初中英语 沪教牛津版 9B U3 Writing：A day in the life of Gary Green 课件

1、 授课教师：马雪梦深圳市南山外国语学校（集团）高新中学Unit 3 The EnvironmentWritingLearning AimsAt the end of this class, students can improve their composition byknowing the purpose of the article.writing in good stucture.using proper words and phrases.What kind of environmental problem is in the video?What is the effect of

2、the pollution?Lets watchAir pollution.Birds, fish and trees died because of the waste gases.Lets discussWhat can we do to be green in our daily life?Plant more treesSave waterUse recycled paperConsumeless electricityTake public transportationCherish your stuffTurn off lightsRide a bicycleLets discus

3、sWriting Task Your school is going to encourage students to protect the environment by introducing a cartoon character Gary Green. He will act as a role model for the students.Writing Steps写作意图结构框架内容草稿PurposeStructureContentsDraft1234What is the purpose of your writing? Underline the best answer. To

4、 (inform/encourage/criticize) readers to protect the environment in their daily life. Step 1: Purpose Opening Body EndingStep 2: Structure Introduce the background/purpose of the article.The ways Gary do to protect the environment.Garys suggestions for people.no paragraghopeningbodyendingWell begun

5、is half done.All details should be stated well.Effective ending is important.Step 3: ContentsOpeningBodyEnding 你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛， 就“是否应该缩短初中生在校时间为8小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：1.保证充足睡眠 2. 提高学习效率 3. 增加自主学习时间 As a junior high school student, I think this is right, because hard study is right but l

6、ess sleep will make us tired. The reason why we should do this are: As a junior high school student, I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to study should be reduced to 8 hours a day, the main reasons are following:Which opening do you like better?The second one provided useful backgro

7、und information in beautiful sentences.Step 3: OpeningStep 3: BodyWhat does Gary Green do in the morning?How does he go to school?He takes a shower instead of a bath. He rides a bike to school.save watersave energy Step 3: BodyWhat does Gary Green do after he washes his hands?He turns off the tap af

8、ter he washes his hands. What does Gary Green do when he leaves the classroom?He switches off the lights when he leaves the classroom.save watersave energy Step 3: BodyWhat does Gary Green do when he does his homework?He uses both sides of the paper.What does Gary Green think people should do?All pe

9、ople should be green in order to protect the environment.save energyHe switches off the light when he turns on the table lamp. Step 3: Words Banktake a shower instead ofturn off the tapswitch off the lightsuse both sides of the paperbecause, because of, thanks tobut, however, on the contrarybesides,

10、 whats more, in addition for example, such as, for instance Step 3: Transition Words and Phrases因果关系转折关系罗列增加举例关系so that, in order to, so as toin general, in brief, in a wordfirstly, secondly,thirdly though,even though,although Step 3: Transition Words and Phrases目的关系归纳关系时间序列让步关系 FluencyEasy to readI

11、n a word, the whole society should take action to.In my opinion, all of us should come to realize.Its difficult to say.is right or not, but.Step 3: Some Common EndingsCall to actionRepeat ideasSummarize the topicStep 4: Draft1. You learn to write by writing.2. There is no good writing; only good rew

12、riting.3. Good handwriting means a lot.1. Now people get a lot of informations on TV. information2.What good time we had last night!a3. Child as he is, but he knows a lot.4. I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.particularlyStep 4: Check for Errors Which one do you prefer?Lets conclude写作意图结构框架内容草稿PurposeStructureContentsDraft1234PurposeStructureContentsDose your composition achieve the writin