[外语学习]基础写作课件

1、English Writing about Characters 高考英语基础写作中的人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题：1人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，需要严格按照写作要求来写；要点可以重组。2介绍自己的老师、朋友等要突出他们的特点。3正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。4注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。基础写作：介

2、绍我国短道速滑女运动员周洋姓名周洋出生年月1991年6月出生地吉林省长春市从小喜欢滑冰，希望获得奥运金牌以使父母过上好日子2010年温哥华（Vancouver)冬奥会获得1500米短道速滑冠军，成为中国最年轻的冬奥会冠军2010年温哥华冬奥会短道速滑女子3000米团体接力冠军，实现自己的梦想当选长春市“十大杰出女性”，并因表现突出而受到市政府表彰和奖励最近在为参加下一届冬奥会积极准备个人情况写作步骤：1内容2可能出现的人称、时态3信息点的整合和排列4难点第1步 审题介绍短道速滑女运动员周洋第三人称;一般过去时、现在完成时、现在进行时4项获得奥运金牌；成为冠军；3000米团体接力；当选“十大杰出

3、女性”；表彰和奖励；难点:1. 获得奥运金牌2. 成为冠军3. 3000米团体接力4. 当选“十大杰出女性”5. 表彰和奖励win an Olympic gold medalbecome the champion; take the first place; get the first prize; take the gold3000-metre relaybe elected as one of Ten Outstanding Womenbe praised and rewarded第2步 整合信息, 译成英语。人物背景介绍周洋：1991年6月出生于吉林省长春市,从小喜欢滑冰，希望获得奥运金

4、牌以使父母过上好日子。Zhou Yang, (who was) born in Changchun, Jilin Province in June, 1991, has been interested in skating since she was a child and determined to win an Olympic gold medal to let her parents live / lead a better life.2) 个人情况22010年温哥华（Vancouver)冬奥会获得1500米短道速滑冠军，成为中国最年轻的冬奥会冠军。 a. During the Vanc

5、ouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, Zhou Yang took the gold in the 1500-meter short track speed skating, which made her the youngest champion of the Winter Games in China.b. During the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, Zhou Yang took the gold in the 1500-meter short track speed skating, becomi

6、ng the youngest champion of the Winter Games in China.3) 个人情况32010年温哥华冬奥会短道速滑女子3000米团体接力冠军，实现自己的梦想。a. She and her teammates won the womens 3000-meter relay in the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, which turned her dream into reality.b. She and her teammates won the womens 3000-meter relay in t

7、he Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, making her dream come true.c. She realized her dream by winning the womens 3000-meter relay in the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010 with her teammates.4) 个人情况4当选长春市“十大杰出女性”，并因表现突出而受到市政府表彰和奖励。She was elected as one of Ten Outstanding Women of Changchun

8、 and she was praised and rewarded by the Changchun government for her outstanding performances.She was elected as one of Ten Outstanding Women of Changchun and because of her outstanding performances, she was praised and rewarded by the Changchun government.5) 个人情况5最近在为参加下一届冬奥会积极准备a. Recently she is

9、 actively preparing for the next Winter Olympic Games.b. Recently she is making preparations for the next Winter Olympic Games actively.第3步 连句成篇 Zhou Yang, (who was) born in Changchun, Jilin Province in June, 1991, has been interested in skating since she was a child and determined to win an Olympic

10、 gold medal to let her parents live / lead a better life. During the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, Zhou Yang took the gold in the 1500-meter short track speed skating, which made her the youngest champion of Winter Games in China. _, she and her teammates won the womens 3000-meter relay in

11、 the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games in 2010, which turned her dream into reality. Besides_, she was elected as one of Ten Outstanding Women of Changchun and, because of her outstanding performances, she was praised and rewarded by the Changchun government. Recently she is actively preparing for the

12、next Winter Olympic Games.As a result写作点拨：B. 在写好简单句(五种基本句型)的基础上做到句式灵活1)并列句2)复合句(定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句)3)强调句型4)非谓语动词5)倒装句6)其他句型及结构A. 背景介绍往往作为文章第一句：sb be born on/ in +日期 +in + 地点1. 写作前：2. 写作中：确定时态、整合句子、解决难点C. 使用适当连词将句子串成连贯的文章。姓名巴拉克奥巴马 （ Barack Obama ）出生时间1961年8 月4 日出生地点夏威夷檀香山(Honolulu, Hawaii) 家庭父亲是肯尼亚(Keny

13、a)黑人，母亲是美国白人小时梦想当总统教育哈佛法学院(Harvard Law School),博士职业毕业后一直从政。2008年11用4日，在大选（ the general election ）中击败麦凯恩（John McCain ），成为美国第44任总统,首位非裔总统。意义激励全世界人民，努力工作实现梦想写作步骤：1内容2可能出现的人称、时态3信息点的整合和排列4难点第1步 审题介绍美国总统奥巴马第三人称;一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时8项肯尼亚黑人；博士学位；一直从政；非裔总统肯尼亚黑人2. 博士学位 一直从政4. 非裔总统a black man from Kenyawith a do

14、ctors degree, get a doctors degreehas been engaged inAfrican-American President基础写作 Barack Obama, the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother, was born in Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4th, 1961. When he was only a small boy, he dreamt of becoming the President of the United States

15、. Since he graduated from Harvard Law School with a doctors degree, he has been struggling for success in politics. On November 4th, 2008, he defeated John McCain in the general election and was elected the 44th President of the United States, making him the first African-American President of the c

16、ountry. The success of Obama greatly inspired people form all over the world, especially black people to work hard to achieve their goals.姓名Ashrita Furman身份运动员国籍美国爱好喜欢挑战吉尼斯（Guinness) 纪录经历小时候身体不健康，对运动不感兴趣；十多岁时，成了印度静坐功(meditation)导师Sri Chinmoy的学生并在他的鼓励下积极参加各项体育比赛尝试打破吉尼斯纪录成就过去25年中，大约打破93项吉尼斯世界纪录，到现在还保持

17、其中20多项纪录。信念身体是精神的工具，人能用自己的精神力量去完成任何事情。 Ashrita Furman was born in America and is a sportsman who likes to challenge the Guinness records. As a child, he was unfit and didnt have any interest in sports at all. In his teen, he became a student of Sri Chinmoy, an Indian meditation teacher, and encouraged by his teacher, Ashrita was active in differen