toefl写作summer2016笔记下午day

1、A/D:It is easier to succeed nowadaysnhe past.(2008.8.2)1. 工作机会变多了2./政策3. 互联网发达最近关闭了，这导致损失了几十亿美金。The USernment was shut down recently. the recent shutdown of the US ernmentThe country has lost billions of dollars. Americas loss of billions of dollars1.Because the USernment was shut down recently, the

2、 country has lost billions ofdollars.2.Because of the recent shutdown of the USernment, the country has lost billions ofdollars.3.The recent shutdown of the USernmen s led to Americas loss of billions ofdollars.4.The recent shutdown of the USernmen s cost the country billions of dollars.5.The USernm

3、ent was shut down recently, costing the country billions of dollars.6.The reason why the America has lost billions of dollars is t itsernment was shutdown recently.话导致了不高兴。My words lead to her unhappiness.My words make her unhappy.My words hurt her.My words upset her.正方支持段语料：1.Young people could def

4、iniy influence the decishe IT industry. Consider扎克/Lets ame，他就能影响。2.The same logic apps tothe entertaent industry.This is the same case with让步段语料：3.When it comes topolitics, it is a different story.On the other hand, exceptions do exist.开头段的三要素：引入、改写、提出Agree or Disagree:Moving to the city can better

5、 take care omilynhe countryside.1.提相反Moving to the countryside can better take care omilynhe city. I agree/disagree.2. 提两者Some people arguet moving to the city is a better option to take care omily, whileothers holdt moving to the countryside is clearly a wiser choice. I side with theformer/latter v

6、iew.Agree:城市更好Disagree:农村更好城市 农村农村 城市Some universities choose famous professors, while others prefer advanced facilities.Moving to the city can better take care omilynhe countryside. I totally agree.1.简单改写/同义词/句式/语序Moving to the city can prour family with better carenhe countryside. Iagree/disagree.

7、练习 A/D:People should insist on a practical plan rathern a challenging one.1.议题是什么？如何引入？Making plansMaking plans is so important to us.Making plans has long been the center of public attention.Making plans is so indispensable to sucs.2. 如何改写题中观点？Is been arguedt 完整的从句Some choose a practical plan, whil

8、e others prefer a challenging one.3. 提出自己观点I side with the former/latter view.谋篇布局中间段结构A/D:留学应该选择大城市而非小城市。（同意）单边论证（一边倒）吃的更好、玩的更好、教育更好比如，的全聚德。师傅、刀功、油、葱 / 120还有一家烤鸭也很好吃，叫大董烤鸭。师傅、刀功、油、葱 / 160对了，大家一定要去品尝鸭王，虽然最近已经不太行了，但依然保留着应有的实力。他们的师傅，其实都是全聚德的师傅。刀工、190400-40 = 360 / 3 =120360/2= 180主旨句（分论点）的几点要求：1.前置段首2

9、.高度概括（抽象）3.值得展开的点a)观点 Claimb)复杂事实 Complicated FactClaim vs Fact观点 vs 事实Foosen is a guy. 事实Foosen is a gay. 观点Foosen often wears pink. 事实Foosen 上课总翘兰花指。 事实Foosen 上周五冲进了一所 gay bar. 事实我觉得大城市更好，因为大城市更容易交男朋友。I know this from myal experience. I have a friend, Foosen, who comes from a smallvillage in China

10、. 他之前在村里的时候就没朋友，很寂寞，于是来了。来了以后开始健身，然后在房认识了他诸多的 ex-boyfriends. 这种事在农村根本不可能发生，所以你看，果然大城市更好吧。A/D:An effective leader should try to make others part of the decimaking pros.应该让下属参与决策。同意。1.员工参与以后使建立信任成为可能。Having employees involved makes itsible to create a sense of trust.2.员工参与以后可以允许避免犯错Letting employees p

11、articipate allows leaders to prevent decifatigue. （决策疲劳）（审美疲劳 = aesthetic fatigue）3.通过让员工参与，/可以发现By having employees involved, leaders can/get to discover the best sucsor.(predesor 前任工作上的)Parents should help their children withrathern encourage them to doindependently.1.增进感情 （provide sb wigreat oppo

12、rtunity to do）Working on a project togethrovide parents wigreat opportunity to bond withtheir kid.2.提高小孩成绩 （enable/allow）Parents experience allows children to show betterformance at school.3.增强父母的数算能力 (Byng, sb get to do)By assisting children with their, parents get to enhantrengthen theirarithmetic skills.双边论证（让步观点）吃的更好、玩的更好、（让步段的三要素：主旨句、适当展开、转折主旨句：我承认，有人会反驳我说，小城空气确实比大城市好, to some extent。适当展开：比如，每次我坐飞机回，看到外面灰蒙蒙的天就很忧郁。机舱门一开我就开