广东省肇庆市四会中学2012届高三级英语研讨会公开课课件：读写任务

1、 四会中学 潘文娟 - Topic sentence & structure of a paragraph Task-based writing【写作内容】 假设你是Charlie，读完信后，请给妈妈写一封回信。1. 以约30个词概括来信的主要内容；审题人称 第一人称 写作综合训练(10)读写任务(要点1) Lead-in 注意主题句和关键词Dear Charlie, Recently I have read an article, which Id like to share with you. “As a study suggests, every hour that an adult s

2、pends watching TV reduces life by almost 22 minutes. Watching TV for an average of six hours a day can reduce your life by five years. The research claims that such a lifestyle is as bad for health as smoking and overweight. This is because when watching TV, people tend to fall lack of exercise and

3、eat unhealthily. Another study shows that exercising for just 15 minutes a day can increase your life by up to three years. When reading this article, I couldnt help worrying about you. You used to like watching TV. When a program that you liked was on, you couldnt tear yourself away from it. You ha

4、d your meals on the sofa in front of TV and you only went to toilet when it was advertisement time. Now you live alone far away from home, I cant always tell you to pay attention to your health. But I want to remind you that such a lifestyle is bad for your health. I hope you can make some changes t

5、o it little by little. Love, Mom Possible version: From your letter, I come to know that _, especially watching it _ _, is really _ for your_, _ _can _ our life. You are _ me and _ me to _ my bad habits.watching TVa long timeforbadhealthwhiledoing exerciselengthenworried aboutwantget rid ofComparati

6、on: The letter is mainly about Charlies mother tells Charlie the bad influence of watching TV so long, and shows that she was worring about charlies health.In your letter, you said that watching TV for a long time is really harmful to health and exercise everyday can build up my body. Therefore, you

7、 want me to keep away from my bad habits. 1 4 立场错误;要点不全;语言欠准确。要点根本齐全；语言准确；有适当的过渡语。Summing up: 写概括，首先要利用好_ , 抓住_，省去用来支撑主题句的具体细节,运用适当的_，用25-35个词概括文章的大意。要注意语言的_。关键词 主题句句型 准确性 【写作内容】假设你是Charlie，读完信后，请给妈妈写一封回信。1. 2. 以约120个词介绍自己的近况，并包括如下要点： (1)读信后的感受； (2)介绍目前的健康和锻炼情况； (3)表达你自己的决心。审题时态:以一般现在时为主体 I think yo

8、u are right, Mom. So far, I had spent so many time to watching TV that I havent enough to finish the homeworks. And it caused that I lack of exercises. Recently, I found that I couldnt focus my mind in class because I always felt asleep. I feel my body status is between health and unhealth now. so I

9、 make up my mind to do exercises from now on. Last, I promised you that I will get into a health lifestyle.Version 1 Mom, after reading your letter, Im lost in thought. What you said expresses your concerns to me, which makes me moved. I will fully consider your suggestion. At present, I am in good

10、condition and I have set a plan to exercise every day. First of all, in order to ensure I have enough time to study, I only watch TV in my spare time. Secondly, I always sleep and get up early, as the saying goes, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. Last but not le

11、ast, I play basketball everyday, which is helpful to relax myself even makes my stronger and stronger. In a word, what Im doing now enriches my experience and garantees my good health. Now, Mom, I promise you that I will reduce the time in watching TV and change the lifestyle about it. So, you needn

12、t worry about me so much, and everything will go well. Version 1Possible version: From your letter, I come to know that watching TV, especially watching it for a long time, is really bad for your health, while doing exercise can lengthen our life. You are worried about me and want me to get rid of m

13、y bad habits. _for what I did in the past. Im sorry that I made you worry all the time and Im also grateful that you remind me of these details. But actually I have a surprise for you_. Influenced by my fellow classmates, I have been taking part in after-class exercise _dancing, jogging, cycling and

14、 so on. Every morning, I go jogging for about twenty minutes. _, on weekends I usually go climbing or go cycling with my friends. Because of exercise Im in perfect health and Im slim now as you can see from my pictures. Ive benefited a lot from exercise and_. I will take good care of myself and I wi

15、sh you healthy and happy every day! Love, Charlie After reading your letter, I feel ashamed I have already got rid of my bad habits of watching TV and doing little exercise.such asBesidesI will keep it upExemplifying in Skills发表感想/感受的常用句型When reading the story, my tears rolled down.2) I was shocked/

16、deeply moved by the.3) After reading the story,I was lost in thought. I came to realize that.4) I feel ashamed/sorry for what I did in the past.介绍目前的健康和锻炼情况:Eg. However, Mom, I want to tell you a good piece of news - I have got rid of my bad habit of watching TV and set a plan to take exercise every

17、 day.At present, I am in good condition and have been doing exercise regularly. As a matter of fact / In fact, 表达你自己的决心:Eg. From now on, I will make up my mind to To make you at ease, I promise (that) I will Getting benefit from exercise, Im determined to keep it on/up. Practice ?能力解读与专项训练?Page 215

18、写作综合训练12 第二节 读写任务 Step 1 审题，理解要点要求；Step 2根据要点，列一个写作提纲写出主题句及拓展句之间的衔接词/过渡语，具体内容用省略号代替不用写概括Possible version: (过渡+要点1主题句) _ learning English is beneficial to both our life and our future careers. (过渡语) _, to learn English well is very necessary for us students. (过渡语) _, (要点2主题句)_. (列举理由一) _, (列举理由二) _, (过渡+要点3主题句) _ (过渡语) _, After reading the passage, I come to realize thatThereforeSince I was a primary school studentAs far as Im concerned,