1819 Unit4 Section Ⅴ　Writing——建议信

1、Section Writing建议信写作技法指导eq avs4al(文体指导)建议信的目的是向有关组织或个人提出建议，而且这种建议带有劝说性。此类信通常向对方传达对某事物的关心和针对某事物的不足之处提出改进的建议和措施。一、基本结构1开头说明写信的原因、理由以及自己的目的、想法。2主体围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，用委婉的语气提出自己的建议或看法，并指出你所提建议可能会带来的好处。3结尾提出希望自己的建议被采纳的想法。二、注意事项1要注意人称和时态的合理使用。2要注意语言要委婉、中肯，建议要合理，表达要清楚。3要注意写作要点不能遗漏，表达方式要多样，行文须连贯，过渡要自然。eq avs4al(亮

2、点句式)一、建议信开头常用句式：1I am sorry to know that.2I am very glad to hear that you want to.3I know you have trouble in.4I am writing to you for the purpose of.5In my personal opinion，it would be wise of you to take the following actions.二、建议信主体段落常用句式，给出建议：1first，firstly，secondly.then，after that，in the end，fi

3、nally，meanwhile.2I think it would be more beneficial if you could.三、建议信结尾常用句式：1I believe you will take my advice into account.2I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.满分佳作构建eq avs4al(写作任务)假如你是李华，请根据下表内容给中

4、国野生动物保护协会CWCA(China Wildlife Conservation Association)的会长写一封100词左右的建议信。问题1990年藏羚羊(Tibetan antelopes)的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩不到30万只，数量急剧减少建议1.加大对藏羚羊保护的宣传(publicize)力度；2增加保护资金；3派出一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊。eq avs4al(审题谋篇)体裁建议信时态以一般现在时为主主题保护藏羚羊人称以第三人称为主结构第一段：说明写信的原因第二段：用委婉的语气提出自己的建议第三段：提出自己的希望eq avs4al(遣词造句).对接单元词汇1importa

5、nce n重要(性)2so_that 以至于3. in_danger 在危险中4die_out 灭亡；逐渐消失5the_number_of. 的数量6protect.from. 保护不受(危害)7decrease_from.to. 从减少到.巧用单元句式、语法(一) 完成句子11990年大约有100万只藏羚羊。There_were about 1，000，000 Tibetan antelopes in 1990.2藏羚羊的数量正在迅速减少，现在不到300 000。The_number_of the Tibetan antelopes is_decreasing_rapidly_to less

6、 than 300，000 at present.3我们必须立即采取措施保护藏羚羊免于灭绝。We must take immediate measures to_protect_the_Tibetan_antelopes_from_dying_out4首先，保护藏羚羊的重要性应该通过你们的协会加大宣传。First，the_importance_of_protecting Tibetan antelopes should be publicized through your association.5第二，你会为处在危险中的藏羚羊提供更多的资金吗？Second，would you provide

7、 more money for the Tibetan antelopes (which/that_are)_in_danger?6最后但并非最不重要的是，我建议派一些志愿者去那里。Last but not least，I suggest that some_volunteers_(should)_be_sent_there7他们可以帮助保护藏羚羊。They can help_protect the Tibetan antelopes.(二) 句式升级8用decrease from.to.把句子1、2合并为一个简单句The_number_of_the_Tibetan_antelopes_is_

8、decreasing_rapidly_from_about_1，000，000_in_1990_to_less_than_300，000_at_present.9用被动语态改写句子3Immediate_measures_must_be_taken_to_protect_the_Tibetan_antelopes_from_dying_out.10用so that.合并句子6、7 Last_but_not_least，I_suggest_that_some_volunteers_be_sent_there_so_that_they_can_help_protect_the_Tibetan_ant

9、elopes.eq avs4al(妙笔成篇)_【参考范文】Dear President，Im writing to give some suggestions to further protect the Tibetan antelopes.The number of the Tibetan antelopes is decreasing rapidly from about 1，000，000 in 1990 to less than 300，000 at present.Immediate measures must be taken to protect the Tibetan antelopes from dying out.First，the importance of protecting Tibetan antelopes should be publicized through your association.Second，would you provide more money for the Tibetan antelopes in danger? Last but not le