高中英语 writing Speech部优课件

1、教学目标 通过范文的学习，了解并掌握英语发言稿的写作步骤格式与内容;学生能够根据所学内容写一篇完整的英语发言稿并升级为五档高分作文。 分解剖析英语发言稿范文，引导学生了解并掌握发言稿的写作步骤格式与内容；解读作文评分标准，教导学生以评分规则为标准去产出一篇高分英语作文。 增强学生写高分英语作文的自信心；加深学生对中国优秀传统文化的了解并增强其传承与弘扬优秀中华传统文化的意识。Writing-Speech(发言稿) 鄂尔多斯市第三中学张治慧 Writing Task(Learning from the sample) (高考链接2016天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华,一批来自英国的高中

2、生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞,请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。 (1)回顾双方的交流活动（如学习生活体育文艺等方面）； (2)谈谈收获或感想； (3)表达祝愿与期望。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.可适当增加细节，使内容充实行文连贯。 Dear friends, I am Li Hua, _ Thank you.one possible version:Dear friends, Im Li Hua, president of the Students Union of Chengguang Middle scho

3、ol. Its an honor for me to share this moment with our friends. It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program. As we know, during the two-week activity, we exchanged ideas on learning, ways of life, PE, literature and art, and so on. We also held a table tennis competiti

4、on.As far as Im concerned, in the activities, we deepened our understanding of each other, formed a deep friendship and it opened our eyes to the world. Your excellent performance left a deep impression on us. Now, I represent all my schoolmates to wish you a safe journey home and look forward to yo

5、ur coming again. Thank you!Writing Steps1.Analyze2.Draft3.Polish假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华,一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞,请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。 (1)回顾双方的交流活动（如学习生活体育文艺等方面）； (2)谈谈收获或感想； (3)表达祝愿与期望。 style tensepersonkey points发言稿收获或感想present / past tense;present perfect tense first & second主题回顾主题各方面祝愿与

6、期望AnalyzingDrafting：a speech (发言稿) Para1: & the _Dear Friends,Para2: _about the topic _ about the topic/ _ of the topicPara3: _ & _ Thank you.self-introductiontopicfactsopinionssignificancehopewishesPara1: self-introduction & the topicIm Li Hua, president/chairman of theIts an honor for me to make a

7、 speech here onI feel it a great honor/privilege to share my opinions here onAdding detailsPara2: detailsfacts about the topic opinions about the topicsignificance of the topicAs is known, ./Its known that/Its commonly (widely)acknowledged that.As far as Im concerned,./From my perspective (standpoin

8、t)./I think it of great importance that(to do).In the activities, we deepened ourunderstanding, form a deep friendship and it opened our eyes to/Seldom do we have a better chance to.Para3: hope&wishesI represent to wish you/On behalf of., I sincerely wish you a ./Looking forward to .What is a good c

9、omposition like?Above all, beautiful or at least neat handwriting.Level A(21-25)：覆盖了所有内容要点，语法和词汇呈现出多样性和丰富性，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，具备较强的语言运用能力，整体读起来漂漂亮亮。 Level B (16-20)：虽漏掉了一两个次重点，但涵盖了所有主要内容，语法和词汇能够满足任务的需要，应用了简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，整体读起来清清爽爽。 Dear friends, Im Li Hua, president of the Students Union of

10、Chengguang Middle school. Its an honor for me to share this moment with our friends. It has been two weeks since you came to our school for the exchange program. As we know, during the two-week activity, we exchanged ideas on learning, ways of life, PE, literature and art, and so on. We also held a

11、table tennis competition. As far as Im concerned, in the activities, we deepened our understanding of each other, formed a deep friendship and it opened our eyes to the world. Your excellent performance left a deep impression on us. Now, I represent all my schoolmates to wish you a safe journey home

12、 and look forward to your coming again. Thank you!format?key points?vocabulary?grammatical structures?transitional words?Polishing: Polish these sentences1. Its an honor for me to share this moment with our friends. 2.In the activities, we deepened our understanding of each other, formed a deep frie

13、ndship and it opened our eyes to the world.3. In the activities, we deepened our understanding of each other, formed a deep friendship and it opened our eyes to the world. Your excellent performance left a deep impression on us.1. 词汇美 Its an honor for me to share this moment with our friends. Its a

14、great privilege to share this unforgettable moment with our friends. As we know, during the two-week activity, we exchanged ideas on learning, ways of life, PE, literature and art, and so on. As is known, the two-week activity has enabled us to exchange ideas on various fields, including learning, w

15、ays of life, literature and art, and even PE. Polishing2) 句式美In the activities, we deepened our understanding of each other, formed a deep friendship and it opened our eyes to the world.(v-ing. ; not only.but also.)Participating the activities, not only did we deepen our understanding of each other,

16、 form a deep friendship, but we also opened our eyes to the world. 2) 句式美Your excellent performance left a deep impression on us. ( its.that.)Its your enthusiasm, teamwork spirits and excellent performance that left a deep impression on us.2) 句式美1.attributive/adverbial/objective/subjective clauses(定

17、语/状语/宾语/主语从句) 2.to do, v-ing/ed (非谓语动词) 3.with composite structure (with复合结构) 4.passive voice (被动语态)5.emphatic pattern(强调句)6.inversion(倒装句)7.exclamatory sentences (感叹句) 8.subjunctive mood(虚拟语气)3) 衔接美In the activities, we deepened our understanding of each other, formed a deep friendship and it opene

18、d our eyes to the world. Your excellent performance left a deep impression on us.(Transitional words)Participating the activities, not only did we deepen our understanding of each other, form a deep friendship, but we also opened our eyes to the world. More importantly, its your enthusiasm,teamwork

19、spirits and excellent performance that left a deep impression on us.Dear friends, I am Li Hua, president of the Students Union of Chenguang Middle School. With two weeks exchange program drawing to an end, I feel it a great privilege to share this unforgettable moment with our friends. These past tw

20、o weeks have witnessed our growth as well as friendship. As is known, the two-week activity has enabled us to exchange ideas on various fields, including learning, ways of life, literature and art, and even PE. Amazingly, so wonderful was the table tennis competition that we wanted a second game. Pa

21、rticipating the activities, not only did we deepen our understanding, promote our friendship, but we also opened our eyes to the world. More importantly, its your enthusiasm, teamwork spirits and excellent performance that left a deep impression on us. Now, on behalf of all my schoolmates, I sincere

22、ly wish you a safe journey home and look forward to your coming again. Thank you.Practice time 假如你是李华，你校来访的美国学生代表团想了解中国太极拳（tai chi）。请根据以下要点写一篇发言稿。1.太极拳的历史与地位；(作为自我防卫方法诞生；中国传统武术之一)2.学习太极拳的益处；（强健身体和心灵）3.学习建议。（集中注意力；耐心）注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Good morning, honorable guests, Im Li Hua, _.Good morning,honorable judges, Im Li Hua, president of the StudentsUnion. First representing our school, Id like to extend our warm welcome to our friends coming from America. I feel more than hornored to make a speech here on Chinese tai chi. Designed as a unique and profound s