书面表达-导学互助模式展示课

1、Yu ChangliNo.162 High SchoolDiligence and labor make the expressive style. - By xxxx勤学苦练造就传神的笔调高三复习课 之书面表达技巧How to polish up your writing如何使文章增光添彩？Teamwork(小组比拼) Task 1: Can you replace the underlined part?I want to become a lawyer.2. We must stop Tom from giving himself up.3. Could you help me?4. W

2、hat was it that caused his illness.5. Your efforts will be very important.Your efforts will be of great importance.Your efforts will make a great difference.Your efforts play an important part/role.6. Suddenly I had a good idea. I came up with a good idea.A good idea came upon me.A good idea occurre

3、d to me.A good idea struck me.Role Play(角色游戏)BoysGirls1，3，5，72，4，6，81.Tom is very young. He cant go to school. （合为简单句）Tom is too young to go to school.2. We had many difficulties. We managed to settle the problem. ( 改为复合句/简单句)Although we had many difficulties, we managed to settle the problem.In spi

4、te of many difficulties, we managed to settle the problem.3.Because she was frightened by the noise. The little girl dared not sleep in her bedroom. Frightened by the noise, the little girl dared not sleep in her bedroom.4. When she heard the news, she went pale with sorrow.Hearing the news, she wen

5、t pale with sorrow.5.We can borrow at most five books from the library at a time.(被动态)At most five books can be borrowed from the library at a time.6.Today we use computers widely not only in our work but also in daily life .Today computers are widely used not only in our work but also in daily life

6、.7. Our library lies in the center of our school.In the center of our school lies our library.8. I didnt go to bed until Father came back.(倒装，强调)Not until Father came back did I go to bed.It was not until Father came back that I went to bed.Quiz Show(抢答时间)一句多译面临困难，我们没有灰心丧气。1.Although/Though we were

7、faced with difficulties, we didnt lose heart.2.Difficult as it was, we didnt give up.3.In spite of/Despite difficulties, we didnt give way. 4.Whatever difficulties we met with, we werent discouraged.5. Faced with difficulties, we managed to smooth them away.6.Never did we give in to any difficulties

8、7.We didnt give up even if there existed difficulties.8.In face of difficulties, we kept up our courage and never gave up.9.In no case did we give way to disappointment even if faced with difficulties.Structure diagram(结构图) Can you put the sentences together into a passage in right order? 1Phenomeno

9、nCause1Cause2Conclusion/Attitude2345ResultCauseBlank filling(填空补缺) Radio and television can be seen everywhere. The TV set is more useful than the radio _ on TV you can see and hear what is happening in the world. _, radio is not disappearing. It is still with us. _, the number of listeners is becom

10、ing larger. _,it can be carried easily. You can put it in your pocket and listen to it on the bus._, radio broadcasts are better for blind people. _, radio is much cheaper than a TV set.becauseHowever Besides On one handOn the other handMore importantlyWriting skills 1.词汇多样比较好2.句式多变少不了4.过渡连接真是妙3.篇章结

11、构把握好Feedback(知识反馈)Carry out the given task as requested Battlefield(真枪实弹)Polish up the passages with the 4 writing skills Xiao Shenyang is a famous actor. We all like him. Xiao Shenyangs parents are farmers in Liaoning. His family was very poor. He didnt give up. He had no money to continue finishin

12、g school. He had to drop out of school. the poor life didnt stop him from being a strong-willed man. Since then, he has begun to learn acting. his talent and diligence have caused his success. his teacher, Zhao Benshan has been helping him a lot. Now he has become one of the favorite actors because

13、of his humorous performance. Xiao Shenyang, a famous actor, was liked by all of us .He was born in a farmer family of Liaoning. Poor as his family was, he didnt give up. Having no money to continue finishing school, he had to drop out of school. However, the poor life didnt discourage him from being

14、 a strong-willed man. Since then, he has begun to learn acting. Eventually, his talent and diligence have contributed to his success. Besides,his teacher, Zhao Benshan has been helping him a lot. Now he has become one of the favorite actors because of his humorous performance. With the development o

15、f economy, more and more greenhouse gases are being given off into the air. CO2 makes up about 70% of the greenhouse gases, which is considered to be one of the greatest causes of global warming. It has harmful effects, causing the sea level to rise and natural disasters to strike. So we must take e

16、ffective measures to save our planet. First, we should use more clean energy and less coal and oil. Second, we should go to work on foot or by bus instead of driving a car if possible. Third, we should plant more trees, because plants can turn CO2 into O2. More importantly, we should form the habit of saving energy in our daily life. Homework 1.在一次班会上，同学们在讨论学生中的“追星”问题，请你根据下面的提示写一篇关于该问题的文章。2. 完成文章后，运用本节课所学技巧进行小组内交换修改文章May you succeedThank you 1. I want to become a end todesire tobe eager tobe dying to be crazy about (doing)2