高中英语-复习书面表达作文课件-浙教版

1、高中英语复习书面表达作文课件City life or country life第一页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。人们经常讨论乡村生活和城市生活，一些人喜欢乡村生活而另一人那么喜欢城市生活。请你以Living in the Country or the City为题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文。乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。我喜欢的生活和理由。注意：词数100-120，文章的题目和开头已给出不计词数。Living in the Country or in the City People are forever talking about living in the

2、 country and in the city. 文体与时态。抓要点规定内容开放内容审题第二页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。明晰结构分段,考虑连接(1)乡村生活：空气清新、生活恬静。(2) 城市生活：交通便捷、购物方便。(3)我喜欢的生活和理由(1.2.)。1.(To begin with) Moreover In addition Additionally Furthermore2.For one thing, For another 3. In the first place, In the second place4. First(ly) Second(ly) Finally段落间连接

3、过渡词On the contrary; however;段落间连接过渡词PersonallyTo be honestTo be frankAs far as I am concerned段落内连接规划第三页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。表达喜欢的用语-likeprefer to live inprefer living inenjoy living inbe willing towould ratherbe fond of be attracted bybe fascinated by防止单一 表达第四页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。表达观点的根本用语-Some thinkothers thi

4、nkbelieve.feelclaimstatestress insistmaintain防止单一第五页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。表达规定内容-空气清新、生活恬静The air is fresh/clean.Life is quiet/peaceful. enjoy gentle way/pace of living交通便捷、购物方便Its easy to go around/here and there.People can go from one place to another without much difficulty.People can buy anything they

5、want.Shopping is convenient准确灵活第六页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。语义不充分不连贯Some people like to live in the country. The air is fresh and clean. Moreover, Life is quiet and peaceful. Others, however, prefer to live in the city. They can go from one place to another without much difficulty. In addition, shopping is muc

6、h more convenient.下面段落有什么问题？第七页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。要点适当拓展-添枝加叶1. The air is fresh.Obviously, the air there is much fresher than that in the city.They claim that the air there is fresher as there is less pollution.They think that the air there is fresher so that they can relax themselves both physically a

7、nd mentally.2. Life is quiet and peaceful.They insist that life is quiet and peaceful, which is beneficial for good health.第八页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。尝试适当拓展以下要点Its easy to go around.They feel its easy to go around as .They believe that its easy to go around so that They claim that its easy to go around, whic

8、hThey can buy anything they want.They think() they can buy anything they wantHave a try第九页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。表达开放局部-learn more social skills (getting along with different kinds of people)broaden our views ()make my life more colorful ()receive medical care more easily()get better education()brainstorm i

9、deas富有思想精选能表达好且出彩的两到三点第十页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。抄写字迹清楚，卷面零涂改。不用改正液、透明胶带。注意大小写，注意分段。不超边框，不随意换行。第十一页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。课堂小结审题规划表达相同语义表达规定局部内容表达开放局部内容抄写抓要点段落和连接防止单一准确灵活，适当拓展富有思想，精选要点卷面整洁清楚第十二页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。assignmentWrite the passage out and copy it down as neatly and clearly as possible.第十三页，编辑于星期五：十二点 四分。段落组织1、写好主题句。Personally, I am fascinated by city life.2、围绕主题句展开2或3点。两点连接词用：?三点用