞士洛桑以 12 秒 88 破世界记录 爱好：听音乐，打游戏，看书 自评：为人诚恳，随和，自信 瑞士洛桑 : lausanne, switzerland写作指导：1. 组织材料，写出句子1) 为人诚恳, 随和, 自信乐观的男孩刘翔 , 出生在 1983 年 7月13日 上海.liuxiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born on july 13th, 1983