读后续写微技能训练之如何描写环境学习教案

1、会计学1读后续写微技能训练之如何描写环境读后续写微技能训练之如何描写环境第一页，编辑于星期三：一点 三十四分。 On the day back to school, dark clouds hung low in the sky. The rain poured down, with cold drops and angry winds slapping (拍;掴) my face. I was drowned in floods of warm tears and freezing rain.1. 渲染了忧伤的气氛.2. 揭示了故事发生的背景.3. 立体感和真实感第1页/共12页第二页，编辑

2、于星期三：一点 三十四分。I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sky, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound.(M1U1)写作思路写作思路一一：第一步第一步，先尝试概括性描述（，先尝试概括性描述（总体描述总体描述）。第二步第二步，在概括描述的基础上增加，在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述细节描述，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。第2页/共12页第三页，编辑于星期三：一点 三

3、十四分。外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。Outside, there was a _wind, and the branches were blowing in_. The dust on the ground was flying in disorder, _made people unable to open their eyes.strongdisorderwhich 第3页/共12页第四页，编辑于星期三：一点 三十四分。这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。此刻没有风，世界好像停止在这一刻，河流也停下了脚步。This winter, the weather is _co

4、ld.There is no wind _this moment,the world seems to have stopped, the river has stopped its_.unusually atfootsteps 第4页/共12页第五页，编辑于星期三：一点 三十四分。The dark rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.(M1U1)写作思路写作思路二二：第一步第一步，先尝试，先尝试细节细节描述。描述。第二步第二步，总体总体描述描述。第5页/共12页第六页，编

5、辑于星期三：一点 三十四分。 2017.11 浙江高考真题应用Para 2 ._第6页/共12页第七页，编辑于星期三：一点 三十四分。 The wind was _ dreadfully and the rain was_from the heaven, _ against the branches of lined trees.The world was_ with a sea of darkness. howlingpouringwhippingburdened/loaded第7页/共12页第八页，编辑于星期三：一点 三十四分。The wind was howling dreadfully

6、 and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined tress. The world was burdened with a sea of drakness. A：I was seized with the roaring power of nature. a sense of horror creeping up on meB：A flood of fear washing over me, I immediately turned around to slide into the

7、 bed and curled up. 第8页/共12页第九页，编辑于星期三：一点 三十四分。The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her. The breeze patted her on the face, warm and comfortable.Everything was the same, only his father being away forever. 怎样将一丝忧伤融入大自然的景色？第9页/共12页第十页，编辑于星期三：一点 三十四分。 The _(甜蜜的)fragrance of flowers, the faint _(嗡嗡声)of insects as well as the gentle touch of the _(微风)brought back memories of the bygone days shared with father, hot tears almost _(涌出)up